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1、CET-4 写作看图作文写作步骤n n1.读图读图n n2.列要点列要点n n3.拟草纲拟草纲 n n4.组织句子组织句子n n5.连句成文连句成文 n n6.修饰润色修饰润色必备句型n nAs is described in the picture.As is described in the picture.n n这幅图描述了这幅图描述了n nThe purpose of the picture is to show us that.The purpose of the picture is to show us that.n n这幅图的目的是为了给我们展示这幅图的目的是为了给我们展示n
2、nWe can deduce form this picture that.We can deduce form this picture that.n n从这幅图中我们可以推断从这幅图中我们可以推断n nThe picture indicates/conveys the meaning thatThe picture indicates/conveys the meaning thatn n这幅图指出这幅图指出/传达传达n nMore and more people have come to realize.More and more people have come to realize.
3、n n越来越多的人已经意识到越来越多的人已经意识到n nNow it is commonly held that.but I doubt whether.Now it is commonly held that.but I doubt whether.n n现在大家都普遍认为现在大家都普遍认为，但我怀疑，但我怀疑n nAs is shown in the picture,we can see As is shown in the picture,we can see clearly the relationship between.and.clearly the relationship be
4、tween.and.n n从图中我们可以清楚的看到从图中我们可以清楚的看到和和的关的关系。系。n nNo wonder most see the problem of.as No wonder most see the problem of.as that of.rather than that of.that of.rather than that of.n n难怪大多数人把难怪大多数人把看成看成的问题，而不的问题，而不是是的问题。的问题。n nAnyone with the least common sense Anyone with the least common sense know
5、s that.knows that.n n稍微有点常识的人都知道稍微有点常识的人都知道n nThere is much discussion today about.There is much discussion today about.n n现在人们都在热烈地讨论现在人们都在热烈地讨论n nThanks to.,more and more.Thanks to.,more and more.n n由于由于越来越多的越来越多的n nAs more and more people.,much As more and more people.,much attention should be pl
6、aced on.attention should be placed on.n n由于越来越多的人由于越来越多的人，所以人们应该重视，所以人们应该重视n nIf such measures were not taken,the If such measures were not taken,the problem of.would have been more problem of.would have been more serious.serious.n n如果不采取这些措施，如果不采取这些措施，的问题就会更加的问题就会更加严重。严重。n nOn the surface/At first
7、thought it may seem a sound On the surface/At first thought it may seem a sound/an attractive/suggestion/solution/idea,but careful/an attractive/suggestion/solution/idea,but careful weighing on the mind/on closer analysis/on weighing on the mind/on closer analysis/on second thought,we find that.seco
8、nd thought,we find that.n n表面上表面上/第一眼看上去似乎是一个非常好的想法，但第一眼看上去似乎是一个非常好的想法，但仔细一想仔细一想/分析分析,我们却发现我们却发现n nAnother reason why I dispute the above statement Another reason why I dispute the above statement is that.is that.n n我之所以反对以上论点还有一个原因我之所以反对以上论点还有一个原因n nUnless there is a common realization of.,it is ve
9、ry Unless there is a common realization of.,it is very likely that.likely that.n n除非大家普遍意识到除非大家普遍意识到，否则很可能，否则很可能n nNo easy method can be at hand to solve the No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of.,but the common recognition of the problem of.,but the common recognition of the necessi
10、ty of.might be the first step towards necessity of.might be the first step towards change in the right direction.change in the right direction.n n解决解决问题并不容易，但认识到问题并不容易，但认识到的必要性是向的必要性是向正确方向发展的第一步。正确方向发展的第一步。1.读图读图n n三幅图三幅图 n n近视近视n n人数不断上升人数不断上升 列要点n n1）图片描述n n2）原因分析n n3）我的理解 建议3.拟草纲拟草纲1 1）图片描述）图片描述P
11、icture 1Picture 1Picture 2Picture 2Picture 3Picture 3The problemThe problem2 2）原因分析）原因分析exam-oriented education exam-oriented education（应试教育）（应试教育）/pressure/pressure 3 3）我的理解）我的理解 建议建议More freedom in education/different ways to evaluate More freedom in education/different ways to evaluate their perf
12、ormance/more opportunities to access their performance/more opportunities to access higher educationhigher education 4.组织句子组织句子n n1）图片描述n nPicture 1n nPicture 2n nPicture 3n nAfter a comparison of the 3 graduation pictures,we can see that the number of students who are myopic/nearsighted is increasi
13、ng sharply.n n2 2）原因分析）原因分析n n The reason why more and more students The reason why more and more students get nearsighted is that they live and study get nearsighted is that they live and study under high pressure.In modern society,the under high pressure.In modern society,the exam-oriented educati
14、on exam-oriented education（应试教育）（应试教育）gives students too much stress,they have gives students too much stress,they have to study very hard to get high scores to win to study very hard to get high scores to win a better future.Even during their spare a better future.Even during their spare time,they
15、are sent to different kinds of time,they are sent to different kinds of agencies to have extra lessons.They are agencies to have extra lessons.They are so tired that they have little time to rest so tired that they have little time to rest their bodies and their eyes.No wonder their bodies and their
16、 eyes.No wonder more and more students get nearsightedmore and more students get nearsightedn n3 3）我的理解）我的理解 建议建议n n I dont think it is fair for the I dont think it is fair for the young.They should have the young.They should have the more freedom to learn whatever more freedom to learn whatever the
17、y are interested in and will be they are interested in and will be evaluated more objectively from evaluated more objectively from different aspects,in different different aspects,in different ways,not just exams.Its time that ways,not just exams.Its time that we improve our education system we impr
18、ove our education system so as to provide the young a so as to provide the young a better education and a healthier better education and a healthier life.life.连句成文 修饰润色n n所谓所谓所谓所谓“模板模板模板模板”n nThis illustration depicts_(This illustration depicts_(图画中的人物图画中的人物)Ving,with_()Ving,with_(补充说明补充说明).Recently
19、 it).Recently it has become common for people in many walks of has become common for people in many walks of life to_(life to_(进一步阐释进一步阐释)n nIt seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about _(message about _(图画主题图画主题),which is),which is _(
20、_(进一步的说明进一步的说明).He seems to be).He seems to be saying that_(saying that_(给出细节给出细节).In my).In my opinion,_(opinion,_(个人阐述个人阐述).).n nThis simple picture is a wake up call for _(This simple picture is a wake up call for _(所所涉群体，如涉群体，如the whole of the human race).Therefore,the whole of the human race).T
21、herefore,it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put it is imperative for us to take drastic measures to put an end to _(an end to _(问题所在问题所在).One the one).One the one hand,we must _(hand,we must _(建议一建议一).It is).It is clear that the drawer of the illustration is urging us clear that the
22、 drawer of the illustration is urging us to _(to _(进一步说明进一步说明).On the other hand,).On the other hand,_(_(建议二建议二)Only in this way can)Only in this way can we_(we_(展望前景展望前景).).2013.12 样题作文样文例析n nWe can see that in this pictureWe can see that in this picture,a teacher is teaching,a teacher is teaching
23、her pupils to deal with arithmetic questions,but her pupils to deal with arithmetic questions,but some of them think that learning these some of them think that learning these mathematical skills is useless.They argue that by mathematical skills is useless.They argue that by the time they are in the
24、 job market,these skills will the time they are in the job market,these skills will be outdated.As to whether it is important to learn be outdated.As to whether it is important to learn basic skills,people hold different views.basic skills,people hold different views.n nAs far as I know,it is very i
25、mportant for one As far as I know,it is very important for one student to acquire basic skills.student to acquire basic skills.At first,mastering At first,mastering basic skills well can lay a solid foundation for basic skills well can lay a solid foundation for learning advanced skills.Basic skills
26、 are a floor,not learning advanced skills.Basic skills are a floor,not a ceiling.Students must learn them first so that they a ceiling.Students must learn them first so that they can move on to various advanced skills.Whats can move on to various advanced skills.Whats more,learning basic skills help
27、s to improve more,learning basic skills helps to improve confidence and enhance self-esteem.Individuals confidence and enhance self-esteem.Individuals with basic skills are likely to be more confident and with basic skills are likely to be more confident and active.active.n nAll in all,All in all,if
28、 we want to keep progressing,it is if we want to keep progressing,it is important to learn basic skills well.By mastering important to learn basic skills well.By mastering basic skills and learning new things,we will have a basic skills and learning new things,we will have a bright future!bright fut
29、ure!The Importance of Reading LiteratureThe Importance of Reading Literaturen nAs is humorously portrayed in the cartoon,a teacher is handing a classic literature book to a student,asking the student to“just read it as if you are reading a long text message.”Obviously,the symbolical meaning of this
30、picture is to show us the importance of reading literature.n nIt should be generally acknowledged It should be generally acknowledged that classic literature plays a significant role that classic literature plays a significant role not only in preserving the essence of great not only in preserving t
31、he essence of great minds but also in enhancing the quality of minds but also in enhancing the quality of ones life.ones life.To begin with,literature as the To begin with,literature as the collection of great minds will help us collection of great minds will help us enormously broaden our horizons,
32、enormously broaden our horizons,experiencing things we wont have the experiencing things we wont have the chance to do as well as lives we wont be chance to do as well as lives we wont be able to enjoy.able to enjoy.What is moreWhat is more,those fine,those fine stories selected and conveyed by the
33、great stories selected and conveyed by the great author,although happened in the past,still author,although happened in the past,still carry some useful information and carry some useful information and implication for our daily lives.implication for our daily lives.In additionIn addition,the beauti
34、ful words and sentences flowing the beautiful words and sentences flowing in the pages of excellent literature can in the pages of excellent literature can greatly ease our tiredness,making us feel greatly ease our tiredness,making us feel easy and quiet.easy and quiet.n nTherefore,we ought to fully
35、 realize Therefore,we ought to fully realize the importance of reading literaturethe importance of reading literature.Just as the teacher in the picture Just as the teacher in the picture puts,reading literature should be as puts,reading literature should be as easy and common as reading text easy a
36、nd common as reading text messages.messages.Facing the coming Facing the coming challenges in the days ahead,we challenges in the days ahead,we need to equip us with not only need to equip us with not only science but also literature by which science but also literature by which we can beautify our
37、life and the we can beautify our life and the worldworld.Assignmentn n1)describe the drawing briefly,n n2)explain its intended meaning,andn n3)give your comments一、句子开头多样化一、句子开头多样化 n n英语是一种句型结构灵活多变的语言。由于拘泥于传英语是一种句型结构灵活多变的语言。由于拘泥于传统语法框架，许多初学写作的人都喜欢用名词开头写统语法框架，许多初学写作的人都喜欢用名词开头写句子。这样写倒是无可非议，但若通篇文章都是干巴句子
38、。这样写倒是无可非议，但若通篇文章都是干巴巴的同样结构的句子，就显得呆板生硬，缺乏生气了。巴的同样结构的句子，就显得呆板生硬，缺乏生气了。事实上，在英语写作中除名词可放在句子的开头外，事实上，在英语写作中除名词可放在句子的开头外，许多其它词类及词组均可放在句子开头的位置。许多其它词类及词组均可放在句子开头的位置。n n例句：例句：Women leave their homes to take a fuller part Women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society as time passes.in society as ti
39、me passes.上面这句话至少还有两种开头方式：上面这句话至少还有两种开头方式：1.As time passes,women leave their homes to take 1.As time passes,women leave their homes to take a fuller part in society.a fuller part in society.2.To take a fuller part in society,women leave their 2.To take a fuller part in society,women leave their home
40、s as time passes.homes as time passes.二、避免一个二、避免一个“I”写到底写到底n n初学英文写作的人的另一通病是一个初学英文写作的人的另一通病是一个“”写到底，句首僵硬，缺乏变化。写到底，句首僵硬，缺乏变化。n n One thing in particular I remember made One thing in particular I remember made me feel grateful toward my mother was that me feel grateful toward my mother was that one da
41、y I went and asked her for my own one day I went and asked her for my own garden,and she let me have my own little garden,and she let me have my own little plot.I love it and take care of it well.I loved plot.I love it and take care of it well.I loved especially to grow peas.I was proud when especia
42、lly to grow peas.I was proud when we had them on our table.I would pull out we had them on our table.I would pull out the grass in my garden by hand when the the grass in my garden by hand when the first little blades came up.I would patrol the first little blades came up.I would patrol the rows on
43、my hands and knees for any rows on my hands and knees for any worms and bugs,and I would kill and bury worms and bugs,and I would kill and bury them.them.三、三、注意句子的紧凑性注意句子的紧凑性n n1.1.当两个句子是围绕着同一主题的不同方面进行说明当两个句子是围绕着同一主题的不同方面进行说明时，可以将两句中相同的成分省略，形成并列句，从时，可以将两句中相同的成分省略，形成并列句，从而使句子更加紧凑。这也就是省略结构所表达出的英而使句子更加
44、紧凑。这也就是省略结构所表达出的英文的紧凑性。需要注意的是两句中形成对应关系的文的紧凑性。需要注意的是两句中形成对应关系的somethingsomething要完全一致才可以省略，而且与相同成分要完全一致才可以省略，而且与相同成分相关的短语（主要是动词短语中的介词）不可以省略。相关的短语（主要是动词短语中的介词）不可以省略。另外，如果表示比较结构的句子前后有相同成分，而另外，如果表示比较结构的句子前后有相同成分，而且此成分有短语修饰，后面的相同成分要由代词来置且此成分有短语修饰，后面的相同成分要由代词来置换，而不能直接将其省略。（如下面的例句三）换，而不能直接将其省略。（如下面的例句三）n n
45、例句：例句：They should acquire knowledge not only They should acquire knowledge not only from books but also from the society.from books but also from the society.他们不仅要从书本中学习知识，还要从社会中汲取知他们不仅要从书本中学习知识，还要从社会中汲取知识。识。n nEither Sally must be responsible for the matter or Either Sally must be responsible for t
46、he matter or well be(responsible for the matter).well be(responsible for the matter).或者赛丽对此事负责，或者由我们来承担责任。或者赛丽对此事负责，或者由我们来承担责任。n n2.2.条件句也是使句子紧凑的一种表达条件句也是使句子紧凑的一种表达方式。这里我们介绍一下方式。这里我们介绍一下in whichin which在在条件句中的用法，它相当于条件句的条件句中的用法，它相当于条件句的引导词引导词if if，这时可译作，这时可译作“如果如果那么那么”或或“当当时时”。例句：例句：An ensemble that performs B An ensemble that performs B in which the other performs A is in which the other performs A is excused from the rehearsal after that excused from the rehearsal after that concert.concert.当另外一个乐团演奏当另外一个乐团演奏A A（乐曲）时，（乐曲）时，那麽演奏那麽演奏B B（乐曲）的乐团就有充分（乐曲）的乐团就有充分的理由不去彩排了。的理由不去彩排了。