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1、托福写作话题分析之教育 总结历年的托福独立写作题目，不难发觉，教化类的写作话题也是考试中的高频题目之一。因此托福考生在复习的过程中，也要多进行这类题目的练习，这有助于我们更好地来备考这类题型。下面我给大家带来托福写作话题分析之教化。 托福教化类独立写作题目整理 1) Some people think that giving students time during a class to discuss ideas with each other is a good way to help students learn; others think giving students time fo
2、r discussion is ineffective or a waste of time. Which idea do you agree with, and why? 2) Parents must have strict rules to help their children to be successful. 3) Some people believe that taking field trips (for example, going to the museum) is an important part of childrens education. Others beli
3、eve that it is better for children to studying at school. Which opinion do you prefer? 4) The best way for a teacher to help students interested in a subject is to explain that subject will help them outside school. 5) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: All university students sh
4、ould be required to take history courses no matter what field they study. 6) Universities should require all their students to learn about foreign cultures as well as their own culture. 7) Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and hi
5、story. 8) Some people say that teachers and parents should decide what assignment or activities children should do after school. Others say that children should make these decisions on their own. Which view do you agree with? 9) Do you think childrens after school activities should be arranged or sh
6、ould be chosen by children themselves? 10) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: These days, children spend more time in doing homework or participating in organized activities related to school or sports. However, they should be given more time to do whatever they want. 新托福写作范文解析之教
7、化类话题 范文题目： It is more important to choose to study a subject that interests you than a subject preparing you better for a job or career. Do you agree or disagree? 题目有关教化中的”课程选择“并联系职业规划。须要学生从”选择适合学生职业发展的课程“或是”选择自己感爱好的课程“中做出选择。 范文相关分析： Education is one of the key words of our time, however, people'
8、;s views differ greatly as to which should be the superior option of academic pursuit, to opt for courses conducing to future career or to focus on subjects that interest them. As I see it, compared with choosing subjects that can help young adults ready themselves for career challenges, to delibera
9、tely specialize in one's favorite courses is more commendable. 首段的结构： 背景-争议主题介绍(1句困难句)+观点(选择感爱好的) 由于运用了一句困难句，首段内容结构很清楚，也在首段就体现了写作者的水平。困难句用”people's views differ as to. to do.“这种形式替代“people's views are different about.，some people.，the other people.”这种须要用多个句子，也比较模板化的形式。学生可以参考运用。其中也不乏一些比较好
10、的词汇，如academic pursuit学术追求，career challenges职业的挑战，deliberately谨慎地，specialize特地从事 ，commendable很好的 Opting for the courses in which one takes considerable interest will enjoy more visible merits. First, one's study motivation can be highly stimulated provided that one can choose subjects exerting a
11、peculiar fascination on him or her. Conversely, people might generate career burnout even if they might get profit-making jobs. 本段给出第一个论点，学习感爱好的课程的好处-激发学习动机，用两句话从正反两个角度-激发学习动机vs职业 倦怠-来论证。好的词汇，比如considerable相当大的，merit优点 ， study motivation学习动机，stimulate刺激， provided that条件是，exert 施以影响，peculiar fascinat
12、ion特别的魅力 ，career burnout职业倦怠，profit-making jobs高薪职业. Also, taking one's favorite subjects can fully tap his or her infinite potentials. Meanwhile, one can fully enjoy the process of learning and career life. Apart from that, it is also a sort of success if one can perfectly combine specialized k
13、nowledge with career ambition. Therefore, college students have sound reasons to select the courses that interest them. 本段给出其他论点，学习感爱好的课程的好处-挖掘无限潜力、享受学习和职业、将爱好和职业更好地结合。可参考用词有 tap his or her infinite potentials，career ambition. Indeed, I have to concede that the acquisition of pragmatic courses might
14、 still have some benefits. Sure enough, job-related courses will help one outshine many candidates and successfully secure a decent job. That is why some people feel that education is a kind of investment and competitive courses such as engineering, science and technology can, in most cases, earn hi
15、gh interests. Thereby, what some people are concerned about is whether the course of their choice can lead to a profitable career. After all, career-related subjects can lay a solid foundation for climbing the career ladder. 让步段，好用性的课程也是有好处的，帮助提升就业竞争力。本段有许多好的表达方式，比如acquisition of pragmatic courses，S
16、ure enough,help one outshine many candidates，secure a decent job，profitable career，climb the career ladder在职业上一步登天. In closing, I re-affirm my conviction that even though choosing utilitarian subjects is never without merit, university students should still be encouraged to choose their favorite are
17、as of study. 尾端重申观点： 应当激励学生选择感爱好的课程。 总结：可以看到，写作者的英语功底很高，在许多表达方式上都没有“落入俗套”，在范文中没有出现某个概念是利用同一种方式重复表达的。许多词汇都可以加入同学们的“素材库”了。但是有一点，假如在内容中加入一些更详细的例子会更好一些。 新东方托福写作语料库:高校是否应帮学生做好择业打算 高校是否应当帮助学生做好择业打算 教化类： Colleges or universities should offer students a better job preparation before they start working 高校应当帮
18、助学生做好就业打算，在起先工作前? 主题观点：高校应当帮助学生做好就业打算：详细而言，从专业上，性格上，和心态上都为应对将来事业的挑战做好打算。 写作布局：一边倒支持 薛鹏思路拓展： 1. 专业上：使高校生在专业上训练有素，成为领域的专家，以增加将来择业的竞争优势，满意相关企业的需求。 2. 心态上：高校教化者应当帮助学生培育良好的择业心态，对自己有清楚的认知，从底层奋斗。 3. 性格上：高校应当通过组织校内活动或者特地的课程，帮助学生们在性格上成长。例如，受过高校教化者应当变得更加坚毅，自信，成熟，擅长社交。这些优点可以帮助学生适应择业的挑战。 薛鹏原创语料库： 1. get a reaso
19、nable career = land a good job = secure a decent job with promising future v找到好工作 2. to acquire the academic qualifications they need to obtain a reasonably well-paid job v获得学历，找到高薪工作 3. make full preparations for the future career choice = be to well-prepared for hunting for a job v 为将来求职做好重复打算 4.
20、become well-versed in specialized knowledge v精通专业学问 点评：be versed in = be adept at = excel in v 精通于 5. to excel professionally v专业精通 6. enhance ones competitiveness in the future job seeking v 提高将来择业的竞争优势 7. helps undergraduates foster a good mentality in terms of choosing career v帮助高校生培育良好的择业心态 点评:
21、in terms of adv 在方面 点评：undergraduates 高校在校生(未毕业) 8. to struggle from the bottom of the society v 从社会底层奋斗 9. make sb become tenacious，confident and mature v 使学生们变得坚毅，自信，成熟 拓展：tenacious = strong-minded adj 坚毅的 10. to be good at associating and communicating with others v擅长和他人交往沟通 11. adapt themselves
22、to the future career challenges yet not come v 使自己适应没有到来的事业挑战 12. job-related knowledge n 和择业相关的学问 13. career-oriented skills n 以择业为导向的技能 14. Most school leavers attend universities in order to acquire competitive diplomas so that their career prospects can be enhanced. 许多中学毕业生，上高校就是为了获得有竞争力的学位，以拥抱美
23、妙将来。 15. get a clear perspective of oneself v 对于自己有清楚的认知 新东方托福写作语料库：自主阅读还是规定阅读 【教化类】 The reading students do on their own is as important as or more important than that assigned by the teachers 自主阅读还是完成老师布置的阅读作业。(2022年3月11日) 【头脑风暴】 少年时代，我暑假阅读的书目是老师举荐的传统正能量的书籍：红岩，地球的红飘带， 钢铁是怎样炼成的等。我读了，但是，并没有受到革命主义的熏陶
24、。令我兴奋是保尔柯察金和冬妮娅初次见面的美妙，令我感怀的是他们懵懂的青春爱情。 中学时代，小鹏哥自由选择，畅游书海，一本书过一天的日子美妙而难忘。我依旧记得阅读安妮珍宝给我带来的触动：行云流水的文风，弥散哀痛的故事，频繁运用的句号。读到意犹未尽时，在晚上6：00，自己骑着自行车，去联合书城，坚决果断地再买一本她的新书 【作家立场】“开卷有益”是对的，无论是完成布置的阅读作业，还是为所欲为地阅读心爱的书籍。读书，使我们成熟思想、拓展视野、反思自我。但是，我认为，自主阅读更加值得举荐。 【思路拓展】 ? 爱好是最好的老师，阅读自己喜爱的书籍，可以感受更多的欢乐，激发阅读爱好，提高阅读的效率。例如，
25、我喜爱阅读文学，惯性的阅读和思索以及后续的写作练笔，使我成为小出名气的校内作家。 ? 假如学生们一贯地由老师支配阅读任务 ，他们可能失去自由选择的实力 ，一旦老师不再布置阅读任务，他们会茫然不知所措。 ? 老师布置的阅读任务，通常经过了深思熟虑，经过了教学实践的检验，帮助童鞋避开阅读的盲目性。 【范文赏析】 【首段】背景介绍 + 作家立场 Sure enough, to open a book is always beneficial. Reading, by occupying time so constructively, can make us feel contented, with
26、no time for boredom. Whether reading books arranged by teachers or to enjoy our favorite works has sparkled a debate. I always believe that to read books that really interest us can best stimulate our reading zeal and tap our infinite potentials. 【二段】第一次支持作家立场 Free reading, as a superior option, has
27、 many advantages. It provides relaxation for leisure hours and thus kindles our reading interests. Indeed, interest is the best teacher. To read good books can be a habit-formation only when we find plenty of fun in reading. More precisely, the pleasure of reading lies in reading itself. For example
28、, as a fancier of literature, I used to read a great many literary works. Reading those thought-provoking books stirred my vivid imagination, stimulated my creativity, and deepened my insights into life. On the contrary, I might slacken my efforts at reading and my reading enthusiasm might wither if
29、 I was forced to read unfavorite books 【三段】其次次支持作家立场 Secondly，students might loose the ability to make independent choice if they only read at the guidance of teachers. By that I mean, it is highly possible that those who only read books recommended by educators will feel at sea once teachers once t
30、hey lose their exterior incentives. Meanwhile, one mans meat is another mans poison. Peoples reading tastes differ greatly, some reading assignments designed by teachers, even though are meaty and classic, might fail to arouse every individuals reading impulses and arouse their sympathies. In this s
31、ense, reading might lose its charm. 【三段】让步对立观点之合理性 + 加以反对 Indeed, I have to concede that most reading assignment designed or recommended by teachers have withstood the test of instructional experiment. Those reading lists, in most cases, are carefully chosen. Thereby, to do some reading praised by t
32、eachers can help students avoid aimless reading and save precious time. What I want to rebut, however, is that students should be encouraged to make their own reading choices，what educators need to do maybe just provide timely guidance and useful suggestions. 【尾段】再次亮明观点 + 总结理由 In sum, my standpoint
33、is that to inspire students to make free reading choices is one of the best approaches to ignite their reading interests and motivate their reading zeal. 【经典语料】 1. To open a book is always beneficial. 开卷有益 2. Reading，by occupying time so constructively, can make us feel contented, with no time for b
34、oredom. 阅读，有建设性地利用了时间，使人心满足足，再也没有无聊之感。 3. stimulate our reading zeal and tap our infinite potentials 激发我们的阅读爱好，开发我们无限的潜能 4. provides relaxation for leisure hours 为休闲时间供应了快乐 5. To read good books can be a habit-formation only when we find plenty of fun in reading. 只有在阅读中找到欢乐的时候，阅读好书才能成为一种习惯。 6. The p
35、leasure of reading lies in reading itself. 阅读的乐趣在于阅读本身。 7. reading those thought-provoking books 阅读那些令人思索的书籍 8. reading enthusiasm might wither 阅读的热忱或许会枯竭 9. the ability to make independent choice 独立做出选择的实力 10. One mans meat is another mans poison. 萝卜青菜，各有所爱。 11. might fail to arouse every individua
36、ls reading impulse and arouse their sympathies 或许不能激发每个人的阅读冲动，引起每一个人的共鸣 12. have withstood the test of instructional experiment 经受住了教学实践的检验 13. help students avoid aimless reading and save precious time 帮助学生避开阅读的盲目性，节约时间。 14. what educators need to do 教学者须要做的是 15. is one of the best approaches to ignite their reading interests and motivate their reading zeal 是最好的方式之一去点燃他们的阅读爱好，激发他们的阅读热忱。 托福写作话题分析之教化本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第17页 共17页第 17 页 共 17 页第 17 页 共 17 页第 17 页 共 17 页第 17 页 共 17 页第 17 页 共 17 页第 17 页 共 17 页第 17 页 共 17 页第 17 页 共 17 页第 17 页 共 17 页第 17 页 共 17 页