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1、初中英语书面表达初中英语书面表达写作技巧突破策略写作技巧突破策略中考作文评分标准中考作文评分标准第一档（第一档（13-15分）分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（第二档（10-12分）分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。达。第三档（第三档（7-9分）分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。第四档（第四档（4-6分）分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多
2、，只有少量句子可读。只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。第五档（第五档（1-3分）分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。2010年江西省中考卷假设你是Emma，你的笔友 Josh给你写了一封电子邮件，向你倾诉他在家里的一些烦恼。请根据来信和提示，给Josh回一封电子邮件。先说说你的看法（在父母看来，我们仍是孩子；父母这样做是为了保护我们），再给出建议（给父母写信谈谈你的想法；主动帮父母做些力所能及的事情），并适当发挥。能传递部分信息，句子基本可读，但表达不够流畅。能传递部分信息，句子基本可读，但表达不够流畅。
3、能传递少量信息，少量句子可读，但表达不通顺。能传递少量信息，少量句子可读，但表达不通顺。能传递个别信息，个别句子可读，但表达不清楚。能传递个别信息，个别句子可读，但表达不清楚。学生作文主要存在的问题学生作文主要存在的问题1.中文式英语句子出现频率高2.语法错误多，且基础语法错误，如Be动词、助动词等使用错误的出现频率较高3.机械地堆砌词句，句子表达不知所云4.文章结构不够严谨，想到哪写到哪5.卷面不工整，字迹潦草如何做好中考书面表达题？如何做好中考书面表达题？书面表达写作技巧：书面表达写作技巧：审审列列加加连连美美认真认真审题审题，找出文章要表达的中心。找出文章要表达的中心。写作第一步审审健康
4、很重要。在学习和健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告调查报告,并提倡大家并提倡大家进行假日休闲。进行假日休闲。审审travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork用简单的句子或短语用简单的句子或短语列出列出文章要文
5、章要点。点。列列写作第二步 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点子列出文章的要点如何度假如何度假调查报告调查报告倡议假日休闲倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.列列A lot of people travel.Some people stay
6、 at home.Some other people visit friends or parents.A few people work.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.Come and enjoy your vacation.People who relax well work well.aniceheadanicetailanicebody加加加首尾加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。写作第三步：321465
7、1.Second,we should keep quiet in the library.2.First,we have to wear our uniforms to go to school,though most of us dont like them at all.3.Every school has its own rules for students.We have many school rules to follow in our daily life.4.Whats more,we ought to return books on time.5.Our school rul
8、es are good for us,I will try my best to follow them.6.Third,we must do lots of homework.How do people spend their vacation?We made a survey and here is our survey report.A lot of people travel.Some people stay at home.They watch TV or surf the internet.Some other people visit friends or parents.A f
9、ew people work.Come and enjoy your vacation.The people who relax well work well.连连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作第四步：1.表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,not onlybut also,neithernor;2.表示选择表示选择:or,eitheror;3.表示转折表示转折:but,however,although,though,after all,4.表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore5.表示条件表示条件:if,
10、unless6.表示对比表示对比:instead,notbut,on the one handon the other hand;7.表示解释表示解释:for example,for instance,such as,that is to say,in other words;8.表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,later,since then,from then on,finally,in the end;9.表示强调表示强调:also,besides,whats more,actually,in fa
11、ct,10.表示结论表示结论:in all,altogether,in a word,in short,generally speaking,in my opinion关联词关联词lets play the game.lets play the game._ I am tired,I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies,he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming,running and hiking._,he stood up.Then h
12、e got out.Although/Thoughinsteadsuchas/likeFirstHowdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连连美美选好词句，美化美化
13、文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写作第五步：Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisoursurveyreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Also,somepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemr
14、elaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美美注意：注意：选好词句，美化美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。SkillOneMakeyoursentencescorrectGoodgoodstudy,daydayup.Weshoulddosportsaweekonce.Savetheenvironmentisourduty.Thereisgoingtohaveameetingtoday.IhopeIcancometruemydream.onceawee
15、kSavingbeachieveSkillTwoExpressindifferentwaysOurparentsreallywishustoworkhard.Ourparentsreallywishustoputourheartintostudy.Theteenagerslikethecomputers.Theteenagersarefondofthecomputers.Weshouldnteatjunkfood.Weshouldstayawayfromthejunkfood.Whenhespoke,hegotmoreexcited.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedh
16、egot.WeshouldlearnEnglishgrammar.ItsimportanttolearnEnglishgrammar.书面表达写作技巧书面表达写作技巧审审列列加加连连美美书面表达书面表达以以“Ihaveadream”为题写一篇不少于为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，个词的短文，标点符号不占格。标点符号不占格。Sentencepatternsforreference(以下句型以下句型供参考）供参考）Mydreamistobe/todo/togoIenjoy/like/preferTomakemydreamcometrue,IIfmydreamcomestrueIhaveadream
17、Haveyoueverwatchedabikeracing?Theridersarecool!Yeah,itsmydreamtobeaprofessionalbikerider.IfellinlovewithbikeriderforthefirsttimeIrode.Sincethat,Ivebeenridingfor5years.Somepeoplethinkitsdangerous,butIdontthinkso.Duringabikeriding,youwillbeinahighspeedandfeelthewindrushesquickly.Exciting?Thatis!Tomake
18、mydreamcometrue,Illpracticemoreaftermiddleschool.Also,Illwatchmorebikeracingtolearnfromtheriders.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue.Ifso,IcanenjoythelifeIlikebest.Passage OneIhaveadreamAnybodyhasadream.Butdifferentpeoplehavedifferentdreams.Mostpeoplealwaysdreamtobepopularorrich.Butmydreamisveryspecial,Ijustwa
19、nttobeabird.WhyIhavesuchadream?JustbecauseIadmiretheyrefree,theycandoeverythingtheywant.Whentheyreflyinginthesky,theylookbeautiful,eventheyrethemostbeautifulanimals.Ireallywanttoenjoythefeelingofflyinginthesky.However,Iknowitwontbeachievedanymore.Itsjustadream,inmyheart.Passage TwoPassage ThreeIhave
20、adreamMydreamistobeabasketballplayer.IlikeitbecauseIthinkitveryinteresting.Itcanmakemebecomeveryhappyandhealthy.Tomakemedreamcometrue,Ineedtrytodoit.AndIneedtakesometimetodoit.Ineedpracticeeveryday.Ifmydreamcometrue,Iwillmorethytodoit.自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑自教育部提倡初中生每天长跑1500米后，校园里课间可以看到很多米后，校园里课间可以看到很多学生跑步的身影
21、。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学学生跑步的身影。对于这样的倡议，你在学校做了一个调查，有些学生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，生觉的好，有些学生觉的不好。请你把调查的结果用英语写成短文，并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。并谈谈自己的看法，发表在学校的刊物上，开头已经写好。Ididasurveyaboutwhethermiddleschoolstudentsshouldrun1500meterseveryday.Herearetheresults.观点观点原因原因你的观点你的观点赞同赞同 可以放松，更健康，帮助学习可以放松，更健康，帮助学
22、习更好更好 不赞同不赞同 太累，跑步后上课不能集中注太累，跑步后上课不能集中注意力，想睡觉意力，想睡觉Allofushaveholidaysinourdailylife,buthowdopeoplespendtheirholiday?Wedidasurveyandherearetheresults.fromCaiPiaoliItsnothingbetterthanhavingarestafterworking!Sohowdopeoplerestthemselvesonvacation?Accordingtooursurvey,thereareseveralways.fromZhangShiyi
23、Inall,differentpeoplehavedifferentwaystorelaxthemselves.ButIsuggestthatweshouldenjoytheholiday,thenwemayworkbetter.fromLiuMiaoSothisyear,whynotconsidergoingoutside?Spendyourhealthyholidayandthengetmoreenergyforworkorstudy.fromWuYou课程标准列出了24个话题项目。1.个人情况 13.健康 2.家庭、朋友与周围的人 14.天气 3.周围的环境 15.文娱与体育 4.日常活动 16.旅游与交通 5.学校生活 17.语言学习 6.兴趣与爱好18.自然 7.个人感情19.世界和环境 8.人际关系20.科普知识与现代技术 9.计划与愿望 21.热点话题 10.节假日活动22.历史和地理 11.购物23.社会 12.饮食24.文学与艺术