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1、2010年年12月大学四月大学四级Part I Writing(30 minutes)Directions：For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled How Should Parents Help Children to Be Independent?You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.1.目前不少父母目前不少父母为孩子包孩子包办一切一切2.为了了让孩子独立孩子独立,父母父母应该How S
2、hould Parents Help Children to Be Independent?今年的作文主今年的作文主题非常非常贴近考生的生活，近考生的生活，给了考生了考生很大的很大的发挥空空间，擅，擅长写日常生活写日常生活细节的学生可的学生可以写上三五个句子勾勒父母以写上三五个句子勾勒父母对于子女的于子女的过度关度关爱，而擅而擅长逻辑思考的学生思考的学生则可以更多地可以更多地阐述父母怎述父母怎样的行的行为才可以培养子女独立的品格，而才可以培养子女独立的品格，而过度度宠爱正正导致了独立精神的消失。致了独立精神的消失。从具体操作的角度来从具体操作的角度来说，对于基于基础较为薄弱的考薄弱的考生，生，
3、这次的考次的考试题目是比目是比较容易套用模板的，第容易套用模板的，第一段，把一段，把现实状况描述清楚；第二段，写清楚父状况描述清楚；第二段，写清楚父母母亲帮助子女独立的策略；第三段，呼吁父母帮助子女独立的策略；第三段，呼吁父母亲多多给自己一些自由。怎自己一些自由。怎样解决解决(解决方案的解决方案的优缺缺点点)How Should Parents Help Children to be Independent Nowadays,there is a growing concern over such a phenomenon,that is,some parents take care of a
4、lmost everything concerned with their children,including study,work,marriage.Some parents believe that this is love,however,it is only to destroy childrens independence thoroughly.For the future of the next generation,more efforts should be made by parents to help their children to be independent.Th
5、e fundamental one is to cultivate the awareness,namely,the importance and necessity of being independent,which is supposed to begin from childhood.Children should be taught that no one can be stronger and more helpful than themselves in this world.The quality of independence is so indispensable for
6、us that parents had better act as a tutor,not a dictator.And only with parents trust,can the next generation accumulate confidence step by step.In recent days,we have to face a problem-A,which is becoming more and more serious.-(说明明A的的现状状)Confronted with A,we should take a series of effective measur
7、es to cope with the situation.For one thing,-(解决方法一解决方法一).For another-(解决方法二解决方法二).Finally,-(解决方法解决方法三三).Personally,I believe that-(我的解决方法我的解决方法).Consequently,Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because-(带来的好来的好处).像像这样子的模板能子的模板能够帮助无帮助无话可可说，或者，或者说英英语表达能力比表达能力比较弱的同学迅速找到思路，只需要填弱的同学迅速找到思路，只
8、需要填入关入关键的字的字词就可以完成作文。就可以完成作文。但是但是对于能于能够用流用流畅的英的英语表达自己的思路的同表达自己的思路的同学来学来说，写作如果希望取得比，写作如果希望取得比较高的分数，高的分数，则需需要注意要注意语言必言必须尽可能尽可能简洁才能才能够在在规定字数以定字数以内内说清楚自己的清楚自己的论点，而句子的表达要求，也从点，而句子的表达要求，也从有有话可可说，上升到，上升到言之有理言之有理，甚至上升到，甚至上升到语言精言精致致优美美，内在内在逻辑严密密的高度了。的高度了。在我在我们给出大家的出大家的这篇范文里面，三段文字篇范文里面，三段文字结构构清晰，清晰，语言言简明明优美又没
9、有落入模板的窠臼，属美又没有落入模板的窠臼，属于在于在临场作文中的作文中的优秀之作。秀之作。2010年年6月大学四月大学四级Part I Writing(30 minutes)Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:1.如今不少学生在
10、英如今不少学生在英语学学习中不重中不重视拼写拼写2.出出现这种情况的原因种情况的原因3.为了改了改变这种状况，我种状况，我认为Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Now we are entering a brand new era full of opportunities and innovations,and great changes have taken place in peoples attitude towards some traditional practice,especially in the area of Englis
11、h learning,one of which is that less attention has been given to spelling by college students.This issue has been brought into public focus and called for further concern.A number of factors could account for the problem,but the followings are the most critical ones.First,information is expanding at
12、 such an increasing rate that our society is called the one of information.The information is so immense that students haven t ample energy and time to deal deeply with spelling,and some computer programs,such as word,have done the spelling checking work for us.Second,the standardized-test oriented
13、way of English learning,in which the high score can be achieved without spelling,put students to the position in which they have the quite reason to ignore spelling.This issue may lead to a number of unfavorable consequences,with the following two the most serious.For one thing,the information would
14、 be incorrect when conveyed by hand-writing way and cause some bad effects.For another,we may indulge ourselves in this way of inaccuracy which may influence our attitude of learning or research.The awareness of the importance of this issue should be enhanced and some proper measures should be taken
15、.It is reasonable for us to believe that the situation will be improved in the near future.2009年年12月大学英月大学英语四四级考考试试题Part Writing(30 minutes)Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic ofCreating a Green Campus.You should write at least 120 words following
16、the outline given below:1.建建设绿色校园很重要色校园很重要2.绿色校园不色校园不仅指指绿色的色的环境境3.为了建了建设绿色校园，我色校园，我们应该Creating a Green Campus2009年年12月大学英月大学英语四四级考考试答案答案Part Writing审题谋篇篇本次四本次四级作文主作文主题为“绿色校园色校园”，这是一个看似是一个看似简单普通的普通的话题，写起来却不是那么容易。因，写起来却不是那么容易。因为很很多考生多考生对于于“绿色校园色校园”所表达的内涵感所表达的内涵感觉比比较生僻。生僻。假如假如对“绿色校园色校园”这一主一主题感到感到难以把握，考
17、生可以把握，考生可以从作文提以从作文提纲入手入手进行分析以行分析以获取取对“绿色校园色校园”这一概念的相关信息。一概念的相关信息。根据作文提示根据作文提示2，可以看出此，可以看出此处的的“绿色校园色校园”指的指的决不决不仅仅是青青的草地和高大的是青青的草地和高大的树木构成的校园木构成的校园绿色色风景，也不景，也不仅仅指指对校园校园环境的珍境的珍视和和爱护，而，而是指一种是指一种环境保境保护的文化氛的文化氛围和和师生具有的生具有的环境素境素养，以及由此养，以及由此带来的和来的和谐的人文的人文环境和社会境和社会绩效。效。在深入理解概念的基在深入理解概念的基础上，考生上，考生还应对“绿色校色校园园”
18、的重要性的重要性进行剖析，行剖析，这时，考生可以从多个，考生可以从多个角度角度组织素材，比如从校园的素材，比如从校园的环境境问题出出发，进而而扩展到展到师生的生的环境意境意识对“绿色校园色校园”所所产生的生的长远意意义以及以及为未来未来环境改善所做的境改善所做的贡献。献。最后是最后是阐述建述建设“绿色校园色校园”所要采取的措施。所要采取的措施。需要注意的就是作文需要注意的就是作文给分的重点在于考生如分的重点在于考生如何用恰当的何用恰当的语言言词汇表达自己的思想表达自己的思想观点。而点。而不是写得越多，得分就越高。一般分成三个自不是写得越多，得分就越高。一般分成三个自然段，大概十句然段，大概十句
19、话，基本的分布，基本的分布为首段、末段首段、末段合起来五句或六句，中合起来五句或六句，中间段五句或四句，做到段五句或四句，做到结构清楚，重点突出，就可以了。构清楚，重点突出，就可以了。Creating a Green CampusRecently,with the idea of making and maintaining“a green earth”being the focus of the society,“green campus”has become a more and more popular concept in universities or colleges,which,
20、undoubtedly,will bring us an ever-lasting benefit to both our campus and our society.The concept of“green campus”does not only mean a green environment but also refers to an environmental sense in peoples mind.Campus plays a crucial role in educating the young generation and the consciousness of“gre
21、en campus”will definitely produce a profound effect on students various environmental protection activities after their graduation.Whats more,the young generation is under the burden of severe environmental pollution and there are many problems waiting for them to solve.To make“green campus”come tru
22、e,firstly,it is necessary to work out effective principles for the development of sustainable and recyclable campus.Secondly,it calls for peoples awareness of the serious pollution around us and actual action to reduce the waste.Last but not least,it is necessary to strengthen the ties between campu
23、s and society,so as to ensure that“green campus”can work smoothly with the co-effort of the whole society.建建设绿色校园色校园近来，随着建近来，随着建设并保持并保持“绿色地球色地球”的的观念成念成为社社会关注的焦点，会关注的焦点，“绿色校园色校园”也成也成为校园里流行的校园里流行的话题。这无疑会无疑会给我我们的校园和社会的校园和社会带来来长远的利益。的利益。“绿色校园色校园”不不仅仅指指绿色的色的环境，境，还包括人包括人们头脑中的中的环境意境意识。学校在培养年。学校在培养年轻一代上起着关一
24、代上起着关键作用，作用，“绿色校园色校园”的意的意识必定会必定会对学生学生毕业后的后的环境保境保护意意识产生生长远影响。更影响。更为重要的是，年重要的是，年轻一一代面代面临着着严重的重的环境境污染，有太多染，有太多问题等待他等待他们去去解决。解决。为使使“绿色校园色校园”成成为现实，首先，首先应该制定出可持制定出可持续发展、可展、可长远发展的有效政策。其次，展的有效政策。其次，还需要人需要人们对环境境污染的染的严肃性有正确性有正确认识并采取并采取实际行行动切切实减少减少污染。最后但同染。最后但同样重要的是，有必要加重要的是，有必要加强学校和社会的学校和社会的联系以便在全社会的共同努力下使系以便
25、在全社会的共同努力下使“绿色校园色校园”顺利利实施。施。范文点范文点评范文以范文以“绿色校园色校园”开篇，保开篇，保证了文章切了文章切题。第一段开第一段开门见山，山，强调当今当今环保理念下构建保理念下构建“绿色校园色校园”的的长远意意义。第二段，着重。第二段，着重讨论“绿色色校园校园”的含的含义，指出，指出“绿色校园色校园”不不仅指校园中的指校园中的绿化，化，还指生活在校园中的人指生活在校园中的人们的的绿色和色和环保保意意识，把校园，把校园这个小个小环境和社会境和社会这个大个大环境境结合起来，合起来，说理更加深刻。第三段是理更加深刻。第三段是谈及具体的及具体的做法，分一、二、三点做法，分一、二
26、、三点进行行论述，无疑是使述，无疑是使“绿色校园色校园”的理念落在的理念落在实处。结构完整，首尾呼构完整，首尾呼应，用用词准确。关系准确。关系词的正确使用的正确使用让句与句之句与句之间、段与段之段与段之间衔接接紧凑，思想表达成熟有深度。凑，思想表达成熟有深度。【生【生动的用的用词】maintain保持保持;concept概念概念;profound长远的的;sustainable可持可持续的的;recyclable可循可循环的。的。【丰富的短【丰富的短语】bring benefit to带来利益来利益;play a crucial role in发挥关关键作用作用;under the burde
27、n of在在重重负下下;come true实现;call for要求。要求。【多【多变的句式】的句式】范文中范文中长句、短句、句、短句、简单句、复句、复杂句交叉使用。不同句句交叉使用。不同句型之型之间的的转换，能，能让阅卷老卷老师更好地了解考生更好地了解考生对句子句子结构构的掌握运用，从而的掌握运用，从而获得高分。得高分。本次作文在本次作文在题材上，材上，虽然仍然延然仍然延续了我了我们所熟悉的校园所熟悉的校园类话题，但与社会背景有很大关系。，但与社会背景有很大关系。刚刚闭幕的哥本哈根幕的哥本哈根世界气候大会使世界气候大会使环保减排保减排这个主个主题成成为焦点，在全世界都焦点，在全世界都提倡可持
28、提倡可持续发展、和展、和谐发展展这一背景下的一背景下的“绿色校园色校园”，同，同时也是一个社会也是一个社会热点点话题，这是我是我们审题时所必所必须考考虑的。的。另外开篇另外开篇时，切忌拖泥，切忌拖泥带水，水，应直截了当，使直截了当，使阅卷老卷老师对文章主文章主题一目了然。一目了然。除正确除正确审题之外，考生之外，考生还应注意注意语言的准确运用，不落言的准确运用，不落俗套。不同句型之俗套。不同句型之间转换时，考生，考生应对句子句子结构全面掌握，构全面掌握，避免句式避免句式错误造成扣分。造成扣分。作文表达除了准确，作文表达除了准确，还要做到句式多要做到句式多变，词汇灵灵活多活多样。1.realiz
29、e be aware of 意意识到到Wed better be aware of the seriousness of pollution around us.我我们最好意最好意识到周到周围污染的染的严峻性。峻性。2.keep preserve 保持保持It is necessary to educate the students to be conscious of the importance to preserve the environment.有必要教育学生意有必要教育学生意识到保到保护环境的境的重要性。重要性。3.lead conduct 引引导This will help co
30、nduct the activities of the college students.这有助于引有助于引导大学生的行大学生的行为。2009年年6月大学四月大学四级Part I Writing(30 minutes)Directions:For this part,you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic of students selecting their lectures.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bel
31、low:1.越来越多的博物越来越多的博物馆免免费对外开放的目的是什么外开放的目的是什么？2.也会也会带来一些来一些问题3.你的看法？你的看法？Free admission to museums Free Admission to Museums Nowadays,an increasing number of museums are admission-free to visitors home and abroad.The hidden reason behind this is not hard to analyze as theres a growing awareness for th
32、e authorities regarding the urgency of popularization of culture,knowledge and history with every average person in our society.Only with free access to this live database,can most people fully enjoy what museums could offer to them.However,free admission to museums might lead to some social problem
33、s as well.The most obvious problem is that it might give museums a very heavy economic burden which directly impedes the sustainable development of these organizations.As a result,our government has to work out other ways to collect funds from different channels,which might be difficult to operate o
34、r control.On the other hand,free admission attracts too many visitors,some of whom might not be well-purposed and do some conscious or unconscious damage to the valuable treasures which used to be well-preserved in the museums.As a university student,I am in favor of the free-admission conduct.Yet i
35、t is proposed that some measures should be taken to solve the potential problems caused by it.For example,museums can make some regulations to guide the behavior of visitors or set some closed days for museums for regular maintenance.Only in this way can free-admission to museums become a long-lasting phenomenon and have sustainable development.