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1、写作的写作的“七项基本原则七项基本原则”：一、一、长长 短短 句原则句原则写一个短小精辟的句子，可以起到画龙点睛的作用。而且如果我们把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主题As a creature,I eat;as a man,I read.Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind,they are in a way quite similar.如此可见，长短句结合，抑扬顿挫，岂不爽哉？牢记！强烈建议：在
2、文章第一段（开头）用一长一短，且先长后短；在文章主体部分，要先用一个短句解释主要意思，然后在阐述几个要点的时候采用先短后长的句群形式，定会让主体部分妙笔生辉！文章结尾一般用一长一短就可以了。第1页/共34页二、二、主主 题题 句原则句原则国有其君，家有其主，一定要写一个主题句，放在文章的开头（保险型）或者结尾，让读者一目了然，必会平安无事！特别提示：隐藏主题句可是要冒险的！To begin with,you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主题句）.Without sufficient p
3、reparation,you can hardly expect to answer all the questions correctly.第2页/共34页三、三、一一 二二 三原则三原则考官们看文章也必然要通过这些关键性的“标签”来判定你的文章是 否结构清楚，条理自然。破解方法很简单，只要把下面任何一组的 词汇加入到你的几个要点前就清楚了。1）first,second,third,last（不推荐，原因：俗）2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐，原因：俗）3）the first,the second,the third,the last（不推荐,原因
4、：俗）4）in the first place,in the second place,in the third place,lastly（不推荐，原因：俗）5）to begin with,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）6）to start with,next,in addition,finally（强烈推荐）7）first and foremost,besides,last but not least（强烈推荐）8）most important of all,moreover,finally9）on the one hand,on the other hand（
5、适用于两点的情况）10）for one thing,for another thing（适用于两点的情况）建议：不仅仅在写作中注意，平时说话的时候也应该条理清楚！第3页/共34页四、四、短语优先原则短语优先原则写作时，尤其是在考试时，如果使用短语，有两个好处：其一、用短语会使文章增加亮点，如果老师们看到你的文章太简单，看不到一个自己不认识的短语，必然会看你低一等。相反，如果发现亮点精彩的短语，那么你的文章定会得高分了。其二、关键时刻思维短路，只有凑字数，怎么办？用短语是一个办法！比如：I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.I want
6、 it.可以用短语表达：I am looking forward to it.这样字数明显增加，表达也更准确。第4页/共34页五、五、多实少虚原则多实少虚原则原因很简单，比如我们说一个很好的时候，不应该之说nice这样空洞的词，应该使用一些诸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warmhearted之类的形象词。再比如：走出房间，general的词是：walk out of the room 但是小偷走出房间应该说：小姐走出房间应该说：小孩走出房间应该说：老人走出房间应该说：所以多用实词，少用虚词，文章将会大放异彩！slip out of t
7、he roomsail out of the roomdance out of the roomstagger out of the room第5页/共34页六、六、多变句式原则多变句式原则1 1）加法（串联）加法（串联）都希望写下很长的句子，像个老外似的，可就是怕写错，怎么办，最保险的写长句的方法就是这些，可以在任何句子之间加and,但最好是前后的句子有先后关系或者并列关系。比如说：I enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.如果是二者并列的，我们可以用一个超级句式：Not only the fur coat is soft,but it i
8、s also warm.其它的短语可以用：besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover第6页/共34页 2 2）转折（拐弯抹角）转折（拐弯抹角）The car was quite old,yet it was in excellent condition.The coat was thin,but it was warm.更多的短语：despite that,still,notwithstanding,however,nevertheless,in spite of,despite,3 3）因果（）因果（so,so,soso,so,so）讲故事的时候我们总要追求先
9、后顺序，先什么，后什么，所以然后这个词就变得很常见了。其实这个词表示的是先后或因果关系！The snow began to fall,so we went home.更多短语：then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,as a result,for this reason,so that第7页/共34页 4 4）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）失衡句（头重脚轻，或者头轻脚重）文章中如果出现这样的句子，就更会让考官看到你的句子与众不同。其实就是主语从句，表语从句，宾语从句的变形。举例：This is what I can do.Whether h
10、e can go with us or not is not sure.同样主语、宾语、表语可以改成如下的复杂成分：when to go,why he goes away5 5）附加）附加那就是定语从句和同位语从句或者是插入语。The man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.I dont enjoy that book you are reading.Mr Zhang,our oral English teacher,is easygoing.其实很简单，同位语要解释的东西删除后不影响整个句子的构成；定语从句借用之前的关键词并且用其重新组成
11、一个句子插入其中，但是whom or that 关键词必须要紧跟在先行词之前第8页/共34页6 6）排比（排山倒海句）排比（排山倒海句）文学作品中最吸引人的地方莫过于此，如果非要让你的文章更加精彩的话，那么我希望你引用一个个的排比句，一个个得对偶句，一个个的不定式，一个个地词，一个个的短语，如此表达将会使文章有排山倒海之势！Whether your tastes are modern or traditional,sophisticated or simple,there is plenty in London for you.Nowadays,energy can be obtained t
12、hrough various sources such as oil,coal,natural gas,solar heat,the wind and ocean tides.We have got to study hard,to enlarge our scope of knowledge,to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（气势恢宏）要想写出如此气势恢宏的句子非用排比不可！第9页/共34页七、七、挑战极限原则挑战极限原则既然是挑战极限，必然是比较难的，但是并非不可攀！原理：在学生的文章中，很少发现诸如独立主格的句子，它就是
13、分词的一种特殊形式，分词要求主语一致，而独立主格则不然。比如：The weather being fine,a large number of people went to climb the western hills.Africa is the second largest continent,its size being about three times that of China.如果你可一些出这样的句子，不得高分才怪！第10页/共34页文章主体段落三大杀手锏：文章主体段落三大杀手锏：一、举实例一、举实例思维短路，举实例！提出一个观点，举实例！提出一个方案，举实例！而且者也是我们揭示
14、一个观点最好的方式，任何情况下，只要我们无法继续文章，不管三七二十一，尽管举例子！In order to attract more customers,advertisers have adopted every possible stimulative factor in making ads,such as sound,light,colours,cartoon films and human performance.For instance,to advertise a certain food,advertisers will ask an actor or actress to si
15、t at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food.更多句型：to take as an example,one example is,another example is,for example第11页/共34页二、做比较二、做比较方法：写完一个要点，比较与之相似的；又写完一个要点，再比较与之相反的；只有通过比较，你才会发现二者的相同点（through comparison）和不同点（through contrast）。下面是一些短语：相似的比较：in comparison,likewise,similarly,in the same m
16、anner相反的比较：on the other hand,conversely,whereas,while,instead,nevertheless,in contrast,on the contrary,compared with 第12页/共34页三、换言之三、换言之没话说了,可以换一句话再说，让你的文章在多一些字，或者文邹邹地说，是让读者更充分的理解你的观点。实际就是重复重复再重复！下面的句子实际上就三个字 I love you!I am enthusiastic about you.That is to say,I love you.I am wild about you.In oth
17、er words,I have fallen in love with you.或者上面我们举过的例子：I cannot bear it.可以用短语表达：I cannot put up with it.因此可以这样说：I cannot bear it.That is to say,I cannot put up with it or I am fed up with it.更多短语：in more difficult language,in simpler words,put it more simply第13页/共34页图表作文的写作图表作文的写作有些学生习惯于文字题，看到图表作文时就有些发
18、蒙。其实图表作文是文章中常见的一种辅助性表达形式，它具有醒目和简练的特点。图表作文要求作者先描述图表，再阐明观点。在描述图表时，应该先弄清楚数据彼此之间的关系，并根据图表中所给出的数据进行横向或纵向比较、分析，如：最大最小；最多最少；最快最慢；最好最差等，然后再用图表的内容来阐明道理，最后得出结论。在写作中可以采用各种不同的方法，如：比较和对照、因果关系等。第14页/共34页图表作文常用句型图表作文常用句型 As is shown/can be seen/stated in/from the table/chart.Compared with B,A is.There was a rise/f
19、all of.between/during the period of.A is three times as much as/faster than/slower than BFrom the analyses/date/discussion above,we can see/come to a conclusion/draw a conclusion/make a conclusion that.第15页/共34页写作万能公式写作万能公式开头万能公式：开头万能公式：1 开头万能公式一：名人名言经典句型：As a saying goes,“Money makes the mare go”,b
20、ut there are something that cant be bought with money such as time and true love.A proverb says,“you are only young once.”（适用于已记住的名言）It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.（适用于自编名言）更多经典句型：as everyone knows,no one can deny that第16页/共34页 2 开头万能公式二：数字统计原理：要想更有说服力，就应该用实际的数字来说明。According
21、to a recent survey,about 78.9 of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.更多句型：A recent statistics shows that 第17页/共34页 结尾万能公式：结尾万能公式：1 结尾万能公式一：如此结论Obviously（此为过渡短语）,we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.更多过渡短语：to s
22、um up,in conclusion,in brief,on account of this,thus更多句型：thus,it can be concluded that,therefore,we can find that第18页/共34页 2 结尾万能公式二：如此建议Obviously,it is high time that we took some measures to solve the problem.这里的虚拟语气用得很经典，因为考官本来经常考这个句型，而如果我们自己写出来，你说考官会怎么想呢？更多句型：Accordingly,I recommend that some me
23、asures be taken.Consequently,to solve the problem,some measures should be taken.第19页/共34页四级高分作文标志四级高分作文标志1.120-150字，字迹清晰，卷面整洁；2.是否长短句交叉；3.用词是否恰当，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；4.关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词。第20页/共34页写好一篇作文的注意事项：写好一篇作文的注意事项：1.适当用被动代替主动。这样能更客观的反映事实，句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用we should pay attention to而用Atten
24、tion should be paid to.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：It is,therefore,high time that some applicable approaches were implemented by the service industry like that.Thus，its competitive edge will be sharpened effectively.第21页/共34页 2.善于使用插入语。比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/for
25、 example/I believe做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Other individuals,however,take the attitude that第22页/共34页 3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的代替太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable代替proper;approaches代替ways;implement代替carry out;sharpen ones competitive edge代替enhance ones comp
26、etitiveness(提高某物竞争力)第23页/共34页下面举一篇优秀作文下面举一篇优秀作文(14(14分分)的例子，的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。的。Computer and I第24页/共34页第一段：I never forget the exceedingly thrilling day when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present,which exerted a tremendous fascination on me so that I indulged myself in go
27、ogling an army of useful information I had expected,and enjoy a sea of melodious classic music.That night I was sleepless,feeling that the whole world belonged to me.exceedingly替换very thrilling替换exciting sth.exert a tremendous fascination on sb替换sb.be interested in sth.google替换search an army of替换a l
28、ot of 第25页/共34页第二段：The dawn of the new century witnessed the increasing popularity of computers.Coincident with the advancement of science and technology,computers pouring into the current society as a fashion are appealing to growing individuals.It is no exaggeration to say that we have been submer
29、ged by them,in large measure!The dawn of the new century witnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；Increasing popularity替换more and more popular Coincident with非常地道的词汇，表达与一致的意思，替换WithAdvancement替换development Pour into(flood into/swarm into)替换enter into Current(currently)替换now Appeal to sb.替换sb.be interested
30、in sth.Growing individuals替换more and more people It is no exaggeration to say经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的第26页/共34页第三段：To begin with,we can,freely,search desired information at any moment.Little by little,our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.Additionally,we can get huge re
31、creations online by chatting,playing games,or delivering email.We can,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法our knowledge will be well enriched,and our horizons will be greatly broadened.用了非常精彩的被动Additionally替换In addition/Besides Deliver替换send 第27页/共34页第 四 段：There is no denying that,however,computers can function
32、in the disservice of human beings,in a way,especially the growing violence,porn pictures,AV-films emerging on the screen,which leads quiet a few net citizens to copying.There is no denying that,however,computers can function in the disservice of human beings.这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先There is no denying that这个句
33、型，还有however作为插入语，function in the disservice of替换do harm to Emerging代替appearing(fading代替disappearing)Net citizen网民，属于精彩用词第28页/共34页第 五 段：As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds.Computers do play a positive role in the development of people lives,despite a slice of unfavorable impacts.We
34、should,therefore,take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.No garden has no weeds替换Every coin has two sides Computers do play，do强调Positive替换important/goodA slice of替换a part of Unfavorable替换bad Impacts替换effects/influences We should,therefore,take advantage of使用插入语Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象
35、，merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)Facet替换aspect 第29页/共34页3030个最经典的替换词个最经典的替换词 1.individuals,characters,folks代替(people,persons)2.positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding代替good 3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse(有害的)代替bad。如果bad做表语，可以有be le
36、ss impressive代替eg.An army of college students indulge themselves in playing games,enjoying romance with girls/boys or killing time passively in their dorms.When it approaches to graduation,as a result,they find their academic records are less impressive.4.(an army of,an ocean of,a sea of,a multitude
37、 of,many.,if not most)代替many.注：用manyif not most一定要小心，many后一定要有词。eg.Many individuals,if not most,harbor the idea that.同理用mostif not all,代替most.5.a slice of,quiet a few,several代替some 第30页/共34页6.harbor the idea that,take the attitude that,hold the view that,it is widely shared that,it is universally ac
38、knowledged that)替think(因为是书面语，所以要加that)7.affair,business,matter代替thing 8.shared代common 9.reap huge fruits代替get much benefit10.for my part,from my own perspective代替in my opinion 11.Increasing(ly),growing代替more and more。注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing。修饰形容词，副词用increasingly。eg.sth has gai
39、ned growing popularity.Sth is increasingly popular with the advancement of sth.12.little if anything，或little or nothing代替hardly13.beneficial rewarding 代替 helpful be beneficial of14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser 代替customer15.exceedingly,extremely代替very第31页/共34页16.hardly unnecessary,hardly inevita
40、ble.代替necessary,inevitable17.sth appeals to sb,sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb 代替sb take interest in18.capture ones attention 代替attract ones attention.19.facet,dimension,sphere 代aspect20.be indicative of,be suggestive of,be fearful of 代indicate,suggest,fear21.give rise to,lead to,result in
41、,trigger 代替cause.22.There are several reasons behind sth 代替.reasons for sth23.Desire 代替want.24.pour attention into 代替pay attention to 25.bear in mind that 代替remember26.enjoy,possess 代替have(注意process是过程的意思)27.Interaction 代替communication28.frown on sth 代替be against,disagree with sth29.to name only a few,as an example 代替for example30.next to/virtually impossible 代替nearly impossible 第32页/共34页THE END第33页/共34页感谢您的观看！第34页/共34页