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1、在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么概要写作概要写作在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么what the summary writing is 1requests of a good summary2how to write a good summary3After this class,we will be able to know:4skills of summary writing在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也
2、许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Asummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsomething,notthedetails.牛津高阶英汉双解词典 It is a brief,complete and objective restatement(重述重述)of the main idea and key points of a longer composition.01What is a summary?在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 提炼提炼要点要点 整合整合
3、concordance 删除细节删除细节 omit details删除具体例子删除具体例子 omit specific examples避免重复避免重复 avoid repetition 同义转换同义转换:近义词、同义词等替换近义词、同义词等替换语言语言 句子重构句子重构:调整词类、语态调整词类、语态(active voice;passive voice)等等逻辑：逻辑：衔接（照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接衔接（照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接）02Skills of Summary Writing在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点
4、算不了什么a 60-word summaryuse your own wordsin the third person(第三人称第三人称)with a brief sentenceconnection between sentences(句子衔接句子衔接)03Requests of Summary Writing在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Step 1.Read for the style,topic sentence and structureStep 2.Find the key information of ea
5、ch paragraphStep 3.Paraphrase(改写改写)Step 4.Write the draft(草稿草稿)and better it04Steps of Summary Writing在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 Miss Li is a graceful teacher who is always ready to help students in need.She helps students who need improve their English.She looks after stud
6、ents who dont feel well.Miss li,a teacher,is willing to give a hand to students needing help.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Style：Topic sentence：Structure：ANarration BArgumentation CExposition Have you ever wondered where they
7、come from and what they mean?1 1 A.2.3.4 B.2.3 4 Step 1 Read for the style,topic and structure exposition在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Find:the first/last sentence/join them togetherStep 2.Find the key information of each paragraph在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点
8、算不了什么 Theresaquestionthathasmillionsofcorrectanswersintheworld.Thatquestionis“Whatsyourname?”Everyonegivesadifferentanswer,andeveryoneiscorrect.However,haveyoueverwonderedwherethenamescomefromandwhattheymean?Somepeoplegivetheirchildrennamesthatmeansgoodthings.Clarameans“bright”;Beatricemeans“onewhog
9、iveshappiness”;Donaldmeans“worldruler”；Leonardmeans“asbraveasalion”.Theearliestfirstnames,orsurnames,weretakenfromplacenames.AfamilywiththenameBrookorBrooksprobablylivednearabrook(小溪).SomeonewhowascalledLongstreetprobablylivedonalong,pavedroad.Sometimespeopleareknownforthecoloroftheirhairorskin,orsi
10、ze,ortheirspecialabilities.WhenthereweretwomenwhowerenamedJohninthesamevillage,theJohnwiththegrayhairprobablybecameJohnGray.OrtheJohnwhowastallcouldcallhimselfJohnTallman.JohnFishwasprobablyanexcellentswimmerandJohnLongfootwasprobablyafastrunneroragooddancer.Step 2.Find the key information of each p
11、aragraphexamplesexamplesexamples在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么iscorrect.However,haveyoueverwonderedwherethenamescomefromandwhattheymean?Step 3:Paraphrase(改写改写)originsmeaningscome into beingwherethenamescomefromandwhattheymeanHowever thoughas在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也
12、许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 As to peoples names,various origins and meanings are involved.Faced with a variety of names,people may be curious about how they come into being.Step 3:Paraphrase Various as peoples names are,they have developed gradually in some common ways.整合、提炼在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也
13、许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 ParaphraseParaphrase supporting points 1,2&3 on your own and then shareshare them with your desk mate.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Somepeoplegivetheirchildrennamesthatmeansgoodthings.Step 3:Paraphrase Some peoples first names may carry family members wishes and
14、 blessings(祝福祝福).).在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Theearliestfirstnames,orsurnames,weretakenfromplacenames.Step 3:Paraphrase Place names are where people got their inspirations(灵感).在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Sometimespeopleareknownforthecoloroftheirhairo
15、rskin,orsize,ortheirspecialabilities.Step 3:Paraphrase Other origins include peoples hair or skin,their sizes as well as their special abilities.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 1.As to peoples names,various origins and meanings are.2.wishes and blessings(祝福祝福)3.Place names are w
16、here.4.Other origins include.Step 4:write the first draft write the first draft and betterbetter it 表转折：表转折：but,however,though,although表递进：表递进：in addition to,not only.but also,besides,whats more表对比：表对比：meanwhile,on the other hand在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么ChecklistWhether do
17、es he shep begin with a sentence that states the main idea?p use his/her own words?p avoid adding his/her own comments?p use restatement to emphasize the main idea and unify his/her writing?p any mistakes in spelling,grammar and punctuation?If so,please underline and correct them.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的
18、现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么 Multiple as peoples names are,they have evolved in some common ways.Some first names originate from family members sincere hopes and blessings.Place names are where people got inspiration for some early surnames.Me
19、anwhile,other early surnames are related to peoples hair or skin,their sizes as well as their special abilities.在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么WhatRequestsHow在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么在日常生活中，随处都可以看到浪费粮食的现象。也许你并未意识到自己在浪费，也许你认为浪费这一点点算不了什么Stylesargumentation 1narration2exposition3 议论文议论文 记叙文记叙文 说明文说明文