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1、琼州学院附属中学张云华 Still waters run deep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深 Where there is life,there is hope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望China Dream(中国梦）中国梦）Do you have the dream to go to the moon on a spaceship?(你们有乘坐宇宙飞船登上月球这个梦想吗？你们有乘坐宇宙飞船登上月球这个梦想吗？)如果有一天你得到一次乘坐宇宙飞船去如果有一天你得到一次乘坐宇宙飞船去登月球的机会，有可能带去的食物在宇宙飞登月球的机会，有可能带去的食物在宇宙飞船里漂浮着而让你吃不着。
2、请用英语写一篇船里漂浮着而让你吃不着。请用英语写一篇小短文来描述一下这个困难，并提供一种你小短文来描述一下这个困难，并提供一种你将如何防止这个困难发生的方法，且对自己将如何防止这个困难发生的方法，且对自己将要进行的月球之行进行预测。将要进行的月球之行进行预测。要求：要求：1.字数为字数为100120。2.卷面整洁，字迹工整。卷面整洁，字迹工整。ruth生活在太空站（流畅）_320 x240_2.00M_h.264_baofeng.flvGPSTPSWhat will help the drivers to find their destination?什么将帮助这些司机找到他们的目的地？什么将
3、帮助这些司机找到他们的目的地？Global Positioning System 全球定位系统全球定位系统GPSTPS Tense（时态（时态）Person（人称）（人称）Structure（结构）（结构）What should we mainly pay attention to while writing an article?(在写作时，我们主要应该注在写作时，我们主要应该注意什么？）意什么？）The target of this period:1.To use the“TPS”method to write the article.2.To evaluate(评价）评价）the art
4、icle.如果有一天你得到一次乘坐宇宙飞船去如果有一天你得到一次乘坐宇宙飞船去登月球的机会，有可能带去的食物在宇宙飞登月球的机会，有可能带去的食物在宇宙飞船里漂浮着而让你吃不着。请用英语写一篇船里漂浮着而让你吃不着。请用英语写一篇小短文来描述一下这个困难，并提供一种你小短文来描述一下这个困难，并提供一种你将如何防止这个困难发生的方法，且对自己将如何防止这个困难发生的方法，且对自己将要进行的月球之行进行预测。将要进行的月球之行进行预测。要求：要求：1.字数为字数为100120。2.卷面整洁，字迹工整。卷面整洁，字迹工整。书面表达：（满分书面表达：（满分2525分）分）Conclusion:总结总
5、结Body paragraph:主体部分主体部分Lead-in:导入导入:Imemythe foodititswill do do/does/is/am/areConclusion:总结总结Body paragraph:主体部分主体部分Lead-in:导入导入prediction:预测预测difficulty:困难困难solution:解决解决 方法方法 液体食物液体食物:However,we human beings are to overcome.liquid foodSo it is hard to 固体食物solid food 装入试管装入试管put it into a tube用吸管
6、来吸with a straw I believe I will have ifI wont,instead,I will.Why I will do so is that I cangravity重力重力spaceship宇宙飞船宇宙飞船float around漂浮漂浮There is very little,which makes things there.:will do:I do/does/is/am/arememythe foodititsThere is very little,which makes the things there So it is hard to However
7、,we human beings are to overcome.I wont,instead,I will.Why I will do so is that I can I believe I will have ifWriting time!minutes10987 6 5 432 111121313 12 11 10 9 8 7 6 5 4 3 2 1 059 seconds585756555453525150494847464544434241353637384039346272829303132331617181920212223242526 78 910111213141554 3
8、 21 00start There is very little,which makes the things there.So it is hard to However,we human beings to overcome.I wont,instead,I will.Why I is that I can I believe I will have if Evaluate the writing according to the evaluation sheet.（评价时间）（评价时间）Have correct tense and persons (正确的正确的时态时态和人称）和人称）5
9、 4 3 2 1Have a clear structure （结结构清晰）构清晰）5 4 3 2 1Cover all the points（覆盖所有要点）（覆盖所有要点）5 4 3 2 1Use good phrases and sentences（运用好（运用好词词好句）好句）5 4 3 2 1Handwriting （书书写）写）5 4 3 2 1Grammar mistakes 标标点点错误错误：（：（1个减个减0.5）拼写拼写错误错误：（：（1个减个减0.5）句子句子结结构构错误错误：（一句减：（一句减2分）分）时态错误时态错误：整体：整体时态错误时态错误减减7分分个个别时态错误别
10、时态错误：酌情：酌情 搭配搭配错误错误：酌情：酌情 总总分分 喜欢的喜欢的好词好词好句好句 评评估者估者签签名名TPS It is a fact that there is very little gravity in the spaceship.It is well known that too little gravity can make things float around.So it is hard to eat the taken food if we will visit the moon on a spaceship.However,we human beings are c
11、lever enough to prevent such a little difficulty from taking place.It is true that the solid food will float around in the spaceship.I wont take solid with me,instead,I will take liquid food which is put in a tube if I have a chance to visit the moon on the spaceship.Why I will do so is that I can e
12、asily eat it by using a straw.In a word,I believe I have the ability to stop the difficulty taking place and have a happy visit to the moon if given such a chance.It is a fact that there is very little gravity in the spaceship,which makes things there float around.So it is hard to eat the taken food
13、 if we will visit the moon on a spaceship.However,we human beings are clever enough to overcome such a little difficulty.It is true that the solid food will float around in the spaceship.So I wont take solid food with me,instead,I will take liquid food which is put in a tube if I have a chance to vi
14、sit the moon on the spaceship.Why I will do so is that I can easily eat it by using a straw.In a word,I believe I have the ability to overcome the difficulty and have a happy visit to the moon if given such a chance.Evaluate your deskmates article according to the evaluation sheet in your hand.Practice makes perfect.熟能生巧。熟能生巧。Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it.只要功夫深，铁杵磨成针只要功夫深，铁杵磨成针。