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1、Example:MyViewonPuttingWorkUntiltheLastMinute1.现在有些人主张将工作留到最后来做2.我不同意他们的观点,理由是第1页/共18页写作模式及其常用句型:I.第一段引出某些人的做法或看法,并作适当说明(稍作解释即可,最多不要超过两条理由,否则有喧宾夺主之嫌)。第2页/共18页1.Todaymoreandmorepeopleputtheirworkuntilthelastminute.Theyarguethispracticehasseveraladvantages.First,.Second,.2.Recentlyitseemsthattherearem
2、oreandmorepeoplewho.TheythinkthatMoreover/Whatsmore,.3.Nowadaysthereisagrowingtendencyforsb.todosth.Theyholdtheopinionthat.第3页/共18页4.Nowadaysthereisacommonlyheldbeliefthat.Theybelievethat5.Untilquiterecentlymostpeopleholdahostile/negativeattitudetowards.Somepeopleviewitas,whileothersconsiderit第4页/共1
3、8页6.Incurrentsociety,wecomeacrosstoomanypeoplewhoputtoomuchemphasison.Inmanycases,.hasbecomethesolecriterionforjudgingaperson.7.Itbecomesacommontendencythesedaysforpeopleto.第5页/共18页II.第二段是作文的重点段,在段首就开门见山地表明我不同意这种做法或观点,然后进行解释说明。1.IamafraidIcannotagreewiththeiropinion.Tobeginwith,.Inthesecondplace,.La
4、stbutnotleast,2.Aftercarefulconsideration,Ihavetosaytheaboveviewismorethanbiased.Ontheonehand,.Ontheotherhand,.第6页/共18页3.Personallyspeaking,Idonotagreewiththispracticeatall.Firstofall,.Second,.Third,.4.Aftercarefulconsideration,Ithinkactuallyitisnottherealcase.Mostimportantofall,Moreover,.Finally,.5
5、.Recentresearch,however,showsthat.isofgreatbenefitinmanyrespects.第7页/共18页6.Iarguethatweshouldnotputtoomuchemphasison.Tobeginwith,.Moreover,.Whatworriesmemostisthat.7.Inmymind,however,Icannotagreewiththesepeopleonthisoccasion.Aboveall,.Atthesametime,.Inaddition,.第8页/共18页III.第三段得出结论1.Fromtheaboveanaly
6、sis,wemayarriveattheconclusionthatisnotawisechoice.Wedbetterfinishourworkassoonaspossible.2.Wecanseeclearlythatalthoughmaybringsomefavorableresults,therearestillalottoworryabout.Itseemsnecessaryforpeopletomakeacarefulinvestigationbeforedoingsth.第9页/共18页3.Towindupmydiscussion,myconclusionisthatitisno
7、tadvisableforto.For.,isagoodchoice.4.Nowthatwecandrawtheconclusionthat.Whynotmakeagooduseofsth.tomakelifeandworkhappyandfruitful?5.Allthathasbeendiscussedabovepointstothefactthat.6.Inconclusion,.第10页/共18页范范 文文MyViewonPuttingWorkUntiltheLastMinuteToday more and more people put their work until the la
8、st minute.They argue this practice has several advantages.First,the impendingdeadline givesthemalast-minute drive,whichcanhelpthemfinishthejob quickly.Second,if they have a lot of time to finish the job,theycannotconcentrate ontheproject quicklybecausetheyare notpressedbytime.Forexample,somechildren
9、havesomehomeworkforhiswintervacation,buttheyalwaysdoitinthelastweek.第11页/共18页I am afraid I cannot agree with their opinion.To begin with,althoughyoumayfeelanxioustofinishtheworkwhenthedeadlineisdrawing near,it doesnt mean that you can finish your job with highquality.In the second place,a wise man w
10、ill not always leave his taskuntilthelastminute.Ifapersonwantstobehighlyefficient,heshouldlearntodividehistasksintoseveralsmallparts,andsetdeadlinesforeachofthem.Finally,astothechildrenfinishingassignments,Ibelievethattheycannotenjoythemselveswiththeirassignmentsunfinished.第12页/共18页From the above an
11、alysis,we may arrive at the conclusion thatputting work until the last minute is not a wise choice.We shouldcompleteourtasksasefficientlyandquicklyaswecan.第13页/共18页作业:MyViewonTeenagersStudyingAbroad1.现在有很多青少年出国留学2.有些人认为这种做法是有益的3.我认为这种观点是不对的NoontimeRest1.大多数人对午休持否定态度2.研究表明午休是非常有益的第14页/共18页温馨提示:尽量不要拆词
12、移行,尽量控制距离,做到两边对齐(每段的段首空4个字母的格)。如果不嫌麻烦,非要移行,请遵守下列规则:1.单音节词不能拆开移行,如march,though等。2.能构成音节的单个字母不能与原词拆开,分置于两行。如alone,tricky不能拆成a-lone和trick-y。3.分拆到第二行的音节最好至少有三个字母以上,如hated和cabin不能拆成hat-ed和cab-in,应将整个单词写在同一行。4.专有名词不能被拆开,如China和Austen,不能拆成Chi-na,Aus-ten。第15页/共18页5.合成词只能在连字符处拆开,如father-in-law,empty-handed。6.拆词后不能引起歧义,如pea-cock,re-ally就是错误的。7.另起一页时,上一页的最后一个词不能拆开,整个单词写在下一页。8.带有前缀和后缀的单词要从词根处拆开,如re-state-ment,un-relent-ing。9.含有双辅音字母的双音节词从辅音处拆开,如strug-gle,shat-ter。第16页/共18页Writegoodcompositions!第17页/共18页感谢您的观看。第18页/共18页