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1、Learningaims:1.学会作文审题,根据所给要点构建文章结构。2.能够根据要求列出关键词,学会连词成句。3.通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会组句成篇。第1页/共34页 中考英语写作评分标准中考英语写作评分标准 一档文(17-20分)写出全部内容要点,层次清楚,语言流畅,有句式变化,有复杂结构,至少2-3个,基本无语法错误,只有1-2个,或有少量由于使用复杂结构而引起的语法或拼写错误,但不影响意义理解。第2页/共34页Howcanwewriteagoodcomposition(作文)?第3页/共34页第一步:都要认真审题,明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点Howcanwewriteagoo
2、dcomposition?(Haveadiscussion!)具体做法:用笔勾画第4页/共34页假 如 你 是 王 林。你 所 在 学 校 的“爱 心 俱 乐 部(HelpingHandsClub)”将吸收新会员。你想加入该俱乐部,请根据下面表格和图片的内容,用英语写一封自荐信。姓名姓名王林王林性别性别男男本人特点本人特点身体健康;学习刻苦;乐于助人;身体健康;学习刻苦;乐于助人;与同学友好相处与同学友好相处“爱心爱心”表表现现(见图片)(见图片)加入目的加入目的 1.2.1.第5页/共34页要求:1.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯;2.要点须包括表格和四幅图片中的信息,但不得使用真实姓名和校名
3、等;3.表格中“加入目的”一栏内容由考生自拟;4.词数:70左右。第6页/共34页第二步:列出写作提纲(Outline)。具体做法:根据段落整理写作要点不要遗漏要点!第7页/共34页WriteanOutlineIntroductionMainbodyConclusionIwanttojoin本人特点“爱心”表现加入目的看表格看表格看图自拟Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.可以用英文或中文姓名/性别易漏掉的要点!第8页/共34页自荐信Whatwillyouwrite?王林Whoareyouinthisletter?人称:IWhatsyourpurpose?加入该俱乐部时态:一般现在
4、时为主Thinking:第9页/共34页DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.扣分原因一词数不够!第10页/共34页DearChairperson,Iamaboystudentfro
5、mClass1Grade9.IdliketojointheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.Igetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.AndIcanalsodomoreforothers.Introduction本人特点加入目的扣分原因二遗漏要点!第11页/共34页WriteanOutlineIntroductionMainbodyConclusionIamaboyIdliketojoin本人特
6、点“爱心”表现加入目的Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.无法拿满分!第12页/共34页DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.IgetonwellwithmyclassmatesIfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLin少了两
7、个重要部分,扣5-6分,只得9-10分!缺少“爱心”表现也缺少Conclusion第13页/共34页“爱心”表现(examples)Picture1helpwithhelpclassmateswithlessons我的Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.看图第14页/共34页Picture2helpcross“爱心”表现(examples)看图helpoldpeoplecrosstheroadIhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.第15页/共34页Picture3“爱心”表现(examples)看图givemyseattogiv
8、emyseattopeopleinneedIoftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.第16页/共34页“爱心”表现(examples)看图Picture4cleanuptheparkhelpcleanuptheparkIoftenhelpcleanupthepark.第17页/共34页“爱心”表现(examples)1.Ioftenhelpclassmateswithlessons.2.Ihelpoldpeoplecrosstheroadonmywayhome.3.Ioftengivemyseattopeopleinneedonabus.4.Ioftenhelp
9、cleanupthepark.第18页/共34页ConclusionIllbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.第19页/共34页DearChairperson,IamaboystudentfromClass1Grade9.IdliketobeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardatmylessons.IlikehelpingothersIgetonwellwithmyclassmates.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends
10、.Besides,Icandomoreforothers.YoursWangLinIllbegladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.andoftenhelpclassmateswiththeirlessons.Onmywayhome,Ioftenhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Onabus,Ialwaysgivemyseattopeopleinneed.Sometimes,Ihelptocleanupthepark.不但要点完整了,词数也够了。第20页/共34页写作:第一步就是要认真审题,明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点第二步
11、就是要列出写作提纲,根据段落整理写作要点。写作前:确定人称、时态写作后:?第21页/共34页DearChairperson,Iamaboystudentfromclass1Grade9.IdlikebeamemberoftheHelpingHandsClub.Iamhealthy.Iworkhardlyatmylessons.Ilikehelpingothers.andoftenhelpclassmateswiththeirlesson.Onmywayhome,Ioftenhelpoldpeoplecrosstheroad.Onabus,Ialwaysgavemyseattopeopleinn
12、eed.Sometimes,Ihelptocleanupthepark.IfIjointheclub,Iwillbeabletomakemorefriends.Besides,hecandomoreforothers.IllgladifIcanjointheclub.Ihopeyouwillagreewithme.YoursWangLinCtolessonsgiveIbe1分其它六处错扣2分只得12分第22页/共34页作文中应避免的几种常见语言错误:1.时态错误(扣分多,一个时态错误扣分在1分左右)。2.中国式的英语(不正确的英文表达会让整句不得分)。3.单词拼写错误及大小写(单词拼写一定要过
13、关)。4.介词,代词,非谓语动词或形容词副词的不正确使用(对单词的词性要熟悉)。5.名词单复数(细心就可以避免的错)。第23页/共34页写作:第一步就是要认真审题,明确写作体裁、要求和提示要点第二步就是要列出写作提纲,根据段落整理写作要点。写作前:确定人称、时态写作后:检查第24页/共34页另外作文中书写不规范,卷面不整洁也是要失分的(中考中有12分的卷面整洁分,这两分不能丢!)。解决方法:平时认真规范书写,少用或不用胶带或修正液,尽量减少涂改。第25页/共34页Lets practice!第26页/共34页你将代表学校参加扬州市中学生英语演讲比赛,演讲的题目是Learning to get
14、along with our parents.请你用英语写一篇演讲稿,内容要点如下。要求:1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;3)词数:100词左右(演讲稿的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)4)不得使用真实姓名和校名等。现象现象经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话原因原因1 父母过分关注分数父母过分关注分数 2 我们我们措施措施(不少于三点)(不少于三点)1.我们应该和父母沟通我们应该和父母沟通 2.我们我们 3.我们我们第27页/共34页Lets enjoy our own compositions!第28页/共34页Sampl
15、e writing Good morning,ladies and gentlemen.Today my topic is learning to get along with our parents.These days,most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents.We easily get angry for no reason and even dont talk to them for days.I think the causes are as follows.First,our parents only care
16、 about our marks and it makes us stressed.Second,we are unwilling to communicate with them.Its time for us to change.First,we can communicate with them,by sharing our joys and worries with them.Then,we can help do some housework to show our love for them.Finally,we should achieve a balance between o
17、ur schoolwork and hobbies so that they wont feel worried about us.Thats all for my speech.Thank you!第29页/共34页组段成篇,加主题句审清题意,构建框架连词成句,变换句式抓住要点,列关键词Summary集句成段,添连接词抄写规范,避免错误第30页/共34页HomeworkAfterclass,self-edityourowncompositions.第31页/共34页Secrets of learning English:Practice makes perfect.Hard work leads to success.第32页/共34页Thank you!第33页/共34页谢谢您的观看!第34页/共34页