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1、如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。条理清楚。要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道连接词第1页/共52页写作要点：写作要点：1.建议信：建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。第2页/共52页3.基本框架：开头（beginn
2、ing）-开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(state your idea)主体(body)-对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasons and evidence)结尾(ending)-呼应开头，重申观点(restate your opinion.)第3页/共52页4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力；2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议；3）符合英文信件的基本格式；4）基本时态多用一般
3、现在时和一般将来时。第4页/共52页常用套语常用套语A建议信开头常用句式建议信开头常用句式(照应材料照应材料,表明写作意图表明写作意图)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto3.Iknowyouhavetroubleinafterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvice/opinionswithyou.6.Youhaveaskedmeforsom
4、eadvicewithregardtoandIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout/on第5页/共52页B.表达建议（表达建议（body）1.I think it would be more beneficial if you could 2.I would like to suggest/recommend that3.If I were you,I would4.Why not?/How(What)about doing 5.is a good/great idea.6.You may
5、 consider doing 7.It would seem/seems to me that you could 8.In my opinion,it would be wise to take the following action.9.When it comes to such a situation,I would like to suggest that you should First,/Firstly,/Secondly,/Then,/After that,/In the end,/Finally,/Meanwhile,/Whats more,/In addition,/Be
6、sides,/Furthermore,第6页/共52页C.建议信结尾常用句式建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5
7、.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.第7页/共52页假假如如你你叫叫孙孙军军，是是红红星星高高中中的的学学生生，要要给给市市长长写写一一封封信信，反反映映学学校校门门前前交交通通拥拥挤挤现现象象，包包括括以下要点：以下要点：参考词汇:穿行threadonesway天桥overpass问题问题建议建议学学校校和和一一所所小小学学毗毗邻邻，对对着着大大街街，高高峰峰期期交交通通繁繁忙忙；加加之之孩孩子子小小,家家长长接接送送。交交通通更更拥拥挤挤
8、；学学生生过过街街在在车车辆辆中中穿行危险。穿行危险。政政府府应应采采取取措措施施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。第8页/共52页第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题思考的问题样题分析样题分析第几人称？（第几人称？（person）文章的体裁是什么？文章的体裁是什么？要写的文章主题是什么要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？动作是什么时候发生的？(时态时态)(when)第一人称一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性一般现在时第9页/共
9、52页书面表达如何写？三个步骤Step 1 List the key pointsStep 2 Make sentences Step3.Form a passage and polish第10页/共52页适当运用模板第11页/共52页模板二：模板二：Dear_(对象对象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning_(问题问题).Firstandforthemost,_(建议一建议一).Inaddition,_(建议二建议二).Whatsmore_(建议三建议三).Ihopeyoullfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely
10、,LiMing第12页/共52页Dear_,You have asked me for my advice with regard to_,and Ill try to make some conductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以我拙见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_.I hope youll find these proposals useful and Iwould be ready to discuss this matter with you tofurtherdetails.Goo
11、dluckwithyou/your_(祝愿).YourssincerelyLiMing第13页/共52页DearBob,Imgladtoreceive your letter askingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.You canalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).Imsure(预测可能的结果
12、，给对方以行动的信心和决心).Imlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua第14页/共52页第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议学学校校和和一一所所小小学学毗毗邻邻，对对着着大大街街，高高峰峰期期交交通通繁繁忙忙；加加之之孩孩子子小小,家家长长接接送送。交交通通更更拥拥挤挤；学学生生过过街街在在车车辆辆中中穿行危险。穿行危险。政政府府应应采采取取措措施施,如修天桥等。如修天桥等。第15页/共52页学校与一所小学毗邻,对着大街stand next to primary face/be faced with the main streetTheresap
13、rimaryschoolnearourschool,andbothschoolsfacethemainstreet.Ourschoolstandsnexttoaprimaryschool,facedwith/facingthemainstreet.推荐句型：There be+并列句非谓语结构Standingnexttoaprimaryschool,ourschoolisfacedwith/facesthemainstreet.第16页/共52页润色小建议Nexttoaprimaryschool将介词短语提前（全倒装）stands/lies/isourschool,facedwith/facin
14、gamainstreet.可将stand next to替换为高级词汇/短语be located next to(near/beside/by)border/adjoin vt.be adjacent to与毗邻在对面 be opposite to第17页/共52页 The traffic is busy during the rush hours.高峰期交通繁忙.traffic.during the rush hoursDuring the rush hours,there are so many cars and buses going on the road thatDuring the
15、 rush hours,there is a lot of traffic.so.thatwith结构结构With so many cars and buses going on the road,第18页/共52页润色小建议“高峰期”可意译:atpeaktime，alargecurrentofcarsandpeople“交通繁忙”可译为:trafficjamcongestion交通堵塞bechokeupwithbecrammedwith被堵塞/塞满第19页/共52页加之孩子小,家长接送,交通更拥挤 sendto,fetch.,which 非谓语结构非谓语结构.Manyparentssendt
16、heiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,makingthetrafficheavier.第20页/共52页加之孩子小，家长接送，交通更拥挤Whats more,pick up.make.Tomakethingsworse/Whatsworse,manyparentscomingtopickuptheirchildrenmakethestreetmorecrowded.Inaddit
17、ion/Additionally,manyparentssendtheiryoungchildrentoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakesthetrafficheavier.Whatsmore,parentsoftenattendtheirkidstoschool,resultinginmoreserioustrafficjams.Whatmakesthingsworseisthatchildrenhavetobepickedupbytheirparentsowingtotheiryoungage.第21页/共52页making the situation mo
18、re serious.making the traffic heavier可意译为：so.that.=tootoThechildrenaresoyoungthatparentshavetosendthemtoschoolandfetchthemhome,whichmakes/makingthetrafficheavier.making 可替换为：causing,leading to,resulting in“sendfetch”可替换为短语：pick up润色小建议第22页/共52页 学生过街在车辆中穿行危险学生过街在车辆中穿行危险thread ones way，when doingItisd
19、angerousforthestudentstothreadtheirwayamongbusesandcarswhencrossingtheroad.固定句型Itis+adj.fortodo.第23页/共52页1.Studentsareriskingtheirlivestothreadtheirwayamongcars.润色小建议2.Someareexposedtodangerwhencrossingtheocean/seaofcars.灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：灵活运用其它的短语进行意译：适当增加形容词和副词：适当增加形容词和副词：itisextremelydangerous，itisof
20、great/tremendousdanger第24页/共52页suggest/suggestion,take steps/measures/action to do such as政府应采取措施,如修天桥等。My suggestion is that the government should表语从句表语从句固定句型固定句型 It is high time that(虚拟语气虚拟语气)It is high time that relevant authorities took some measures like buildingI suggest that the government sh
21、ould take steps such as building an overpass.简单句简单句第25页/共52页1.Inordertoreleasethestressoftrafficproblems,润色小建议2.Aimedatsolvingtheseproblems,thegovernmentshouldA.适当添加一些意思（过渡句）适当添加一些意思（过渡句）Thegovernmentshouldpaymoreattentiontoitandtrytosolveit.B.语义的意译语义的意译3.Seeingthesematters,neverwillIstopurgingourgo
22、vernmenttotakesomemeasures.Forthesakeofimprovingthequalityoftraffic,itissignificanttobuildC.添加形容词和副词添加形容词和副词Istronglysuggest,active/effectivemeasures第26页/共52页第三步.连句成文但要注意：篇章的连贯性Nexttoaprimaryschoolstandsourschool,facingamainstreet._,itscrammedwithcarsduringtherushhour._childrenhavetobepickedupbythei
23、rparentsowingtotheiryoungage._,itsofgreatdangerforthestudentstogothroughthetraffic._,itishightimethatrelevantauthoritiestooksomemeasureslikebuildinganoverpass.A.As a consequence B.According to the phenomenon stated above C.When it comes to traffic jamsD.What makes things worse is that A.C.D.B.第27页/共
24、52页反面范例第28页/共52页反面范例第29页/共52页反面范例第30页/共52页反面范例第31页/共52页不推荐字体第32页/共52页优点：考生能灵活地处理各个信息点，大量运用非谓语，介词短语，从句，连词等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显个性和语言功底。优秀作文范例1第33页/共52页优秀作文范例2优点：考生的书面整洁，字体美观，运用there be句型，介词短语，从句，非谓语，套用句式等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。第34页/共52页优秀作文范例3优点：考生运用倒装句，so that句式，精彩的表达以及虚拟语气等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显内涵和语言功底。第35页/共52页优秀作文范
25、例4优点：该考生最大的特色是运用了大量的高级词汇等来提亮句子，使得文章更彰显深厚的语言底蕴。第36页/共52页第37页/共52页优秀作文范例5第38页/共52页优秀作文范例6第39页/共52页Congestion n.阻塞阻塞,拥挤拥挤,充血充血第40页/共52页第41页/共52页如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象如何给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象整整体体三三部部分分1.Heading点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性2.Body 中心记述部分；层次分明3.Ending 小结；呼应主题第42页/共52页 假定你是李华，你的英国朋友PeterPeter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。注意：可适当增加细节，以
26、使行文连贯；开头语已给出。Dear Peter,Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice no how to learn Chinese for my advice no how to learn Chinese well._ well._ _Best wishes,Best wishes,Li HuaLi Hua 参加中文学习班；参加中文学习班；看电视，报纸，杂志；看电视，报纸，杂志；学唱中文歌曲；学唱中文歌曲；交中国朋友；交中国朋友
27、；第43页/共52页DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll beabletolearnfrom theteachersandpracticewithyour fellow students.Then,it also helps to watchTVandreadbooks,newspapers,andmagazinesi
28、nChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,becauseby doing so youll learn and remember Chinesewordsmoreeasily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TrywritingtomeinChinesenexttime.Bestwish
29、es,LiHua第44页/共52页为了迎接即将到来的期末考试，你校要取消所有的体育课。请你以学生王丽的身份给校长写一封信，建议不要取消体育课。注意：1.词数：120左右；2.文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Headmaster,Im writing to express my views concerning our schools decision that all physical education should be cancelled.第45页/共52页常见连接词常见连接词表时间关系：表时间关系：when/after/before/until/not until as so
30、on as/later/afterwards/soon/lately/recently/since/eventually/from then on/in the meanwhile(meantime)/then/finally/at last/all of a sudden/after a while/since then/immediately/instantly/every time/each time/the first time第46页/共52页常见连接词常见连接词罗列观点：罗列观点：Firstly/First of all/To begin with/Above all/In the
31、 first place/On one hand For one thing,Secondly/Besides/Apart from/Whats more,/In addition，/Furthermore,/Moreover，/Worse still,/To make matters worse,/as well/On the other hand/For another thing,/Next,Finally/In the end/At last/Last but not least,第47页/共52页常见连接词常见连接词表列举：表列举：for example(instance)/such
32、 as/take for example/thats to say/in other words/as follows表条件关系：表条件关系：if/unless/as long as/on condition that/only if第48页/共52页常见连接词常见连接词表因果关系：表因果关系：since/as/because/for/thanks to/due to/owing to/as a result of/for the reason that/now that/therefore/so/as a result表陈述事实表陈述事实:in fact/actually/as a matt
33、er of fact/to tell you the truth/to be honest/honestly speaking第49页/共52页常见连接词常见连接词表让步转折关系：表让步转折关系：however/but/on the contrary/nevertheless/instead/despite/in spite of(the fact that)/whereas/though/although/as/even if(though)/while/in contrast/after all表目的：表目的：For this reason/purpose,For the purpose of so that in order to/so as to 第50页/共52页常见连接词常见连接词表总结：表总结：As I have shown,/In short,/In brief,/In conclusion,/In a word,/On the whole,/All in all,/In general,/In summary,/As has been stated,表换种方式表达：表换种方式表达：in other words/that is to say/to put it another way 第51页/共52页感谢您的观看！第52页/共52页