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1、 With the late afternoon sun setting on his farm,Steve finished feeding his horses and decided to go home.His two sons,Danny,6,and Claus,3,followed behind.As they headed for the house,the two boys ran ahead of their father,who stopped to close the gate.Danny paused at an old well.Unknown to him,the
2、board covering the well had grown easily broken over time.When Danny stepped on it,it caved in.Steve had just finished locking the gate when he turned around and saw only his younger son.“Wheres Danny?”he shouted.“He fell in the hole!”Claus said.Steve quickly realized what had happened.Danny could b
3、arely swim!He ran to the well and heard Danny screaming quite way below.Desperately,he jumped in.Steve hit the freezing water at the bottom of the well.He lifted his head out of the water and grabbed Danny,who was panicked,trying to stay afloat in water that was too deep for either of them to stand.
4、绝绝望地望地;不不顾顾一切地一切地;极度地极度地;pnkt 惊慌的惊慌的 Knowing they could float in the ice-cold water for only a short time,Steve pulled his son up onto his chest and tried all means to stand upright with two legs against the narrow well walls for support.His body was still partly submerged(淹淹没没).“Dad,you can pull us
5、 out now,”Danny said.If only it were that easy.There was no way he could climb out.Looking up to see Claus looking down at them from the top of the well,Steve shouted,“Claus,youre going to have to be a big boy and save us.You have to go out to the road and get someone to help.OK?”“OK,Daddy.”Claus ye
6、lled and ran to the road.注意：注意：1.续写词数应为续写词数应为150左右；左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。相应位置作答。About 15 minutes later,Edmen and Sam,their neighbors,were driving by Steves farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road,waving.Forty-some minutes after hed jumped into the well to save his son,
7、Steve came out,cold and wet.About 15 minutes later,Edmen and Sam,their neighbors,were driving by Steves farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road,waving.Forty-some minutes after hed jumped into the well to save his son,Steve came out,cold and wet.Q1 _（与首句衔接）（与首句衔接）Q2_(情节推动情节推动1)Q3_(
8、情节推动情节推动2)Q4_(与第二段首句衔接与第二段首句衔接)Q1 _（与首句衔接）（与首句衔接）Q2_(情节推动情节推动1)Q3_(情节推动情节推动2)Q4_(与原文首句回应与原文首句回应/主题升华主题升华)2.根据故事发展，大致推断续写内容。Steve came out Steve came out Steve came out Steve came out！About 15 minutes later,Edmen and Sam,their neighbors,were driving by Steves farm when they noticed Claus alone by the
9、 side of the road,waving.2.根据故事发展，大致推断续写内容。Steve came out！反推反推Danny was rescued first!About 15 minutes later,Edmen and Sam,their neighbors,were driving by Steves farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road,waving.Steve came out！Danny was rescued first!E&S asked what happened and C sai
10、d.(C 3 ys old)Following C,E&S ran.to the wellPicking up C,E&S ran.Picking up C,E&S drove.Checked Steve and Dannys conditionA toola stick,branch,pipe,ladder,clothes tied together,JUMP INTO IT?!rope不合理，不合理，C只有只有3岁，跟在他后面岁，跟在他后面跑太慢了跑太慢了 Forty-some minutes after hed jumped into the well to save his son,S
11、teve came out,cold and wet.What did Steve care most at that moment？E&S sent them to a hopistal E&S found some blankets for them to warm up the bodies Steve thanked E&Spraised Claus,hugged his two sons tightlycheck Dannys conditionSteve blamed Dannybought a new board to cover the well firmly About 15
12、 minutes later,Edmen and Sam,their neighbors,were driving by Steves farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road,waving.They stopped next to Claus,asking what happened.“Daddy and Danny fell in the well.Help!”Claus answered anxiously.Hearing the accident from Claus,they picked him up an
13、d sped to the well without any hesitation.“Steve,are you okay?”“Help us out!”Steve yelled hurriedly.Sam found a rope and put it down into the well.With the rope tied around his waist,Danny was pulled out steadily and carefully.Without any break,they turned to Steves rescue.E&S asked what happened an
14、d C said.Picking up C,E&S drove.Checked Steve and Dannys conditionDanny was rescued first!参考范文1：About 15 minutes later,Edmon and Sam,their neighbors,were driving by Steves farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road,waving.“What are you doing here,Claus?”Edmen asked loudly,popping his
15、 head out of the truck window.“Daddy,Danny,in the hole,help!”Claus jabbered and pointed to the direction of the well again and again.Hearing the accident from Claus,they picked him up and sped to the well.“Steve,are you okay?”“Help us out!”Steve yelled hurriedly.Sam grabbed a rope and put it down in
16、to the well.With the rope tied around,Danny was pulled out steadily and carefully.Without any break,they turned to Steves rescue.Forty-some minutes after hed jumped into the well to save his son,Steve came out,cold and wet.“Daddy!”two boys threw themselves on Steve who was sitting on the ground,trem
17、bling.Knowing that Danny was safe and sound,Steve felt relieved.“You did a good job,son.”Steve patted Clauss back with his cold but gentle hand.After a while,Steve struggled to his feet.He wanted to thank Edmen and Sam for saving their lives.“Its OK,man.Its your little Claus who brought us here,so h
18、e is the hero.”Holding two boys tightly in his arms,Steve put on a big smile,relieved and proud.参考范文2：About 15 minutes later,Edmon and Sam,their neighbors,were driving by Steves farm when they noticed Claus alone by the side of the road,waving.Hearing the accident from Claus,they picked him up and s
19、ped to Steves house.Upon arrival,Edmon quickly jumped off the truck and grabbed a long thick rope.Then he and Sam rushed to the well.“Steve,”Edmon shouted,“Were going to send a rope down to you.”“OK,Ill send Danny up first.”Steve shouted back,freezing down there.With the rope tied around,the boy was
20、 pulled out first.Forty-some minutes after hed jumped into the well to save his son,Steve came out,cold and wet.Just as his neighbors reached out to grab him,he collapsed to the ground.Struggling to his feet,Steve hugged his neighbors tightly,whispering“You save our lives!Thank you!”For him,words co
21、uldnt express his gratitude for their timely rescue and they were his good neighbors forever.“Daddy!”Danny and Claus cried,rushing to Steve.Steve held them tightly in arms,cherishing them like never before,and tears welled up in the eyes of this tough guy.Had it not been for Claus wit act,had it not been their neighbours timely help,it would have been a different story.