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1、版高考英语一轮复习课件：专题十七-概要写作课件Writing2(2018浙江金华十校一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。ThefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationintheUSandeveryschooldaytransportsroughly25millionyoungpeopletoschoolandhomeagainaftertheschooldayends.Meanwhile,itisthesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool,acc
2、ordingtotheNationalHighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration(NHTSA).Childrenare70timesmorelikelytoarriveatschoolsafelyontheschoolbusthaniftheyhadtraveledtoschooldrivingthemselvesorridingwithfriends.Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenationsmotorvehiclesafetystandardsthananyothervehi-clesontheroad.Also,severalnew
3、technologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbusesevensafer,suchasvideocamerasontheinsideandoutside,stoparmcameras,GPStrackingandcolli-sionlesseningsystems.Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks,closely-spacedseatsandenergy-absorbingseats.218年Buteventhesafenessofschoolbuseswouldnotcompletelysumup
4、whychildrenaresaferwhenridingthebig,yellowbus.Thebusisonlyassafeastheprofessionalmenandwomenwhodrivethem.AlldriversmustobtainaClassBorCCommercialDriversLicense(CDL).Theyareran-domlytestedforalcoholanddrugs,usuallyhavetheirdrivingrecordchecked,andaregiventhesamereviewofcriminalhistoryasteachersandoth
5、eremployeeswhohavecontactwithstudents.Inordertoserveasaschoolbusdriver,mostapplicantsarerequiredtosuccessfullycompleteatrainingcourse,alongwithinstructionintheclassroomandbehindthewheel.Schoolbusesaresafefortheenvironment,notonlybecauseeachbusreplaces36passengercarsthatwould,butforthebuses,beonthero
6、adtakingandpickingupschoolchildren.Additionally,schoolbusesusealternativegreenfuelslikenaturalgas,andelectricpower.ToddMonteferrario,PresidentoftheNationalSchoolTransportationAssociation,saidparentsshouldrememberthatthesafestandsmartestchoiceistoputtheirchildrenonthebigyellowbuswhentheycan.318年答案答案写
7、作提示本文是议论文。文章主要论述校车的好处。文章的结构为“总分总”模式。第一段是主题段,提出了主要观点。第二至第四段分别是具体的论据。最后一段提出结论。Onepossibleversion:TheschoolbusisthesafestandwisestchoicetoschoolintheUS.(要点1)Firstly,schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped.(要点2)Secondly,thebusdrivershavetopassstrictqualification
8、testsandsafetydrivingtraining.(要点3)Thirdly,schoolbuses,poweredbygreenfuelsenvironmentallysafebyreducingthenumberofprivatecarshittingtheroads.(要点4)Thereforechildrenareencouragedtogotoschoolbyschoolbus.(要点5)418年Writing3(2017浙江衢州高三一模)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Amongallthefastgrowingscienceandtechnology,
9、theresearchofhumangenes,orbiologicalen-gineeringaspeoplecallit,isdrawingmoreandmoreattentionnow.Discussionsaboutitarein-creasinglyheatedaroundtheworld.Thegreatestthingthatgenetechnologycandoistocureseriousdiseasesthatdoctorsatpresentcanalmostdonothingwith,suchascancerandheartdisease.Everyyear,millio
10、nsofpeoplearemurderedbythesetwokillers.Andtodate,doctorshavenotfoundaneffectivewaytocurethem.Butifthegenetechnologyisapplied,notonlythesetwodiseasescanbecuredcompletely,bring-inghappinessandmorelivingdaystothepatients,butalsothegreatamountofmoneypeoplespendoncuringtheirdiseasescanbesaved,thereforeit
11、benefitstheeconomyaswell.Inaddition,thehumanlifespan(寿命)canbeprolonged.518年Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtohealthierandclevererchildren.Somefamilieshavegeneticdiseases.Thismeanstheirchildrenwillforsurehavethefamilialdisease,whichisagreattroubleforthesefamilies.Inthepast,doctorscoulddonothing
12、aboutgeneticdiseases.Butgenetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly.Scientistsjustneedtofindthewronggeneandcorrectit,andahealthychildwillbeborn.Somepeopleareworryingthatthegeneresearchcanbeusedtocreatehumanbeingsinlargequan-tities.Inthepastfewyears,scientistshavesucceededincloninganimalssuchasmice,sh
13、eep,anddogs;therefore,thesepeoplepredictthathumanbabieswouldsoonbeclonedandthatitwouldbebeyondcontrol,leadingtosomedisastrousconsequences.Butmanybelievethatclonedbabieswillnotcomeoutinlargequantities,formostcouplesintheworldcanhavebabiesinaverynormalwayandtheyalsobelievemeasureswillbetakentocontrolg
14、enetechnology.618年答案答案写作提示文章首先介绍了基因工程的好处。最后一段说明了一些不同的观点。在概要写作时,以自然段为概括的基础。Onepossibleversion:Genetechnologyisnowahottopicworldwide.(要点1)Itcanhelppeoplecuredeadlydiseasesandallowthemtoliveahappierandlongerlifewithbettereconomicconditions.(要点2)Genetech-nologyalsomakesitpossibleforpeoplewithgeneticdise
15、asestogivebirthtohealthybabies.(要点3)However,somepeopleareconcernedthatgenetechnologywillbelargelyusedinhumancloningwhileothersdontseeitasaproblem.(要点4)高级语块高级语块givebirthto生出小孩;造成(某事的产生)beconcernedthat.担心718年Writing4(2017浙江“七彩阳光”联盟3月)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。IcantdecidewhatIwanttoeatfordinnertonight.
16、DoIfeellikeItalianfoodorThaifood?IndianorChinese?AmericanorTurkish?Idontneedtotravelaroundtheworld;allthesechoicesareavailableinatypicalinnercityinAustralia.Australianfoodhasmanydifferentculturalinfluences.Overthepastcentury,peoplefrommanycountrieshavecometoAustralia.Thesemigrants(移民)havecontributed
17、tothemeltingpot,thatis,Australianfood.“Whetheryoureaftermodern,traditionalorexoticflavors,Australiaseclecticdiningsceneof-fersawiderangeoftheworldsgreatcuisines(菜肴),”theVisitVictoriawebsitenoted.SomeAustralianfamiliesmayrestricttheirdiettothebasic“meatandthreeveg”meal:onesortofmeat(chicken,beef,lamb
18、,andsoon),alongwiththreedifferenttypesofvegetables(usuallypotatoes,peasandcarrots).Butmostpeopleenjoythevariety.IfIweretopickfourmealsthateveryAustralianeats,theywouldbeItalianspaghettibolognaise818年(意式肉酱面),Chinesefriedrice,BritishfishandchipsandThaigreenchickencurry.ChinesestudentsinAustraliafindit
19、easytogetaChinesemeal.CitieslikeSydneyhavelargeChi-natowns,butmanytownsinthecountryalsohaveaChinesetakeawayrestaurant.PopularAustralian-ChinesedishesmaynotalwaysseemauthenticHoneyChicken,forexamplebutyoucanstillfinddumplingsandnoodles.Evenso,Australiahasitsown,veryAustraliansavory(可口的)dish:meatpie.I
20、tsarealclassic!Thedishisonthemenuateveryhousepartyandsportingvenue(场所),andiseateneverymorn-ingafterabignight.Andwhocouldforgetdesserts?WeAustraliansoftenfightwithNewZealandersoverwhohastherightfulclaimtothepavlova(奶油水果蛋白饼)andlamington(拉明顿巧克力椰丝方形蛋糕)desserts,bothequallydeliciousandsweet.918年答案答案写作提示文章
21、主要是关于澳大利亚饮食的多元化现象。本文段落比较分散,但是其中心主旨还是很明确的。阅读时注意几个相关中心的把握。Onepossibleversion:VariouschoicesoffoodfromaroundtheworldareavailableinatypicalinnercityinAustralia.(要点1)DifferentculturalinfluencescontributetoAustralianfoods.(要点2)ButsomeAustralianfami-liesmayrestricttheirdiettomeatandthreevegwhilemostenjoyit
22、svariety.(要点3)ThoughChi-nesedishesareeasytogetinAustralia,Australianshavetheirownspecialdishes:meatpieanddesserts.(要点4)深度解析深度解析很多概写的文章的自然段结构就反映了文章的要点线索,但是也有的文章,其自然段比较零碎,因此不能依靠自然段的结构来概要写作。这时就要考虑各个自然段在中心方面的相似度,一次来进行概括。高级语块高级语块contributeto对做出贡献佳句背诵佳句背诵Variouschoicesoffoodfromaroundtheworldareavailablei
23、natypicalinnercityinAustralia.DifferentculturalinfluencescontributetoAustralianfoods.1018年Writing1(2018浙江学军中学领航卷)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。CallingLatinadeadlanguageisamatterofsemantics(语义学).Therearethosewhowouldsug-gestLatinisnotdead,andthatitlivesonineverydaylanguageusedbybillionsofpeopleworld-wide
24、.OthersarguethatbecausetherereroutineupdatesonLatinpublishedbytheRomanCatholicChurch,itisstillaliveanddeveloping.However,Latinisnolongerused,onadailybasis,bythevastmajorityofpeopleoutsideofspecificreligioussettings,wheretraditioninfluencesitsuse.Itisnolongeranyonesnativelanguage.Whileitsuseisstillta
25、ught,Latinisnolongerconsideredtobeadevelopinglanguagetothedegreeofmostmodernlanguages.ThereasonsforLatindyingoutarenumerous.PerhapsthemostsignificantonehastodowiththedeclineoftheRomanEmpire.DuringtheRomanperiod,languagewasstandardizedtoagreaterdegree.BecauseRomewasthemostpowerfulpoliticalcountryinth
26、eWesternworldatthetime,B B组组 2016201820162018年高考模拟年高考模拟综合题组综合题组1118年mostofthosewhohadanyambitiontosucceedhadadesiretolearnLatin.Asaresult,thelanguagespreadrapidly.However,thatrapidexpansionwouldeventuallybegintoplateau(处于停滞状态)andfinallydecline.Latincontinuedtobeusedduringthemedievalperiod.Throughout
27、Europe,itremainedthelan-guageofchoice.However,withnothingtounitethecontinent,therewasnoneedforauniformlanguage.Soslowly,overaperiodofhundredsofyears,Latinbegantochangeasdifferentregionsdevelopedtheirowndialects(方言),knownastheRomancelanguagestoday,amongwhichthemostcommonlyspokenandrecognizableareSpan
28、ish,Portuguese,ItalianandFrench.ThoughnotdirectlyrelatedtotheRomancelanguages,Latinstillhasaneffectonmanyotherlan-guages.English,forexample,whichisnotoneoftheRomancelanguagesbutaGermanicone,cantracenearlytwo-thirdsofitswordsbacktoLatinroots.1218年答案答案写作提示本文主要介绍了拉丁语的兴衰。文章有五段,每段自成一个信息群,概括要点时以段落为基础进行即可。
29、Onepossibleversion:SomepeopleassumeLatinisalivinganddevelopinglanguageratherthanadeadone.(要点1)Butmostpeopledontuseitindailylifeanymoreexceptonspecificreligiousoccasions.(要点2)ItsgradualdisappearanceresultedfrommanyfactorsespeciallythefalloftheRomanEmpire.(要点3)WiththeRomanEmpirerisingandfalling,Latine
30、xperienceditsexpansion,stabilityandthendecline.(要点4)AlthoughLatinchangedastheRomancelanguagescameintobeing,itstillinflu-encesmanyotherlanguages,likeEnglish,today.(要点5)高级语块高级语块resultfrom由于withtheRomanEmpirerisingandfalling随着罗马帝国的兴衰expansionn.扩张stabilityn.稳定declinen.衰落1318年Writing2(2018浙江温州二模)阅读下面短文,根
31、据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Lookinsideanyfamilyhomeintheevening,andyoumightseeatypicalenoughscene:MomandDad,eachontheirownlaptoportablet,streamingmovies,catchinguponworkormaybeanswer-ingemailsontheirsmartphones.Meanwhile,onechildischattingonlinewithoneschoolfriendwhiletextinganother.Theotherisplayingavideogam
32、ewithafriendontheothersideofthecityatthesametime.Eachmemberofthefamilyistotallyabsorbedinhisorherownpieceoftech-nologies.Accordingtosomeexperts,theeffectoftechnologyonhumanrelationshipsisworryingastech-nologybecomesasubstituteforface-to-facehumanrelationships.Itappearstobethecasethatmanypeoplewouldm
33、uchratherspendtimewiththeirelectronicgadgets(电子产品)thanwithoneanother.Youngpeoplesayitisdifficulttogettheirparentsattentionandtheyhavetocompetewithsmartphones,tabletsandothertechnologies.However,areportfromthePewInternetandAmericanLifeProjectoffersamorehelpfulanden-couragingview,suggestingthatfarfrom
34、replacinghumancontact,technologycanactuallybetter1418年familyrelationships.Justoverhalfofthe2,253peoplesurveyedagreedthattechnologyhaden-abledthemtoincreasetheircontactwithdistantfamilymembersand47percentsaidithadim-provedthecommunicationwiththepeopletheylivedwith.Moreover,eventheclosestmembersoffami
35、liesneedtimeawayfromeachotheratsomepointtoseektheirowninterests.Familymem-berswhomightotherwisehavesatinseparateroomscannowbeinthesameonewhilestilloccu-pyingadifferentmentalspace.Lookbackatourtypicalfamilysceneabove.Isitanydifferentfromfourpeoplereadingtheirownbooks?Orisitdrivingfamilyapart?Wheretec
36、hnologywillleadusremainstobeseen.Yetthereisnoneedtoworry.Asamatteroffact,howitaffectsourfamilyrelationshipsdependsonouratti-tudetowardtechnology.1518年答案答案写作提示本文结构清楚,但是概括要点时要注意文章的观点在前后有很大的转折和对比,而且其观点和我们平时的对电子产品的社会主流观点并不一致,因此在写概要前一定要读懂原文,不要受固有观点的影响。Onepossibleversion:Nowadaysfamilymembersareoftenfound
37、lostintheirownelectronicproducts.(要点1)Someex-pertsfearthattechnologycanaffectfamilyrelationshipsforlackofface-to-facecommunication.(要点2)However,areporthasfoundtechnologybenefitsfamilybondsinthatitmakesmemberscloserandprovidesprivatementalspaceaswell.(要点3)Actually,nottechnologyitselfbutpeoplesattitud
38、etowardsitinfluencesfamilyrelations.(要点4)高级语块高级语块inthat因为;由于belostin沉迷于attitudetowards对的态度1618年Writing3(2018浙江宁波重点高中联考)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Smalltalk.Chitchat.Thesearetheshortconversationswehaveatparties,whilewewaitinlineatthestore,atfamilyeventsorwork.Sometimeswemakesmalltalkwithpeoplewealread
39、yknowbutnotwell.Oftenwehavetomakesmalltalkwithcompletestrangers.Manypeoplefindsuchsmalltalkaboutrandomtopicsdifficult.Somepeoplesaytheyhateit.Otherssaysmalltalkisawasteoftime.Theymayevencallitidlechitchatoridlechatter,meaningitdoesntdoanything.Theyconsidersmalltalknotimportant.However,smalltalkisimp
40、ortant.Smalltalkcanopendoorsthatmayleadtolarger,moremeaningfulconversations.Whenyoufirstmeetsomeoneortalktosomeoneyoudontknowwell,itwouldbeawkwardtobeginaconversa-tionaboutareallydeeptopicsuchaswar,politicsorthemeaningoflife.Smalltalkalsogivesyouthechancetodecideifyouwanttogetknowthatpersonbetterorn
41、ot.Letssayyoumakesmalltalkwithsomeoneataparty.Buttheyonlywanttotalkaboutcats.Youmaynotwanttobuildafriendshipwiththemunlessyoureally,reallylovecats.1718年Chitchatcanalsoincreaseyourfeelingofunderstanding,towardpeopleyouknowbutnotwell.Chattingwithacolleagueabouttheirchildmayhelpyoutounderstandmoreofthe
42、irlifeoutsidetheoffice.Thiscouldhelpbuildhealthyworkrelationships.Smalltalkcouldevenhelpyourlargercommunitiesyourrelationshipswithneighbors.Exchang-ingrecipeswithaneighborinyourapartmentbuildingmaymakehernoisesupstairseasiertolivewith.In2011,mostcommuters(通勤者)inthecityofChicagosaidtheywouldenjoy“qui
43、etcars”wheretheysataloneanddidnottalktoanybody.ResearchersattheUniversityofChicagothenaskedsomeparticipantsinastudytotalktopeoplewhilecommutingtoworkonatrain.Theyfoundthatthosewhomadesmalltalkwithstrangerswerehappierthanthosewhosatalone.1818年答案答案写作提示概要写作一般要以自然段为基础归纳概要。但是本文自然段比较多,而个别段落的中心比较接近,可以将这些相关
44、的段落进行合并。Onepossibleversion:Althoughsmalltalkisdislikedbymanypeople,itisactuallyofvitalimportanceinourdailylife.(要点1)Firstly,smalltalkcannotonlyleadtomeaningfulconversationsbutalsohelpyoudecidewhethertofurtheryourrelationship.(要点2)Besides,throughsmalltalk,youcanbuildbetterrela-tionshipswithyourcollea
45、guesandneighbors.(要点3)Whatsmore,researchersalsofindthatsmalltalkcanmakepeoplehappier!(要点4)高级语块高级语块beofvitalimportance具有重要的作用furtheryourrelationship推进你们的关系buildbetterrelationships建立更好的关系1918年Writing4(2017浙江温州中学3月模拟)阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。GUANGZHOUAtleast25peoplehavebeenconfirmeddeadafterTyphoonUsa
46、gimadelandfallinChinasGuangdongProvinceonSundayevening,accordingtotheprovincialfloodcontrolheadquarters.“ElectricityandwatersupplywerecutoffintheHuilaicounty,Jieyangcity,andhouseswerecol-lapsedaswindspeedsatthecenterexceeded180kmperhouronSundayafternoon,”saidLiFeng,aborderpoliceofficerofthecity.Inte
47、rcitytrainsbetweenGuangzhou,ShenzhenandZhuhaiweresuspendedat6pmandnearly50trains,includingthosealongthehigh-speedlinestoBeijing,ShenzhenandHongKong,willbesuspendeduntilTuesday,accordingtotheGuangzhouRailwayCorporation.2018年AtaXiechenggasstationonNationalRoad324nearShanweicity,whereatleast13ofthe25vi
48、c-timswerekilled,windswerestrongenoughtoblowcarsofftheroadandalltrafficwasstopped.ResidentLiHuolongsaidhewasonhiswayhomeinShanweiwhenthebackwindowofhiscarwasbrokenbythewind.Educationalauthoritiesin14citiesorderedschoolstosuspendclassesonSunday,aschooldayinChinabecauseofthethree-dayMid-AutumnFestival
49、whichjustended.Morethan47,000fishingboatswereinharbor,withnearly20,000fishermenkeptonshore.Allbeachesintheprovincehavebeenclosed.2118年答案答案写作提示本文是说明文,介绍了台风“天免”对广东造成的破坏。概括时要注意要点,要照顾到台风破坏的各个主要方面。因为涉及并列信息的叙述,因此要注意概写的句子之间的顺畅连接。Onepossibleversion:TyphoonUsagistruckChinasGuangdongProvincejustaftertheMid-Au
50、tumnFestival,causingatleast25deaths.(要点1)Inadditiontohavingdamagedmanyhouses,italsostoppedtrafficandtransportsandevensomecarswereblownofftheroad.(要点2)Whatsworse,electricityandwa-tersupplywerecutoff,anditalsokeptfishermenonshoreandstudentsoffschool.(要点3)Allbeachesintheprovincehavebeenclosed.(要点4)高级语块