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1、会考模拟作文练习Tips 表达方式表达方式 9:0011:30We began our work at nine oclock and ended at half past eleven.We worked from nine to eleven thirty.结尾的感受要联系文章内容。结尾的感受要联系文章内容。描述活动的形容词描述活动的形容词 a meaningful experience an unforgettable experience a beneficial experience Last Saturday,my class organized a volunteer activ
2、ity.My classmates and I went to the city park near our school,where we did some volunteer work.We got there at nine oclock.As soon as we arrived there,we were divided into three groups,and then we began to work.Some helped water trees and flowers.Some cleaned the benches and picked up litter.Others
3、cleaned the childrens playground.Time passed quickly.Before we knew it,it had been 11:30 and we had to go back.We didnt finish the work until 11:30.It was time for us to leave.All of us were happy because we did something good to others and to the environment.I believe this activity can increase peo
4、ples awareness of environmental protection.Protecting the earth is protecting ourselves.Last Saturday,my class organized a volunteer activity.My classmates and I went to the city park near our school.As soon as we got there at nine oclock,we were divided into three groups.Some helped water trees and
5、 flowers.Some cleaned the benches and picked up litter.Others cleaned the childrens playground.Although we were very tired,we felt very happy because we did something good to the environment.(73 words)12-14分分 上周六我们班组织了一个志愿者活动。我和我的同学们去了学校附近的城市公园。九点我们到达那个公园。一到那儿我们就被分成三组,然后开始工作。有的帮忙浇树和花,有的擦长凳,还有的捡垃圾。时间
6、过得很快,不知不觉,就到了11:30.我们该回去了。我们所有人都很高兴,因为我们为他人和环境做了好事。我相信这个活动可以提高人们环保的意识。节水周志愿者作文节水周志愿者作文-tips认真审题,认真审题,“请参考以下信息,完成你的个人简介,并说明你申请成为志愿者的目的。”确定以下内容确定以下内容 内容:内容:个人简介个人简介+目的或原因目的或原因 时态:时态:一般现在时一般现在时 结构:结构:2段或段或3段段 应当适当加入连接词以使内容连贯,应当适当加入连接词以使内容连贯,条理清晰条理清晰For one thing,For another thing,whats more/besides/in
7、addition/furthermore in a word/in short节水周志愿者作文节水周志愿者作文-tips 在所给的每一条要点后,可以有在所给的每一条要点后,可以有适当的展开或补充,以达到丰富内适当的展开或补充,以达到丰富内容的目的。容的目的。节水周志愿者作文节水周志愿者作文-tips 对对有兴趣有兴趣 sb.be interested in sb.be keen on sb.be enthusiastic about sb.have/show/express an interest in 正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 我想要成为一名我想要成为一名志愿者。志愿者。Id like
8、to become a volunteer of Id like to work as a volunteer for.Id like to take part in as a volunteer.正确的语言表达正确的语言表达我擅长说英语我擅长说英语 ,因此我能够和外,因此我能够和外国人流利地国人流利地/自如地交谈。自如地交谈。I am good at speaking English so I can communicate/talk with foreigners fluently/freely.正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 我有我有的习惯。的习惯。I am in the habit of
9、 doing sth.I have the habit of doing sth.I have a good habit of doing sth.养成养成的习惯的习惯 form/get into the habit of doing sth.摆脱摆脱的习惯的习惯 get rid of the habit of doing sth.正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 阐述做某事的原因阐述做某事的原因 I want to do because+句子句子 The reason why I do is that+句子句子 I want to do .Thats why I want to do 正确的语言
10、表达正确的语言表达阐述目的阐述目的 I want to do so that I can do I want to do in order that I can do In order to do,I want to do正确的语言表达正确的语言表达 为为做贡献做贡献 make contributions to sth./doing sth.将自己致力于将自己致力于 devote oneself to sth./doing sth.将自己的时间,精力,金钱贡献给将自己的时间,精力,金钱贡献给 devote ones time/energy/money to 正确的语言表达正确的语言表达正确的语
11、言表达正确的语言表达 介绍姓名,身份,来自何方介绍姓名,身份,来自何方 My name is .I am a Senior 2 student from.I am Li Hua,a Senior 2 student studying at .I am a Senior 2 student called Li Hua studying at/who study atTIPS 文体:议论文 时态:现在时现在时结构:3段:一方的看法;另一方的看法;我的看法议论文常用句型议论文常用句型开头句开头句:Different people have different opinions on the prob
12、lem/the matter.陈述一方观点:陈述一方观点:Some people think/consider thatSb.are in favor of the idea that Sb.are in favor of doing sth.Sb.hold the idea that 陈述另一方观点:陈述另一方观点:The other people are against this idea/opinion/view.Sb.dont agree to the idea.Sb.dont think that sb.should do 陈述自己的观点:陈述自己的观点:In my opinion,
13、As far as I am concerned,议论文常用句型议论文常用句型连接词连接词 首先,其次:首先,其次:on one hand,on the other handfor one thing,for another thing递进关系递进关系:also,besides,whats more,in addition,furthermore,moreover转折关系:转折关系:but,however,on the contrary Different students have different opinions on it.Some students think it is a go
14、od idea to keep pets,Pets can comfort old people who live alone.Besides,pets can make our life interesting.Example writing becausePets can company people and bring happiness to them.On the contrary,the other students are against the idea.If too many people keep pets at home,its bad for the environme
15、nt.Also,pets may be noisy and even attack people.What more,they spread diseases.Example writing be noisy 吵闹;喧杂make noise 制造噪音 In my opinion,we can keep pets at home.But meanwhile we should pay attention to the environment when walking pets.Only in this way,can we enjoy the pleasure with pets and pro
16、tect our world.Example writing 改错 They think keep pets is bad for the environment.They think keeping pets is bad for the environment.the Winter Asian Games 志愿者志愿者 将写作要点合理组合:将写作要点合理组合:*年龄,性别年龄,性别 *学历及英语水平学历及英语水平 *爱好体育,熟悉本地爱好体育,熟悉本地 *善于交往,乐于助人善于交往,乐于助人 *承诺:提供最好服务承诺:提供最好服务 *合适的结尾合适的结尾the Winter Asian G
17、ames 志愿者志愿者 Dear Sir/Madam,My name is Li Hua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the Winter Asian Games.(写信的目的写信的目的)I am a boy/girl of 17 and I am studying at high school now.I am good at English and I can talk with foreign tourists in English freely.I believe I can do a good job for the Games.F
18、irst,I like sports and I know the place very well(I am familiar with the host city because it is my hometown).Second,I get along with others easily.It is especially useful for a volunteer.Besides,Im ready to give help whenever it is needed.My promise is to offer the best service to the people at the Games.,which Please consider my request,and Im looking forward to your early reply.Your faithfully,Li Hua