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1、第1页/共23页I 书面表达的主要形式A 记叙文（尤其是故事性的）注意五个W一个H.即:When,Who ,What ,Where,Why,HowB其它应用文 包括：书信、日记、通知、便条(请假条、电话留言、留言条)及贺卡等。C几种文体的结合 这是很值得我们关注的一个趋向。如在信中进行说明，是一封信，但又是一篇以空间为顺序的说明文。第2页/共23页II平时训练中的几个注意点平时训练中的几个注意点 1、准备工作准备工作 仔细仔细审题审题，明确要求。，明确要求。罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意，列出要罗列信息，认真分析，审清题意，列出要点。点。紧扣要点，寻求思路。草拟提纲，确定开头，选词、选句，拟好结
2、尾（可适当发表自己的观点）。第3页/共23页2 写作之中写作之中.开门见山，紧扣主题开门见山，紧扣主题。.语言正确语言正确,规范地道规范地道。参观农场的日记：参观农场的日记：关于度假：关于度假：句型、结构，避免中国式英语句型、结构，避免中国式英语。I spent 10 yuan buy the book.He by bike to school.标点符号Last Sunday we visited a farm.We had a happy holiday last weekend.第4页/共23页.重短轻长,就易避难。.过渡自然,表达流畅。以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。以写正确、通顺为最基本要
3、求。正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。正确使用连词，保持行文的流畅。不重复使用可置换的词。不重复使用可置换的词。第5页/共23页.适当评论,发表己见。What a busy weekend!He is a good boy.第6页/共23页3.成文之后成文之后.一般语法项目的检查一般语法项目的检查 人称人称:Mr.Green works hard,she is the best worker in their office.时态时态:They are going to the island yesterday.主谓一致主谓一致:Everyone in our class work hard.习惯用
4、法习惯用法:He helps me in my English.第7页/共23页.注意语序(感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句)1.I withmyfriendsplayedsoccer.I playedsoccerwithmyfriends.2.Theweaherishownice!Hownicetheweatheris!3.He didnt know where was thebookshop.Hedidntknowwherethebookshopwas.第8页/共23页.符合习惯 My work is very busy.I very much like it.Im very busy with
5、my work.I like it very much.第9页/共23页.书写规范,卷面整洁。第10页/共23页小结小结审题，抓点造句，成文改错，誉写第11页/共23页III书面表达：Write about what you did last weekend.BdidmyhomeworkC played soccerA cleaned my room第12页/共23页D watched TV第13页/共23页E visited my auntF went to the movies第14页/共23页 范文：范文：I had a busy weekend.On Saturday morning,
6、I _1_.In the afternoon,I _2_,It was a little difficult.On Saturday night,I _3_My auntcooked dinner for me.On Sunday morning,I _4_.I watched a good movie Named“kungfu”.Then in the afternoon,I _5_with my friends.On Sunday night,I_6_.I saw an interesting talk show.第15页/共23页 范文：范文：I had a busy weekend.O
7、n Saturday morning,I A cleaned my room.In the afternoon,I B did my homework.It was a little difficult.On Saturday night,I E visited my aunt.My aunt cooked dinner for me.On Sunday morning,I F went to the movies.I watched a good movie named“kungfu”.Then in the afternoon,I C played Soccer with my frien
8、ds.On Sunday night,ID watched TV I saw an interesting talk show.第16页/共23页IV IV 书面表达(15(15分）根据图表内容写一篇英语短文，介绍你的朋友David David。短文题目已给出。要求 不得逐字翻译，允许适当发挥；可用不同方式表达图表内容 词数：6060词左右。第17页/共23页 姓名DavidDavid性别男国籍英国 出生地 London London 出生日期19931993年6 6月1818日 爱好 足球、电脑、音乐 其它情况三年前随父母来中国北京。现在北京第1 1中学学习，学习成绩优良，是学校足球队队员。
9、第18页/共23页范文：MygoodfriendDavidDavidismygoodfriend.HesanEnglishboy.HewasborninLondononJune18,1993.Helikesplayingfootball,workingonacomputerandlisteningtomusic.DavidcametoBeijing,Chinawithhisparentsthreeyearsago.NowhesstudyingatNo.1MiddleSchoolinBeijing.Hesgoodathislessons,andhesontheschoolfootballteam
10、.第19页/共23页 yesterdayoncemoreyesterdayoncemorewhenIwasyoungIdlistentotheradiowhenIwasyoungIdlistentotheradiowaitingformyfavoritesongswaitingformyfavoritesongswhentheyplayedIdsingalong,whentheyplayedIdsingalong,itmademesmile.itmademesmile.ThoseweresuchhappytimesandnotsoThoseweresuchhappytimesandnotsol
11、ongagolongagohowIwonderedwheretheydgone.howIwonderedwheretheydgone.buttheyrebackagainjustlikealonglostbuttheyrebackagainjustlikealonglostfriendfriendallthesongsIlovesowellallthesongsIlovesowell.n nI:Yesterday_Once_More.rmI:Yesterday_Once_More.rm第20页/共23页VI Homework:就植树节这一天的植树活动写一篇简短就植树节这一天的植树活动写一篇简短
12、的日记的日记(单词数：单词数：50左右左右)。提示：提示：1 1穿旧衣服；穿旧衣服；2 2早餐后乘车到西山；早餐后乘车到西山；3 3挖坑、种树、浇水挖坑、种树、浇水;每人种树每人种树3 3棵；棵；4 41212点结束点结束;5 5感想；感想；6.6.天气晴朗。天气晴朗。(Tree Planting Day，the West Hill,by bus,in old clothes.plant three young trees )Monday Mar Monday Mar12th12th，2009 Fine 2009 Fine 第21页/共23页Thankyouforlistening!第22页/共23页感谢您的观看！第23页/共23页