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1、托福写作概述及计分方式 托福考试难度有所增加，更加注意对考生综合实力的考察。对于写作部分，不仅增加了综合写作任务，还把读、听、写真正融合在了一起。为了让考生对托福写作部分有一个清晰、全面的了解，下面我为大家介绍新托福写作部分概述及计分方式。 托福写作概述及计分方式 托福写作部分概述 托福考试更加注意考生的英语“输出”实力口语和写作部分更加重视考生的综合实力测试。新托福考试的写作部分包括两部分，历时50分钟。 第一部分(综合写作)要求考生先读一篇文章，然后再听一段与刚刚阅读的文章话题相关的对话或者讲座;之后，考生需根据题目要求在20分钟内写出一篇150-225字的文章。新托福特别的考试形式要求考
2、生具备高度的听、说、读、写的综合实力才可能获得志向的成果。 而写作考试的其次部分(独立写作)要求考生针对某个问题提出自己的观点，并在30分钟的时间内写出一篇短文，字数不得低于300字。新托福的作文题库不会发生太大的改变ETS或许会对题目的措辞做出一些变更，而对已有的话题不会有本质上的变更，所以，目前的官方题库依旧是考生应对新托福考试写作其次部分的最重要的参考资料。 托福写作部分计分方式 托福考试的写作评分实行人工评卷的方式。每个部分的最高分为5分，最低分为1分。每份考卷的两个部分分别由两名阅卷人进行评分(只给整数分值)，然后取平均值。最终这个平均值要转换成Scale Score。根据ETS的统
3、计，写作部分最终的Scale Score为22-24分，这对考生来讲已经比较志向考生的百分比级别已经在80%左右;而最终Scale Score为26分以上就是特别优秀了这时，考生的百分比级别已经超过90%。 托福写作错误的改进方法 1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level。 改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization。 2. For example， you work in a big factory。 改进： Suppose you work in a
4、 big factory。 3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job。 改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career。 4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck。 改进： We will get nowhere if we rely on luck。 5. He will get a higher s
5、alary to improve his living level。 改进： He will get a higher salary， thus improving his life。 6. Their brain is still very young。 改进： They are still immature。 7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things。 改进： Dissatisfaction impels people for the better。 8. They can't analyze
6、clearly what is right and what is wrong。 改进： They cannot tell right from wrong。 9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time。 改进： It will help children learn to make good use of time。 10. Though it is not the best job， it afford to his life。 改进： Though it is not the best job， a
7、 job is a job. He can make ends meet with it。 11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation， they want further development。 改进： Since people are never satisfied with their status quo， they want further development。 12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which ca
8、n easily get big money。 改进： The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money。 13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life。 改进： They like an active life rather than a peaceful one。 14. Some cigarettes may even cost a larger sum of money。 改进： Some cigarettes may c
9、ost even more。 15. Firstly， dissatisfaction encourages the discovery of new products。 改进： Firstly， dissatisfaction encourages the invention of new products。 16. Insgroupsto suit the needs of enteringsintoswork， students must grasp some technical skills。 改进： Insgroupsto meet the needs of future work，
10、 students must learn some practical skills。 17. It is very necessary more qualified scientists and technicians。 改进： Qualified scientists and technicians are in great demand。 18. This knowledge will become a part of your body。 改进： This knowledge will become part of you。 19. They cannot think clearly。
11、 改进： They cannot think straight。 20. Money can improve their living standard。 改进： Money can improve their life。 21. Parents always think that children will get a good job and earn a lot of money。 改进： Parents always expect their children to get a good job and earn a lot of money。 22. If a student onl
12、y cares about money， will lead to be unhappy all his life。 改进： If a student only cares about money， he will be misled and will be unhappy all his life。 23. One purpose of education is to study the way in which he studies later。 改进： One purpose of education is to learn to learn。 24. Many parents arra
13、nge their children go to learn piano。 改进： Many parents send their children to piano classes。 25. When I want to absorb somebody else's opinion， I will study with others。 改进： When I need second opinion， I will study with others。 26. Eating outside has the most advantage that we can go at any time
14、 when we finish eating without doing any washing。 改进： The best part of eating out is that we can leave everything behind after meal。 27. Smoking can help you relax your mind。 改进： Cigarettes can help you relax。 28. What's about nonsmokers? 改进： What about nonsmokers? 29. Why not to be a non-smoker
15、? 改进： Why not be a non-smoker? 30. Everyone will have many friends in his life。 改进： Everyone has friends in his life。 31. I am not good at maths，but English 改进： I am good not at mathematics but at English/ My strength is not mathematics but English。 32. Who is the proper person to make up his minds
16、about children's leisure time? 改进： Who is the proper person to plan children's leisure time? 33.It is children who clear about their interests。 改进： It is children who are clear about their own interests。 34. I agree the latter idea。 改进： I agree with the latter idea。 35. Many people dissatisf
17、y with the status quo。 改进： Many people are dissatisfied with the status quo。 36. So I feel breathe more comfortably now。 改进： So I feel more comfortable now when I breathe。 37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are。 改进：People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are neve
18、r too old to learn。 38. No one knows all the things。 改进： No one knows everything。 39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life。 改进： I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life。 40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages。 改进： Each way of choosing friends has its adva
19、ntages。 41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up。 改进： I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply。 42. Luckily， he recognized an American professor。 改进： Luckily， he knew an American professor。 43. They will learn the bad habits。 改进： They will develop b
20、ad habits。 44. In this continued process， people make progress。 改进： In this cycle， people make progress。 45. Lastly， higher education is equal to higher salary。 改进： Lastly， higher education means higher salary。 46. By making friends who are different from ourselves， we can make up for deficiency。 改进
21、： By making friends who are different from ourselves， we can make up for our shortcomings。 47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact。 改进： A wrong decision will bring even worse result。 48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing。 改进： You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your
22、dream。 49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost。 改进： Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss。 50. I felt alone。 改进： I felt lonely。 托福写作的小窍门整理 托福写作其实真的不难, 当然要保证听力比较好,重点都能听出来才行.依据两年多的机经来看,阅读听力各三点, 把六点进行有效排序, 一篇完备的文章可就簇新出炉啦! 提示:每人要有自己的
23、模版, 下列模版仅供参考, 不行干脆享用. Integrated task: 表示陈述了某种观点的： Indicate, state, claim, believe, argue, say, hold, discuss, mention, contend, demonstrate, raise the issue, according to the professor/writer. 表示观点相反的： Cast doubt on, refute, rebuke, refuse, question, disagree with, oppose, contradict, on the contra
24、ry, differ from 表示支持的： Support, strengthen, agree with, reinforce, present the same idea 常用表示总结听力和阅读材料观点不同的句子： 1. This directly contradicts what the passage indicates. 2. this entirely opposes the writers expectation. 3. this is where the speaker disagrees with the writer. 4. this is another part wh
25、ere experience contradict theory. 模版： In the lecture, the professor states that., which differs from the point of the reading, the passsage contends that. As for the writer, the writer indicates that.R1.On the contrary, the instructor argues that L1.+detail. In the lecture, the speaker raises the is
26、sue that L2+detail ., yet the reading passage belives that.R2. In the lecture, the professor says L3.+detail., and what the professor says opposes the idea of reading which holds that R3. In a word, what is discussed in the lecture entirely opposes the writers expectation. 托福写作概述及计分方式本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第14页 共14页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页第 14 页 共 14 页