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1、 英语写作应注意的问题英语写作应注意的问题 如何给赶工的判卷人好印象如何给赶工的判卷人好印象1.尽量按照所给要点条目的顺序写，这样方便批卷人找要点。（文笔潇洒到激发食欲，令人欲罢不能者随意。）2.字体不可小，字数不可少。3.低级错误要杜绝。因为低级错误直接告诉批卷人that你不行。（如果你不懂什么是低级错误，那么你犯得基本全都是低级错误。）4.文章的第一句、第一个要点、最后一个要点和最后一段最好能写出水平。因为一旦批卷人进入扫视状态，这些地方最容易给人留下好印象，有可能会一好遮百丑。（注意这里说的是有几率，遮不上的话也请保持淡定。）英文的书写和移行英文的书写和移行书写规范书写规范：英文字母要写
2、清楚、整齐、美观，字母的大小和字母之间的距离要匀称。书书写禁忌写禁忌:适当词距勿紧靠。保持干净勿勾抹。尽量勿拆词移行。恒平竖直勿乱点。写作技巧与具体步骤写作技巧与具体步骤 应对技巧：牢记应对技巧：牢记“一式、两头、三写、四关一式、两头、三写、四关”的应试要诀。的应试要诀。一式一式:关注文章体裁，写对格式；关注文章体裁，写对格式；两头两头:写好文章的开头和结尾；写好文章的开头和结尾；三写三写:大小写、拼写和书写无误；大小写、拼写和书写无误；四关四关:过好内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关和习惯表达关。过好内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关和习惯表达关。具体步骤：具体步骤：1.审题审题 确定文体、
3、人称、时态 明确内容要点2.列纲列纲（选用适当英语短语提炼要点）（选用适当英语短语提炼要点）3.紧扣要点，连词成句紧扣要点，连词成句 4.分清层次，连句成文分清层次，连句成文 5.修改润色，把握字数修改润色，把握字数 6美观誊写，消灭错误美观誊写，消灭错误 7通读全文，检查疏漏通读全文，检查疏漏 注意：增强书面表达效果的技巧注意：增强书面表达效果的技巧一一.复杂结构复杂结构:1.使用适当的时态使用适当的时态 2.适当的语态适当的语态3.使用不定式使用不定式 4.使用过去分词使用过去分词5.使用使用V.+ing形式形式 6.使用名词性从句使用名词性从句 7.使用状语从句使用状语从句 8.使用定语
4、从句使用定语从句9.使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气10.使用强调句使用强调句,倒装句倒装句,感叹句感叹句 11.使用并列句使用并列句 12 使使with 结构结构 一、怎样运用复杂结构：一、怎样运用复杂结构：1.1.改变时态改变时态The bell is ringing now.(一般一般)2.2.改变语态改变语态People suggest that the conference be put off.(一般一般)There goes the bell.(There goes the bell.(高级高级)It is suggested that the conference be put off
5、.It is suggested that the conference be put off.(高级高级)3.3.使用不定式使用不定式4.4.使用过去分词使用过去分词He is so kind that he can help me.(一般一般)He is so kind as to help me.He is so kind as to help me.(高级高级)She walked out of the room and many students followed her.(一般一般)Followed by many students,she.Followed by many stu
6、dents,she.(高级高级)Once it is seen,it can never be forgotten.(一般一般)Once seen,it can .Once seen,it can .(高级高级)5.5.使用使用v-ingv-ing形式形式When he arrives please give me an e-mail.(一般一般)If the weather permits,Ill come tomorrow.(一般一般)On his arriving/arrival,please give.On his arriving/arrival,please give.(高级高级)
7、Weather permitting,Ill come tomorrow.Weather permitting,Ill come tomorrow.(高级高级)Now our school has three teachers.They teach 48 pupils.(一般一般)Now our School has three teachers,teaching 48 Now our School has three teachers,teaching 48 pupils.pupils.(高级高级)It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up
8、.(一般一般)I happened to have met him.(一般一般)6.6.使用名词性从句使用名词性从句The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.everybody.(高级高级)It happened that I had met him.It happened that I had met him.(高级高级)To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.(一般一般)W
9、hat surprised him is that the girl.What surprised him is that the girl.(高级高级)7.7.使用状语从句使用状语从句I wont believe what he says.(一般一般)If you come back before six oclock,you can go out.(一般一般)The meal was very nice.We all enjoyed it very much.(一般一般)No matter what he says,I wont believe.No matter what he says
10、,I wont believe.(高级高级)You can go out on condition that you come back You can go out on condition that you come back before.before.(高级高级)The meal was so nice that we all.The meal was so nice that we all.(高级高级)8.8.使用定语从句使用定语从句The girl is spoken highly of.Her composition was well written.(一般一般)The girl
11、 whose composition was well written was The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of.spoken highly of.(高级高级)I studied Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistry and computer at school.(一般一般)The subjects I studied at school included Chinese,The subjects I studied at school included C
12、hinese,maths,English.maths,English.(高级高级)9.9.使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气The ship didnt sink because there were the efforts of the captain.(一般一般)I wasnt invited to the party,so I didnt attend it.(一般一般)If I had been invited to the party,I would have If I had been invited to the party,I would have attended it.attende
13、d it.(高级高级)But for the efforts of the captain,the ship would But for the efforts of the captain,the ship would have sunk.have sunk.(高级高级)10.10.使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.(一般一般)It was not until 1920 that regular radio.It was not until 1920 that regular radio.(高级高
14、级)Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.(高级高级)Though Im weak,I will make the effort.(一般一般)How glad we were to see the crops and.!How glad we were to see the crops and.!(高级高级)We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well.(一般一般)11.11.使用并列句使用并列句If you go thr
15、ough the gate,youll find the entrance to Bear Country.(一般一般)Go through the gate,and youll find.Go through the gate,and youll find.(高级高级)I got up late this morning,otherwise I could have I got up late this morning,otherwise I could have caught the early bus.caught the early bus.(高级高级)I got up late th
16、is morning.I didnt catch the early bus.(一般一般)The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.(高级高级)When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(一般一般)12.with结构 A terrible accident happened yesterday,with nine people killed and almost eighty injured.He was carryin
17、g a bedroll and a large bag on his shoulder,with a large suitcase in his left hand.注意长句和短句相结合二、怎样运用高级词汇：二、怎样运用高级词汇：As a result,the plan was a failure.(一般一般)She went to Austria in order to study music.(一般一般)Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.(一般一般)The plan turned out to be a fai
18、lure.The plan turned out to be a failure.(高级高级)She went to Austria for the purpose of studying She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.music.(高级高级)Thanks to the good weather,our journey.Thanks to the good weather,our journey.(高级高级)At the news of her deathAt the news of her death,he wen
19、t.he went.(高级高级)She has trouble in pronouncing the wordShe has trouble in pronouncing the word.(高级高级)Whose turn is it to be on duty today?Whose turn is it to be on duty today?(高级高级)When he heard she had died,he went pale with sorrow.(一般一般)She cant correctly pronounce the word.(一般一般)Who will be on du
20、ty today?(一般一般)怎样运用高级词汇：怎样运用高级词汇：She doesnt like sports.She cares nothing for sports.She cares nothing for sports.We had to go home.What we had to do was go home.What we had to do was go home.高级词汇的替换importantsignificant wayapproach,methoduseadopt understand/knowfigure out butnevertheless soconsequen
21、tly,thereforebecause ofdue to like to do/want to dobe inclined to do,be willing to finishaccomplish advantages and disadvantagespros and consoccur 替换 think ofDevote 替换spendAmazing 替换surprising be supposed to 替换should He is supposed to(should)have driven more slowly.appreciate 替换thankcontribute to 替换
22、 be helpful/usefulbe crazy about/be absorbed in/be addicted to替换be interested in do sb a/the favor 替换help the majority of 替换mostspare no efforts to do 替换try ones best to doMeanwhile 替换at the same timeOccasionally 替换sometimes/once in a while 提高英语写作分数的提高英语写作分数的38个词组个词组1.经济的快速发展 the rapid development o
23、f economy 2.人民生活水平的显著提高/稳步增长the remarkable improvement/steady growth of peoples living standard3.先进的科学技术 advanced science and technology4.面临新的机遇和挑战 be faced with new opportunities and challenges5.人们普遍认为 It is commonly believed/recognized that6.社会发展的必然结果 the inevitable result of social development7.引
24、起了广泛的公众关注 arouse wide public concern/draw public attention8.不可否认 It is undeniable that/There is no denying that/9.热烈的讨论/争论 a heated discussion/debate10.有争议性的问题 a controversial issue11.完全不同的观点 a totally different argument12.一些人 而另外一些人 Some people while others13.就我而言/就个人而言 As far as I am concerned,/Pe
25、rsonally,14.就达到绝对的一致 reach an absolute consensus on15.有充分的理由支持 be supported by sound reasons16.双方的论点 argument on both sides17.发挥着日益重要的作用 play an increasingly important role in18.对必不可少 be indispensable to 19.正如谚语所说 As the proverb goes:20.也不例外 be no exception21.对产生有利/不利的影响 exert positive/negative effe
26、cts on22.利远远大于弊 the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages。23.导致，引起 lead to/give rise to/contribute to/result in24.复杂的社会现象 a complicated social phenomenon25.责任感/成就感 sense of responsibility/sense of achievement26.竞争与合作精神 sense of competition and cooperation27.开阔眼界 widen ones horizon/broaden ones v
27、ision28.学习知识和技能 acquire knowledge and skills29.经济/心理负担 financial burden/psychological burden30.考虑到诸多因素 take many factors into account/consideration31.从另一个角度 from another perspective32.做出共同努力 make joint efforts33.对有益 be beneficial/conducive to34.为社会做贡献 make contributions to the society35.打下坚实的基础 lay
28、a solid foundation for36.综合素质 comprehensive quality37.无可非议 blameless/beyond reproach38.致力于/投身于 be committed/devoted to三、常见语法错误分析：三、常见语法错误分析：1.1.句子缺谓语句子缺谓语1)The building like a match box.1)The building like a match box.2)2)He told me that all my classmates sitting in He told me that all my classmates
29、 sitting in the classroom.the classroom.1)A worker of the farm lead us to the field.1)A worker of the farm lead us to the field.2)All the students like books that was written by 2)All the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.Lu Xun.2.2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。主语时，谓
30、语的单复数形式出现错误。3.3.时态错误时态错误 4.4.词性混用词性混用 1)When he came back,he found that his wife 1)When he came back,he found that his wife has gone to bed.has gone to bed.2)What are you doing this time yesterday?2)What are you doing this time yesterday?1)She enjoys study English.1)She enjoys study English.2)If any
31、one against the plan,please let me 2)If anyone against the plan,please let me know.know.5.5.介词误用介词误用 6.6.冠词误用冠词误用 1)In my surprise,he has got the first prize.1)In my surprise,he has got the first prize.2)He came here to attend the meeting by a new 2)He came here to attend the meeting by a new car.ca
32、r.3)Dont read under the sun.3)Dont read under the sun.1)We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five.1)We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five.2)Once upon a time,there was an one-eyed lion.2)Once upon a time,there was an one-eyed lion.3)The history is actually a very interesting subject3)
33、The history is actually a very interesting subject.7.7.名词的数混淆名词的数混淆 8.8.动词用法错误动词用法错误 1)It is rare to see such a nice weather in 1)It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing.Beijing.2)There is always traffic jam.2)There is always traffic jam.1)Where are you come from?1)Where are you come from?2
34、)When I arrived Hong Kong,my mother was there 2)When I arrived Hong Kong,my mother was there waiting for me.waiting for me.3)He didnt notice the teacher to come into the 3)He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom.classroom.4)The accident was happened in 1999.4)The accident was happened
35、 in 1999.9.9.习惯用法错误习惯用法错误 1)The actor in this movie is very beautiful.1)The actor in this movie is very beautiful.2)I and My parents were working in the fields at 2)I and My parents were working in the fields at that time.that time.3)The reason is because he does not know what to 3)The reason is bec
36、ause he does not know what to do next.do next.四、学会使用恰当的关联词：四、学会使用恰当的关联词：1.1.表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系andand，bothand,as well as,together with,bothand,as well as,together with,neithernor,also,not onlybut also,neithernor,also,not onlybut also,eitheror,as well.eitheror,as well.2.2.表示转折关系表示转折关系but,yet,how
37、ever,nevertheless but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而然而),),in in spite of,although,otherwise,while,after allspite of,although,otherwise,while,after all.3.3.表示对比关系表示对比关系4.4.表示因果关系表示因果关系on the contrary,instead of,on one handon on the contrary,instead of,on one handon the other hand,just like,unlike,in the
38、 same the other hand,just like,unlike,in the same way,at the same timeway,at the same timeso,for,therefore,as a result(of),because,so,for,therefore,as a result(of),because,owing to,due to,thanks to,on account owing to,due to,thanks to,on account(理由理由)of.of.5.5.表示时间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系6.6.表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关
39、系shortly afterwards,first,second,then,next,shortly afterwards,first,second,then,next,finally,for one thing,for another,in the end,finally,for one thing,for another,in the end,eventuallyeventually(最后最后,终于终于)besides,furthermore besides,furthermore(此外此外),),whats more,in whats more,in addition,moreover
40、addition,moreover(而且而且),),worse still,to make worse still,to make matters worse,indeed,certainly,surely,above allmatters worse,indeed,certainly,surely,above all7.7.表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系8.8.表示结论表示结论namely namely(也就是也就是),),actually,such as,for example,for actually,such as,for example,for instance,that is
41、 to say,in other words,and so on,instance,that is to say,in other words,and so on,to tell you the truth,according to thisto tell you the truth,according to thisin short,in brief,in a word,in general,as you know,in short,in brief,in a word,in general,as you know,as far as I know,on the whole,in concl
42、usion,at last,as far as I know,on the whole,in conclusion,at last,finallyfinally七、背诵一些题材的常识性语句：七、背诵一些题材的常识性语句：通知：通知：开头语开头语:结束语结束语:Attention,please.Attention,please.May I have your attention,May I have your attention,please?please?I have an announcement to makeI have an announcement to make.Dont forg
43、et the time and the address.Dont forget the time and the address.Im sure you will have a lot of fun.Im sure you will have a lot of fun.Thats all,thank you.Thats all,thank you.欢迎词：欢迎词：开头语开头语:结束语结束语:Welcome to Welcome to Now let me tell you something about Now let me tell you something about Im going
44、to give you a detailed description ofIm going to give you a detailed description ofLet me show you aroundLet me show you aroundIm sure youll have a good trip.Im sure youll have a good trip.Thats all,thank you.Thats all,thank you.写信：写信：开头语开头语:结束语结束语:Im glad to hear from you.Im glad to hear from you.I
45、m writing to tell you something aboutIm writing to tell you something aboutHow are you getting along with your?How are you getting along with your?I really dont know how to thank you forI really dont know how to thank you forPlease give my best regards to.Please give my best regards to.Remember me to your parents.Remember me to your parents.Im looking forward to hearIm looking forward to hearngng from you from you soon.soon.Best wishes.Best wishes.