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1、托福写作万能例子 能够用于考试的托福写作万能例子有许多，在这里为大家共享30个比较常用的，希望能对考生们有所帮助。 托福写作万能例子 1. People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things; other people learn by reading about things; others learn by listening to people talk about things. Which of these methods of learning is best for you? 2. Some peop
2、le trust their first impressions about a person s character because they believe these judgments are generally correct. Other people do not judge a person s character quickly because they believe first impressions are often wrong. Compare these two attitudes. Which attitude do you agree with? 3. A u
3、niversity plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture (farming). Which of these two kinds of research centers do you recommend for your country? 4. How do movies or television influenc
4、e people s behavior? 5. Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. 6. It has recently been announced that a new movie theater (a shopping center/ a new restaurant/ a new h
5、igh school) may be built in your neighborhood. 7. A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? 8 Do you agree or disagree with the following
6、 statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. 9. Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land? 10. Many parts of the
7、world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. 11. When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their ow
8、n customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? 12. Some people think we should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think we should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Whi
9、ch of these two opinions do you agree with? 13. What is one of the most important decisions you have made? Why was this decision important? 14 In general, people are living longer now. How will this change affect society? 15 We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. I
10、n your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? 16. In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? 17. A person you know is planning to move to your town or city. What do you think this p
11、erson would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why? 18. When famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. Do you think we should pay attention to these opinions? 19. People remember special gifts or presents that they have received.
12、Why? 20. Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? 21. Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which should your school choose to buy-computers or books? 22
13、. If you could know something about the future, what would you choose to know about and why? 23 People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? 24. Every generation of people is different in important ways. How is your generation different
14、from your parents generation? 25. You want to persuade someone to study your native language. What reasons would you give? 26 You have been asked to suggest improvements to a park that you have visited. This might be a city park, a regional park, or a national park. What improvements would you make?
15、 Why? 27. If you were asked to send one thing representing your country to an international exhibition, what would you choose? Why? 28. There are many different kinds of advertising (on the radio, on television, in newspapers in magazines, and on billboards). In your opinion, which one of these kind
16、s of advertising is the most effective? Why? 29. Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not? 30. Advertising helps to sell products. Describe th
17、e qualities of an effective advertisement. 托福独立写作模板的介绍 首段： To those who, it could not appear surprising that 针对KW 绽开论述 Thus, for me, nothing is more evident than that + TS总 TV is an indispensable necessity in our life. l To those who, it could not appear surprising that( 大家都觉得) To kids, it could not
18、 appear surprising that parents are angels with unconditional love for us. To people, it could not appear surprising that TV is an indispensable necessity in our life. l 针对KW 绽开论述 For TV can ease us from stress when we are exhausted from work, bring us happiness when friends are coming, more importa
19、ntly, with the help of TV, we have an easy access to information all over the globe. l Thus, for me, nothing is more evident than that + TS总 I would like to fill my spare time with the company of a TV. 中间段落(用一般现在时) l We may with propriety consider that + TS l , for sake that / for reason that / the
20、reason is that / because l The story of would add great weight to my point. l Just imagine, if it were not for the sake of TV, my sister would fail to be the person/ never be as intelligent as she is now/ the person she is now. If sb goes without If sb fails to 结尾段落(重复首段观点，不要出新观点) l The case of happ
21、ens all the time l This thought strikes me all the time that if my sister lives her life without TV, maybe her achievement would still haunt her. l To put another way, I believe, it may sagely be asserted that + TS总 TV would be my first choice in my spare time. 托福独立写作的考试重点 刚起先打算写作简单产生的一个主要误区就是重点放在语言
22、和词汇上。但是实际状况不是如此，托福对语言的要求并不是太高，大家可以去看看OG上面的5分例文，语言很平常，但是它为什么能拿5分?Coherent!就是说文章的句与句、段与段之间的过渡连接很自然，说理一挥而就，没有跳动和不连贯的感觉，而这点是我们许多中国考生简单忽视的。托福写作虽然不像GRE写作那样对逻辑有很高的要求，但是也肯定要写的连贯安逸。这才是OG对于托福独立写作真正的要求。 那么托福独立写作的考察要点是什么呢?有效回应题目，阐明文章主题;逻辑条理清晰，论证充分绽开;内容连贯一样;遣词造句的实力。同理，上述的第一点考察的是考生切题的实力;其次点考察的是谋篇布局的实力;第三点考察的是考生逻辑
23、论证的实力，最终一点才是干脆考察考生英语语言的实力。任何的英语写作考试都考察了写作实力和英语实力。当我们了解了详细的评分标准之后就可以由易而难先解决写作然后再解决英语部分。 托福写作扣分点的分析 1.用词不当 学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要留意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。 In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a priz
24、e. problems应改为questions 2.拼法错误 这里的拼法错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼法记忆的错误。 In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers. judgement应改为judgment 3.乱用大词 First of all, children can earn money from
25、 their jobs, although there isnt too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness. 这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题： 1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应当做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很稀里糊涂; 2)although和but是不能连用的; 3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么; 4.表达中式 The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion,
26、 it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation. 句子中划线部分的表达过于中式化。 5.表意重复 They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends. 前面已经提到了挚友，后面又提到挚友。 The show is so compelling but attractive. compell
27、ing和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。 6.固定用法错误 ? To some extends, I agree with the authors general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge. To some extends应改为To some extent 7.例证夸张 For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot
28、 tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patients immediate death. 虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效明显没有这么大。 8.成分多余 According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time
29、jobs. 该句中的shows that是多余的成分。 9.词性混乱 However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly. 句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应当改成private和embarrassing。 10.时态错误 托福大作文一般运用现在时态，除了拿过去事务作为例子用过去时态。 Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation. 托福写作万能例子本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第14页 共14页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页