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1、专题 10 书面表达之命题式 【考点详解】一、审清楚题目的主题和要求:对于即将要书写的文章一定要弄清主题,句子表达不能游离于主题,否则即使内容再精彩,也是跑题。因此,写命题作文最重要的是先审清题目,确立要表现的中心。二、构思文章的结构:要构造出文章的结构层次,依次写出引言段,主题句,中间段和结尾段。在文章的开头开门见山点明全文的主题，从而避免偏题。结尾同开篇一样重要，它是对全文要点的概括总结，表达作者的目的。有时也用于展望未来，给读者留下思考和回味。三、选择合适充实的材料:一定要围绕想表现的中心去选择组织材料,所选的材料必须典型。四、具体词句的表达:用自己觉得最顺畅自然的词,句,段去表达中心思
2、想,与表现中心无关的话即使再生动形象也不要去写。尽量使用自己比较熟悉的词句表达，不熟悉的尽量不要使用，以免画蛇添足。【好题分享】【2022-苏州中考】第七部分书面表达（共 1题；满分 25分）57.苏州日报英文专刊以“Practice makes perfect”为题向中学生开展征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你对该谚语的理解；2.你生活中的一个事例（例如：运动、乐器、家务、学习等方面）；3.你的感悟，注意：1.词数 100，短文开头已给出，不计人总词数；2.内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。Practice makes per
3、fect Have you heard of the saying“practice makes perfect”?I mean _【答案】Practice makes perfect Have you heard of the saying“practice makes perfect”?I mean that we should practice unfamiliar things again and again.Well be able to perform it perfectly.The practice of learning English is a good example.W
4、e are not living in an English speaking country.So,in order to learn it well,we need extra practice,such as reading English books,going to English corners,or communicating with foreigners.You cant master English just by sitting at your desk.As another example,if we want to be skilled in using the co
5、mputer,we also need to practice using it.Some children become little experts in computer,just because they play with it everyday.On the contrary,if we just stick to books,we will still feel confused when using computers.Judging from the evidence offered,we might safely draw the conclusion that pract
6、ice makes perfect.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。围绕“熟能生巧”这句谚语展开描述。本文采用一般现在时，人称第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段引出主题，介绍自己对这句谚语的理解；第二段从学习英语以及学习使用电脑这两个方面，解读这句谚语。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。【2022-【B.写作（计 20 分）76.最近，你校开展了“巧手制书签，书香满校园”主题活动，请你以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向学校英文报的读书专栏投稿，介绍制作书签的目的和过程，并分享制作心得。Why you m
7、ade it help enjoy reading your favourite book（name,type of book,what you like most）How you made it Materials&Tools card scissors,glue Steps cut the card into draw a picture of write（your favourite sentence from the book or a famous saying or）How you felt 要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发
8、挥；（3）词数：100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。A DIY bookmark for my favourite book Last week I took part in our schools Reading&Bookmark-making activity._【答案】A DIY bookmark for my favourite book Last week I took part in our schools Reading&Bookmark-making activity.Its purpose was to help us enjoy
9、 reading our favourite book.My favorite book is the classic novel Journey to the West,one of the Four Great Classical Novels.I like Monkey King best because he helps the weak and never gives up.In order to make a bookmark,I prepared a card,scissors,glue and so on.First,I cut the card into long strip
10、s.And then I drew a picture of a monkey on the left and wrote a famous saying“Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.”on the right to encourage me not to give up when facing difficulties.At last,I glued it to a thin piece of wood.Although I met some difficulties in this process,I never
11、gave up and I am proud of myself.【解析】本文以“A DIY bookmark for my favourite book”为题，并结合表格中的内容，描述制作书签的目的和过程，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第一人称为主。第一段介绍制作书签的目的，以及最喜欢的书的类型和最喜欢这本书的什么地方；第二段重点描述制作书签需要的材料和工具以及制作书签的过程；第三段描述自己的感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。【2022-【六、书面表达（满分 15 分）71.实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业”，我们同
12、学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完成一篇题为“Enjoy study,enjoy life”的英语短文。Enjoy study,enjoy life 校园 1.参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等；2.多做运动，有益健康；3.（补充一点）家庭 1.畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼；2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能；3.（补充一点）注意事项：1.词数 90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Enjoy study,enjoy life Because of the“
13、double reduction”policy,we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life._ In a word,if we spend our free time properly,we will get a lot in both body and mind.【答案】Enjoy study,enjoy life Because of the“double reduction”policy,we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.I
14、n school,we should actively participate in various activities,such as painting,dancing,football,etc.Through these sports,we can make our bodies healthier and stronger.If students have difficulties,we should also actively help them.At home,we should live in peace with our parents.We should talk about
15、 our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time.Let parents know everything about us.With their support,we will get twice the result with half the effort.At the same time,we should also help our parents do some housework and learn some life skills.If you are in a bad mood,you can listen to
16、 some music or do something you like.In a word,if we spend our free time properly,we will get a lot in both body and mind.【解析】本文以“Enjoy study,enjoy life”为题介绍如何合理安排课余生活，可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍在学校的安排；第三段描述在家里的生活。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。【2022-连云港中考】七、书面表达(共 1 小题;满分 25 分
17、)76.“双减”之后,如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义?请你根据以下图片及文字提示,以“Happy Summer Vacation 为题给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,为同学们提供一些建议并说明理由。注意:(1)词数 90 左右,短文开头已给出,不计人总词数;(2)文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯;(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。Happy Summer Vacation The summer vacation is coming.With more free time,how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation?H
18、ere is my advice._【答案】The summer vacation is coming.With more free time,how can we have a happy and meaningful vacation?Here is my advice.First,we can do some sports.We can go running every morning.It can help us keep healthy.Besides,we can do some housework at home.It is necessary for us to learn s
19、ome life skills and look after ourselves.Whats more,we need to read some books.Reading helps improve our knowledge and opens up a whole new weold to us.We can also join some clubs,such as the Singing Club or the Dancing Club.It can help us develop hobbies.I hope you can have a colourful vacation.【解析
20、】本文以“Happy Summer Vacation”为题介绍如何让我们的暑假生活过得快乐而有意义，文章可适当增加细节。本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍假期可以如何度过的方式以及各自的理由；第三段表达期待大家都能有一个愉快的假期。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。【2022-无锡中考】八、书面表达（本大题共 20 分）生命中总有一些值得我们感恩的人。最近，无锡教育电视台将举办题为“The Person I Want to Thank”的英语演讲比赛。假如你想感谢身边某位对你有影响的人(父/母亲、老师、朋友),请根据以
21、下流程图写一篇英文演讲稿参加比赛。注意事项：1.演讲稿须根据流程图自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；2.流程图中括号部分为非限定性内容，仅供参考；3.词数在 100 个左右，演讲稿的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4.演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；Introduction(looks;personalities;.)Experience(example/story)Influence(.)5.演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。The Person I Want to Thank _【答案】The Person I Want to Thank In my life,many p
22、eople have helped me a lot,but Miss Wang is one of the most important persons in my life.I want to thank her most.Miss Wang is my English teacher.She is beautiful with long hair.Shes very kind and outgoing.She likes to help with others.She has helped me a lot in learning English.She is so energetic
23、that her classes are very interesting and funny.Sometimes shes too strict with us.I couldnt do well in English before.With her help I started to take much interest in learning English.Im good at English now.Not only did she helped me with my English,she also taught me how to face the trouble.Thank h
24、er for giving me so much help.I will study harder and harder.【解析】文章属于比较开放的话题作文写作；文章主题是“我想感谢的人”，写作时要紧扣主题；第一段指明我最想感谢的人是谁，并且要对他或她的容貌、性格进行介绍；第二段举出我和他或她之间发生的具体值得感恩的事例；第三段叙述他或她对我的影响。文章采用三段式；用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般过去时和一般现在时；叙述情感要真切。【2022-徐州中考】六、书面表达（满分 20 分）71.你校在课后服务活动中，根据学生的需求开设了丰富多彩的课程（见下表）。你选修了其中的一门，收获颇丰。你校英
25、文报正在组织题为“Me and my after-class course”的征文活动，请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.你选修的课程；2.你学习该课程的经历；3.你的收获及感受。运动（Sports）阅读（Reading）手工（DIY）绘画（Painting）声乐（Singing）（自拟）注意：1.词数 90左右；2.短文中不得泄露个人信息；3.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Me and my after-class course In my school,there are many kinds of after-class courses.I choose _【答案】Me and
26、my after-class course In my school,there are many kinds of after-class courses.I choose the course of DIY.DIY literally means making things by hand.My first assignment was to use the colored bubble mud commonly used by primary school students now,paste a colored blessing on the small board,and then
27、make a frame with colored wool.Because I think everyone has a different understanding of happiness.I made a word Fu into color.Its quite a test of a persons patience to do some simple handicrafts,such as cross stitch,folding thousand paper crane.Through this study,I learned that we can make handmade
28、 in many ways.Waste beverage bottles,wool,ice cream sticks and so on can become raw materials for handmade.We can create our own satisfactory works through our own imagination.【解析】本文是一篇材料作文。以“Me and my after-class course”为主题，结合所给要点提示写一篇作文。本文时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时行文；人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。写作时先从表格里选择一个课外课程，之后再根据三个要点
29、展开叙述。文章要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。【2022-连云港外国语学校初三三模】八、书面表达（满分 25 分）76.劳动创造了历史,劳动也可创造未来。劳动教育是学生学习的重要组成部分之一,请以“Learning by working”为题,根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇发言稿,参加我校的英语主题演讲活动,内容包括:（1）重要性:懂得劳动的意义;养成劳动的习惯;提高做事的能力（2）经、历:什么时间,做了什么,结果怎样（3）你的评价:至少两条。注意:（1）词数 90 左右;（2）短文应该包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥。使文章连贯;（3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。Learning
30、 by working Good morning,everyone.The topic of my speech today is learning by working _【答案】Learning by working Good morning,everyone.The topic of my speech today is learning by working.In my opinion,working is very important.It can help us understand the meaning of working hard.Moreover,step by step
31、,we can have the habit of working at home or school.More importantly,our ability of doing things can be improved.Last Sunday,I helped my mother make rice dumplings.At first it was very hard for me to make one.But I tried again.In the end,I made one by myself.Working can bring us useful experiences and happy memories.Lets work now!