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1、九年级写作公开课How to make your writing better青西新区第四初级中学 王春燕 noodlesdumplingstangyuan zongzi mooncakesThings to eat Traditional foodThings to domake zongzi clean the houses guess riddlesgive best wishesadmire the moonshare mooncakes with familiesmake lanternsget the lucky moneywear new clothesSay Happy New
2、 yearhave dragon boat racesThe story of change Poet Qu YuanThe storiesThe storiesThe monster nianThe gods birdI think its relaxing to admiring the moon.I think its relaxing to admiring the moon.Home is the warmest placeHome is the warmest placeWe can spend the holiday with friendsWe can spend the ho
3、liday with friends I can get lucky money and gifts thenI can get lucky money and gifts thenI think its interesting to watch the races the most I think its interesting to watch the races the most importing thing is to get together with families.importing thing is to get together with families.Reasons
4、/feelingsWhy do you like it?紧扣主题要点齐全开门见山Divide the partsBeginningBodyEnding A writing Beginning :name,date Body:things to eat,activities,storyThe Spring Festival,in January or Februarydumplings zongzi share mooncakes with relatives admire the moon give best wishesThis festival is in honor of Qu Yuan
5、,one of the greatest Chinese poets.It celebrates the beginning of new year Ending:feeling/reason Not only can I spend more time with my families,but I get much lucky money My favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.It is one of the most important Chinese festivals._.The Dragon Boat Fes
6、tival is in honor of the poet QuYuan.It is said that _.On that day,family members get together and have a big meal.After dinner,they enjoy the delicious fruits and zongzi,watching the exciting dragon boat races.The old always teach kids how to make zongzi and tell the story of QuYuan._.I like the Dr
7、agon Boat Festival _.D.he killed himself by jumping into Mi Luo river.A.We all agree that it is the most touching story.B.because not only can I spend time with my families but also I can know about Chinese culture-the symbol of China.C.It is celebrated on the 5th day of the fifth lunar monthCBAD My
8、 favorite Chinese festival is the Dragon Boat Festival.It is one of the most important Chinese festivals.It is celebrated on the 5th day of the fifth lunar month.It is said that“East or west,home is the best.”The Dragon Boat Festival is in honor of the poet QuYuan.On that day,family members get toge
9、ther and have a big meal.After dinner,they enjoy the delicious fruits and zongzi,watching the exciting dragon boat races.The old always teach kids how to make zongzi and tell the story of QuYuan We all agree that it is the most touching story.I like the Dragon Boat Festival because not only can I sp
10、end time with my families but also I can know about Chinese culture-the symbol of China.BodyEndingMake the sentences betterI study.I study hard.I study hard every day.I try my best to study hard every day.I try my best to study hard every day so that I can get good grades.1.I like reading books.-I l
11、ike reading books,such as novels,short stories,magazines and newspapers.2.We should practice more.-As we all know,“Use it or lose it”.So we should practice more.3.I often join in many activities.-I often join in many activities in order to communicate with other students better.Improvement123How to
12、make it perfectNot only but also;Sothat;even if;In my opinion;as for me;As far as I know1.Practice makes perfect.2.East west,home is the best.3.Home is where the heart is.1.Peole started the tradition of admiring the moon and sharing mooncakes with their families.2.Behind all these things lies the t
13、rue meaning of.恰当使用连接词;合理运用名言警句；使用经典例句高级词汇及句型；My favorite Chinese festival China has many traditional festivals every year.As for me,the Spring Festival is my favorite.It falls on the 1st day of the 1st lunar month.Before the festival,my family usually clean and decorate the house,buy new clothes an
14、d put up Spring Festival couplets.We are so busy.During the Festival,we have a lot of delicious food every day.Among them,I like the dumplings made by my mother best.At night,My grandma tells my little sister the story of monster nian,father and I play the firework,“As the new year begins,let us als
15、o start anew”.All of the people make promises for the coming new year.Whats more,I can get lucky money.It is the Chinese custom that the old will give children lucky money to wish a good luck.Thats why I like it most!My favorite Chinese festival写作话题：写作话题：Festivals,holidays and celebrations (节假日活动节假日
16、活动)My favorite Chinese festival Writing主要人称：主要人称：_ 主要时态：主要时态：_ the present tense(一般现在时一般现在时)The first person(第一人称第一人称)Appreciating&Evaluating 欣赏与评价欣赏与评价一一.请自我检查请自我检查二二.交换习作互相欣赏交换习作互相欣赏用用红笔红笔划出对方的亮点划出对方的亮点,并对并对 不足的地方进行适当不足的地方进行适当修改。修改。你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？根据根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的
17、习作打分。上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。After writing我欣赏，我快乐我欣赏，我快乐!分数分数_ After writing注意：注意：作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词作文通用修改字符：优美句子；漏词；错处；错处；去掉；去掉;注意有注意有无语法错误无语法错误.人称错误人称错误.时态错误时态错误。1仔细审题，明确要求2 分析要点，提炼关键分析要点，提炼关键3 围绕主题，编拟提纲围绕主题，编拟提纲4组织语句，补充要点表达准确恰当文章层次清晰卷面整洁悦目Summary 在西方节日当中，你最喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱的在西方节日当中，你最喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱的一个节日一个
18、节日,以以”My favorite Western Festival”为题写一篇为题写一篇作作文文。内容包括内容包括:1.节日的名称和日期节日的名称和日期 2.人们怎么庆祝这个节日人们怎么庆祝这个节日 要求：要求：1词数：词数：80-100。不计入总词数。不计入总词数。2文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。文中不得出现真实的校名和人名。There are many traditional festivals in western countries among the year_.Homework延时符谢谢 大家青西新区第四初级中学 王春燕 G O O D B Y E此此课件下件下载可自行可自行编辑修改，修改，仅供参考！供参考！感感谢您的支持，我您的支持，我们努力做得更好！努力做得更好！谢谢!