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1、语言就是力量语言就是力量复习复习两图作文开头段(两图作文开头段(2000年结构)年结构)2008年高分作文分析(背诵的作用)年高分作文分析(背诵的作用)2007年高分作文分析年高分作文分析主体段落的拓展方式:主体段落的拓展方式:2003主体段落拓展主体段落拓展2009年作文年作文语言就是力量语言就是力量语言亮点设计语言亮点设计十大段落:十大段落:词汇亮点设计:正确变化词汇亮点设计:正确变化+设计难度设计难度造句亮点设计:特殊句型造句亮点设计:特殊句型+开头变化开头变化句子掌握的标准句子掌握的标准主体段落七大要素主体段落七大要素图表作文讲解图表作文讲解语言就是力量语言就是力量十大段落十大段落开头
2、段落开头段落:现象描述,图画/表描述主体段落主体段落:观点陈述,利弊说明,举例论证,原因列举,意义阐释,结尾段落结尾段落:建议措施,预测未来,归纳结论语言就是力量语言就是力量2004起点:起点:start,starting point终点:终点:end,destination,finishing line跑道:跑道:racetrack,track,runway飞机跑道飞机跑道跑步者:跑步者:runner,athlete,running young man冲刺:冲刺:spurt,make the final spurt 第一个到达:第一个到达:the first one to do sth.成为
3、冠军:成为冠军:become champion语言就是力量语言就是力量2004The cartoon vividly depicts that a boy is running along the racetrack with painstaking efforts,sweat dripping/pouring down his face.After a long journey,he is making the final spurt toward the finishing line,with firm resolution to become the champion.It seems
4、that he could rest for a while/take a good rest to enjoy the ecstasy of victory.However,straight ahead lies a sign which indicates a new starting point and urges him to continue rushing to the next destination.语言就是力量语言就是力量2004Undoubtedly,the cartoon conveys the message that life is like the process
5、of running in which one should make constant efforts/persist and never stop making progress.Owing to the quickening pace of life,competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life,stimulating everyone to pursue one goal after another.Once a person stops making progress,he can hardly maintain
6、his past glory and survive in this competitive world.As Deng Xiaoping,the great Chinese leader said,Development is the inarguable truth.No matter how powerful a country is,no matter how successful an institution becomes,it will definitely seek new development in high speed.Generally speaking,neither
7、 a country nor a person can remain stagnant.语言就是力量语言就是力量2004A case in point is the successful launching of“Shenzhou V Spacecraft”which sets china in a high position of aviation and space flight.Although it means a great achievement for us Chinese,we are facing new challenges in the future and need t
8、o do further research in space technology.Another instance/example is closely related to us,the examinees.If we pass this test and are fortunately admitted by a university/to our dream universities,we shall not stop making efforts.Instead,we are confronted with the challenge of conquering the diffic
9、ult/tough graduate courses.We still have to strive for success in our future academic study,employment and career.On the whole,these examples effectively clarify the saying that“destination is another starting point.”语言就是力量语言就是力量2005The cartoon vividly depicts an intense football match with particip
10、ants involving an old father,his three sons and his daughter.What makes the cartoon surprising lies in the fact that all the children play the role of goalkeepers in all four corners,while the father crouches into the shape of a football.As the football rolls to each corner,the goalkeeper tries to b
11、lock its way and kick it away.语言就是力量语言就是力量2005Undoubtedly,the picture arouses deep concern over the issue of caring for old parents.Nowadays,Chinese family system is dominated by nuclear family and DINK style.The senior citizens tend to suffer from all sorts of diseases and have no means to support
12、themselves,but the children are so self-centered that some of them shirk the responsibility of supporting their parents.Even worse,some children have betrayed their own conscience to ill-treat their parents.语言就是力量语言就是力量2005Therefore,it is imperative that we should take some effective measures.On the
13、 one hand,we should appeal to our governments to make concrete laws to protect the parents legal rights and punish those cold-blooded children.On the other hand,we should enhance peoples awareness that caring for the aged is the traditional virtue of Chinese culture.More importantly,we should not on
14、ly support the parents financially but also care about their emotional need.The popular song Back Home Regularly has reflected such a public appeal.Only in this way can parents lead an enjoyable and comfortable life in their late years.Also I believe that compatible family relationships to some exte
15、nt contribute to building a harmonious society.语言就是力量语言就是力量遣词原则正确正确第一:第一:词汇词汇宽度宽度:词汇词汇难度难度:短语短语原则:原则:设计设计原则:原则:语言就是力量语言就是力量语言亮点制造语言亮点制造名词前后的修饰名词前后的修饰前前小后大小后大词:词:形容词,数词,冠词,代词,名形容词,数词,冠词,代词,名词词短语:短语:介词短语,不定式短语,现在介词短语,不定式短语,现在分词短语,过去分词短语,形容词短分词短语,过去分词短语,形容词短语,语,从句:从句:同位语从句,定语从句同位语从句,定语从句语言就是力量语言就是力量插入语
16、结构插入语结构名词短语,名词短语,adv+名词短语名词短语介词短语介词短语过去分词短语过去分词短语形容词短语形容词短语从句从句主谓结构主谓结构语言就是力量语言就是力量句法结构变化句法结构变化一、使用特殊句型一、使用特殊句型二、变化句子开头二、变化句子开头语言就是力量语言就是力量一、使用特殊句型倒装(分类,放在那里?)倒装(分类,放在那里?)双重否定句(分类,放在那里?)双重否定句(分类,放在那里?)强调句型(放在那里?)强调句型(放在那里?)虚拟语气句(分类,放在那里?)虚拟语气句(分类,放在那里?)同位语从句(分类,放在那里?)同位语从句(分类,放在那里?)主语从句(分类,放在那里?)主语从
17、句(分类,放在那里?)How to句型句型语言就是力量语言就是力量英语三种句子结构英语三种句子结构1,V+O 动词开头动词开头+宾语宾语2,N+V+O 名词结构开头名词结构开头+动动词开头词开头+宾语宾语,3,Adv.,N+V+O副词结构开头副词结构开头+名词结构开头名词结构开头+动词开头动词开头+宾语宾语语言就是力量语言就是力量二、变化句子开头二、变化句子开头1)名词性的主语结构)名词性的主语结构名词主语名词主语人称代词主语人称代词主语It形式主语形式主语动名词主语动名词主语(Respecting the old.)不定式主语(不定式主语(How to句型)句型)主语从句主语(主语从句主语(
18、What/Whether.)语言就是力量语言就是力量二、变化句子开头二、变化句子开头2)副词性的状语结构)副词性的状语结构副词状语副词状语介词短语状语介词短语状语现在分词短语状语现在分词短语状语过去分词短语状语过去分词短语状语不定式短语状语不定式短语状语状语从句状语状语从句状语语言就是力量语言就是力量主体段落七大要素主体段落七大要素图画目的:图画目的:The purpose is to show.递进说明:递进说明:Specifically speaking,原因背景:原因背景:Owing to.强调事实:强调事实:In fact,.数据说明:数据说明:According to a study
19、,.举例说明:举例说明:Take.for example,.引用名言:引用名言:As the old saying goes,.语言就是力量语言就是力量一图表的种类(表格,柱状图,线一图表的种类(表格,柱状图,线形图,饼状图等)形图,饼状图等)二解题思路:二解题思路:三学员问题:分组问题,时态问题,三学员问题:分组问题,时态问题,常备词汇,短语常备词汇,短语,句型,句型。四常备词汇四常备词汇图表作文图表作文语言就是力量语言就是力量图表作文图表作文图表分类图表分类表格表格 table柱状图柱状图 bar chart/graph线形图线形图 line chart/curve graph饼状图饼状图
20、 pie chart语言就是力量语言就是力量图表作文框架图表作文框架一,总体叙述,分组描述,分组描述一,总体叙述,分组描述,分组描述二,原因多样,原因二,原因多样,原因1,原因,原因2,原因,原因3三,解决办法,一方面,另一方面,三,解决办法,一方面,另一方面,只有只有.才才.三,重申主题,预测未来三,重申主题,预测未来语言就是力量语言就是力量首段:首段:首句交代四要素:首句交代四要素:一切来自表格一切来自表格图表研究对象图表研究对象时间段,地点时间段,地点总体趋势变化总体趋势变化语言就是力量语言就是力量As is shown in the graph,we know that great changes have taken place in XXX from 2001 to 2011.What can be seen from the chart indicates that great changes have taken place in XXX between 2001 and 2011.语言就是力量语言就是力量图表真题讲解图表真题讲解2010真题真题2011真题真题1997真题真题1999真题真题