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1、慎小嶷雅思写作范文思路 建议大家在参考别人的范文的时候要进行思路解析，学习别人的思路，才能写出高分文章，下面我给大家共享一下慎小嶷雅思写作范文思路，希望对大家有所帮助。 【慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作】家庭类真题7分范文 家庭类真题 【People in the same family are not as close as before. Some people think we should return to traditional family values but others think this would lead to many problems. Discuss both sid
2、es and give your own opinion.】 Most of us are busy with our own pursuits every day. As a result, we are not as closely connected with our family members as before. Are traditional family values the right solution to this problem? It is a well-known fact that society should develop to a more progress
3、ive level, which means returning to traditional values may not be the right direction. To start with, many concepts representing the traditional family values are no longer compatible with the modern lifestyle. People in traditional families tend to obey rules blindly and lack individuality, which a
4、re regarded as the basic requirements for survival in the age of change. Consequently, they may find themselves incompetent when they look for jobs as no employers wants robots without an active mind today. 大多数人每天都在为自己所追求的幻想而劳碌。结果，我们和家庭的联系就不再如从前那样紧密了。那么，传统的家庭价值观是否是解决这个问题的正确方法呢?众所周知，社会是应发展到更加进步的水平的，这
5、就是说，复原传统价值观可能并不是社会发展的正确方向。 首先，很多代表传统家庭价值观的想法已不再与现代生活方式相协调。传统家庭成员盲目遵从规则，缺乏特性，而这正是变革时代生存的基本要求。因此，他们可能在找工作时，发觉自己的实力不足，因为今日的雇主不会雇佣思维不活跃的机器人。 More importantly, they may live more stressful lives than others because they do not dare to say no to their elders. The real ideas hidden at their heart may even
6、leave them depressed and increase their risk of developing mental problems. An equally important factor involved is the cultural change today. We surely do not want to live in a family that is just replica of a family centuries ago. Admittedly, traditional family values give us stronger family bonds
7、, which are like a safe haven for life. Children living in such families would know how to behave properly. However, I find it hard to imagine members can enjoy the family bonds between each other when they cannot even freely express how their feel. To conclude, we should uphold some traditional con
8、cepts such as the respect between family members. Meanwhile, we should also appreciate family members' individuality. 更重要的是，由于他们胆怯向长辈说不，他们可能比其他人活得更有压力。埋藏在内心的真是想法甚至可能会使他们抑郁，并增加他们患心理问题的风险。涉及到的同样重要的因素就是当今的文化变革。我们确定不会希望所生活的家庭只是几百年前的家庭复制品。 诚然，传统的家庭价值观可以犹如生活的避风港一样使家庭纽带更加紧密，生活在这种家庭的孩子知道怎样做才是恰当的举止。然而，很难
9、想象家庭成员在甚至不能自由表达感受的状况下，能够享受彼此间的家庭关系。 总之，我们应坚持某些传统观念，比如家庭成员之间的敬重。同时，我们也应重视家庭成员的特性。 【慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作】政府类真题7分范文 政府类真题 【Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their ideas. To what extent do you agree?】 I agree with the statement that there should be no government restriction on creati
10、ve artists who express themselves in the way they do and that they must be given freedom for the same. Expression has always been the keynote in a person's life. It is the result of mere expression of our thoughts that we are able to communicate. Restrictions on how we present our thoughts is se
11、nseless. Creative artists play a major role in our society, be it the government, old people, the youth or the children. Their work enlighten our minds, no matter if is factual or entertainment-based. It is deserving that after a day's work when we want to take some time off for ourselves, we lo
12、ok out for some leisure. For instance, either pleasant music or a family movie which soothes the mind. Entertainment gives us an overview of a new side of life which every individual respects. There is almost everything good in what is given to us through the media which is made up of artists. 我同意政府
13、不应当对那些以自己独特方法表达自己见解的艺术家们在思想上强加限制，反而应当赐予他们足够的自由。对自身思想的表达恒久是一个人生命中的主题。正是因为我们彼此表达出自己的思想，才使得不同人之间可以进行沟通。而强加到人们身上的对表达方式的限制实在是显得有些没有意义。 创意艺术家们在社会中扮演着重要角色，为政府、老人、青年以及儿童都带来了种.种好处。他们的作品无论是写实派的还是消遣派的，无疑都启蒙了我们的思想。在我们辛苦一天之后，须要放纵解脱放松一下自我的时候，他们的作品是肯定值得观赏的。例如：无论是一段轻松的音乐，还是一部简洁的家庭电影，都可以放松我们的头脑。消遣使我们能享受到那种每个人都期盼的新生活
14、的美景。艺术家们的作品通过媒体呈现出来以后，好像一切都是那么美。 【慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作】家庭类真题9分范文 家庭类真题 【There are more problems with students behaviour in many countries. What are the causes and what are your solutions?】 Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably re
15、sponsible for this. In many countries, the birth rate is decreasing so that families are smaller with fewer children. These children are often spoilt, not in terms of love and attention because working parents do not have the time for this, but in more material ways. They are allowed to have whateve
16、r they want, regardless of price, and to behave as they please. This means that the children grow up without consideration for others and without any understanding of where their standard of living comes from. When they get to school age they have not learnt and self control or discipline. They have
17、 less respect for their teachers and refuse to obey school rules in the way that their parents did. 学生行为不端好像已经日益成为普遍问题。我认为，现代化的生活方式可能是产生这种问题的缘由。 在很多国家，诞生率的降低导致儿童数量削减家庭规模更小。而这些孩子往往就被宠坏，并不是说他们在关爱和关怀上被宠坏，其实家长们因为工作忙并没有时间做到这些，而是这些孩子受到了更物质的方式的宠爱。这些孩子可以无视价格，就得到他们想要的任何东西，并且为所欲为地做事。这意味着他们长大后不会为他人着想，也不会体会到自己现
18、有的生活水平是从何而来的。 当他们到了入学年龄，他们没有学习到任何自控或自律的习惯。他们不敬重老师，并且拒绝像父辈那样遵守学校规定。 Teachers continually complain about this problem and measures should be taken to combat the situation. But I think the solution to the problem lies with the families, who need to be more aware of the future consequences of spoiling t
19、heir children. If they could raise them to be considerate of others and to be social, responsible individuals, the whole community would benefit. Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in te
20、rms of raising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole. 老师不断埋怨这个问题，必需实行措施解决这种状况。但是我认为，问题的解决取决于家人，他们须要更加明白溺爱孩子的后果。假如他们可以把孩子抚养成爱护的、有社交实力的、负责任的人，那么整个社区都将从中受益。 可能会须要开设家长培训班来帮助他们
21、做到这一切。并且可以建立高质量的幼儿园，在抚养下一代的问题上，给家庭供应更多支持。政府应资助激励这种帮助家长的教化手段，因为这已不再是单个家庭的问题，而是整个社会的问题。 【慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作】地图题真题8分范文 地图题真题 【Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map below shows the development of the village.】 Chorleywoo
22、d is a village close to London. Its population has increased gradually since the mid-nineteenth century. The map describes in four stages how the village of Chorleywood developed from 1868 to 1994. According to the map, the first period stretched from 1868 to 1883. At this time Chorleywood was only
23、a small area of inhabited land. As for transportation, the residents of Chorleywood only had two main roads available to them. Over the next period (1883 to 1922), the village extended southward and more than doubled in land area. Chorleywood是伦敦旁边的一个村庄。自19世纪中叶起，其人口逐步增长。地图分四个阶段描述了Chorleywood村从1868年到1
24、994年的发展状况。 依据地图，第一个阶段从1868年到1883年。这时候，Chorleywood只是一小块居住区。至于交通，Chorleywood的居民只有两条主干道可运用。下一个阶段是从1883年到1922年。在此期间，村庄向南扩张，土地面积超过原来的两倍。 The Chorleywood railway station and the railway line were built in the middle of this new patch of land. The subsequent period between 1922 and 1970 saw the village slo
25、wly expanding alongside the railway. Finally, from 1970 to 1994 Chorleywood again increased significantly in size. In 1970, a motorway was built to the east of the original village. As can been seen from the map, new settlements were established laid alongside this motorway and by this time, the siz
26、e of Chorleywood nearly doubled again. Therefore, the map informs us that Chorleywood's population and land area increased steadily as its means of public transportation developed from 1868 to 1994. Chorleywood火车站和铁路就建在这块新增土地的中心。随后的阶段从1922年到1970年，村庄沿一条高速马路建在原村庄的东部。如图所示，新的定居点建在这条高速马路的沿线。此时，Chorle
27、ywood的规模又扩大了一倍。 因此，地图说明，从1868年到1994年，随着公共交通设施的发展，Chorleywood的人口和土地面积也稳定发展。 【慎小嶷十天突破雅思写作】教化类真题9分范文 教化类真题 【Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own
28、 opinion.】 A child's education has never been about learning information and basic skills only. It has always included teaching the next generation how to be good members of society. Therefore, this cannot be the responsibility of the parents alone. In order to be a good member of any society, t
29、he individual must respect and obey the rules of their community and share their values. Educating children to understand the need to obey rules and respect others always begins in the home and is widely thought to be the responsibility of parents. They will certainly be the first to help children l
30、earn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world. However, learning to understand and share the value system of a whole society cannot be achieved just in the home. Once a child goes to school, they are entering a wider community where teach
31、ers and peers will have just as much influence as their parents do at home. At school, children will experience working and living with people from a whole variety of backgrounds from the wider society. This experience should teach them how to co-operate with each other and how to contribute to the
32、life of their community. But to be a valuable member of any community is not like learning a simple skill. It is something that an individual goes on learning throughout life and it is the responsibility of every member of a society to take responsibility for helping the younger generation to become
33、 active and able members of that society. 对孩子的教化从来都不仅是让他们驾驭信息与基本技能。教化总是会涉及到如何让下一代成为对社会有用的一员。因此，教化孩子不应当只是父母的责任。 要想在社会中成为有用的一员，个人须要敬重并且遵守社会的规定与价值观。教化孩子理解并遵守规则和敬重他人被普遍认为是家长的责任。家长无疑是孩子们的第一任老师，他们帮助孩子了解到生命中哪些是重要的、应当怎样表现、要在生活中扮演什么样的角色。 然而，让孩子学习并理解社会的价值观不行能仅仅在家庭中完成。当孩子们上学后，他们就进入了一个由老师和同龄人组成的更广袤的天地，他们四周的人对他们
34、的影响和父母变得同样重要。在学校里，孩子们会和有不同背景的其他人共同学习、生活。这些经验教会他们如何与他人合作以及如何为集体贡献力气。 但是学会如何在一个群体中成为有用的成员并不是学习一种简洁的技能，而是一个须要去终生追求的目标，并且全社会都有责任去帮助年轻一代成为对社会主动有用的一员。 慎小嶷雅思写作范文思路本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第14页 共14页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页