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1、Unit5 Nelson MandelaUnit5 Nelson Mandela a a modern modern h heroeroWritingHow to write a discussion about a great person?Take Mandela as an example.Let me think about it!As a great person,he/she should help others,get on well with othersbe willing to do public service be active in society activitie
2、snever lose heart when he/she is in great trouble How dowedothe Basic Writing?题材突破：人物简介 人物简介一般包括姓名、性格、外表、年龄、头衔、教育背景、人生经历、所取得的成就或所获奖项、评价等。写人物简介时常用到以下技巧：1.职位头衔:用同位语，年龄性别与家境也可用同位语。如:Sun Shuwei,a world champion in diving(一位跳水的世界冠军),is a boy of 14 from Guangdong.(同位语)Im Li Hui,a girl of sixteen(一个16岁的女孩子
3、).同位语l一个名词或其它形式，跟在另一个名词或代词后并对其进行解释解释、说说明明或限定限定，这个名词或其它形式就是同位语。同位语与被它说明的先行词的格要一致，并且前后两项所前后两项所指相同指相同,句法功能也相同句法功能也相同。刘翔于1983年出生于上海，是中国第一个男子奥运田径冠军(track champion)。Born in 1983,Shanghai,Liuxiang is Chinas first male Olympic track champion.练一练：练一练：2.介绍出生:介绍出生的时间、地点和家境用分词结构,使文章更简洁。如:Yao Ming,born in Shangh
4、ai in 1980(1980年出生于上海),is a world famous basketball player.l Born on the 18th of January,1979 in Taiwan,Jay Chou,a famous singer,was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood.分词结构 同位语身份与生平尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺讲解讲解：练一练：Madam Curie is a great scientist.居里夫人是伟大的科学家，生于波兰，1867年
5、11月7日。2.Abraham Lincoln,was born in Kentucky on February 12th,1809.阿伯拉罕.林肯，1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州的一个贫困家庭。Born in Poland on November 7,1867,the son of a poor family,3.描写外貌:巧用with短语。如:My English teacher is a beautiful lady,with long hair and big eyes(她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发).练一练：3.She is good-looking 她长着长头发，很好看。4.Bo
6、rn in Germany,Einstein is a great scientist 爱因斯坦出生在德国，是一位有着非凡想象力的伟大科学家。with long beautiful hair.with anextraordinary imagination.4.教育经历(注意尽量用非谓语动词,使文章精炼)如；中山大学英语系毕业后，她出国深造。Graduated from the department of English of Zhongshan University,she went abroad for further studies.练一练：5.Southwest Agricultura
7、l College in 1953,Dr Yuan went on further study on rice.袁隆平袁隆平博士于博士于1953年从西南农业大学毕业，年从西南农业大学毕业，然后进一步研究水稻。然后进一步研究水稻。Graduated from5 5生平生平(尽量用尽量用复合句倒装复合句倒装,非限制性定语非限制性定语从句从句等，润色文章等，润色文章)如；如；鲁迅不仅是著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学鲁迅不仅是著名的作家，思想家，而且还是中国现代文学的开创者。的开创者。Lu Xun was not only a well-Known Chinese writer and a
8、thinker,but also the father of modern Chinese literature.1）她不但对科学感兴趣，而且对音乐有天赋.Not only is she interested in science,but also she has a gift for music.2)只有这样，我们才能逐渐提高我们的只有这样，我们才能逐渐提高我们的l 英语听力和口语。英语听力和口语。l Only in this way can we gradually improve our English listening and speaking.l姚明是加入NBA的最成功的中国篮球运
9、动员。Yao Ming is the most successful Chinese basketball player who has joined NBA.练一练：练一练：凭着无比的决心和毅力，他花了凭着无比的决心和毅力，他花了3737年年完成了这本书，为这个领域作出重大贡献。完成了这本书，为这个领域作出重大贡献。With great determination,he spent 37 years finishing the book,which makes a great contribution to China.6 6评估评估 （注意（注意运用一些运用一些动词,形容词等短语，词组等短
10、语，词组）如；）如；雷锋为我们树立了个好榜样，人们都雷锋为我们树立了个好榜样，人们都高度赞扬他，尊敬他。高度赞扬他，尊敬他。Leifeng set us a good example,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him.【写作内容写作内容】马克吐温（马克吐温（1835-19101835-1910）出生于美国的）出生于美国的MissouriMissouri。他是美国。他是美国1919世纪著名的作家之世纪著名的作家之一。他的家乡位于密西西比河畔一。他的家乡位于密西西比河畔 (Mississipi)。成名后，他曾在密
11、西西比。成名后，他曾在密西西比河的船上当水手。他写过很多小说，其中河的船上当水手。他写过很多小说，其中最著名的是最著名的是汤姆索耶历险记汤姆索耶历险记(The(The Adventure of Tom Sawyer)Adventure of Tom Sawyer)。他的作品被。他的作品被译成多国文字，深受世界读者喜爱。译成多国文字，深受世界读者喜爱。基础写作基础写作Make a list of the what you think Put them together to compare your lists with another group.This will make sure whe
12、ther you have made a little mistake on you paperThen begin to organise your writing.Put your ideas into any order that seems sensible to yourselves add the reasons or details to the ideas.Before writing you can follow these steps:【任务分析】这是一篇人物介绍，时态可用一般过去时、现在完成时和一般现在时。【信息组合与翻译】1.马克吐温，19世纪著名作家，1835年出生
13、于美国密西西比河畔。_2.成年后他在他的家乡密西西比河的船上当水手。_Mark Twain,born on the banks of the Mississippi River,was a famous writer of 19th centuryWhen he grew up,he worked as a sailor on a riverboat on the Mississippi River for some time 3.他写过很多小说，其中最著名的是他写过很多小说，其中最著名的是汤姆汤姆索耶历险记索耶历险记。_ _4.很多作品被译成多国文字。很多作品被译成多国文字。_5.他死于他死
14、于1910年，但他的作品深受世界各地年，但他的作品深受世界各地的读者喜爱。的读者喜爱。_Mark Twain wrote a lot of novels,among which the Adventure of Tom Sawyer is the most famous one.Many of his writings have been translated into many languages.He died in 1910,but his books are deeplyloved by readers throughout the world.【句子衔接句子衔接】以上六个句子包含了所
15、有写作要点，但是还是要以上六个句子包含了所有写作要点，但是还是要注意篇章的连贯与过渡。在介绍时，要学会用同注意篇章的连贯与过渡。在介绍时，要学会用同位语，定语从句位语，定语从句,及学会运用及学会运用with,与与 as等词，等词，如：如：XX,a XX man,was/with little education,he had to./,as a child,he.Once the writing is completed,swap it with a partner and improve each others work.Remember to check grammar,punctuati
16、on and spelling.Then rewrite the passage.We will make assessment on your work.【连句成篇】Mark Twain,one of the best known American writers in the 19th century,was born in1835,in Missouri of the United States.Mark Twains hometown lies on the banks of the Mississippi River,where he spent his childhood.When
17、 he grew up he worked as a sailor on a riverboat for some time.Mark Twain wrote a lot of novels,among which The Adventure of Tom Sawyer is the most famous one.Some of his writings have been translated into many languages.He died in 1910,but his books are deeply loved by readers throughout the world.
18、写作练习国际文化交流中心将组织一次由各国学生参加的“和平，友爱”夏令营活动，要求报名者提交英文个人简介。假设你是李琳，请根据下列信息写一篇个人简介。姓名：李琳 性别：女年龄：15岁 学校：广州第一中学其他：爱好音乐，摄影；善于与人交流，乐于助人；热爱自然，热爱和平参加夏令营的目的：结交朋友，了解外国文化注意：1.词数约100词。2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Im Li Lin,a girl of fifteen from Guangzhou Number one Middle School.I am fond of music and interested in photogra
19、phy.In fact,I enjoy meeting new people and talking with them and Im willing to help anyone in need as we all need help from each other.I love nature and peace as well.I would like to join the Peace&Friendship Summer Camp becauseit would be a great opportunity to make friends with young people from different countries and learn about their cultures.