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1、导航式作文法MarkTask 2 之对立类（DB）双边讨论（discuss both）范例：范例：Some people believe animal testing should be banned completely，while others think it is necessary in many aspects.Discuss both of the views and give your own opinion.Recommended structure：首段：引出话题首段：引出话题+个人倾向个人倾向（50ws)二段：正方理由一二段：正方理由一(50ws)三段：正方理由二三段：正
2、方理由二(50ws)四段：正方理由三四段：正方理由三(50ws)五段：（转折）反方理由一五段：（转折）反方理由一六段：六段：反方理由二反方理由二末段：总结末段：总结(50ws)首段首段：方法一：自写方法一：自写背景原因背景原因+个人倾向个人倾向方法二：模版方法二：模版背景原因（背景原因（30ws）With the technological development,medical research has made advances as well,some of which were made through animal testing,leaving us a serious contr
3、oversy.个人倾向（个人倾向（20ws）Overall(Upon the whole,By and large,On the whole,As a whole,In the mass,In general),I am firmly convinced that there should be a ban on animal testing.（正方观点）（正方观点）.模版：模版：How to evaluate animal testing from a balanced perspective has become one of the most controversial debates
4、on which different people hold distinct standpoints,some of whom assume that animal testing should be banned completely,while those who think otherwise contend that it is necessary.Overall,I am inclined to agree with the former/latter.二段：正方理由一二段：正方理由一连接词连接词&论点论点1句句&论证论证2句句First,performing experiment
5、s on animals violates the moral codes,by which I mean it is against our conscience(解释).As a saying goes,Live and let live,which displays the true love and mercy to any species on earth(名言)三段：正方理由二三段：正方理由二连接词连接词&论点论点1句句&论证论证2句句And,it poses threat to human race as well.To put in another way,fatal dise
6、ases from animals emerge from time to time,such as Bird Flu and Crazy Pig,a local disease breaking out in my hometown,without involving other regions fortunately.四段：正方理由三四段：正方理由三连接词连接词&论点论点1句句&论证论证2句句Besides,using animals for testing is also viewed as a barbaric way to infringe upon their rights of
7、living.In the past,animal right was highly ignored and even infringed upon in China,but as we were ushered in the new era,we are increasingly aware that all creatures are made equal.五段：转折五段：转折+反方理由一反方理由一A proponent as I am,it is by no means appropriate/rational to keep blind to the positive aspects.
8、In the first place,观点观点+论证论证六段：反方理由二六段：反方理由二In the second place,观点观点+论证论证末段（第七段）末段（第七段）总结陈词总结陈词观点重申观点重申In brief(In a word,All in all,In conclusion,In short,In summary,In recapitulation,To recapitulate,),without suggesting that 正方 is absolutely good，it is my perspective that 正方 and it is high time th
9、at we took proper and prompt actions to advocate it.今日作业：今日作业：Some people think that lawbreakers should be sent to prison.But others think that better talents among those should be made to work.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.(2010/9/17)高分进阶：高分进阶：1.GRA2.LR（其余两项（其余两项TR、CC按照按照Mark设计设计的路线，
10、即可拿分）的路线，即可拿分）高分进阶之高分进阶之“满分满分GRA”倒装句型倒装句型(2)虚拟语气虚拟语气(2)独立主格独立主格(1)修辞手法修辞手法(3)（DXDX）高分进阶之高分进阶之“满分满分GRA”倒装句型倒装句型 Only in this way,can the government remove poverty.Not only can traveling expand ones horizons,it can purify one soul and soul as well.高分进阶之高分进阶之“满分满分GRA”虚拟语气虚拟语气 Without reading,life would
11、 be dull.It is high time that we took proper actions.高分进阶之高分进阶之“满分满分GRA”独立主格独立主格 Children from rich families squander their money on luxuries,with poor kids worrying about next meal.高分进阶之高分进阶之“满分满分GRA”修辞手法修辞手法 明喻明喻(simile)1)A is to B what C is to D.2)Shall I compare thee to a summers day?高分进阶之高分进阶之“
12、满分满分GRA”修辞手法修辞手法 提喻（提喻（synecdoche）个体代一般）个体代一般1)你是我的机器猫你是我的机器猫.2)He is the Newton of the century.高分进阶之高分进阶之“满分满分GRA”修辞手法修辞手法 通感通感(synesthesia)Some books are to be tasted,others to be swallowed and some few to be chewed and digested.高分进阶之高分进阶之 LR大词大词小词小词短语短语每个加分项务必使用每个加分项务必使用4-6次次高分进阶之高分进阶之 LR大词大词1.infringe upon vt 践踏践踏 侵侵犯犯2.Overshadow vt 使相形见使相形见绌绌高分进阶之高分进阶之 LR大词大词3.Stem from vt The problem stems from a lack of competition in education.4.inevitably高分进阶之高分进阶之 LR小词小词Involve take boost curbserve act高分进阶之高分进阶之 LR短语短语Rest on vt 依赖依赖Be aware of vt 知道知道Lie in vt 在于在于Give priority to vt 优先考虑优先考虑