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1、沐彬中学高三英语备课组沐彬中学高三英语备课组英语书面表达的英语书面表达的解题要求解题要求1.切中题意、覆盖所有的语言要点切中题意、覆盖所有的语言要点 2.语言准确、得当语言准确、得当3 条理清楚、行文连贯条理清楚、行文连贯4.高分高分(21-25分分)要求要求:较多地使用较复杂的结构或较高级词汇较多地使用较复杂的结构或较高级词汇 具备较强的语言运用能力具备较强的语言运用能力常见错误举例分析常见错误举例分析【动词错误】【动词错误】1.There were hundreds of students couldnt go to school because they were poor.2.He w
2、ouldnt able to work out the problem.3.He managed to swim across the river,but failed.常见错误举例分析(续)【中式英语】【中式英语】1.He cost five yuan to buy a new dictionary.2.Recently our village has taken place great changes.3.I was very difficult to refuse and had to receive her invitation.常见错误举例分析（续）【结构错误】【结构错误】1.He
3、wrote about 300 stories,some of them had been translated into Chinese.2.Each year many people die and are hurt on road accidents.3.We should teach children dont play and ride bikes on the road.技技 巧巧1.使用较高级的使用较高级的词汇词汇3.使用恰当的连使用恰当的连接词接词词汇反映你知识贮存量词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句
4、子结构可以给运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有有“英语味英语味”的文章很重要，的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的使用较丰富的句式句式较高级的词汇较高级的词汇1.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought ou
5、t a good idea.4.The students there neednt pay for their books.5.You can find my house easily.Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me.A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.Youll have no trouble finding
6、 my house.【例句】【例句】较丰富的句式较丰富的句式利用以下各招可给句子润色利用以下各招可给句子润色,让句式丰让句式丰富起来。富起来。1.使用并列句使用并列句2.使用强调句使用强调句3.使用倒装句使用倒装句3.恰当使用被动句恰当使用被动句4.使用使用with的复合结构的复合结构5.使用各类从句使用各类从句6.使用非谓语动词使用非谓语动词1Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.（使用名词性从句）3.ThoughImweak,Illmaket
7、heeffort.(使用倒装句)4.Hedidnotknowwhathadhappeneduntilhehadreadthenewsinthenewspaper.(使用强调句型)On his arriving,please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is thatthe little girl knows so many things.Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what h
8、ad happened.【例句】【例句】恰当的连接词恰当的连接词1.On one side oftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.On the other side,wheretheplaygroundusedtobenowstandsanothernewbuildingourlibrary.2.As far as I know,everyoneishappyaboutthisnewarrangementofthings.3.Whats more,Icangotobedearlier.【例句】【例句】如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好文章？覆盖了所有的要点
9、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）连接词联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100词左右。任务：润色下面的一篇书面表达。任务：润色下面的一篇书面表达。L
10、adiesandgentlemen,Welcometoourschool.Thisvillageisverysmall.Ithasnearly100familiesandabout500people.Itusedtobeverypoor.Ithaschangedalotsince1978.Peopleherearericherthanbefore.Nowitistakingonanewlook.Theschoolherewasverysmall.Nowithasbeenrebuilt.Thenewlybuiltteachingbuildinghas4storeys.Itisthemostbeautifulbuildinginthevillage.Alltheschool-agechildrencanstudyhere.Theyenjoyfreeeducationinit.Thankyou.