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1、考纲解读考纲解读提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。第1页/共29页Sample A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day.As he walked along Park Avenue near the First National Bank,he heard the sound of someone trying to start a car.He tried
2、again and again but couldnt get the car moving.Arthur turned and looked inside at the face of a young man who looked worried.Arthur stopped and asked,“It looks like youve got a problem,”Arthur said.第2页/共29页 “Im afraid so.Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”“Is there something I can do to help
3、?”Arthur asked.The young man looked at the two suitcases in the back seat and then said,”Thanks.If youre sure it wouldnt be too much trouble,you could help me get these suitcases into a taxi.”“No trouble at all.Id be glad to help.”第3页/共29页 The young man got out and took one of the suitcases from the
4、 backseat.After placing it on the ground,he turned to get the other one.Just as Arthur picked up the first suitcase and started walking,he heard the long loud noise of an alarm.It was from the bank.There had been a robbery(抢劫)!第4页/共29页 Park Avenue had been quiet a moment before.Now the air was fille
5、d with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions.Cars stopped and the passengers joined the crowd in front of the bank.People asked each other,“What happened?”But everyone had a different answer.第5页/共29页 Arthur,still carrying the suitcase,turned to look at the bank
6、and walked right into the young woman in front of him.She looked at the suitcase and then at him.Arthur was surprised.”Why is she looking at me like that?”He thought.“The suitcase!She thinks Im the bank thief!”Arthur looked around at the crowd of people.He became frightened,and without another thoug
7、ht,he started to run.第6页/共29页注意注意1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。第7页/共29页Paragraph 1:As he was running,Arthur heard the young man shouting behind,“Stop,stop!”_Paragraph 2:The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur._第8页/共29页文章解析
8、文章解析原文所给关键词分类：地点：Park Avenue,the bank人物：The young man,people,the bank thief事件：suitcases,in the back seat,loud noise of an alarm,robbery,the shouts第9页/共29页在续写时，除了注意原文给出的关键词，还需要注意以下线索：1.Why did the young man look worried?2.What happened?But everyone had a different answer.3.Arthur became frightened an
9、d without another thought,he started to run.第10页/共29页题型介绍选材特点（1）所需阅读的短文词数在350以内；（2）多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。第11页/共29页评分参考阅卷时主要考虑以下内容：（1）与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；（2）内容的丰富性和对所给关键词语的覆盖情况；（3）应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；（4）上下文的连贯性。本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。第五档 21-25 第四档 16-20 第三档 11-15第二档 6-10 第一档 1-5 0分 白卷
10、、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与提供内容不符。第12页/共29页续写特点 读读后后续续写写，简简言言之之，就就是是阅阅读读完完一一篇篇还还未未写写完完的的文文章章之之后后，根根据据要要求求和和提提示示把把这这篇篇文文章章未未写写完完部部分分补补充充完完整整，使使之之浑浑然然一一体体。它它一一方方面面很很好好地地考考查查考考生生对对所所学学语语言言知知识识的的实实际际运运用用能能力力，而而另另一一方方面面，它它也也培培养养学学生生的的发发散散思思维维能能力力。根根据据考考试试说说明明该该部部分分的的规规定定，考考生生在在续续写写文文章章时时，要要注注意意续续写写部部分分“与与所所给给短短文文及及段
11、段落落开开头头语语的的衔衔接接程程度度”，“内内容容的的丰丰富富性性和和对对所所标标出出关关键键词词语语的的应应用用情情况况”，“应应用用语语法法结结构构和和词词汇汇的的丰丰富富性性和和准准确确性性”以以及及“上上下下文文的的连连贯贯性性”。根根据据这这些些规规定定，我我们们会会发发现现读读后后续续写写有有如如下特点：下特点：第13页/共29页（1 1）读后续写不是随心所欲，是要在引导语（开头语）读后续写不是随心所欲，是要在引导语（开头语）和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分。如和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分。如考试说明考试说明样题中样题中规定规定“应使用应使用5 5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语（个
12、以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语（1010处）处）”。这些关键词语类似于传统写作中的要点提示，如。这些关键词语类似于传统写作中的要点提示，如人物、地点、事件，但是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是人物、地点、事件，但是不同点在于这些关键词语并不是全用。这样考生可根据自己的理解有很大的自主权。全用。这样考生可根据自己的理解有很大的自主权。另外，所续写部分不能脱离各自段落的首句开头语，即：另外，所续写部分不能脱离各自段落的首句开头语，即：不能另起炉灶。这些开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，不能另起炉灶。这些开头语与传统写作中的开头语类似，在某种程度上引导你的思路向哪方面发展。在某种程度上引导你的思路向哪方面
13、发展。第14页/共29页（2 2）续续写写短短文文多多以以记记叙叙文文故故事事类类文文章章或或者者夹夹叙叙夹夹议议类类文文章章为为主主，故故事事情情节节有有曲曲折折、有有起起伏伏，但但是是，故故事事线线索索的的逻逻辑辑性性比比较较强强。这这样样考考生生能能够够根根据据提提示示词词语语，顺着原来文章的思路续写文章，并适当发散。顺着原来文章的思路续写文章，并适当发散。（3 3）读读后后续续写写要要求求读读写写并并重重。与与阅阅读读理理解解题题一一样样，读读后后续续写写同同样样需需要要对对本本篇篇文文章章精精确确理理解解，这这样样所所续续写写部部分分才才不不至至于于偏偏离离主主题题，就就这这方方面面
14、而而言言有有点点类类似似阅阅读读理理解解题题中中对对文文章章后后续续发发展展的的推推断断，如如“What What would would happen next?”happen next?”。第15页/共29页（4 4）所所给给文文章章的的未未完完部部分分的的思思路路和和内内容容并并不不一一定定是是唯唯一一的的，考考生生可可以以根根据据自自己己对对文文章章的的理理解解，从从而而对对文文章章的的结结尾尾有有不不同同的的诠诠释释。如如考考试试说说明明中中读读后后续续写写的的样样题题的的结结尾尾，考考生生可可以以理理解解为为这这个个年年轻轻人人是是银银行行抢抢劫劫者者，而而ArthurArthur
15、因因此此成成为为一一个个大大英英雄雄；考考生生也也可可以以理理解解为为这这个个年年轻轻人人不不是是一一个个银银行行抢抢劫劫者者，结果产生了误会。结果产生了误会。第16页/共29页续写步骤（1）精读文章，确定文章线索。每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，如是以时间为线索还是以空间为线索等，这样有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜（结尾）”。（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求。一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生做到“心中有数”。第17页/共29页（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回
16、读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路，同时结合文章划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句。在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。第18页/共29页（5）标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。这一点可以帮助考生自己检查关键词的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。第19页/共29页One possible version As he was running,Arthu
17、r heard the young man shouting behind,”Stop,stop!”And also at the moment,Arthur suddenly realized that the young man might be the bank robber.So Arthur didnt stop,but continued to run until he saw a taxi.He stopped it,jumped in with the suitcase and said to the driver,“Go to the police station,pleas
18、e.The man shouting behind is the bank thief!The taxi raced away like the wind.第20页/共29页 The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told the police what had happened.Obviously,the police had already learned about the robbery.They opened the suitcase and there was a large sum of money
19、inside,as Arthur had expected.Then the police asked Arthur to describe the young man and the other suitcase.Later,with the information,the police caught the robber.The police and the bank both thanked Arthur a lot.(Words 153)第21页/共29页Another possible version As he was running,Arthur heard the young
20、man shouting behind,”Stop,stop!”Thinking of the way the young man had behaved,he realized the young man might be the bank robber.So Arthur ran faster and stopped a taxi.The moment he got into the taxi,he told the driver the man shouting behind was the bank thief and asked him to drive to the nearest
21、 police station.The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away.第22页/共29页 The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur thanked the driver and directly went in.Just as Arthur was describing what had happened near the bank on the Park Avenue and reported the young man to the police,h
22、e heard a voice outside,“Help!Help!”To the surprise of Arthur,it was the young man.He had followed Arthur in another taxi.It turned out that the young man was innocent and inside the suitcases were just some clothes.Arthur felt embarrassed but the policemen thanked him anyway.(Words:158)第23页/共29页备考建
23、议1.充分利用记叙文故事类的阅读理解或者完形填空。考生在做此类文章的试题时，读到适当的位置，可以短暂停止，根据已读部分文章的脉络，对文章进行发散思维，设想可能的几种结尾，最后对照原文的结尾，看自己的设想是否与原文一致。2.经常实施微型化训练，也就是对所读文章的某一段落进行设想。根据某一段落的首句提示，结合文章的上文对该段进行合理设想，具体推断该段可能要讲述的内容。第24页/共29页3.与传统写作类似，续写文章更加要注意句与句之间的连接词，甚至是冠词的暗示作用。如考试说明的样题中 续 写 部 分 的 第 二 段“the Police Station”中 的“the”表明在上一段中已经提到，同时后
24、面的and表明前后之间是并列关系。4.进行适度专题化练习。俗话说，熟能生巧。对于读后续写这一新题型也是如此。通过适度地练习，可以进一步熟知该种题型的特色，更好地掌握该种题型的写作技巧，更有效地调动传统写作的基础知识，从而写出一篇优美的续写短文。需要注意的是，后续写补全的是语篇，而非单词或短语。第25页/共29页写作技巧1.从原文中整理出3-5个小的情节，从中推理出续写的主要情节；2.根据2个段首语来推理情节；3.根据关键词来推理文章的情节发展；4.根据故事的发展，合理地丰富、有条理地增加一些次要情节；5.根据生活常识或者社会经验，丰富文章的一些细节；6.平时多练写微作文，找到自己能掌控的句子长度。第26页/共29页7.多种句型反复尝试，找到自己能掌控的句子类型；8.平时注意积累记叙文，故事方面的词汇、句型和句段，丰富自己的记叙文英语语言材料库；9.注意续写部分的语言风格要和原文的风格相一致；10.适当运用一些篇章技巧，重点情节要浓墨重彩；11.脑中先成文，落笔一气呵成；12.精准使用常见标点符号。第27页/共29页第28页/共29页感谢您的观看！第29页/共29页