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1、雅思写作高分范文：冷门题目 为了帮助大家备考，学习啦特为大家收集整理了雅思写作高分范文：冷门题。更多雅思报名官网的最新消息，最新、最专业的雅思备考资料，学习啦将第一时间为大家发布 雅思写作高分范文：冷门题目 Many people are optimistic about the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with their optimism? What changes woul
2、d you like to be made in the new century? Many people are optimistic about the twenty first century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes in the world.(留意：这句话照抄了原题，考试时这样做会被扣分的!) Given(作介词，表示“考虑到”) current trends however this optimism is certainly unwarranted. If we are to see our way
3、 safely into the twenty second century, many fundamental changes still need to be made. The world has been changed in the twenty first century; advancements in medicine and technology have changed life and lifestyles for virtually all of the peoples of the world. Not only have these advancements bro
4、ught society forward, it has brought society onto the cusp of a new era(新纪元的起先), the entire direction of human development is now changing from that of single nations eking out an existence(很好的短语，表示“牵强维持生活”)in some corner of the world, to the people of the world drawing together(团结起来) to take on pro
5、jects and research that could never be accomplished in isolation. These changes however, have not all been positive. The environmental impact of industrialization has changed the face of the world as well, polluting oceans and rivers, stripping (剥夺)the world of some of its oldest and most verdant fo
6、rests (绿色森林)darkening the sky with air pollution, poking holes in the protective ozone layer, and leading to the development of radioactive poisons(放射型毒物) capable of poisoning the earth and continuing to poison it for millions of years to come. Meanwhile, man is beset by(被困扰) problems of overpopulat
7、ion and pollution. Like vermin, man is being overcome by his own filth and inability to stop reproducing. Mans development in the last century has been massive, but in both directions, both forward and backward. This combination of development and destruction seems to be the basic nature of man, but
8、 if we are to survive, we must realize that progress, at the cost of ourselves is not only unacceptable but the path to destruction. 雅思技巧：雅思好作文的标准如何定义 写好作文有三个标准，分别为统一性、完整性，连贯性，下面，我们就来对这三个标准做一具体说明。 首先，一个段落必需有一个中心即主题思想，该中心由主题句特殊是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落必需紧扣这个主题(stick or hold to the topic)，这就是段落的统一性(unity)。其次，一个段
9、落必需有若干推展句，使主题思想得到充分绽开，从而给读者一个完整的感觉，这就是完整性(completeness or adequateness)。再者，一个段落不是杂乱无章的，而是有机的组合，句子的排列依次必需合乎逻辑，从一个句子到另一个句子的过渡必需流畅(smooth)，这就是连贯性(coherence)。 1. 统一性 一个段落内的各个句子必需从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想之外的句子都是不行取的。请看下例： Joe and I decided to take the long trip we'd always wanted across the country. We were
10、like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the country. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch
11、 at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. 本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the country。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这 一段是讲的是Joe and
12、 I ，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。考生在四级统考的作文卷上经常因为造出 irrelevant sentences(不相关语句)而丢分，值得引起留意。再看一个例子： My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program.
13、 In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was
14、 a premature baby. 本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有两个irrelevant sentences，一个是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一个是My mother was a premature baby。 从上面两个例子可以看出，native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上假如这种句子多了，造成偏题或离题，那问题就更严峻了。 2. 完整性 正象我们前面说得那样，一个段落的主题思想靠推展句来实现，假如只有主题句而没有
15、推展句来进一步交待和充溢，就不能构成一个完整的段落。同样，虽然有推展句，但主题思想没有得到相对圆满的交待，给读者一种意犹未尽的感觉。这样的段落也不能完成其交际功能。例如： Physical work can be a useful form of therapy for a mind in turmoil. Work concentrates your thoughts on a concrete task. Besides, it is more useful to work - you produce something rather than more anxiety or depres
16、sion. 本段的主题句是段首句。本段的两个推展句均不能回答主题句中提出的问题。什么是 "a mind in turmoil"(心境不安静)Physical work又如何能变更这种状况?为什么它能起therapy的作用?读者得不到明确的答案。 段首句所表达的主题思想是一种看法，必需有详细事例加以验证。上述两个推展句只是在文字上对主题作些说明，整个段落内容空洞，简而不明。假如用一两个详细的例子的话，就可以把主题说明清晰了。比如下段： It is not always true that a picture is worth a thousand words. Sometim
17、es, pictures are pretty useless things. If you can't swim and fall in the river and start gulping water, will you be better off to hold up a picture of yourself drowning, or start screaming "Help"? 3.连贯性(coherence) 连贯性包括意连和形连两个方面，前者指的是内在的逻辑性，后者指的是运用转换词语。当然这两者经常是不行分割的。只有形连而没有意连，句子之间就没有内
18、在的有机的联系;反之，只有意连而没 有形连，有时行文就不够流畅。 1) 意连 段落中句子的排列应遵循肯定的次序，不能想到什么就写什么。假如在下笔之前没有构思，边写边想，写写停停，那就写不出一挥而就的好文章来。下面介绍几种常见的排列方式。 A.按时间先后排列(chronological arrangement) We had a number of close calls that day. When we rose, it was obviously late and we had to hurry so as not to miss breakfast; we knew the dining
19、 room staff was strict about closing at nine o'clock. Then, when we had been driving in the desert for nearly two hours - it must have been close to noon - the heat nearly hid us in; the radiator boiled over and we had to use most of our drinking water to cool it down. By the time we reached the
20、 mountain, it was four o'clock and we were exhausted. Here, judgement ran out of us and we started the tough climb to the summit, not realizing that darkness came suddenly in the desert. Sure enough, by six we were struggling and Andrew very nearly went down a steep cliff, dragging Mohammed and
21、me along with him. By nine, when the wind howled across the flat ledge of the summit, we knew as we shivered together for warmth that it had not been our lucky day. 本段从 "rose"(起床)写起，然后是吃早餐("not to miss breakfast", "closing at nine o'clock")，然后是 "close to noon&q
22、uot;，始终写到这一天结束("By nine-")。 B. 按位置远近排列(spatial arrangement)。例如： From a distance, it looked like a skinny tube, but as we got closer, we could see it flesh out before our eyes. It was tubular, all right, but fatter than we could see from far away. Furthermore, we were also astonished to not
23、ice that the building was really in two parts: a pagoda sitting on top of a tubular one-story structure. Standing ten feet away, we could marvel at how much of the pagoda was made up of glass windows. Almost everything under the wonderful Chinese roof was made of glass, unlike the tube that it was s
24、itting on, which only had four. Inside, the tube was gloomy, because of the lack of light. Then a steep, narrow staircase took us up inside the pagoda and the light changed dramatically. All those windows let in a flood of sunshine and we could see out for miles across the flat land. 本段的写法是由远及近，从远处(
25、"from a distance")写起，然后"get closer"，再到(" ten feet away")，最终是 "inside the pagoda"当然，按位置远近来写不等于都是由远及 近。依据须要，也可以由近及远，由表及里等等。 C. 按逻辑关系排列(logical arrangement) a. 按重要性依次排列(arrangement in order of importance) If you work as a soda jerker, you will, of course, not nee
26、d much skill in expressing yourself to be effective. If you work on a machine, your ability to express yourself will be of little importance. But as soon as you move one step up from the bottom, your effectiveness depends on your ability to reach others through the spoken or the written word. And th
27、e further away your job is from manual work, the larger the organization of which you are an employee, the more important it will be that you know how to convey your thoughts in writing or speaking. In the very large business organization, whether it is the government, the large corporation, or the
28、Army, this ability to express oneself is perhaps the most important of all the skills a man can possess. 这一段谈的是表达实力，它的重要性与职业，身份有关，从"not need much skill"或 "of little importance"到 "more important"，最终是 "most important"。 b.由一般到特别排列(general-to-specific arrangement)
29、 If a reader is lost, it is generally because the writer has not been careful enough to keep him on the path. This carelessness can take any number of forms. Perhaps a sentence is so excess. 雅思技巧：雅思写作细微环节把握很重要 词 学习英语没有捷径可走，从最简洁的单词起先，对学生来说，雅思写作词汇量越大越好，特殊是在写作中要表达同样或相像意思的时候，假如能够做到多变而不重复，那确定会给阅卷者留下深刻的印象
30、。在背和记的过程中，语感会自然而然地增加，其潜移默化的效果在短期内效果并不明显，但坚持两三个月你就会感到，原来英语也不是那么爱和自己过不去。之后是多写作多练习，把自己在课堂上的东西要先驾驭，然后再尽量在平常的文章中运用出来，这样才是真正的属于自己的东西。 句 据视察发觉，在写作的句型方面，始终以来都存在一个误区，就是许多考生认为句型越困难越长越能体现自己的水平。其实不然，抛开写又长又困难的句子简单出错不说，单是从语言的流畅性和阅卷者思路的持续性来看，这样的表达很可能不但不能给文章加分，反而会弄巧成拙，由于逻辑关系过多而被扣分。其实，句子的多样性取决于句子类型的丰富性，一篇文章能够娴熟运用不同的
31、句型。换句话说，它考察的是考生能否像当地居民一样写出地道的句子。既考察考生简洁句和困难句的综合运用实力，还考察考生对不同的句型的驾驭状况。 除去以上两点之外，还须要留意的就是细微环节问题： 标点 要合理的利用标点符号，严格根据英文书写格式进行答卷。 大小写 句首单词字母大小写问题，虽然说起来很简洁，但也是许多学生简单忽视的问题。在句号、叹号、问号后面的单词须要大些，这谁都清晰，但也要留意冒号、破折号、括号后面，并不是一个独立的新句子，所以首字母仍旧要小写的。 分段 学生在雅思写作培训班中，信任老师都会有提示到学生写作的分段要求。不止是雅思写作，其实在我们从刚起先的英语写作练习中，就已经有分段要
32、求的提出。当你拿着一篇只有一段的很长的文章时，是不是会有很晕的感觉?或者说，当你看的文章分成许多的段落，而你的论证实力有限，费了半天劲也写不出几个句子，会不会每段都给人以流水账的感觉呢?所以，对于写作，想用写作形式来掩盖内容的不足，又能给阅卷者留下好的印象，那么请把Task1段落划分限制在3-5段，Task2限制在4-6段。这样既能让段落安排清楚，又可避开论证过多太分散中心思想。 合理安排考试时间 雅思写作考试共1小时时间，大小作文分别限制为40和20分钟相对较合理。也可依据自身状况进行调整。复习时，假如时间充裕，可先把多数精力放在大作文上，而假如离考前只有1、2星期，则要侧重小作文练习。短时
33、间内小作文比大作文拿分要简单的多。 总而言之，雅思写作词汇是雅思写作的细微环节要求也是基础要求。学生即使进行雅思写作培训班的报考，也依旧逃脱不了词汇的记忆和背诵。因为，它的存在是学生进行细微环节写作熬炼的门槛，只有加固词汇，才能将门槛顺当的跨越过去。 雅思技巧：雅思写作不要抄袭模板原文 雅思作文要不要抄袭范文?“天下文章一大抄。”其实，任何英文学习(广泛地说，任何的语言学习)都须要仿照，也就是“抄袭”。英文从简洁的抄起，直抄到深邃的。只有不断地仿照，“抄袭”，才可以熟能生巧，在考场上写出敏捷多变的句子来。许多考生道听途说国内考官的手里都有一些中国人编的所谓雅思写作权威书籍，因此照抄书上的作文无
34、甚用处，会被扣分。这种推断特别荒谬，缘由有三： 首先，许多所谓的权威书籍并非权威，里面的八分范文并非八分。笔者曾拿过国内一本“赫赫出名”的书给国外的老师看。他们看后纷纷摇头，说不知所云。这种文章尚且可以蒙骗语言阅历尚浅的学生，却不行以蒙骗考官。学生即使背得滚瓜烂熟，也不过是背一篇不及格的文章而已。再说，目前中国人写的文章极少有考官情愿多看一眼的，更别说会够到被人珍藏的级别。分类总结雅思写作题目对于大家的雅思写作学习还是很有帮助的。 其次，即使范文够上了级别，学生是不是完全背下来了，背得恰当与否又是不得而知。有的学生背了片言只语，然后融合自己写的一堆病句错句，分数不志向就起先怀疑考官是否打击仿照
35、范文的考生。又或者，考生死记硬背，看到题目类似就誉写上去，而没有考虑到题目修改所带来的改变(本书会详细说明)，试问一篇文不对题的文章怎样得六分? 再者，重申一句，语言都是仿照而来，包括考官本人的英文学问也是日积月累地仿照而来。对一件事情的描述其实大同小异，因此假如描述得当，文字上有雷同并不惊奇。考官不会期盼着你对一件事物有前无古人，后无来者的叙述;反之，他只会接受外国人所遵循的一种一般的，常见的叙述方法。 换言之，假如你的描写接近英文的一般模式，你就会得高分。再简洁一点说，你抄得越象，越简单得高分。恒久记住一句话：全部的考试都是将合格的学生考出来，而不是将不合格的考生考出去。 雅思写作高分范文：冷门题目本文来源：网络收集与整理，如有侵权，请联系作者删除，谢谢！第16页 共16页第 16 页 共 16 页第 16 页 共 16 页第 16 页 共 16 页第 16 页 共 16 页第 16 页 共 16 页第 16 页 共 16 页第 16 页 共 16 页第 16 页 共 16 页第 16 页 共 16 页第 16 页 共 16 页