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1、WritingWriting我我校校即即将将举举行行主主题题为为kindness的的演演讲讲比比赛赛，请请你你写写一一篇篇演演讲稿。讲稿。要点要点:1.结合经历结合经历,简述你帮助他人或得到帮助的事简述你帮助他人或得到帮助的事 2.你对此的感想你对此的感想 3.你未来的计划你未来的计划注意注意：1.短文须包括所短文须包括所有有要点，可适当增加细节。要点，可适当增加细节。2.文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。文中不得出现真实的校名与人名。3.词数：词数：100左右左右。4.演讲稿演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good morning,everyone!It
2、s my great honor to give a speech about“kindness”_ Thanks for listening!Writing Task一一 审审(Read)1.Topic 主题主题3.Style 体裁体裁2.Person 人称人称5.Tense 时态时态6.Purpose 意图意图4.Key points要点要点 the First Person the Past Tense Narrative writing 记叙文记叙文Argumentative writing议论文议论文 the Future Tense 二二 列列(List)1.Structure 结
3、构结构the beginning partthe main partthe ending part2.Content 内容内容Topic ExperienceFeelingPlan二二 列列(List)3.Key points 要点要点 Point 1 When,what,how，who,where Experience：Point 2 Feelings：Good sentences？直到尝试了，你才会知道你会成功。当我看到人们脸上喜悦的表情的时候，我得到一当我看到人们脸上喜悦的表情的时候，我得到一种强烈的满足感。种强烈的满足感。帮助别人对我来说是梦想成真。帮助别人对我来说是梦想成真。我可以做
4、自己喜欢做的事情，同时也能帮助其他人。我可以做自己喜欢做的事情，同时也能帮助其他人。有了你的帮助，我才有可能有了你的帮助，我才有可能再次感谢你改变了我的生活。再次感谢你改变了我的生活。How do you feel when you help others?I get such a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the look of joy on peoples faces.Helping others is a dream come true for me.I can do what I love to do and help othe
5、rs at the same time.You helped to make it possible for me to do sthThank you again for changing my life.二二 列列(List)3.Key points 要点要点 Point 3 Im going to do In the future I will do I can volunteer to do I decide to do I plan to do I would like to do I want to do the Future Tense PracticeWrite 6 sente
6、nces to describe your experience,feelings and plans.kindnesskindnessExperience:_Feelings:_Plans:_三三 加加(Add)四四 美美(Beautify)Add detailslinking words,adjectives(形容词)，adverbs(副词)，different sentence patterns(不同句式)，proverbs/sayings,.I get a feeling of satisfaction.I get such a strong feeling of satisfacti
7、onwhen I see the animals get better and the look of joy on their owners faces.The bus driver Wang Ping stopped the bus.The bus driver,24-year-old Wang Ping,stopped the bus without thinking twice.He got off and asked the woman what happened.予人玫瑰，手有余香。予人玫瑰，手有余香。帮助别人就是帮助我们自己。帮助别人就是帮助我们自己。你付出的越多你付出的越多,你
8、得到的越多你得到的越多.让我们通过帮助别人让世界充满爱和温暖。让我们通过帮助别人让世界充满爱和温暖。Helping others is helping ourselves.Roses given,fragrance in hand.The more you give,the more you will get.Lets make the world full of love and warmth by helping others.Good morning,everyone!Its my great honor to give a speech about“kindness”._Thanks
9、for listening!五五 查查(Check)六六 抄抄(Copy)1.All the key points.内容充实，覆盖要点内容充实，覆盖要点（内容，要点）（内容，要点）2.Rich words,sentence patterns.No grammar or spelling mistakes.用词适切，语法正确，句型多样用词适切，语法正确，句型多样（词汇，语法，句型）（词汇，语法，句型）3.Clear structure,linking words 结构紧凑，意思连贯结构紧凑，意思连贯（语意，连词，指代）（语意，连词，指代）4.Correct punctuation(标点标点),l
10、etters.Clean and neat handwriting,100 words.书写规范，词数适宜书写规范，词数适宜（标点符号、大小写、（标点符号、大小写、词数）词数）If we keep on spreading kindness,love is a circle.If we keep on spreading kindness,love is a circle.To write,to record,to share,to influence.To write,to record,to share,to influence.Helping others is helping ourselves.Helping others is helping ourselves.Writing can be enjoyable and Writing can be enjoyable and meaningful.meaningful.