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1、 高二升高三暑期计划之应用文写作（十）原文呈现假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上,你看到名叫Kelly的中学生发帖寻求帮助。请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。Kelly Started on 19 Feb. 2020Hi, everyone,My grandma smokes and my family comes by her home a lot. When we come, shes always smoking. I always go to another room where I cant smell the smoke, worried about my brother or
2、 someone else getting sick from second-hand smoke. What should I do?写作要点:1. 结合亲身经历告诉 Kelly要怎样认识这个问题; 2. 给Kelly提出建议。要求：1. 词数80左右;2. 内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;3. 书写清晰工整。_Yours, Li Hua 知识储备词组1 吸烟者： 2 不能忍受吸烟： 3 香烟： 4 不仅： 5 而且担心： 6 担心： 7 提供建议： 8 一起工作： 9 解决方案： 10 比如： 11 嚼牙龈： 12 锻炼： 13 等等： 14 有所帮助： 参考答案：1 a smoker2 c
3、ouldnt stand doing3 Cigarettes4 in ones view5 not onlybut also6 worry about7 offer suggestion8 work together9 Solutions10 such as11 chew gums12 do exercise13 and so on14 be of some help句式：1. 我妈妈是个吸烟者，我无法忍受她呼吸中的香烟的痕迹。 2. 在我看来，一次直接和诚实的谈话最重要。 3. 我不仅告诉她我的感觉，我担心她和家人的健康，还建议我建议她摆脱烟瘾。 4. 我们一起努力寻找解决方案，比如嚼口香糖
4、，做锻炼，等等。 5. 我希望我的个人经历能对你有所帮助。 参考答案：1) My mom was a smoker and I couldnt stand smelling the traces of cigarettes in her breath.2) In my view, a direct and honest talk counts most.3) Not only did I tell her about my feelings that I was worried about her and family members health but also offered my su
5、ggestion that she kick her addiction to smoking.4) We worked together to find solutions, such as chewing gums, doing exercise and so on.5) I hope my personal experience will be of some help to you.思路点拨本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封回帖给中学生Kelly，帮助Kelly并且给她提出一些建议。第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般过去时为主。结构：总-分-总法要点：1.结合亲身
6、经历告诉 Kelly要怎样认识这个问题; 2.给Kelly提出建议。第二步：列提纲 （重点词组）a smoker；couldnt stand doing；worry about；offer suggestion；work together；solutions；such as；chew gums；等第三步：连词成句根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：Firstly；Eventually；2.表并列补充关系：and；Besides；not onlybut also；连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要
7、规范清晰，第五步：润色修改佳作展现Dear Kelly,I know exactly how you feel. My mom was a smoker and I couldnt stand smelling the traces of cigarettes in her breath.In my view, a direct and honest talk counts most. Firstly, not only did I tell her about my feelings that I was worried about her and family members health
8、 but also offered my suggestion that she kick her addiction to smoking. Besides, we worked together to find solutions, such as chewing gums, doing exercise and so on. Eventually she quit altogether! I hope my personal experience will be of some help to you.课后训练Passage A假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack发来邮件，想了解中国茶文化
9、常识，请你给他回封邮件，内容包括：1、中国茶文化简介;2、饮茶的好处;3、邀请他来中国体验茶文化。注意：1、词数100左右;2、邮件开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数;3、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_Passage B假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将来中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗，请你回复邮件，内容包括：1、到达时间；（应该早到一些时间。这样，你就可以和你朋友的家人，一起准备晚饭，你不需要做任何事情，陪伴就已经足够。）2、合适的礼物；（应当带一些小礼物，比如说一本书。）3、餐桌礼仪。（请牢记，让年长的人the senior，先吃 be served first。）注意：
10、1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_ADear Jack, Im glad to hear from you. And now Im very happy to share something about Chinese tea culture in reply to your last e-mail. Chinese tea culture started about 4,000 years ago and drinking tea gradually became an amazing tradition. In China, people drink tea alm
11、ost everywhere and in most of their spare time. Some Chinese believe that tea benefits peoples health a lot. Drinking a cup of tea makes people relaxed and refreshed. Others treat guests or friends to tea drinking in social communication.Probably, youve got a general picture of tea culture after my
12、introduction. Then, how about coming to China to experience it in the flesh? Maybe you will fall in love with it.Yours,Li HuaBDear Terry,I am writing this very letter to formally response to your former letter inquiring about local customs in China. And from my perspective, in order to help you beha
13、ve decently, the following suggestions are supposed to be followed.First and for most, you are supposed to arrive a bit earlier. Thus, you can join your friends families preparing the dinneryou neednt do anything, and just being with them is fair enough. Furthermore, it is advisable for you to bring some small gifts, like a book. Last but not least, please do remember to let the senior be served first.I hope you could enjoy your meal with your Chinese friend and his family. Please feel free to contact me if you have any further questions.Best regards!Yours,Li Hua