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1、关于高考英语写作公开课第一页，讲稿共二十五页哦Learning Aims1.Learn to write an outline composition.2.Develop a good writing habit analyze organize polish.3.Develop the abilities to solving the outline composition writing,the proof and the rational cloze.第二页，讲稿共二十五页哦What is a good writing？Content:*everything needed include
2、d which is related to your view.(内容内容要完整要完整)Structure:*Good beginning and ending(好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)*Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅)Language:*No Chinglish(避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)*No Grammatical mistakes(没有语法错误没有语法错误)*With exactly used words and relatively changed sentence patterns(词语的准确运
3、用和句式的富于变化词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)第三页，讲稿共二十五页哦How to write a compositionSix steps to write a composition Analyzing the taskFinding out the main pointsThinking of key points/phrasesForming sentencesCombining the sentences into a passageCopying normally第四页，讲稿共二十五页哦(云云南南省省第第二二次次统统测测)每每年年都都有有许许多多人人出出国国旅旅游游，一一些些人
4、人的的不不文文明明行行为为引引起起了了社社会会关关注注。某某英英文文报报社社正正在在举举行行以以“文文明明出出国国旅旅游游”为为主主题题的的讨讨论论。假假定定你你是是李李华华，请请给给报报社社专专栏栏编编辑辑写写一一封封信信，呼吁大家做文明游客呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：。要点如下：1.尊重习俗；尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗不高声喧哗；3.其它。其它。注意注意:词数词数100120个个,开头已经写好开头已经写好,不计入总词数。不计入总词数。第五页，讲稿共二十五页哦【审题审题抓准信息抓准信息 快速推断快速推断】项目结论体裁_话题以 为主题时态_人称_书信（给编辑一封信）书信（给编辑一封信）一般现在
5、时为主及情态动词的应用一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用第一人称为主第一人称为主Step1.Step1.Analyzing the taskAnalyzing the task“文明出国旅游文明出国旅游”第六页，讲稿共二十五页哦【定点定点把握要点，遣词造句把握要点，遣词造句】第第1 1段：点明话题段：点明话题出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为【引入引入6 6分分】【信息信息】每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会关注。【遣词遣词】1.假日游客假日游客:2.出国旅游观光出国旅游观光:3.不文明行为不文明行为
6、:4.引起了社会关注引起了社会关注:【造造句句】Every year,a great many go abroad ,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them ,which .Step2.Step2.Finding out the main pointsFinding out the main points and forming sentencesand forming sentencesholidaymaker go abroad for sightseeing and relaxationbehave rudelycause a bi
7、g concernholidaymakersfor sightseeing and relaxationbehave rudelycauses a big concern第七页，讲稿共二十五页哦第第2段：针对不文明行为三条建议段：针对不文明行为三条建议【作文重点作文重点12分分】【信息信息】1.尊重习俗尊重习俗；2.不高声喧哗；不高声喧哗；3.其它。其它。【点拨点拨】扩充要点扩充要点,使文章条理使文章条理【运用运用】建议注意自己的行为。首先，建议注意自己的行为。首先，尊重习俗尊重习俗；其次，；其次，不高声不高声 喧哗喧哗，再次，再次，插队是不被接受的。插队是不被接受的。【遣词遣词】1.尊重习俗
8、尊重习俗：respect and follow local customs 2.高声喧哗高声喧哗：talk loudly in public places 3.插队：插队：queue jumping【造造句句】In my opinion,it is necessary to watch our manners.First,we must_,Besides,wed better _to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that _is unacceptable in many countries。respect and follow local
9、 customsnot talk loudly in public placesqueue jumping第八页，讲稿共二十五页哦第第3段：向社会呼吁段：向社会呼吁【结尾结尾6分分】【信息信息】呼吁大家做文明游客呼吁大家做文明游客【点拨点拨】适度发挥适度发挥,以使文章符合逻辑以使文章符合逻辑【运用运用】我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的我们在国外旅游，代表我们的国家形象，因此要注意自己的 行行为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。为。只有这样，才能开心旅游。【遣词遣词】1.代表国家形象：代表国家形象：represent our country 2.注意：注意：be cautious a
10、bout 3.只有这样：只有这样：only in this way 【造句造句】more importantly,we should bear in mind that we are _while abroad,so we need to_ how we act,_can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.representing our countrybe cautious aboutonly in this way第九页，讲稿共二十五页哦Dear Editor,Ive read your discus
11、sions on how to behave properly when travelling abroad.Every year,a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them behave rudely,which causes a big concern.How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.In my opinion,it is n
12、ecessary to watch our manners.First,we must respect and follow local customs,Besides,wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries,more importantly,we should bear in mind that we are representing our coun
13、try while abroad,so we need to be cautious about how we act,only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.yours,LiHuaStep3.Combining the sentences into a passageStep3.Combining the sentences into a passage【连句成篇连句成篇】第十页，讲稿共二十五页哦【书面表达书面表达-短文改错短文改错-新完型填空三位一体新完型填空三位一
14、体】之短文改错之短文改错Dear Editor,Ive read your discussions on how to behave proper when travelling abroad.Every year,a great many holidaymakers goes abroad for sightseeing and relax,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them behave rudely,that causes a big concern.How to be a civilized tourist have beco
15、me a heated topic.In my opinion,it is necessary to watch our manner.First,we must respect and follow local customs;However,wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoiding disturbance to others,Also,be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries,more important,we should bear in
16、 mind that we are representing our country while abroad,but we need to be cautious about how we act,only in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.yours,LiHuaproperlygorelaxationwhichhasmannersBesidesavoidimportantlyso第十一页，讲稿共二十五页哦Dear Editor,Ive read your discuss
17、ions on how1_behave properly when travelling abroad.Every year,a great many holidaymakers go abroad for2_(sightsee)and relaxation,while they are enjoying themselves,some of them behave3_(rude),which causes a big concern.How to be a civilized 4_(tour)has become a heated topic.In my opinion,it is nece
18、ssary 5_(watch)our manners.First,we must respect and follow local6_(custom）;Besides,wed better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others,Also,be aware that queue jumping is7_(unaccept)in many countries,more importantly,we should bear8_mind that we are representing our country w
19、hile abroad,9_we need to be cautious about how we act,10_in this way can we enjoy our trips abroad and have beautiful memories as well.yours,LiHuatosightseeingrudelytouristinto watchunacceptablesoOnly【书面表达书面表达-短文改错短文改错-新完型填空三位一体新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空之新完型填空customs第十二页，讲稿共二十五页哦假如你叫李华假如你叫李华,你校同学正在就你校同学正在就“高三
20、学生要不要参加体育锻炼高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”这一主题展开讨论这一主题展开讨论,请根据下面所给的信息请根据下面所给的信息,给某英文报社写一封给某英文报社写一封 信信,介绍讨论情况介绍讨论情况,并谈谈你的看法。并谈谈你的看法。赞成（55%）反对（45%）1.应该每天进行体育锻炼,如做早操、打乒乓球、打篮球等。2.锻炼能增强体质,减少疾病。3.锻炼能使大脑得到休息,使学习效果更好。1.锻炼浪费时间。2.锻炼后很兴奋,难以快速投入学习。3.锻炼使人疲劳，而且可能会受伤。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.内容充实，结构完整，语义连贯；内容充实，结构完整，语义连贯；3.书写须清晰、工整。
21、书写须清晰、工整。参考词汇：体育锻炼参考词汇：体育锻炼physical exerciseWriting practiceWriting practice第十三页，讲稿共二十五页哦【审题审题抓准信息抓准信息 快速推断快速推断】项目结论体裁_话题以_ 为主题时态_人称_书信（给英文报社一封信）书信（给英文报社一封信）“高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼”一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用一般现在时为主及情态动词的应用第一人称为主第一人称为主第十四页，讲稿共二十五页哦 【定点定点把握要点，遣词造句把握要点，遣词造句】第第1 1段：点明话题段：点明话题高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼高三学生要
22、不要参加体育锻炼【引入引入6 6分分】【信息信息】我我给你写信给你写信谈谈在我们学校的一个谈谈在我们学校的一个热点热点话题话题,那那就是就是,高三学生高三学生要不要要不要参加体育锻炼。参加体育锻炼。【遣词造句遣词造句】普通表达普通表达:I will tell you about a discussion.Should students of Senior 3 take physical exercise?高级表达高级表达:利用进行时态、非谓语动词、连接短语等利用进行时态、非谓语动词、连接短语等。Im _ you about a _discussion among us students in
23、our school,_,whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise.writing to tellheatedthat is 第十五页，讲稿共二十五页哦第第2 2段：提出一种观点并具体阐述理由段：提出一种观点并具体阐述理由【作文重点作文重点1212】【信息信息】有55%的同学赞成参加体育锻炼。【运用运用】55%的同学认为认为我们应该每天进行体育锻炼进行体育锻炼,如做早做早操操、打乒乓球、打篮球等。【遣词造句遣词造句】普通表达普通表达:55%of the students think that we should tak
24、e physical exercise every day.We should do morning exercise.We should play table tennis or basketball.高级表达高级表达:利用同位语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等利用同位语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等。55%of the students hold the view that we should _ every day,such as,_,playing table tennis or basketball.take physical exercisedoing morning exercise第
25、十六页，讲稿共二十五页哦【信息信息】赞成的同学认为参加体育锻炼有很多好处赞成的同学认为参加体育锻炼有很多好处。【运用运用2】锻炼能锻炼能增强体质，减少疾病增强体质，减少疾病。锻炼能使。锻炼能使 大脑得大脑得到休息到休息；使学习效果更好。；使学习效果更好。【遣词造句遣词造句】普通表达普通表达：It can build our body.It can reduce illnesses.It can make us have a rest.We will have a better learning effect.高级表达：利用并列句、非谓语动词和高级词汇等高级表达：利用并列句、非谓语动词和高级词汇
26、等。It can build_ illnesses,_(同时),it can _(make sb adj)a better learning effect.and in the meanwhilemake us relaxed forour body and reduce第十七页，讲稿共二十五页哦第第3 3段：提出另一种观点，并具体阐述理由段：提出另一种观点，并具体阐述理由【信息信息】：锻炼浪费时间。【运用运用2 2】：45%学生持反对意见，他们认为锻炼浪费时间。【遣词造句遣词造句】普通表达普通表达：However，45%of the students dont support that.Th
27、ey think that they should not take physical exercise.It is a waste of time.高级表达高级表达:利用定语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等利用定语从句、高级词汇、非谓语动词等However,45%of the students are against that，_ complain that _ is a waste of time.whotaking physical exercise第十八页，讲稿共二十五页哦第第4 4段：表明自己的倾向，阐述理由段：表明自己的倾向，阐述理由【信息信息】:适度锻炼。【运用运用】:我认为适度锻炼
28、是必要的,但是不能太剧烈.【遣词造句遣词造句】普通表达：普通表达：I think that proper physical exercise is necessary.But we should never take exercise too hard.高级表达高级表达：利用宾语从句、高级词汇等。利用宾语从句、高级词汇等。I_ think that proper physical exercise is necessary but_.personallynever too hard第十九页，讲稿共二十五页哦Dear editor,I m writing to tell you about a
29、heated discussion among us students in our school,that is,whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercise.55%of the students hold the view that we should take physical exercise every day,such as doing morning exercise,playing table tennis or basketball,etc.It can build our body,keep us he
30、althy and reduce illnesses and in the meanwhile it can make us completely relaxed for a better learning effect.However,45%of the students are against that,who complain that taking physical exercise is a waste of time.It can make us tired or feel too excited for further learning.Moreover we may get h
31、urt during the play.I personally think that proper physical exercise is necessary but never too hard.yours sincerely Li Hua【连句成篇连句成篇】第二十页，讲稿共二十五页哦【书面表达书面表达-短文改错短文改错-新完型填空三位一体新完型填空三位一体】之短文改错之短文改错Dear editor,I m writing to tell you about a heating discussion among our students in our school,that is,wh
32、ether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises.55%of the students hold the view which we should take physical exercise every day,such as do morning exercise,playing the table tennis or basketball,etc.It can build our body,keep us health and reduce illnesses and the meanwhile it can make u
33、s completely relaxed for a better learning effect.Therefore,45%of the students are against that,who complain that taking physical exercise is a waste of time.It can make us tired and feel too excited for further learning.Moreover we may get hurt during the play.I personally think that proper physica
34、l exercise is necessary but never too hard.yours sincerely Li HuaheatedusexercisethatdoinghealthyHoweverorin第二十一页，讲稿共二十五页哦书面表达书面表达-短文改错短文改错-新完型填空三位一体新完型填空三位一体】之新完型填空之新完型填空Dear editor,I m writing to tell you about a heated discussion1._us students in our school,that is,whether students of Senior 3 sh
35、ould take 2_(physics)exercise.55%of the students hold the view that we should3._(take)physical exercise every day,such as doing morning exercise,playing table tennis4._ basketball,etc.It can build 5._(we)body,keep us healthy and 6._(reduce)illnesses and in the meanwhile it can make us7._ _(complete)
36、relaxed for a better learning effect.However,45%of the students are against that,8._ complain that taking physical exercise9._(be)a waste of time.It can make us tired or feel too 10._(excite)for further learning.Moreover we may get hurt during the play.I personally think that proper physical exercis
37、e is necessary but never too hard.amongphysicaltakeorourreducecompletelywhoisexcited第二十二页，讲稿共二十五页哦AssignmentYou should try to use some superior phrases,special sentence patterns or suitable conjunction.1.Rewrite these two compositions.2.Recite some good sentences and passage.3.Do some reading.第二十三页，讲稿共二十五页哦To dear students:Though the capacity of the knowledge is a little large in this period,Id like to combine the writing with the proof and the rational cloze,which aims to make you aware of the inner link of different knowledge structures.第二十四页，讲稿共二十五页哦感谢大家观看第二十五页，讲稿共二十五页哦