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1、Welcome to Writing worldByTinaSelf-introductionMyname中文名：陈哲Englishname:TinaMymajortranslationMyhobbiesReadingbooksEnglishpoem泰戈尔：爱情诗Stray Birds 飞鸟集飞鸟集Ifyoushedtearswhenyoumissthesun,youllalsomissthestars.如果你因失去了太阳而流泪，那么你也将失去群星了。Letlifebebeautifullikesummerflowersanddeathlikeautumnleaves.使生如夏花之绚烂，死如秋
2、叶之静美。MyhobbiesMusic:YannieSecretgardenWestlifeSeasonsinthesun再见了,我忠实的朋友.我们从孩提时就已相识,相知.我们一起爬山,爬树.Goodbyetoyoumytrustedfriends.WeveknowneachothersincewewerenineortenTogetherweveclimbedhillsandtreesthelyrics写作学习方法1.永远不要忽略背诵的作用。西班牙语2.与母语语法进行对比3.与日常英语相结合，灵活变通Makeittwo.Part 1 高考写作简介高考写作简介最新英语教学大纲对写作的要求最新英
3、语教学大纲对写作的要求2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试大纲(英语)要求考生根据题示进行书面表达。考生应能：（1）准确使用语法和词汇；（2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。（3）能用书写体清楚地书写，格式、拼写、标点等正确；（4）能写简单的书信、便条和通知，填写简单的个人履历表，会写记叙文、说明、议论文等。要求在书写格式、行文及礼貌用语等方面明显无错误；（5）能用书面形式造句，在有提示词语的条件下，能写80-120个单词的短文。在基本语法和常用句型等方面无明显错误，意思表达清楚。2007年高考全国卷年高考全国卷书面表达书面表达(满分满分25分分)真题再现（应用文）假定你是
4、李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter找一个英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：1.年龄；2.性别；3.爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。注意：1词数100左右；2可以适当（必须）增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语已为你写好（不计入总字数）。DearPeter,Iamwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor._Bestregards,LiHua1、审题1.时态一般现在时和一般将来时2.人称第一人称3.分段意识要点包括开头语写信目的及描述理想笔友的条件、选择这种朋友的理由结尾用语4.补充细节思考理想中的笔友什么样
5、？年龄，性别，爱好年龄与我相仿，同性，爱好旅游、运动、养宠物等；为什么选择这样的笔友？1、有共同语言，可以沟通交流相互的旅游经历等；2、期望可以通过写信提高英语；补充什么样的细节？最好是与众不同的、用词在能力范围之内的、合乎逻辑的2、词汇思考外籍教师foreignteacher,ateacherfromaforeigncountry笔友penfriend,penpal,理想中的ideal不要犯错误!技巧一：转义合适的proper,suitable,appropriate,perfect条件requirements,factor技巧二:从词到句型Iwishtofindasuitablefrien
6、dlikethisThisiswhatIthinkmypenfriendislike爱好宠物hobby,pet,keeping/raisingpets3、连词成句Imwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.1.我想找一位跟我年龄相仿的笔友，你能帮忙找一个吗？Idliketohaveapenfriendofmyage,andcanyoukindlyfindoneforme,please?Idlikeyoutofindapenfriendofmyageforme,please.2.我希望她是一个女孩并且跟我有相似的兴趣爱好，例如喜欢旅行和做运动等。Hop
7、efully,shellbeagirlhavingsimilarinterestswithme,suchastraveling,doingsportsetc.Inmymind,sheissomeonewhoisinterestedintravelinganddoingsports.3.另外，我还希望她也喜欢养宠物，因为这也是我的爱好之一。Whatsmore,itllbebetterifsheiskeenonkeepingpets,forIlovecuteanimalsverymuch.4.同时，我认为，我们也可以一起分享旅游的经历或是任何我们共同感兴趣的东西。AndIbelieve,wecan
8、sharewitheachotherourtravelingexperiencesorwhateverwehaveincommon.这样，我可以改进我的英语水平，同时可以了解更多关于他们国家的情况。Ofcourse,IllimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearnmoreabouthercountry.期盼你的来信并祝你一切如意。Ilookforwardtohearingfromyouandallthebest!满分作文DearPeter,Imwritingtoaskwhetheryouareabletodomeafavor.Idliketohaveapenfriend
9、ofmyage,andcanyoukindlyfindoneforme,please?Hopefully,shellbeagirlhavingsimilarinterestswithme,suchastraveling,doingsports.Whatsmore,itllbebetterifsheiskeenonkeepingpets,forIlovecuteanimalsverymuch.（条件）Thus,wellhavealotincommon.（过渡句）AndIbelieve,wecansharewitheachotherourtravelingexperiences.Thiswillb
10、egreatfun.Ofcourse,IllimprovemyEnglishbydoingsoandlearnmoreabouthercountry.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou.BestRegards,LiHua2006年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试卷书面表达假定你是李华，亚洲冬季运动会将在你居住的地方举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况3.承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好可适当增加细节，以使行文
11、连贯生词：申请apply(v.),application(n.)志愿者volunteerDearSir/Madam:MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames._内容要点内容要点1.年龄、性别2.学历及英语水平3.爱好体育、熟悉本地4.善于交往、乐于助人5.承诺6.合适的结尾【同学范文1】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Iaman18girl.Asalocalpeople,Iknow
12、theroadsandBuildingsveryclear.Ilikesportsverymuch.Byseveralyearstraining,Iamalmostgoodateverysports.NowIamastudent.Inschool,myEnglishisgood,IamalsoaKindgirl.WhenIknowsomeoneisindifficulty,Iwillgivehimorhertodefeatit.TheGameswillbeheldinthecitywhereIamlive.Iwouldliketoavolunteer,ifthedreamcomestrue,I
13、willtrymybesttoimprovethelevelofmyservice.Asavolunteerismygloary.IwishIcanbecomeone.Bestwishesforyou.第一档（很差）1-6分1.基本语法错误太多2.结构混乱3.要点介绍不全4.句子之间缺乏连接【同学范文2】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Iama17yearsoldgirl.AndIamasenior2studentsinNO.1SeniorSchoolof.MyEng
14、lishisgoodandIamgoodatPE.Iliketodothingsforothers.BecauseIthinkhelpingothersishelpingmyself.Whensomeonehasdifficultindoingthings,Iamalwaysreadytohelphim.AndIliketocommunicationisthebridgeoftheworld.Becausetheworldisabigfamily.IhearthattheGameswillbeheldinthisplacewhereIlives.Ihopetobeavolunteer.Beca
15、usebythis,Icanleanabouttheworldandtakeexercise.IcanprovidethebestservicefortheGames.Iknowthesituationhere.IbelieveIcandowell.第二档（较差）7-12分点评：要点安排混乱，部分要点理解错误；拼写、语法错误较多，部分句型结构有问题【同学范文3】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLihua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Iamabraveboyof16yearsold.IcanspeakEngl
16、ishfluently.Besides,Idowellingettingonwell(用词重复)withotherstudents.Iamgladtohelpothers.Iknowallinterestingplaceshere.IfIbecomeamemberofvolunteers,Iwilltrymybesttointroducemyhometowntovisitors.IwilltakethemtotasteallkindsoffoodandletthemknowourChineseculture.Iamsurethatnoneofthemwouldleavefeelingdisap
17、pointed.（这部分不错）Ontheotherhand,IwishtheGameshadahappyend.Iapplyforbeingavolunteer,Ihopeyoucanallowmetobeavolunteer.Iwilldowellinitanditandtrymybesttowork.Thankyou.第三档（适当）13-18分点评：缺少部分要点，如爱好体育、熟悉本地、善于交往、乐于助人等；承诺部分比较精彩【同学范文4】DearSirorMadam,MynameisLihua,IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAcianGame
18、s.Iamawarm-heartedboyof17,whoisstillstudyinginMiddleSchool.Iwanttobeamemberofthem.EnglishiswhatIamgoodat,aswellassports.Ihavenodifficultyincommunicatingwithforeigner,becauseIcanspeakEnglishfluentlyanddowellincommunication.Itismydutytohelpothersandasalocalone,Iknowquitewellaboutourdistrict.IfIamavolu
19、nteer,Iwilltrymybesttoserveothers.Forme,avolunteerisnotonlyagloriousjob,butagoodwaytogetclosetosports.IfIcanbeoneofthemembers,Iwillbeveryhappyandhonorable.Pleaseacceptmyapplicationforbeingavolunteer,andIhavebeenreadytomakecontributiontotheGames.第四档（好）19-24分点评：能通过使用多变的句式和高级的词组增强文章表现力，英语功底比较扎实。【同学范文5】
20、MynameisLiHua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterAsianGames.Imaboyof17yearsoldandrightnowImstudyingintheNo.2SeniorHighSchool.ThereareseveralreasonswhyIwanttoapply.Firstofall,ItakegreatinterestinsportsanddowellinEnglish,especiallyspokenEnglish.Thiscanhelpmecommunicatewithforeignerssmoothly.Secondly,Imveryfamiliarwithourcity.Anditsquiteeasyformetoshowthewaytostrangers.Mostimportantofall,Iliketomakefriendswithpeopleandtrymybesttohelpthem.IfIcanbecomeavolunteer,IpromisethatIllprovidethebestservicewithforeignguests.AndIwilldoagoodjob.第五档（很好）25-30分结构安排合理；内容非常连贯；用词准确，能用到一定复杂语法结构。