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1、初四专项训练之初四专项训练之英语英语写作训练写作训练（一）（一）目前大家的目前大家的写作写作“现状现状”1)1)审题不清，抓不住要点；审题不清，抓不住要点；2)2)单词拼写错误；单词拼写错误；frist,belive,ture,buzy,quite&quiet frist,belive,ture,buzy,quite&quiet 3)3)动词缺失；动词缺失；Eg:I happy I can go to Eg:I happy I can go to BeijingBeijing.4 4）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）前后不一致（数、人称、时态、主谓不一致等）Eg:Eg:He said
2、 he wants to have a good rest.He said he wants to have a good rest.5 5）中式英语（）中式英语（ChinglishChinglish）Eg:I very like sports.Eg:I very like sports.6)综合性错误。综合性错误。包括包括单词大小写单词大小写、标点符号标点符号以及以及形容词副词形容词副词的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整的混淆、连词的缺失误用、句子结构不完整等。等。考试作文犹如待嫁的考试作文犹如待嫁的 姑娘姑娘如何把自己的作文打扮成漂亮的新娘，如何把自己的作文打扮成漂亮的新娘，来博得阅卷
3、老师的芳心呢？来博得阅卷老师的芳心呢？v一、要“养眼”v 二、要“爽心”如何做到如何做到“养眼养眼”呢呢书写要工整书写要工整布局要美观布局要美观格式要正确格式要正确如何做到如何做到“爽心爽心”呢呢时态要正确时态要正确内容要完整内容要完整人称要合理人称要合理句型要无误句型要无误 写作能力的引导写作能力的引导 词汇短语词汇短语 句子句子 篇章篇章 词汇短语词汇短语1.1.巧用精准的高级词汇巧用精准的高级词汇,句型、词组优先句型、词组优先得高分的一些技巧得高分的一些技巧 My father is good.My mother is good,too.My father is hard-working
4、 and my mother is kind.Which is better?1.1.我们应该努力学习来取得好成绩。我们应该努力学习来取得好成绩。A.We should work hard to get good grades.B.Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.2.2.我们应多花时间学习。我们应多花时间学习。A.We have to concentrate more on study.B.We have to study more and play less.句型、词组优先句型、词组优先3.3.我们不能玩电脑游戏。我们不能玩电
5、脑游戏。A.We cant play computer games.B.We need to stay away from computer games.1）He ran very quickly.He ran as quickly as he could.2）I will learn English well.I will try my best to learn English well.3）I cant learn English well.I find it(its)difficult for me to learn English well.句型、词组优先句型、词组优先1.2.善用关
6、联词善用关联词得高分的一些技巧得高分的一些技巧The water is dirty,people cant swim or fish in it.We cant see anything in the water now.We could see fish.They were swimming in the water.以家乡的变化为例以家乡的变化为例We could see fish.They were swimming in the water.We could see fish swimming in the clear water.1).The water is dirty for p
7、eople swim or fish in.too toso that The water is dirty,people cant swim or fish in it.2).The water is dirty people cant swim or fish in it.句子句子1.3.活用多种句型活用多种句型,避免使用过分简单的句子避免使用过分简单的句子,长短句结合（长句为主，但不能太长）长短句结合（长句为主，但不能太长）得高分的一些技巧得高分的一些技巧Liu Xiang is 21.He comes from Shanghai.He is a running star.Liu Xia
8、ng,a 21-year-old running star,comes from Shanghai.“多样多样”的句式变换的句式变换 句子句子1）合并）合并为简单为简单句；句；Eg:My brother helped me in maths.I made great progress.I made great progress in maths with the help of my brother.2）学会使用感）学会使用感叹叹句；句；Eg:She is a beautiful girl.What a beautiful girl she is!3)善用复合句；善用复合句；a.We need
9、 to help people.The people are in trouble.We need to help the people who are in trouble.b.We know that more and more students like pop songs.As we all know,more and more students like pop songs.1.4.妙用格言，谚语等妙用格言，谚语等得高分的一些技巧得高分的一些技巧 As the saying goes,“.”1)锻炼对学生有好处锻炼对学生有好处As the saying goes,“All work
10、and no play makes Jack a dull boy.”It is good for us students to take exercise.2)集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate our mind on our studies.其他谚语其他谚语:1.Think twice before you do.2.Practice makes perfect.3.Where there is a will,there is a way.4.Failure is the
11、mother of success.5.An apple a day keeps the doctor away.6.All roads lead to Rome.7.Every coin has two sides.词不离句，句不离篇。词不离句，句不离篇。能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语能够灵活自如地运用所学的词汇、短语、句型、语法法,谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训练学生写作的最终目的。谋篇布局写出精彩的文段是训练学生写作的最终目的。篇章篇章认真认真审题审题，找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审审用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文章要点。点。列列
12、写作第二步加加写作第三步：加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。连连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：美美选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：纠错小到标点符号，大到文章结构，纠错小到标点符号，大到文章结构，逻辑次序，语序等等。比如英语中没逻辑次序，语序等等。比如英语中没有顿号；省略号是三个点有顿号；省略号是三个点“”而不是汉语的六个点而不是汉语的六个点“”；再有冒号，中文再有冒号，中文里用冒号的地方，英语中常常用逗号；里用冒号的地方，英语中常常用逗号；英语里句号是实心点，汉
13、语里的句号英语里句号是实心点，汉语里的句号空心点。空心点。写作第六步：纠纠英语记叙文的写作的方式英语记叙文的写作的方式Beginning（topic sentence 主题句主题句)Middle Ending Concluding sentence 结论句结论句Supporting sentence 支持句支持句例子、实事、数据或引文例子、实事、数据或引文记叙文写作方法：记叙文写作方法：采用采用“总分总分总总”的写作的写作方式方式 即先即先概括总述，概括总述，再分述再分述 最后再总述。最后再总述。总述总述典型叙事文举例 The ways to stay healthy Health is th
14、e most important for any of us.In order to stay healthy,we need some common knowledge.Firstly,we should pay attention to the diet.Its best to eat lots of fruit and vegetables.“An apple a day keeps the doctor away,”so fruit is good for health.Besides,we are not supposed to have a lot of junk food.Sec
15、ondly,exercise is necessary.On the one hand,we are not easy to get fat.On the other hand,we can be stronger.Finally,wed better have good living habits.We should sleep for about 8 hours at night,and never work too hard.Whats more,we must stay away from cigarettes.In general,these are things wed bette
16、r follow if we want to stay healthy.the beginningthe ending总结观点，表达祝总结观点，表达祝愿、期望或号召等愿、期望或号召等title引出话题引出话题我们学校即将开展创建我们学校即将开展创建“文明学校文明学校”活动，请你根据下列图表所给提示词写一篇倡议书。活动，请你根据下列图表所给提示词写一篇倡议书。要求：要求：1.1.语句通顺，书写规范，文章不得出现真实姓名和学校。语句通顺，书写规范，文章不得出现真实姓名和学校。2.2.必须运用所有提示词，并在倡议书中写出两个以上自己的观点。必须运用所有提示词，并在倡议书中写出两个以上自己的观点。3.
17、3.词数词数80=10080=100，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。，文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。真题再现真题再现（2008 2008 内蒙古包头）内蒙古包头）Civilized（文明）（文明）Schoolgood behaviorshouldbe polite to be friendly to helpshouldntloudlyyour ideaexcellent environmenttry to clean uppick up had better notyour ideaDear friends,Our school is trying to set up a Civ
18、ilized School.I think 1 1、确定话题：、确定话题：创建创建“文明学校文明学校”的倡议书的倡议书2 2、确定时态、确定时态:一般现在时一般现在时3 3、细读要求：、细读要求：内容要点内容要点字数字数4 4、布局谋篇、布局谋篇 good behavior 尾句尾句 5 5、本章话题句、本章话题句 功能句功能句 a a行为行为 b b环境环境总总 分分 总总6 6、适当运用连词，注意首尾句。、适当运用连词，注意首尾句。7 7、首句首句shouldshouldntexcellent environmenttry to had better notIll help clean u
19、pI thinkfeel that.You could Were trying toI would like to反复修改，注意书写反复修改，注意书写80-100两个以上自己的观点两个以上自己的观点 Dear friends，Our school is trying to set up a Civilized School.I think we should do what we can do for our school.First we should be friendly to each other and help each other.Also we should be polite
20、 to our teachers.I think we shouldnt speak loudly or even have words with our classmates.As for our school environment,we should try our best to clean up the school yard.Pick up litter whenever you see it.Wed better throw litter about or pick flowers.I feel that our school will become better and bet
21、ter.Homework Tom Tom 去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的去年来到大明所在的学校学习。在学习期间，他对学校提倡的“创建和谐创建和谐校园校园”活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习努力、兴趣广泛、友爱互助，师生之活动感触颇深。他发现该校的学生学习努力、兴趣广泛、友爱互助，师生之间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如间关系融洽，人与环境和谐相处（如:保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔保持环境卫生，爱护花草树木，不随地乱扔废弃物第）。请你以废弃物第）。请你以Tom Tom 的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现状，的名义，给远在美国的父母写一封信，介绍学校的现
22、状，并谈谈你的感受。并谈谈你的感受。文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名或地名。词数文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名或地名。词数80-100.80-100.信的开头和结尾已给出，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。不计入总词数。参考词汇：参考词汇：a harmonious campus a harmonious campus 和谐校园和谐校园Dear Mum and Dad,Dear Mum and Dad,Time flies!Ive been here for nearly a year.Im very pleased to find Time flies!Ive been here for nearly a year.Im very pleased to find that our school is really a good one.The students our schoolthat our school is really a good one.The students our school Yours,Tom