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1、 高中英语真题:2014 届高考英语专题训练：短文改错、书面表达（8）.（浙江卷）短文改错（共 10 题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spendweekend with you.Luckily
2、 the I was completely tree then,so Ill to say”yes.Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m.am in Friday evening.on I was playing at my cousin house.Since his family was rich than mine,he had more toys than I did.There was one on particular Id always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking.
3、I guessed,even at that age,I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;I would always know,Id done something wrong.Late on,my aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off,I pulled out the toy slow and gave It back.She knows what had happened,but she thanked me and e
4、ver mentioned it again.*结束 (2012 武汉供题三)请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。Should a city try to preserve its old，historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings？Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.注意：无须写标题，除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；词数为 120 左右。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
5、_ _ _ 参考范文 One possible version：Some people believe that a city should destroy its old，historic buildings and replace them with modern ones.Others，me included，have an opposite opinion that a city should try to preserve its old，historic buildings.The reasons are as follows.First of all，historic build
6、ings are symbols of cities.Without these historic buildings，a lot of cities would lose their cultural image or even their identity.Besides，historic buildings benefit the tourism industry.Moreover，historic buildings serve as an important resource for historical education.For instance，the Forbidden Ci
7、ty is one of the most visited historic buildings in China.Not only are people impressed by its traditional architecture，but they also gain rich knowledge about the lifestyles of ancient Chinese emperors in the Ming and Tsing Dynasties.In conclusion，preserving these buildings is definitely necessary.
8、*结束 短文改错 Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours.It can cause lots of trouble.First,people must have to spend longer time getting to our destinations.It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam.Second,wait in the car for a long time ca
9、n easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents.Also,traffic jam cause serious air pollution.But it is necessary to deal with this problem.In my opinion,the government should develop public transport.It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable.Besides,we should use pub
10、lic transport as much as possibly.Its better to share cars during rush hours.In a word,we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.参考答案：So causes easily waiting is their cities a Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours.It can cause lots of trou
11、ble.First,people must have to spend longer time getting*结束 (2)(25 min.)(2012师大附中月考)请你简要概述图中所述新闻事件，并针对路人的反应发表自己的看法，如果你是在场的路人之一，你会怎么做？_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文 One possible version：Since 13th Oct.,2011,China has been captivated by the distressing case of twoyearold girl Xiao Yueyue,who was coldly ignored b
12、y passersby as she lay bleeding in the street after being struck by a delivery van.Video shared widely across social media documented the incident in horrifying detail,including at least 18 people walking past Xiao Yueyues body without so much as a glance.In my eyes,those 18 people have shamed the w
13、hole of China.Owing to the new complexities of Chinese social life,people had lost their reverence for life and felt indifferent or even cold about life or death.Any one of us might become the passerby at the side of Xiao Yueyue.If I were one of them,I would stop,move her out of the center of the ro
14、ad,or extend a hand of comfort,carrying her away from danger.Everybody should examine his own conscience:if we were in the same situation next time,how could we help ourselves?Only by lifting a hand to help others,we save ourselves.*结束 .你班李明和王英同学在高三阶段有不同的学习方法，请描述下列各图，适当增加细节使文章连贯，并谈谈你的看法。Li Ming and
15、Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three They both work hard but they have different learning methods _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文 Li Ming and Wang Ying are two students of Senior Three.They both work hard but they have different learning methods.Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listening to the t
16、eacher.As a result,he misses lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him more time to finish his home-work.So he has to stay up late and doesnt get enough sleep.However,Wang Ying has quite a different way of learning.She listens attentively and tries to catch everything that the t
17、eacher says in class.Because of this,she spends less time doing her homework,which makes it posible for her to go to bed early.In my opinion,Wang Ying learns more effectively in class and has more free time to enjoy herself,so I prefer her learning method.*.(典型题)*结束 高考英语书面表达指导 书面表达写作指导 书面表达是综合性强、难度大
18、的题目。但是,当我们深入研究后就不难发现,书面表达实质上就是组词成句、联句成篇的一项系统工程。只要我们抓好词、句、段这三个环节,加强缩写、改写、仿写等练习,由简到繁、由易到难,一环扣一环地进行训练,由模仿到活用,由操练到交际,就能使语言知识逐步转化成语言交际能力。(一)选词 词是语言的最小组成单位,不同词性的词组合在一起构成句子。因此,要充分利用课文中出现的重点单词、词组、句型,培养学生学习和识记单词的能力。1.注意一词多义的应用。如 time 一词,在 Times have changed中指“时代”;在 six times the size of mine 中指“倍数”;在in slow
19、time 中指“拍子”。切忌在写文章下笔时,一词滥用,似是而非。2.结合英语构词法,同义反义比较,名词的可数与不可数词义的区别,加强对英语词形变化的理解,扩充词汇量。3.巧用过渡词,增强文章逻辑性。为了使所写短文通顺,连贯得体,句子与句子之间过渡自然,提高所写短文的质量,适当加上一些表示时间顺序、递进、因果、条件、让步等关系的过渡词是很有必要的。常见的过渡词有:(1)表时间顺序的过渡词:first,second,third,and then,finally,before,after a few days,at last,at that time,later,in the past,immedi
20、ately,in the meanwhile 等等。(2)表空间顺序的过渡词:near(to),far(from),in the front of,beside,behind,beyond,above,below,to the right,to the left,on one side,on the other side of,outside 等等。(7)表因果的过渡词:because,since,so,as a result,therefore,thus,as 等等。(8)表解释说明的过渡词:for example,in fact,in this case,for,actually 等等。(
21、9)表条件的过渡词:as long as,so long as,on condition that,if,unless 等等。(10)表让步的过渡词:though,as,even ifthough,who(what,when,where)ever 等等。(11)表总结的过渡词:in brief,as has been stated,in a word 等等。(12)过渡性插入语:I think,I m afraid,you know,as we all know等等。(二)造句 句子是表达一个较完整意思的最小单位,所以遣词造句的能力在英语写作中是非常重要的,是书面表达成败的关键。因此,加强造句
22、训练就显得尤其重要。1.连词成句:这是最基本的一种训练形式。如:(1)father,for you,new,will buy,says,a bike 可连成Father says,“I will buy a new bike for you.”(2)me,all right,write and tell,this will be,please,whether 可连成Please write and tell me whether this will be all right.2.充分利用教材中特有的句型、句式、语法造句。(1)句型、句式可使句子表达简洁、准确,提高文章档次。It s+adj.+
23、for sb.to do sth.“对某人来讲,做某事是”。如:It s difficult for a child to do the job without help.It s no gooduse.doing sth.做某事没好处用处 It s no use giving him any more money.It is(has been)+时间+since.自从好长时间了 It is(has been)5 years since he joined the army.It s not long before.不久 It will not be long before be comes
24、back.It iswas.who/that.强调句型 It was yesterday that we visited the factory.It seems that.好像 It seems that she is happy./She seems happy.I dont thinkbelieveexpect(that).我认为不 I dont think I know you.Will you please.?请好吗?Will you please help me?Would you like sth.to do sth.?做好吗?Would you like to have a c
25、up of tea?(2)用主从复合句、分词作状语、with 复合结构等用法,可使语言描绘更加生动,增强文章的情感性和感召力。如:What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appearance of a city.(NMET 2002 书面表达参考答案片段)I don t know about others,but I used to work even at weekends,doing endless homework and at tending Cla
26、sses as well.(NMET 2001 书面表达参考答案片段)It s a small flat of 25 square meters,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.(NMET 2003 书面表达参考答案片段)How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well.(NMET 1998 书面表达参考答案片段)我花了 5 元钱买这本书。I spent five yuan on the book.I spent five yuan(in)buying the book.I
27、 paid five yuan for the book.I bought the book for five yuan.The book cost me five yuan.例句赏析 下面是一些常用的精美句子,请注意它们在表达方面的特点。1.You go down the street,turn to the right,and then you ll see the post office on your right.析:几个动词的并列。你顺着这条街,向右拐,右边就是邮局。2.We arrived at the gate of the school,where we were warmly
28、 welcomed.析:关系副词 where 引导的定语从句。我们来到了校门口,受到了热烈欢迎。3.Although we were a little tired,we were excited.析:although 引导的让步状语从句。尽管我们有点累,我们仍然很高兴。4.The old lady was crossing the streets when a young man riding a bicycle rushed up and knocked her down.析:when 表“此刻、那时”。老妇人正穿过马路,这时突然一个年轻人骑着自行车冲过来,把她撞倒了。5.She is a
29、friend to her students as well as a teacher.析:as well as 表“不但而且”。她不但是学生的老师,而且是他们的朋友。6.The library is quiet and there are a lot of books for us to refer to,which is helpful to our study.析:which 引导的非限制性定语从句。图书馆里很安静,有很多书供我们参考,这些书对我们的学习很有帮助。7.The living conditions have been improved greatly and the town
30、 is no longer what it used to be.析:现在完成时的被动语态。生活条件大大提高,城镇不再是原来的样子。8.Every time I think of what happened to me a year ago,I feel I was to blame.析:every time 引导的时间状语从句。每次我想到一年前发生的事,我就感到我应受到责备。9.They were not only strict in our studies but also strict with us.析:not only.but also.表“不但而且”。他们不但对我们的学习严格要求,
31、而且对我们也很严格。10.Great changes have taken place in Qingdao in the recent years.析:现在完成时的被动语态。在最近的几年中,青岛发生了巨大的变化。11.Only when we know well both scientific knowledge and practical skills can we live happily and work wonderfully in the society in the coming future.析:only 引导的倒装结构。只有我们掌握了更多的科学知识和实际技能,我们才能在未来的
32、社会中生活幸福,工作顺利。12.The more I earned,the more difficulties I met with.析:the more.the more.表“越多越”。我学的越多,遇到的困难也越多。13.But the burden of work in class is so heavy that we have little time to do sports,which has left many of us in poor health.析:so.that 引导的结果状语从句。但是,课业负担太重以至于我们几乎没有时间进行体育锻炼,这使我们中很多人身体状况不佳。14.
33、The day we were looking forward to came at lasta weeks military training began.析:定语从句的用法。一周的军训最终到来了,我们一直盼望着这一天。15.One day on my way home from school,I saw an old woman standing by the roadside,with a heavy bag on her back.析:with 复合结构的用法。一天,我在放学回家的路上,看见一位老太太站在路边,背上挂着一个沉重的包裹。16.On the blackboard were
34、large Chinese characters and English,saying“Welcome to our school!”析:倒装结构。在黑板上,用很大的汉语和英语写着:“欢迎来我们的学校!”17.With great curiosity and excitement,we students of Senior 2 began our learning-from-peasant activities in Jiangjia Village,Bin Cheng Township,not far from Beijing.析:with 复合结构的用法。带着兴奋与好奇,我们高二学生去了离
35、北京不远的滨城镇姜家村开展向农民学习的活动。18.She is such an excellent teacher that we got so much from her,not only the knowledge but also kindness,diligence and appreciation for beauty.析:so.that 及 not only.but also.的用法。她是一位优秀的教师,我们从她身上不仅学到了知识还学到了善良、勤奋和对美的鉴赏力。19.Our English teacher Mrs.Zhang is an ordinary-looking,grey
36、 haired woman wearing a pair of glasses.析:wearing 现在分词作定语。我们的英语老师张老师相貌平常,灰白头发,戴着一副眼镜。20.I am living with my parents at No.68 Jingqi Road and I am a student of Senior 2 at Jinan No.1 middle school.析:家庭住址的表示方法。我同我的父母住在经七路 68 号,是济南市一中高二年级的学生。21.Dong Hai is a newly-built city with a population of about
37、three million,which covers an area of about 20 000 square kilometers facing the Yellow Sea in the east.析:which 引导的非限制性定语从句。东海市是一座新建城市,有人口近 300 万,面积 2 万余平方千米,东部面向黄海。22.After he graduated from Beijing Engineering College in 1986,he was sent to Massachusetts Institute of Technology in the USA to study
38、chemistry.析:after 引导的时间状语从句。他 1986 年毕业于北京工学院,后来到美国麻省理工学院深造,攻读化学。23.The team members are required to get ready and others are required to watch and cheer for them.All the football lovers are welcome to watch and coach.析:welcome 的用法。足球队员作好准备,其他同学前往助战,欢迎足球爱好者参观指导。24.Those who would like to go are reque
39、sted to put down their names on this sheet of paper and give eight yuan for the bus fare.析:who 引导的限制性定语从句。参加者需要登记,并交车费 8 元。25.If you continue along Huangpu Road,youll find on your right the highest building in Binhai,the Friendship Hotel,which has 12 floors.析:if 引导的条件状语从句。如果你继续沿着黄埔路向前,你会发现右边是滨海市最高的
40、12 层建筑友谊大厦。26.Pollution is becoming more and more serious all over the world.析:注意比较级的用法。全世界污染越来越严重。27.As everyone knows,smoking is harmful to our health.析:as 引导的定语从句。每个人都知道,吸烟有害健康。28.It is well-known that a teacher,as an engineer of human soul,plays a very important role in society.析:注意 it 作形式主语的用法。
41、众所周知,教师作为人类灵魂的工程师,在社会中起着非常重要的作用。29.Young as he is,he has been honoured as an advanced worker many times,for having got great achievements in his teaching.*结束 2014 届高考英语专题训练：短文改错、书面表达（8）.（浙江卷）短文改错（共 10 题；每小题 1 分，满分 10 分）下面短文中有 10 处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉
42、。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spendweekend with you.Luckily the I was completely tree then,so Ill to say”yes.Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p.m.am in Friday evening.on I was playing at my cousin house.Si
43、nce his family was rich than mine,he had more toys than I did.There was one on particular Id always wanted.I put into my pocket when he wasnt looking.I guessed,even at that age,I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again;I would always know,Id done something wrong
44、.Late on,my aunt drove me home.When she dropped me off,I pulled out the toy slow and gave It back.She knows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.*结束 (2012 武汉供题三)请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文。Should a city try to preserve its old，historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with
45、 modern buildings？Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.注意：无须写标题，除诗歌外，文体不限；文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；词数为 120 左右。_ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 参考范文 One possible version：Some people believe that a city should destroy its old，historic buildings and replace them with modern ones.Others，me
46、included，have an opposite opinion that a city should try to preserve its old，historic buildings.The reasons are as follows.First of all，historic buildings are symbols of cities.Without these historic buildings，a lot of cities would lose their cultural image or even their identity.Besides，historic bu
47、ildings benefit the tourism industry.Moreover，historic buildings serve as an important resource for historical education.For instance，the Forbidden City is one of the most visited historic buildings in China.Not only are people impressed by its traditional architecture，but they also gain rich knowle
48、dge about the lifestyles of ancient Chinese emperors in the Ming and Tsing Dynasties.In conclusion，preserving these buildings is definitely necessary.*结束 短文改错 Traffic jam is very serious problem in big city especially during rush hours.It can cause lots of trouble.First,people must have to spend lon
49、ger time getting to our destinations.It was said that much of the lateness for work is caused by traffic jam.Second,wait in the car for a long time can easy put drivers in a bad mood which may lead to more accidents.Also,traffic jam cause serious air pollution.But it is necessary to deal with this p
50、roblem.In my opinion,the government should develop public transport.It should be cheaper and more convenient and comfortable.Besides,we should use public transport as much as possibly.Its better to share cars during rush hours.In a word,we should take any possible measures to reduce the use of cars.