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1、一。评分原则1。CET-4作文题采用总体评分方法.阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分.而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分2。从内容到语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判.要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想。也要 考虑语言上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍，用词和造句是否清楚而确切的表达思想。二。评分标准1。本题满分为15分。2。阅卷标准共分五等：2分，5分，8分，11分，14分。2分-条理不清.思路紊乱.语言支离破碎.大部分句子有错误。且多数为严重错误。5分-基本切题,表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多严重的语言错误。8分-基本切题,表达思想比较清楚,文章尚连贯,但语言错误较多，11分-切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯
2、，但有少量语言错误。14分-切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误。3。评分标准第1页/共20页4。字数不足者应酌情扣分。累计字数在 81-89之间.扣1分。71-80之间.扣2分。61-70之间.扣3分。51-60之间.扣4分。50字以下.最多给5分。100-119扣1分;90-99扣3分;80-89扣4分;70-79扣5分;60-69扣6分;50-59扣7分;不足50扣9分。5。只写一段者：0-4分，只写两段者：0-9分，第2页/共20页2001年6月Part V Writing(20 minutes)Directions:For this part,you are a
3、llowed thirty minutes to write a letter.Suppose you are Zhang Ying.Write a letter to Xiao Wang,a schoolmate of yours who is going to visit you during the week-long holiday.You should write at least 100 words according to the suggestions given below in Chinese.1.表示欢迎2.提出度假安排的建议3.提醒应注意的事项A Letter to a
4、 Schoolmate June 23,2001 Dear Xiao Wang,Yours,Zhang Ying第3页/共20页分析样卷1 A Letter to a Schoolmate You cant imagine how happy I was when I heard that you would come to visit me.We havent seen each other for a long time,so I am counting the days.I have arranged a schedule for our holiday.You havent been
5、to Shanghai before.When you see it,you will be hard to believe your eyes.Shanghai is very modern.First,we will go out for shopping,and then go some sight-seeings,such as Yu Yuan Garden and People square.If you like,we can go to see some old friends.I bet they will be as happy as I am when seeing you
6、.Do you like the suggestion I made above?If there is something unsuitable,we will talk about them when you arrive.OK?Oh,please remember to bring your winter clothes with you,because Shanghai is a little bit colder than siChuan.Remember me to your parents.have arranged a schedule you will be hard to
7、believe your eye go out for shopping go some sight-seeings,such asPeople square.Oh第4页/共20页修改分析样卷1 A Letter to a Schoolmate You cant imagine how happy I was when I heard that you would come to visit me.We havent seen each other for a long time,so I am counting the days.I have arranged a schedule for
8、our holiday.(have draw up a schedule for your holiday.).(As you)You havent been to Shanghai before.(I guess the first thing youd like to do is make a tour of the city.You will find it hard to believe your eyes when you see it,for it is very modern now.)When you see it,you will be hard to believe you
9、r eyes.Shanghai is very modern.First,we will go out for shopping,and then go some sight-seeings,(So first,we will go sightseeing,such as(visiting)Yu Yuan Garden and(the)People(s)square.(Then we will do some shopping.)If you like,we can go(and)to see some old friends.I bet they will be as happy as I
10、am(to)when seeing you.(What do you think of)Do you like the suggestion I made above?If there is something unsuitable,we will talk about(it)them when you arrive.OK?第5页/共20页(By the way,dont forget to bring)Oh,please remember to bring your winter clothes with you,because Shanghai is a little bit colder
11、 than SiChuan.(Remember to give my regards)Remember me to your parents.第6页/共20页评析：11分优点：内容切题，提纲要求的三个方面都写到了，文字简洁，层次清楚，语言错误比较少。不足之处：1 文章的组织不够严密。2 句子结构和词语搭配上都有一些错误。第7页/共20页 A Letter to a Schoolmate分析样卷2 Im very glad that you will come to see me during the week-long holiday.We have not seen each other f
12、or two years.So this time we can spend the holiday together will make me so happy.Since you left Shanghai two years ago,Shanghai has changed a lot.The city is more beautiful and buildings are higher.You will surely superise the changes.I have helped you to make some arrangments during the holiday.We
13、 can go shopping in Nanjing Road which is the best road of Shanghai.We can go to peoples square and history museum to visit.We can also visit the jingMao Building which is the highest building of China.Shanghai has many new and good place we can visit.The time table of visit we can make when you com
14、e.What do you think of my advice.By the way,you should telephone me when you come to Shanghai,I will meet you in the railway station.Im waiting for your come.第8页/共20页 A Letter to a Schoolmate分析样卷2 Im very glad that you will come to see me during the week-long holiday.We have not seen each other for
15、two years.So this time we can spend the holiday together will make me so happy.Since you left Shanghai two years ago,Shanghai has changed a lot.The city is more beautiful and buildings are higher.You will surely superise the changes.I have helped you to make some arrangments during the holiday.We ca
16、n go shopping in Nanjing Road which is the best road of Shanghai.We can go to peoples square and history museum to visit.We can also visit the jingMao Building which is the highest building of China.Shanghai has many new and good place we can visit.The time table of visit we can make when you come.W
17、hat do you think of my advice.By the way,you should telephone me when you come to Shanghai,I will meet you in the railway station.Im waiting for your come.第9页/共20页 A Letter to a Schoolmate (修改分析样卷2)Im very glad that you will come to see me during the week-long holiday.We have not seen each other for
18、 two years.（The fact that we can spend the holiday together this time will make me so happy.)So this time we can spend the holiday together will make me so happy.(Shanghai has changed a lot since you left it two years age.)Since you left Shanghai two years ago,Shanghai has changed a lot.The city is
19、more beautiful and buildings are higher.(You will surely be surprised at the changes.)You will surely superise the changes.I have helped you to make some arrangments during(arrangements for your)the holiday.We can go shopping in Nanjing Road which is the(business center)best road of Shanghai.We can
20、go to(the Peoples Square and visit the History Museum)peoples square and history museum to visit.We can also visit the JingMao Building which is the highest building of China.Shanghai has many new and(good places)good place we can visit.The time table of visit we can make when you come(We can makese
21、t up a timetable when you come.).What do you think of(it)my advice.第10页/共20页 By the way,you should telephone me when you come to Shanghai,I will meet you(at)in the railway station.Im waiting for your come.(Im looking forward to your arrival.)第11页/共20页评析：8分优点：内容切题，条理基本清楚，前后也还连贯，作者基本上能 表达自己的意思，读者也基本上能
22、看懂。不足之处：该考生对英语语法和词汇的掌握还需要进一步提高，文章 中句子结构上的严重错误较多，有明显的按中文语序造句 的痕迹。第12页/共20页分析样卷3 A Letter to a Schoolmate I am delighted to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.I know you are fond of
23、 swimming.A river lies not far away from my home.We can go swimming there.I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days.In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner,we can watch TV,play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home.A mountain.about two mi
24、les away from here there is beautiful and it is worth touring.We can go there on foot.When we climb to the top of the mountain,we can have a wonderful bird-eye view of the whole village.Just phone me before you set off.There is no need for you to take anything.Ill prepare everything for you.I am loo
25、king forward to seeing you soon.第13页/共20页 修改分析样卷3 A Letter to a Schoolmate I am delighted to learn that you are going to visit me during the week-long holiday.My parents will also be happy to see you again.I am sure you will enjoy every minute here.I know you are fond of swimming.A river lies not fa
26、r away from my home.We can go swimming there.I think it would be very pleasant and refreshing to swim in such hot summer days.(Besides)In every big room of my home there is an air-conditioner,we can watch TV,play VCDs or read books very comfortably at home.A mountain.about two miles away from here t
27、here is beautiful and it is worth touring.(About two miles away from here there is a beautiful mountain and it is worth climbing.).We can go there on foot.When we climb to the top of the mountain(reach its top.),we can have a wonderful bird-eye(birds-eye)view of the whole village.第14页/共20页 Just phon
28、e me before you set off.There is no need for you to take anything.Ill prepare everything for you.I am looking forward to seeing you soon.第15页/共20页评析：14分优点：内容切题，提纲要求的三个方面都写到了，文字简洁 流畅，连贯性较好，其文体亦是个人书信常用的口语体。该考生语法概念清楚，句子结构正确，词语搭配基本符 合英美人的习惯。不足之处：1.touring 应为 climbing.2.Bird-eye view 应为 birds-eye view.3
29、第2段第4句和第5句之间的连接需加一个转折词。如：besides,in addition,in the meantime.第16页/共20页分析样卷4 A Letter to a Schoolmate I have know you will come to Shanghai.Three years ago,you went to the England.From then,we havent meet with each other.I welcome that you can return your country.From your letter,I have known you hav
30、e a week-long holiday.Thereis a great change in Shanghai.I think you must be feel suprised with what you see.So I advise you vist some place,that we often went ago.And you can visit some old-classmates.They also mise you very much.If you dont want to hotel,you can live in my home.Youd better buy a m
31、ap.Im afraid you will be at a lost.But even if you cant find bus stop,you still can go to anywhere by taxi.I hope you will have an unforgetable holiday.第17页/共20页分析样卷4 A Letter to a Schoolmate I have know you will come to Shanghai.Three years ago,you went to the England.From then,we havent meet with
32、each other.I welcome that you can return your country.From your letter,I have known you have a week-long holiday.Thereis a great change in Shanghai.I think you must be feel suprised with what you see.So I advise you vist some place,that we often went ago.And you can visit some old-classmates.They al
33、so mise you very much.If you dont want to hotel,you can live in my home.Youd better buy a map.Im afraid you will be at a lost.But even if you cant find bus stop,you still can go to anywhere by taxi.I hope you will have an unforgetable holiday.第18页/共20页评析：5分 内容基本切题，但由于语言错误很多，且多为严重错误。使得作者无法把思想表达清楚。文章的连贯性自然也很差，只能得5分。象这样的考生，在写的能力上与大纲要求还有 相当大的距离，须花大力气迎头赶上。第19页/共20页感谢您的观看。第20页/共20页