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1、应用文写作练习之申请素材讲义题目假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，你校正在招募志愿者，为春 节期间中外学生交流活动做准备。请根据下表提供的信息，用英语写一封 e-mail,向学校外事办公室提出申请。Name: Li HuaClass: Class 1, Senior 3Qualifications: speak English fluently, have similar experiences, be willing to spread Chinese Culture原始范文I am writing to apply for a position as a volunteer.Im Li
2、 Hua, from Class One, Senior Three. I think I would be a good volunteer due to the following reasons. I can speak English fluently to communicate with foreign students. And I have similar experiences as a volunteer. I hosted some exchange students from America last year. In addition, I have a good k
3、nowledge of Chinese culture and I am willing to spread it. I can teach them how to make paper-cuttings, how to write Chinese characters and so on.If you can kindly give me the opportunity, I am sure to make you satisfied. I am looking forward to your reply.题目分析范文比较简单，各位可以结合上一篇“申请信的综述“，看看范文哪里 有可以改进的余
4、地，我就不再浪费笔墨去分析了。这次我们要看到的是申 请信的具体素材积累。这篇题目的开头和结尾都是固定的套路，所以写作重点就是 qualifications资格、个人条件”这一部分。我们在上一篇文章里提到过， 设计个人优势可以从四个方面入手：性格特征、兴趣爱好、知识能力、经 历成绩。这次带着各位看看如何积累这四个方面的写作素材。个人优势的整体写作思路是比较固定的，我们要使用短句概括和长句 具体细节搭配的方式。短句：我有样的性格/爱好/能力/经历长句：对性格/爱好/能力/经历的具体说明首先从短句说起。性格nature、爱好interests、能力skills或ability、 经历experien
5、ces,这些都属于最基本的词汇，真正有技术含量的只有两件 事：1、“有”要怎么写？ 2、“样的”需要形容词积累。说到“有”，你的第一反应是不是“have” ？这是一个我们从刚刚接触英语 的时候就学会的词，那我想问你，你之后又学了这么多年，如果仍然只会 使用最初级的词汇，那这些年的意义是什么呢？所以我们在写作里要学会使用高中水准的词来表示“有”的意思，你需 要学会的是 “possess、keep、obtain”。I possess an outgoing nature.I possess a passion for photography.I keep an expansive interest
6、.I obtain good working skills.以上的这些句子里，“有”的概念都是通过“拥有、持有”的词汇体现的。 这些词无论在写作里，还是任何其它题型里，都是高考对于你的必然要求。如果我们把语义稍微灵活改变一下，还可以有其它的表达思路。I exhibit excellent potential.我展示出了优秀的潜力。I excel at language ability.我在语言能力方面很优秀。这些仍然是“有”的概念，只不过是另一种回避have的写法罢了。在一 篇申请信里，我们能够写到的个人优势最多不超过三条，所以从以上的词 汇里掌握三种不同的写法，就足以应对写作的需要了。然后是
7、形容词积累，这部分纯粹考验各位的基本功，但是我们可以帮 助各位汇总一些比较常用的。绝大多数是核心词汇，要求必须认识，至少 阅读理解人物类记叙文考到人物品质时，你不能不认识选项。性格easy-goingconsiderateoutgoinggentle开朗的体贴的外向的温柔的earnestsociableenergeticstraightforward真诚的善于交际的精力充沛的直率的honesthumorousindependentconfident诚实的幽默的独立的自信的enthusiasticrationalmodestoptimistic热情的理性的谦虚的乐观的人际关系friendlyhe
8、lpfulpatientwarm-hearted友好的有帮助的耐心的热心的selflesssinceregenerouskind-hearted无私的真诚的慷慨的善良的工作能力capabledevotedcompetentdependable有能力的投入的能胜任的可靠的ambitiousdisciplinedcreativefaithful有志向的严于律己的有创造力的忠于职守的efficientactiveloyaldiligent有效率的积极的忠诚的勤劳的adaptablepunctualaggressivehard-working适应能力强的守时的有进取心的努力的responsibleco
9、operativeself-consciousreliable负责任的合作的自觉的可靠的知识intelligentknowledgeablelearnedwell-educated聪明的博学的有学问的有教养的experiencedversatileskillfulsmart有经验的多才多艺的有技术的聪明的然后是长句。要具体说明你的性格/爱好/能力/经历，这部分就是各位 可以借助自己的写作能力自由发挥的地方了。我直接给你一些基本索材， 可以在写作里借鉴。同时，也请各位自己观察一下短句和长句组合的内在 逻辑。性格特征I possess an outgoing and energetic natur
10、e. I have my hearts on all kinds of outdoor activities, which enables me to become stronger and feel relaxed.我性格外向，精力充沛。我喜欢各种户外活动，它们让我变得更强壮 更放松。I possess an easy-going nature. My classmates find me active and open-minded, which explains why we can always make achievements as a good team.我的性格随和。我的同学们
11、觉得我很积极主动、心态开放，这就是为 什么我们总是能组成团队取得成就。I possess an outgoing nature. My classmates find me active and easy to talk with, which may be the reason why I am popular in my school.我的性格外向。我的同学们觉得我很活跃，很谈得来，这可能是我在 学校受欢迎的原因。兴趣爱好I possess a passion for photography and writing. I believe it is these two methods th
12、at allow me to memorize those impressive and unforgettable moments.我非常喜欢摄影和写作。我认为正是这两种方法让我能记住那些令人 印象深刻和难忘的时刻。I keep an expansive interest. Classic English novels are my favorite, whiIe drawing pictures fulfills my wildest imagination. Besides, as a real basketball fan, I enjoy the excitement of swea
13、t running down my cheeks.我的兴趣广泛。英文经典小说是我的最爱，而画画则满足了我最疯狂 的想象力。此外，作为一个真正的篮球迷，我很享受汗水顺着脸颊流下的 兴奋的感觉。知识能力I exhibit excellent potential. With my independence, it is easy for me to adapt to a new environment.我有优秀的潜力。因为我的独立，我很容易适应新的环境。I excel at language ability. After years of English study, I can introduce
14、 the traditions of Chinese culture to the foreign friends with fluent speaking English.我的语言能力很出色。经过多年的英语学习，我可以流利地用英语向 外国朋友介绍中国的传统文化。经历成绩I excel at my grades. Owing to my constant efforts and passion for English, I have won the first prize in an English Speech Contest.我的成绩很优秀。凭借我的不断努力和对英语的热情，我在一次英语 演
15、讲比赛中获得了一等奖。I obtain good working skills. I have similar work experiences, which enables me to predict the possible problems and find solutions.我有良好的工作技能。我有类似的工作经验，这让我能预测可能出现 的问题并找到解决方案。虽然长句的写作需要你具备一定的写作能力，但是在申请信这种比较 固定的文体中，我们的写作内容是可以提前准备的，毕竟你要写的核心肯 定是个人的优势。这次的题目里给到的要点，主要是知识能力和经历成绩这两个方面。 如果用上面的素材整合，就
16、非常简单了。First, I excel at language ability. After years of English study, I can introduce the traditions of Chinese culture to the foreign friends with fluent speaking English.Besides, I obtain good working skills. I have similar work experiences, which enables me to predict the possible problems and
17、find solutions.More importantly, I am willing to take the responsibility of a volunteer and I am sure to leave the participants a great impression.前两点是素材照搬，一个字都没有改，加个层级标志即可，而第三点 是个申请信常见的写作套路。所以你看，申请信的写作，一点难度也没有。全文呈现Im Li Hua from Class 1, Senior 3. Ils my honor lo apply for the position as a volunte
18、er. I believe I am qualified due to the following reasons.First, I excel at language ability. After years of English study, I can introduce the traditions of Chinese culture to the foreign friends with fluent speaking English. Besides, I obtain good working skills. I have si mi 1 ar workexperiences,
19、 which enables meexperiences, which enables mesolutions. More importantly, Ito predict the possible problems and findam willing to take the rcsponsibility of avolunteer and I am sure lo leavethe participants a great impression.I should be grateful if youcan take my application into consideration.Looking forward lo a reply al your earliest convenience.