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1、TalkingTalking3a Write notes about how you Write notes about how you have changed in your appearance,have changed in your appearance,personality and hobbies.Then talk personality and hobbies.Then talk with a partner about your changes.with a partner about your changes.第1页/共20页Appearance:Appearance:t
2、all,short,fat,thin,slim,strong,young,old,straight hair,curly hair,long hair,short hair,a medium bodyTalkingTalking第2页/共20页Personality:humorous,outgoing,serious,funny,smart,friendly,shy,helpful,quiet,active,brave,unfriendly.hobbies:read cartoon/novel,sing,dance,playfootball/basketballTalkingTalking第3
3、页/共20页What makes a good composition?What makes a good composition?DiscussionDiscussion第4页/共20页写作步骤写作步骤审题立意定主人称时态用词得当检查修改第5页/共20页写作时写作时找关键词由词组句组句成段扩句成段第6页/共20页ContentContentEverything needed included which Everything needed included which is related to your view.is related to your view.(内容要完整内容要完整)第7
4、页/共20页StructureStructureGood beginning and endingGood beginning and ending (好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)Well organized and smoothly developedWell organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅)Proper linking words between Proper linking words between sentencessentences(使用恰当的连接词)(使用恰当的连接词)第8页/共20页Write sentenc
5、es by using used to:Write sentences by using used to:1.I/have curly hair/have straight hair1.I/have curly hair/have straight hairI used to have curly hair,but now I have straight hair.I used to have curly hair,but now I have straight hair.2.I/so fat/thin2.I/so fat/thinI used to be so fat,but now I a
6、m thin.I used to be so fat,but now I am thin.第9页/共20页Write sentences by using used to:Write sentences by using used to:3.I/shy/outgoing and brave3.I/shy/outgoing and braveI used to be shy,but now I am outgoing and brave.I used to be shy,but now I am outgoing and brave.4.I/read books on martial arts/
7、read books on Western 4.I/read books on martial arts/read books on Western culturecultureI used to read books on martial arts,but now I read I used to read books on martial arts,but now I read books on Western culture.books on Western culture.第10页/共20页Write sentences by using used to:Write sentences
8、 by using used to:1.我过去是走路上学的。I used to go to school on foot/walk to school.I used to go to school on foot/walk to school.2.我过去喜欢跑步,但现在我喜欢打篮球。I used to like running,but now I like playing I used to like running,but now I like playing basketball.basketball.第11页/共20页Proper linking words between Proper
9、 linking words between sentencessentences(连接词)(连接词)first,second,third(the most important)first,second,third(the most important)firstly,secondly,thirdly(finally),firstly,secondly,thirdly(finally),首先,第二,第三第12页/共20页表示举例子:表示举例子:for example for example 例如TakeTakefor examplefor example 以为例such as such as
10、比如like like 像第13页/共20页表示转折:表示转折:however(but)however(but)然而(但是)表示个人观点:表示个人观点:In my viewIn my view 在我看来In my opinionIn my opinion 我认为As far as I am concernedAs far as I am concerned 就我而言第14页/共20页 Write about how you have changed.Write about how you have changed.What did What did you use to be like?Whi
11、ch you use to be like?Which change is the most change is the most important one,and important one,and why?why?3b第15页/共20页Try to write threeparagraphs.(总分总)(总分总)Paragraph 1:General introduction about the changes in your life.Paragraph 2:The most important change and how it happened.Paragraph 3:To exp
12、ress your own ideas 第16页/共20页How Ive Changed!How Ive Changed!My life has changed a lot in the last few years.I used to_.Now Im _.The biggest change in my life was_ _.This is the most important change because_.第17页/共20页How Ive Changed!My life has changed a lot in the past few years.I used to have so
13、much time,but now Im too busy.I always used to get up early and stay in school all day.Before I go to high school,I used to spend lots of time playing games with my friends,but I just dont have the time anymore.In the evening,I used to watch TV or play computer games,but now I have to study.第18页/共20页I love music,and my father used to take me to concerts.But I still really love my present life.The biggest change in my life was Im more busy than before,because I went into high school and I have morehomework.第19页/共20页感谢您的观看!第20页/共20页