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1、广东高考 读写任务考卷评改 背景全省高考卷总数目：65万左右改卷人数：不足千人改卷总时间：20天以内英语作文评改平均时间：8秒结论：作文应该结构清晰，句型准确，段落明显，卷面简洁。写作要点一，结构二，语法三，句型四，高级词汇五，内容 6，卷面（轻）（轻）（重）（重）6，卷面（轻）1，整体观感2，段落3，字迹4，涂改方式五，内容（轻）本质：自圆其说方法：在13个万能理由中，找出任意3个自己感觉容易写的主题进行写作。困境:无话可说真难受 应对:13个万能理由经济 效率 交流他人 安全 方便环境 健康 情感性格 经验 时间空间 利益经济，效率，交流，他人，安全，方便，环境，健康，情感，性格，经验，时
2、间空间，利益你认为是住在城市里面好还是乡下好？住在城里的好处?住在乡下的好处？1.安全2.健康3.经济4.效率5.环境6.方便1.经济2.安全3.环境4.性格5.交流6.方便经济，效率，交流，他人，安全，方便，环境，健康，情感，性格，经验，时间空间，利益养宠物的利与弊?养宠物的好处?养宠物的坏处？1.交流2.安全3.健康4.经济5.性格6.情感1.经济2.安全3.交流4.他人5.方便6.环境内容趋同97年托福考试真题：20世纪即将过去，21世纪马上到来，在你看来，20世纪最著名的发明是什么？为什么？它将对21世纪带来怎样的影响？计算机，互联网，飞机，汽车，电灯，电，微波炉，电视，DVD，MP3
3、,MP4，DNA，核能，相对论万能话题的选择一例多用环保话题：经济发展更重要，还是环境保护更重要?你认为科学家对人类的贡献大还是艺术家对人类的贡献大？让你回到家乡工作，你觉得做什么行业贡献最大?结论：固化思维，通过适当转化，在考场上写自己准备好的内容问题一：语法结构不清晰when at the age of 6,my father began to teach me English.问题二：中文式思维Although she is a girl,but she sings like a man.Girl as she is,she sings like a man.四，高级词汇（中）（另附资料
4、）一，结构（重）预先准备动作：1，在写作材料写作材料中，抽出3个要点。（以下称为要点1，要点2，要点3）2，一般情况下，每段材料抽出一个要点。注意，1，要点常常出现在转折性连接词之后，例如but,however2，要点3即原文主题句。结构：第一段：概括第1句，要点1+关联词+要点2第2句，要点3，即原文主题句或者稍加变形。第二段：预先准备动作：在写作内容写作内容中抽出3个要点，分为要点A,要点B,要点C第1句，承上启下：As far as I am concerned,there is no doubt that this situation happens all the time.（再用几
5、句话表达自己对于此事的观点态度，是赞同还是反对）第2句，如需谈 个人经历：I can think of no better illustration than my(friends)experience.第三段：第1句，开头 Speaking of/As the view of+要点B第2句至第N句，扩写要点B的理由：Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly,Finally,第四段：结尾段。第1句，（总结）Taking all these into account,it is important that +主题句第2句，（升华）Only when/if we +主题句+can we
6、live in a harmony society/happy family 或者 lead a colourful/wonderful life.常用句型1，there be+名+that 从句2，,非限制性定语从句 3，非谓语作状语4，形式主语的句型It is important that It is known to all that 5，when,if 状语从句6，not only but also 倒装句7，It is in the countryside that we can have a better living situation.强调句写作示范与步骤讲解 阅读下面的短文，
7、然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。During a recent Senior Three English lesson,the teacher caught Xiao Li,a female student,busily typing messages on her cell-phone.To the teachers surprise,Xiao Li wasnt just texting her friends the latest gossip.She was actually blogging about what was being taught in the classro
8、om,sharing her opinions about the information and material with her classmates and other students.The case aroused a heated discussion among teachers and students city-wide.Miss Li,an English teacher from another nearby school said,“I am amazed at how creative the students can be when writing on the
9、ir blogs.To me its a great way for students to improve their writing skills while writing about personal feelings and experiences.”But other teachers are worried that blog-addiction may interfere with their students study.A supporter and classmate of Xiao Li said,“We love her blog!We all read it eac
10、h day and cant wait to see what she writes about next.Her interesting stories and great suggestions on study really help to motivate us.And it adds a little fun to our stressful life.”Another student blogger admitted that he often works late into the night,writing his blog and responding to comments
11、 posted there.“Sometimes I dont even have time to finish my homework.I cant help myself.I really have a lot to say.”【写作内容】1）以约30个词概括这篇短文的主要内容；2）然后以约120个词就“中学生博客”的问题进行议论，内容包括：a）博客的利与弊；b）你对中学生博客的态度；c）关于此问题的建议。【写作要求】1）在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；2）作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。【评分标准】概括准确，语言规范，内容
12、合适，篇章连贯。原文材料3个要点：1.A student blogged what she was taught on line.2.Some supported her idea while others didnt.3.Blogging had its advantage and disadvantage.第一段：概括 A student blogged what she was taught on line and some supported her idea while others didnt,because Blogging had its advantage and disad
13、vantage.写作要求的3个要点A.The advantage and disadvantage about blogging.B.My opinion about middle school students blogging.C.My suggestions.第二段：As far as Im concerned,there is no doubt that blogging does exist in our school life.As an old saying goes,every coin has 2 sides.Blogging has its own advantage an
14、d disadvantage.We may have different opinion about that.第三段：Speaking of my opinion about blogging.First of all,it does take up part of study time and interfere with school work because middle school students have a lot of lessons and homework every day.(时间理由)Secondly,if the blogging topic is bad,it
15、may mislead students life.(健康理由)However,blogging helps to practice ones writing skill.Furthermore,blog discussion will help to develop the ability to think independently,which is considered the best thing in ones life.(交流理由)第四段：Talking about my suggestions,I think students may spend some time writin
16、g blog on line,which may help to improve their writing and reading.Its human natural to share their idea.第五段：Taking all these into account,it is important for us to learn that study is the most valuable thing and blogging is only a part of it.Only if we spend some time in blogging and more time in s
17、tudy can we lead a more effective school life.李阳家庭暴力读写任务：广东高考英语命题揭秘与专题练析原创版2012P187要点1，Li Yang,who created Crazy English is very successful.要点2，Li was reported to play domestic violence to his wife.要点3，Li had to make an apology in public,which drew much attention to domestic violence.第一段：概述 Li Yang,
18、a successful man who created Crazy English,was reported to play domestic violence to his wife which drew much attention to the family problem in public.写作内容：要点A，my feelings要点B，the influence of domestic violence要点C，to make domestic violence illegal 第二段：As far as I am concerned,there is no doubt that
19、domestic violence does exist in our ordinary life.I can think of no better illustration than my experience when I was 14 years old,my neighbor played domestic violence to their families.Their screams frightened us and we finally called the police to deal with their problem.第三段：Speaking of domestic v
20、iolence,it is totally a big mistake which may do harm to the whole family.First of all,it damages the communication between husband and wife.Whenever we get argument,violence is the worst solution to solve it(交流理由).Secondly,women and children are supposed to live in a harmony family.Once they get hu
21、rt from domestic violence they will never feel safe to be with the man(安全理由).Lastly no one has the right to hurt the others in the world.第四段：Nowadays,more and more weak group,especially women and children,are suffering from domestic violence.It is high time to make good use of laws to protect them.第
22、五段：Taking all these into account,we need a law to make domestic violence illegal and it is the best way to protect women and children from getting hurt in a family.Only when we are protected by law can we live in a harmony society.自行车环保归来读写任务：广东高考英语命题揭秘与专题练析原创版2012P189从写作材料中抽出：要点1：Bikes were once us
23、ed as transport tools and replaced by cars later.要点2：After suffering environment problems,people were encouraged to promote bike riding.要点3：Bike riding returns as a fashion lifestyle.第一段：概述 Bikes were once used as transport tools and replaced by cars later.After suffering environment problems,people
24、 are encouraged to promote bike riding which is considered as a fashion lifestyle.预先准备动作：从写作内容里抽出3个要点要点A,The reason of bike riding要点B,To encourage people to promote bike riding.要点C,My opinion on bike riding.第二段,陈述考生的观点毫无疑问,骑自行车在现在变得越来越受欢迎了.人们已经厌烦了坐车而选择更健康的出行方式.第二段：As far as I am concerned,there is n
25、o doubt that bike riding is getting more popular in our ordinary life.They are tired of car riding and trying to take some healthy ideas.第三段,陈述学生的看法与写作要点 谈到骑自行车,这是环境与人都非常重要的一件事情.现代生活中,我们缺乏足够的时间锻炼身体,而骑车是让我们时不时保持运动的一种好方式.政府应鼓励人民骑车.1,应该有专用的车道2,有停车场而且费用相对少第三段：Speaking of bike riding,it is valuable to pe
26、ople and environment.We dont have enough spare time for body exercise nowadays so that we go to work by bike which keeps us moving from time to time.Government should promote bike riding.Firstly,we need special lanes for bike riding,motors are supposed to keep away from them(安全理由).Secondly,we need m
27、ore garages for bike only.If you have got a bike,you will always have a place to keep it without paying too much comparing with a car(经济理由).第四段,考生的概述骑自行车是现代健康生活的更好的方式.第四段：To lead a healthy modern life without paying to much,I think there is no better idea than bike riding.第五段,考生总结与思想升华政府应该鼓励骑自行车.只要多
28、骑车,少开车,我们可以生活在更美好的社会中.第五段：Taking all these into account,it is important to promote bike riding in public.Only when we get more bike riding and less motor driving can we lead a happy healthy and natural life.阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。My husband received a letter a month ago a young woman who had bee
29、n his student when she was in middle school.She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.In the letter she wrote,You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent for math.Before you came to teach us,I had been terribly poor at math,and had never thought t
30、hat I would be interested in it.To my surprise,you magically showed me the beauty of math.I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it.Gradually my interest in it began to grow.Thanks to your encouragement,I made continuous progress in math,and finally made up my mind to study it in
31、the university.Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California.You played an important part.Thank you!”What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher!My husband has received many letters from students over the years.This one was special,for it arrived at this time in his life
32、when he is in very poor health.写作内容1.以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。2.以约120个词就老师影响学生的话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括：（1）上文使你想起哪位对你帮助最大的老师；（2）举例说明该老师对你学习或成长的影响；（3）你怎样看待老师对学生的影响。写作要求1.作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。概述部分1,一位退休老师收到很多学生的来信.A retired teacher received many letters from his former students.2,有一封信感谢他鼓励人心的教育.On
33、e of them is a thank-you letter for his inspirational teaching in his math class.3,那也是对他健康情况不好的一个好安慰.The letter is also a warm comfort for his poor physical condition.第一段:概述A retired teacher received many letters from his former students,one of which was not only a thank-you letter for his inspirati
34、onal teaching in his math class,but a warm comfort for his poor physical condition.主要内容:1,对你帮助最大的老师.the most impressive teacher.2,对学习与生活的影响.the influence on your study and ordinary life.3,老师的影响.the importance of a teacher.第二段,(陈述第1个内容要点:最有影响的老师)Reading the passage,Im touched and link my memory to th
35、e most supportive mentor of my own-Mr.Xu,an experienced Chinese teacher,was in charge of my class in Senior Three.As the senior year is characterized by running a tight schedule on everyday basis,we students were loaded with heavy coursework,frequent quizzes and exams,and pressured by our parents hi
36、gh expectations.Increasingly,I felt a need to consult with Mr.Xu on reducing the amount of our workload so that we could be given more time to digest what we had learned over the past couple years.第三段:(陈述第2个主要内容:对自己的影响)Unlike some of the stern teachers,Mr.Xu was open-minded and patient enough to all
37、ow me to raise the above argument.“Besides the study efficiency,”he added with a friendly smile,“I also concern for your morale and well-being.So dont you worry;Ill talk to other teachers and see what we can do to help the class decompress.”Thanks to his approval and consistent support,we gradually
38、adjusted our pacing and stayed steady in preparation for the college entrance examination.第四段:老师的影响.A teacher can be influential in either positive or negative ways.In my observation,a good teacher can bring out the best of his students while a bad teacher may,regrettably,affect the young mind in most discouraging manners.