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1、专题28书面表达之读后续写必备句型与写作思路（二）知文体特点一、评分原那么.此题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。1 .评分时，主要从内容、语言表达和篇章结构三个方面考查，具体为：（1）续写内容的质量、续写的完整性以及与原文情境的融洽度。（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。2 .评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档 次，最后给分。3 .评分时还应注意：（1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分；（2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼 写及词汇用法均
2、可接受；（3）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。二、各档次给分范围和要求第七档（22-25分）创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高：使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解：一自然有效地使用了段落间、句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。第六档（18-21分）创造了比拟丰富、合理的内容，比拟有逻辑性，续写比拟完整，与原文情境融洽度较高：使用了比拟多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比拟流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解：比拟有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比拟清晰，意义比拟连贯。第五档（15-17分）创造了基本合理的内容，有一
3、定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关：使用了比拟恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解：使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比拟清晰，意义比拟连贯。第四档（11-14分）创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关：使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有局部语言错误和不恰当之处，个别局部影响理解：尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。第三档（6-10分）内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节：【中性态度】puzzlement 迷惑,regret 后悔,relief 欣慰,surprise / ama
4、zement 惊讶第二个情感万能句：_sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪名词 +welling up in sb s heart and surging through sb.表示“某人 感到一股强烈的在内心升腾、奔涌。”举例：Sunny感到一股强烈的荣誉感，在她心中升腾，奔涌。Sunny felt a great sense of honour welling up inher heart and surging through her.万能升华主旨句-成长型第一类：学习知识促“改变”Its never too late to learn. Each individ
5、ual hasthe right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。【分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体。make more attempts做更多尝试。第二类：发挥天赋促“改变Actually, every individual possesses talent. Bebrave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in theend.事实上，每个人都有天
6、赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。【分析】 possess 拥有。create miracles 表示创造奇迹。第三类：追逐梦想促“改变”Its never too late to go for your dream. Aslong as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you willstand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只妻你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你 就有机会实现梦想。As long as we dare to dream and
7、 dont letdifficulties get in our way, anything is possible. 只要我们敢于 梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。【分析】take full advantage of充分利用， realize your dreams表示“实现梦想”第四类：克服困难促“改变”The journey to success is not smooth. It is full ofchallenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as wedont give up hope
8、 and make every eflbrt to overcome all the difficulties, wewill surely achieve our goal (success) finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所 有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标(成功)。一【分析】smooth表示“平坦的 overcome all the difficulties 表示克服困难 ；make everyeffort 表示“做出努力”；as long as ,表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。第五类：战胜恐惧促“改变”Determi
9、nation and optimism are what it takes toconquer your fear and accomplish your goal. 战月生恐，惧 和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。_【分析】Determination 表示决心；optimism表示乐观。conquer your fear表示“克 服你的恐惧”；accomplish your goal表示“完成目标”第六类：战胜自卑促“改变”I smiled as I eventually realized the real sourceof confidence. Now, I am proud of what
10、I look like and much happier, because Thave realized it is your personality that decides who you truly are.我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲，而且更快乐，因 为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性。【分析】eventually表示“最后，终于“；personality表示“个性”。第七类：战胜消极促“改变”Attitude is more important than facts for us. Wecannot change our past; w
11、e cannot change the fact. However, the only thing wecan do is hold a positive attitude.态度对我们来说比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去；我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一 能做的就是保持积极的态度。【分析】Attitude表示“态度”；positive attitude.就是“积极的态度”。万能升华主旨句-助人型一、助人为乐1.Sometimes, a smallact of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.有时候一个小小的
12、善行可能足以带来巨大的变化。2.Sometimes small gesture of care will possiblymelt peoples loneliness.有时候一个表达关爱的小小举动也可能融化人们内心的孤单。3.Smiles spread on their faces while the peoplepresent burst out thunderous applause.微笑在他们的脸上绽开，在场的人发出雷鸣般的掌声。4.Helping others to realize their dreams gave memore pleasure.帮助别人实现他们的梦想让我感觉更
13、快乐。5.Then he drove the car away without even sharinghis name and I have not seen him again.然后他把车开走了，甚至没有说出他的名字，我再也没有见过他。6.This kind act has a lasting influence on me.Ialways give others a helping hand if possible even so many years later.这种善意的行为对我产生了持久的影响。即使多年以后，我总是尽可能地帮助别人。二、亲情、友情、师生情l.She felt war
14、mth in the cold day, and believed there was kindness in every corner.她在寒冷的天气里感到了温暖，相信每个角落都有善意。2.Without friends, theworld would become wilder.没有朋友，世界变成一片荒芜。3.Health is more than just your physicalwell-being. You need to have emotional needs met and that meansmaintaining family and friend relationshi
15、ps.健康不仅仅是身体健康。你需要满足情感需求，这意味着维系亲情和友情。4.He,s looking for love and hes looking forfamily: hes looking to be accepted and hes looking forward to being embracedby his father.他一直在寻找爱，寻找家庭；他渴望被接受，他期待能得到父亲的拥抱。5.If you take your friends for granted, you may not have friends for very long.如果你把朋友视为理所当然，那你也许不会有
16、长久的友情。6.1 was fortunate in having a good teacher. 我很幸运，有位好老师。7 .Honestly, I havefallen deeply in love with teaching and getting along with teenagers.说实话，我已经深深地爱上了教书以及和青少年相处。8 .After that, ourrelationship became closer and I was more like a friend than a teacher to them.从那以后，我们的关系变得更亲密，我对他们更像是朋友而不是老师
17、。三、励志.The world makes way for the dreame匚世界总会给有梦想的人开路。1 .Each man is the architect of his own fate每个人都是自己命运的建筑师。2 .Life is full of smiles and tears.生命是充满欢笑和泪水的。3 .He knew no such word as failure.他不知道有失败这样的字眼。4 .He knew if he had had little more patience hewould have succeeded earlier.他知道如果他再耐心一点，他早就
18、成功了。5 .He was delighted that it helped him realize onerequires more patience in any task being accomplished.他很高兴，这帮助他认识到一个人在完成任何任务时都需要更多的耐心。6 .As long as you have a dream, just go for it and never give it up easily.Your dream might not come truein one or two days but it will someday.只要你有梦想，就去追求，不要轻易
19、放弃。你的梦想可能不会在一两天内实现，但总有一天会实 现的。四、人生哲理Lit is never too late to learn.活到老，学到老。7 .Constant dropping wears the stone.滴水穿石。8 .From small beginnings come great things.伟大始于渺小。9 Never judge people by their appearance.永远不要以貌取人。10 Great things are done by series of small thingsbrought together.每件大事都是由一系列小事组成的。
20、11 We should enjoy every moment and never escapechallenges,我们应该享受每一刻，永远不要逃避挑 战。12 You re lucky enough to be different, never change.你很幸运能和别人不一样，不要改变。13 Each individual has the right to accept morechallenges and make more attempts.每个人都有权利接受更多的挑战，做出更多的尝试。14 Determination and optimism are what it takes
21、 toconquer your fear and accomplish Your goal.决心和乐观是征服你的恐惧和实现你的目标所需要的。15 .Dont take peoples concern for granted.Nomatter how much they love you,people get tired eventually.不要把别人的关心当成理所当然。不管他们有多爱你，最终也会有疲惫的一天。考点练透【模拟过关】Passage1（2022辽宁建平县实验中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Heres the story of
22、 my growth over the past year. Its a story of how I found the strength to change myself for better and then how I get rid of my fears to be even better. If anyone is inspired by this, thafs wonderful.rd been stuck as this incredibly insecure, under-confident and just scared individual for years and
23、years. Since childhood Id been stuck like this. Kids I met for the first time looked at me rudely and unkindly. Even my friends-actually, I had very few friends because I just felt too ashamed and frightened to make some, though I was eager to and felt extremely lonely in the depth of my heart-laugh
24、ed at me and gave me bad nicknames. I felt terrible, but rd just resigned to a life where Id be afraid of everything and be this introvert”（内向的人）or whatever. I thought I would never be able to change, never, for my whole life.But then it all started changing. Something clicked. I suddenly determined
25、 to go on a diet, and lost some weight. It was tough. I felt hungry all the time. I was always tempted by the smell of bread and hamburger, even when I didnt see them. But the toughest thing was that even if I had just had my meals, I felt hunger mentally. However, I held on. In over a period of 6 m
26、onths I finally managed to stick to one of my diets. I didnt know how. But I did make it.The loss of 90 lbs brought me from overweight straight down to underweight. This isnt the best part. More importantly and inspiringly, I suddenly found strength in me. I realized I could be totally different. An
27、d maybe, I could even be whatever I wanted to be. This taught me that I could change myself.Then I wondered, perhaps, I could also get rid of those of my fears, just like I succeeded in losing my extra pounds. It might not be easy, but it might not be that difficult.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右：2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位
28、置作答。Chance presented itself soon.It was from that point on that I started changing rapidly.Passage 2（2022.辽宁模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。One of my most memorable trips took place during the summer vacation about three years ago, when my sister, my aunt and I took a trip to Spain becaus
29、e we were moving. On the day of the trip, I lay in bed thinking about my friends whom I was going to leave behind and thoughts were flooding in.When we arrived at the hire station, we seemed to have some problems with our luggage because it was too much for a taxi, so we had to book a van （厢式送货车）to
30、take our luggage to the airport. We waited for a long period to find a perfect van that would fit our luggage.Before leaving, I felt very bad because I was going to a different country and was going to miss all my friends and family. I was not comfortable and cried.The journey was almost perfect at
31、the beginning, but soon it began to rain. Because of the rain, the drivers could not see far away, which caused a huge traffic jam. I was sitting by the window with a can of Coke that I had bought in the store earlier. My aunt and sister fell asleep, and during this time. I felt bored and thought ab
32、out other things that bothered me. My eyes turned to the mountain in front of us.A bus suddenly appeared in the picture. It was very close to us. Cars sped past us without any speed limit. Beside me was a very deep lake: I wondered to myself what if something or someone fell inside it. Suddenly, a b
33、us in front of our van stopped, and because it was raining heavily and the van was going fast, no one could see what was going to happen. Then, bang, we bumped into each other. Our van overturned, but luckily, it didnt fall into the lake. People came to help us get out of the van because we were blo
34、cked and the driver was half-dead. 注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2.续写局部分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。We struggled to get out of the van and everything we had was gone.I was losing a lot of blood and then the emergency aid came.Passage 3（2021 .重庆.模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。Sometimes, we all need that one pers
35、on to believe in us if we ever want to change our lives. Thankfully, one homeless mans note was about to get found by someone willing to help turn his life around.Anthony Johnson is a 36-year-old who had been living without a home in England. Sadly, his time on the streets meant that Anthony struggl
36、ed to find work. He soon decided to leave a note at a bus shelter asking anyone to give him a chance so he could make his life worth living.It turned out that Anthony had once got caught up with the wrong crowd. Although he has turned his life around, Anthony had no way of making money and couldnt a
37、fford a home. To top it off, Anthony had also been battling his mental health in the last few years and just needed a chance to make it for himself.It wasnt until 16-year-old Charlotte Howard saw the note that everything started to change. Charlotte wanted to help Anthony in his quest to turn things
38、 around and decided to start a GoFundMe page. Here, the teen hoped to raise almost $400-$ 130 to buy a trailer and the rest to cover the cost of the repairs.It didnt take long fbr Charlottes post to take the nation by storm, and the page soon had more donations than the teen ever imagined. In just s
39、ix days, Charlotte had blown her initial goal out of the water as the page had received more than $2,300 in donations. It was way more than either of the pair ever expected.注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Unbelievably, the generosity didnt end there.Charlotte Howard came up with a new idea abou
40、t how to use the rest of the money.Passage 4（2021.广东佛山.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。“Going to Nationals!, We were all screaming and jumping. Kate, Jenny, Wendy and I embraced each other, bouncing. “Good job, Tara., Said Kate as she put an arm around me. I am the youngest on the relay race
41、 team, but Fm fast. When I run, I leave the skin of my shyness behind, and I feel like a horseman on the Mongolian grassland, free, without boundaries.Everybody ran to their parents in the bleachers （ 露天看台）.My Mom didnt make it. Again. I grabbed my phone and called her. It took a while fbr her to an
42、swer. Yes, hi dear.” “Mom, we won states, and we are going to nationals?91 burst out in one breath. Great! Lefs talk later; Ill pick you up from school. I wanted to say: Is that it? Why arent you proud of me? All other parents are here, why arent you? but all I did wasOK, see you soon.Does she see m
43、e? Do I matter?It was late after 9 PM. All the parents picked up their children, but my Mom wasnt here yet. Coach Johnson waited with me. We just stood. A speeding car turned the corner; it was my Moms Toyota. Coach patted me on the back and left.“I am so sorry I am late.Time just flew. Said Mom. I
44、wanted to cry in disappointment and tell her that I hate to be always last to be picked up and never have her come to my sporting contests, school plays, or anything else; ask her why she wont make time fbr me. But when I looked at her and saw her tired eyes and clenched jaw （咬紧卜 巴），I just said: Tha
45、ts OK, Mom, I understand.Her jaw had stayed clenched since we came to this country asMom would say: “with two pieces of luggage, a three-year-old （me）, and $700.注意：1 .续写的词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Nationals finally came and my Mom came for the first time ever.I had let everybody down and I ran out
46、 to hide myselfPassage 5（2021 山东省实验中学模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇 完整的短文。Algebra （代数）was my last class of the day. After the class, Mrs. Sharpnack asked me to stay to discuss my midterm math exam, which I had failed. Although I did well in language and many other subjects, I wouldnt be on the
47、 honor roll （光荣榜）that term if I couldnt soon make big progress in math. In just a few weeks, the names of the honor roll students would be read during the class. I was so sad.Seeing my sadness, Mrs. Sharpnack said, “Do you want me to spare some time to help with your math? I think you can make big a
48、nd quick progress. But I just wanted to go home and never think about algebra again. No, thanks/ I said. And I explained, Unlike other students in my class, I am just not good at this kind of math. And no amount of studying will change that.I almost cried when I talked about it. Mrs. Sharpnack comforted me, saying, If we work together, 1 believe you can change it. For a moment, I wondered if she would be right. What time does your bus come?” she asked. I had 30 minutes left before my bus came, and I told her