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1、The way to improve your writing 隆昌县第一初级中学隆昌县第一初级中学 卿艳卿艳Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?SectionB 3a-3b Writing人教版人教版 八年级下册八年级下册Stage1:Before-writingTask1:Look and say What were you doing when the teacher came in?When the teacher came in,I was or:While I was.,the teacher came in.sle
2、epingMH370客客机失联机失联An important eventMalaysia Airlines event（马航事件）（马航事件）What were you doing when this event happened?What were your parents doing when this event happened?When this event happened,I was./While I was,this event happened.When this event happened,my parents were./While my parents were,th
3、is event happened.宁波雅戈尔动物园事件宁波雅戈尔动物园事件An important event that I remember well was Youngor Zoo event.It happened on January 29,2017 in Ningbo.When it happened,I was listening to music.My friends were playing basketball.This event was very important to me because we must keep away from danger.I rememb
4、er this event well because a man died in this event.Task2:Ask and answer(3a).Youngor Zoo event,in Ningbo1.What was the event?2.When did it happen?3.Where did it happen?4.What were you doing when it happened?5.What were your friends doing?6.Why was this event important?7.Why do you remember this even
5、t?It wasYoungor Zoo event.It happened on January 29,2017.It happened in Ningbo.I was listening to music.My friends were playing basketball.7.Because a man died in this event.Because we must keep away from danger.3aTask3:Sharing time How to write an important event I remember well?1.What can you writ
6、e?(3a)Event writingWhereWhenWhatWhyWhat(doing)2.How many paragraphs（段落）（段落）can you write?Three.List（列要点）An important event that I remember well was_.It happened in/on _ at/in_.First,write about_Next,write about_Then,write about_ 3.Look at 3b.What can you write in each paragraph（每个段落）（每个段落）?When I he
7、ard the news of this event/When this event happened,I was_.My friends were_.This event was very important to me because_./I remember it well because_.Topic 话题：话题：An important event that I rememberOutline（列提纲）（列提纲）An important event that I remember well was_.It happened in/on _at/in_.First,write abou
8、t what the event was,when and where it happened.whatwhenwhereOutline（提纲）（提纲）第一段第一段Next,write about what you and your friends were doing when this event happened.doing.doing.When I heard the news of this event/When this event happened,I was_.My friends were_.Outline（提纲）（提纲）第二段第二段Then,write about why
9、this event was important or why you remember it well.This event was very important to me because_./I remember it well because_.whywhyOutline（提纲）（提纲）第三段第三段4.Look at 3b.Find out what kinds of drills（句型）（句型）you can use.Do you know any other sayings?你知道一些别的表达法吗？你知道一些别的表达法吗？whatwhenwhere1.An important ev
10、ent that I remember well was2.I remember an important event.It was3.I cant forget an important event.It was .It happened on /inIt happened at /inDrillsdoing.why1.When I heard the news of this event,I was2.When this event happened,I was.My friends were.3.While I was,this event happened.1.This event w
11、as very important to me because 2.I remember this event well because 3.I cant forget this event because DrillsAn important event that I remember well was Malaysia Airlines event.It happened on March 8,2014 in Malaysia.People often remember what they were doing when an important event happened.When I
12、 heard the news of this event,I was listening to music.My friends were playing basketball.We are shocked.This event was very important to me because 239 passengers disappeared.Some of them are 154 Chinese passengers.We dont know the truth about the event so far.Topic话题话题An important event I remember
13、 wellBeginning 开头开头Ending 结尾结尾Key words 关键词关键词Malaysia Airlines eventon March 8,2014in Malaysiawas listening to musicwere playing basketballbecause 239 passengers disappeared.Some of them are 154 Chinese passengers.We dont know the truth about the event so far.4.Try to write beautifully like this.Ta
14、sk4:Lets have a try！写作：写作：我记忆深刻的一个重大事我记忆深刻的一个重大事件就是发生在件就是发生在2008年年5月月12日的日的四川汶川地震（四川汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）。当地震发生时，。当地震发生时，我正在教室里做作业，我的朋友我正在教室里做作业，我的朋友们在打篮球。我不能忘记这个日们在打篮球。我不能忘记这个日子子,因为许多人在地震中死亡，我因为许多人在地震中死亡，我们必须帮助那些无家可归的人。们必须帮助那些无家可归的人。写作要求：写作要求：1.请写出以上内容，可适当发挥；请写出以上内容，可适当发挥；2.书写认真，句子通顺；书写认真，句子通顺；
15、3.语句连贯，注意分段，语句连贯，注意分段，70词左词左右。右。Stage2:While-writing1.审题审题(Search)：本文体裁为_文。用第_ 人称。用_时态，_时态和_ 时态。文章共分为_段。【思路点拨思路点拨】记叙记叙一一一般现在一般现在一般过去一般过去过去进行过去进行三三写作：写作：我记忆深刻的一个重大事我记忆深刻的一个重大事件就是发生在件就是发生在2008年年5月月12日的日的四川汶川地震（四川汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）。当地震发生时，。当地震发生时，我正在教室里做作业，我的朋友我正在教室里做作业，我的朋友们在打篮球。我不能忘记这个日们在打篮球。我
16、不能忘记这个日子子,因为许多人在地震中死亡，我因为许多人在地震中死亡，我们必须帮助那些无家可归的人。们必须帮助那些无家可归的人。1、记忆深刻_ 2、汶川地震_ 3、在2008年5月12日_ 4、在四川汶川_ 5、当它发生时 _6、在教室里做作业_7、打篮球_ 8、不能忘记_9、在地震中死亡_10、帮助那些无家可归的人_2.List language points（列语言点）remember wellWenchuan Earthquakeon May 12,2008in Wenchuan,Sichuanwhen it/this event happeneddo homework in the c
17、lassroomplay basketballcant forgetdie in the earthquakehelp the homeless people Topic 话题：话题：An important event I remember An important event that I remember well was _.It happened in/on _ at/in _.This event was very important to me because _./I remember this event well because _.When I heard the new
18、s of this event/When this event happened,I was _.My friends were _.Paragraph1 Paragraph2 Paragraph3whatwhenwheredoingdoingwhywhy Outlining will make your writing easier.3.Outline（列提纲）（列提纲）写作注意的几个问题：写作注意的几个问题：1.1.多多用简单句用简单句,别出现单词拼写和语法错误单词拼写和语法错误。2.2.尽量尽量使用频率高使用频率高的短语和句型。的短语和句型。3.3.把握把握要点,避免遗漏,发挥适度发挥适
19、度，不多写不少写。，不多写不少写。4 4.行文行文连贯连贯,结构紧密，字体一定要结构紧密，字体一定要工整漂亮工整漂亮。An important event that I remember well was _.It happened in/on _ at/in _.When I heard the news of this event/When this event happened,I was _.My friends were _.This event was very important to me because _./I remember this event well becaus
20、e _.whatwhenwheredoingdoingwhywhy 我记忆深刻的一个重大事件就是发生在2008年5月12日的四川汶川地震（WenchuanWenchuan Earthquake Earthquake）。当地震发生时，我正在教室里做作业，我的朋友们在打篮球。我不能忘记这个日子，因为许多人在地震中死亡，我们必须帮助那些无家可归的人。写作要求：写作要求：1.1.请写出以上内容，可适请写出以上内容，可适当发挥；当发挥；2.2.书写认真，句子通顺；书写认真，句子通顺；3.3.语句连贯，注意分段，语句连贯，注意分段，7070词左右词左右。Outline4.Challenge yoursel
21、f!开始挑战！开始挑战！1.用序号用序号:1234标出文章的标出文章的10个要点个要点2.用用波浪线波浪线划出划出优美优美的的短语和句型短语和句型3.改正改正词汇和语法错误词汇和语法错误4.评分原则评分原则:要点要点要点要点(10(10(10(10分分分分)+语篇连贯语篇连贯语篇连贯语篇连贯(3(3(3(3分分分分)+词数词数词数词数(1(1(1(1分分分分)+卷面卷面卷面卷面(1(1(1(1分分分分)Task5:Evaluate（评价）（评价）Stage3:After-writingAn important event that I remember well was Wenchuan Ea
22、rthquake.It happened on May 12,2008 in Wenchuan,Sichuan.When the earthquake happened,I was doing homework in the classroom.My friends was playing basketball when the buildings fell down.I will never forget this event because many people die in the earthquake.We must help the homeless people.12345678
23、910weredied14要点要点要点要点(10(10分分分分)+语篇连贯语篇连贯语篇连贯语篇连贯(2 2分分分分)+词数词数词数词数(1(1分分分分)+卷面卷面卷面卷面(1(1分分分分)People often remember what they were doing when an important event happened.An important event that I remember well was Wenchuan Earthquake.It happened on May 12,2008 in Wenchuan,Sichuan.Although I was youn
24、g at that time,I could remember what we were doing.When this event happened,I was doing homework in the classroom.My friends were playing basketball.I remember well because many people died in this event .We must help the homeless people.The more we help others,the more beautiful our world will be.范
25、文欣赏范文欣赏Task6:Sum up（总结）（总结）What did you learn in this class?1.How to write an event you remember well?List what we can write.Outline what we can write in each paragraph.Find out what kinds of drills we can use.Try to write beautifully.2.Drills of event writing:1.An important event that I remember we
26、ll was2.When I heard the news of this event,I was3.When this event happened,I wasMy friends were.4.This event was very important to me because 5.I remember this event well because Are you the best partner in this class?Homework1.Modify（修改）（修改）your writing after class and share（分享）（分享）it.2.Try to write an event you remember well and hand in（上交）（上交）.A car accidentAn art festivalA rainsormGood memories（记忆）make our life more beautiful.