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1、IELTS写作11.雅思写作概述及评分标准 1.1 课程目标1.2 课程安排1.3 授课理念1.4小作文基本情况1.5 大作文基本情况1.6 分数计算1.7 答题纸1.8 书写格式1.9 雅思写作评分标准说明21.1 课程目标1.1.1官方信息来源1.1.2全球三大考区总体情况1.1.3中国大陆考区总体情况31.1.1 官方信息来源http:/www.ielts.org/researchers/analysis_of_test_data/test_taker_performance_2010.aspxTesttakerperformance201041.1.2 全球三大考区总体情况51.1.3
2、 中国大陆考区总体情况61.2 课程安排雅思写作授课大纲新东方雅思写作基础教材剑桥系列71.3 授课理念动脑+动笔没有理解，练习亦是枯燥没有练习，理解亦是空白课堂互动+作业提交81.4 小作文基本情况1.4.1数据类图表题1.4.1非数据类图表题91.4.1 数据类图表题39/4881%Line5Pie8Bar13Table12Combination1101.4.1 非数据类图表题 9/4819%MapDiagramFlow111.5 大作文基本情况1.5.1议论类1.5.2说明类121.5.1 议论类DiscussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinionDotheadva
3、ntagesoutweighdisadvantages怎样的观点“正确”？怎样写顺手？131.5.2 说明类Problem+Reasons+Solution141.6 分数计算分数构成分数构成That is to sayOverall=40%task1+60%task2Task1:8 Task2:3Overall=3.2+1.8=54:6151.7 答题纸 12wordsperlineTask113linespage1-2Task220linespage3-4见好就收161.8 书写格式1718191.9 评分标准说明2021TaskResponse是否涵盖要点；是否切题、合理Coherenc
4、eandCohesion句语句、段与段的衔接LexicalResources用词的准确性和灵活性GrammaticalRangeandAccuracy语法多样性和准确性222.小作文透析及派图解析2.1 小作文总体审题特点 2.10 派图介绍2.2 小作文写作必备能力 2.11 派图的写作技巧2.3 小作文考点热点 2.12 派图的重难点2.4 小作文综合预测 2.13 派图词汇基础之占据2.5 小作文注意事项 2.14 派图词汇基础之倍数2.6 小作文开头段写法 2.15 派图主语替换技巧2.7 小作文主体段要求 2.16 派图的常用句型2.8 小作文主体段顺序2.9 小作文结尾段写法232
5、.1 小作文总体审题特点 2.1.1审题2.1.2构思242.1.1 审题先阅读introduction的内容，找到两个基本要素描写对象&时间找出描写对象：有助于加速写出引言段找出时间：有助于确定时态252.1.2 构思 各类题型构思方向Line graph 曲线图：按时间顺序Bar chart 柱状图：按时间顺序（含时间要素）与其他对象比较（无时间要素）Pie chart 派图：类似柱状图Table 表格：注意纵向、横向比较Diagrams 图表：注意顺序承接性&被动语态（流程图&地图）262.2 小作文写作必备能力迅速确定描写对象&构思方向迅速筛选出有用信息迅速根据筛选出的信息组织相应的语
6、句272.3 小作文考点热点数据类图表为主导派图：占有线图：趋势，速度柱图：比对表格：数据分析282.4 小作文综合预测292.5 小作文注意事项看清属于什么题型的图表，是一幅图还是两幅或者是以上的图；注意不同类型图表的技巧（包括时态、语态、关键描述词语与句型）；划出并分析题目中的关键内容，分析图表中的关键特征点（依据各种图表的特点来决定）考虑结构（开头引言，描述特征，可能总结）302.6 小作文开头段写法同义替换31Opening 轻松写第一句之单词改写：The diagram below shows chart=graph=diagram(line/curve,pie,bar)table=
7、figures=statistics diagram=picture Show =display/reveal/indicate/reflect =illustrate/demonstrate =give information about =unfold a clear picture of 32Opening 轻松写第一句之万用句型：1,This bar chart displays the number of men and women enrolled in future education in Britain during three periods.2,It is immedia
8、tely apparent from the diagram that in 1970 the processions in Malaysia were almost totally dominated by men.3,The percentage of various types of households struck by poverty in Australia in 1999 is indicated in the table.4,As is revealed in the diagram,the number of hours per week spent on unpaid w
9、ork is unequally distributed between men and women.33时间的描述1,In+月份、年、年代月份、年、年代 In 1980s;In the period betweenand.2,Fromto,Between and,At/by the end of,Until/before/after,About/some From 2008 onwards till At/by the end of this year/century About/some 200 years ago3,For/during+时间段时间段,Over a year period
10、,Throughout ,When it enters,At the turn of the During the first/second half of the year;During the remainder of the year;Over a ten year period=over a decade;Throughout the 20th century;When it entered 2009;At the turn of the new century34Opening 轻松写35Opening 轻松写Paraphrase单词替换 Demand=used/need/requi
11、rement/consumption Typical=average/representative/commonuse=consumeHome=household/family36Opening 轻松写Compound Sentence句子合成 The curve chart reveals the electricity needed in England during average days in winter and summer and the pie graph indicates how electricity is consumed in a typical English h
12、ousehold.37Opening 轻松写Passive Voice The need for electricity in England during average days in winter and summer and how the electricity is consumed in a typical English household are revealed in the charts.38Opening 轻松写Paraphrase单词替换 proportion=percentage/share/statistics/figures Different=variousC
13、ategory=type/kind/groupFamily=household/homeFamilies living in poverty=poor families =families(who were living)in poverty =families(who were)struck by poverty39Opening 轻松写40Opening 轻松写1,The table offers information about the percentage of various types of households who were living in poverty in Aus
14、tralia in 1999.41Opening 轻松写2,The table gives a statistics of different types of family who were living in poverty in Australia in 1999.42Opening 轻松写3,The percentage of various types of households struck by poverty in Australia in 1999 is indicated in the table.43Opening 课堂练习44Opening 课堂练习Travel=tou
15、r/trip/visitThe UK=Britain(not England!)Most=topPopular=favorite/fashionable/stylishCountry=nation UK residents to visit =UK travelers/visitors/tourists45Opening 课堂练习The diagrams reveal visits to and from Britain and the top 5 favorite nations in 1999 for UK tourists.46Opening 课堂练习Visits to and from
16、 Britain and the top 5 favorite nations in 1999 for UK tourists are revealed by/in the diagrams.474849502.7 小作文主体段要求数字文字比对The percentage of males and females arrested during the last 5 years and causes of arrest in 2007 are indicated in the diagrams.512.8 小作文主体段顺序数据类非数据类522.9 小作文结尾段写法数据类加结尾非数据类省结尾53
17、Ending 轻松写Ending常用套句：1,From the diagram it can be safely concluded that in the years 1978-1987 Florida developed much more rapidly than the United States as a whole.2,What is worth mentioning is that nuclear power didnt make its debut until 1998.3,As a whole/In general/To sum up/In conclusion/In sum
18、mary/In a nutshell,the data suggest that the increased presence of women in the paid work force has yet to lead to an increased role for men at home.54Ending 轻松写 Overall the table suggests that households of single adults and those with children were more likely to be living in poverty than those co
19、nsisting of couples.5556ThelinechartillustratesthedataaboutpeopleataLondonsubwaystationfrom6amto10pm.572.10 派图介绍单派双派多派582.11 派图的写作技巧图中找类别按类分段592.12 派图的重难点如何准确把握图中的信息如何正确转述图中的信息如何灵活运用词汇、短语、句型，避免用词单一、句式表达雷同如何精炼语言，避免赘述、啰嗦，避免给评卷人套模板的印象602.13 派图词汇基础之占据RepresentOccupy Stand for Account for 612.16 派图的常用句型“
20、占”：account for,hold,make up,take up,constitute,comprise,represent.百分比：percentage，proportion,share.“约”：the majority of,most of,a considerable number of,a minority of,just over,slightly more than/less than,nearly half 确切数字确切数字 (1)分数与百分比的转化：one third,two fifths.(2)常见表达：a quarter,a half.62整体+局部The follo
21、wing two pie charts illustrate the energy use in the U.S.A.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given in the pie charts below.6364P1The following two pie charts illustrate the energy use in the U.S.A.The two graphs describe the data of the energy use and the residentia
22、l energy use in detail in the United States.65P2It can be seen from the first pie chart that the energy is used for four purposes.Specifically,industry accounts for the largest proportion(41%)of the used energy while demand of transportation makes up 26%of the total need of energy.Residential and co
23、mmercial represent 19%and 14%respectively.66P3According to the second pie chart,it clearly shows that heating and air conditioning account for the largest proportion(62%)in the residential energy use while the small appliances makes up the least proportion(10%).The heating water and miscellaneous(in
24、cluding cooking)constitutes 15%and 13%respectively.67P4From the chart,we may have a basic understanding of the situation of energy use in the United States.68ABC比较The graphs below show the annual expenditure of university students in three countries in 2003.697071Thetwographsshowthemainsourcesofener
25、gyintheUSAinthe1980sandthe1990s.72Electric energy production in US7374The proportion of population in the world753.线图柱图及表格图解析3.1 线图审图技巧3.2 线图的写作技巧3.3 线图的重难点3.4 线图写作点展开之上升及相关词汇3.5 线图写作点展开之下降及相关词汇3.6 线图写作点展开之平稳及相关词汇3.7 线图写作点展开之波动及相关词汇3.8 线图写作点展开之极点及相关词汇3.9 线图的常用句型763.10 柱图审图技巧 3.11 柱图的写作技巧3.12 柱图的重难点3
26、.13 柱形图的常用单词3.14 柱形图的常用句型3.15 表格图审图技巧3.16 表格图的写作技巧3.17 表格图的重难点3.18 表格图的常用单词3.19 表格图的常用句型3.线图柱图及表格图解析773.1 线图审图技巧趋势描述速度描述极点交点起点重点的描述783.2 线图的写作技巧趋势描述多样化793.3 线图的重难点交点难掌控图内对比看不出803.4 线图写作点展开之上升及相关词汇IncreaseClimbGoupSoarRocketShootup813.5 线图写作点展开之下降及相关词汇DecreaseFallDropDipGo down823.6 线图写作点展开之平稳及相关词汇Ke
27、ep stableRemain stable Unchanged Come to a standstill833.7 线图写作点展开之波动及相关词汇Vary Fluctuate起伏 843.8 线图写作点展开之极点及相关词汇Peak atBottom at Reach a plateau853.9 线图的常用句型3.9.1先(上升/下降)后(下降/上升)，之后便平稳3.9.2对峰值和低谷的描述3.9.3趋势相同描述3.9.4对未来的表述3.9.5对波动的描述863.9.1 先(上升/下降)后(下降/上升)，之后便平稳1.According to the data,the years from
28、tosaw/witness a rise/climb/drop in the number/rate/percentage/proportion of 对象 from 数据 to 数据，which was followed by a rapid decrease/reduce/increase over the.years 872.The number/ratedropped/went up again fromin XXX year toin XXX year and then went up/climbed gradually until XXX year,when there was a
29、 leveling off/leveling out at 数据 for 一段时间881.Also it can be noticed that in XXX year,the number/percentage reached the bottom.However/on the contrary,XXX year saw the peak during this period.2.时间点，when the number/percentage reached(amounted to)to a peak of/a high point at 3.时间点,when the number/perce
30、ntage bottomed out(at)3.9.2 对峰值和低谷的描述 89The proportion/number of 对象 in the xx and xx are similar and follow the same trend.In XX the figures were xx%and xx%respectively,rising to xx%and xx%respectively in XXX,after dipping to xx%and xx%respectively in XXX.Thereafter.3.9.3 趋势相同描述903.9.4 对未来的表述is proj
31、ected to as tois expected to as foris forecasted to is estimated to913.9.5 对波动的描述as can be seen from the graph,the two curves show the fluctuation of fluctuated dramatically between xx%and xx%during period.929394Radio and television audiences in the UK,October-December 199295Thegraphbelowshowsthedif
32、ferencesinwheatexportsoverthreedifferentareas.96ThelinegraphbelowgivesinformationoncinemaattendanceintheUK.97ThegraphshowsUndergroundStationPassengerNumbersinLondon.983.10 柱图审图技巧 关键是“比较”&“对比”找出similarity&difference既要横向总结所有柱状图的共性特征，又要分别描写各个柱形的个性特征993.11 柱图的写作技巧单柱如果是以时间为横轴的话，就写一下趋势如果是以组为横轴，则直接写。多柱如果数据
33、比较多，就取几个最大或者最小的就行，也就是说在比较的过程中想要拿到想要的结果就要找对比鲜明的那一对。把对比最鲜明的几个柱子描述清楚，其他的可以一带而过。1003.12 柱图的重难点当图中出现多于20个柱1013.13 柱形图的常用单词线图派图1023.14 柱形图的常用句型The bar chart illustrates that.According to the bar chart,.From the bar chart,we can see clearly that.It is clear/apparent from the chart that.The bar chart depict
34、s 描述(that).the bar chart leads us to the conclusion结论 that.103The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960,1980 and 2000.104P1The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European
35、city in 1960,1980 and 2000.题目The bar graph shows the changing patterns in commuting by train,car,tube or bus for commuters in one European city in the years 1960,1980 and 2000.105P2The number of people using trains at first rose from just under 20%in 1960 to about 26%in 1980,but then fell back to ab
36、out 23%in 2000.106P3Use of the tube was relatively stable,falling from around 27%of commuters in 1960 to 22%in 1980,but climbing back to reach 25%by 2000.107P4On the other hand,the use of cars increased steadily from just over 5%in 1960 to 23%in 1980,reaching almost 40%by 2000,whereas the popularity
37、 of buses has declined since 1960,falling from just under 35%in 1960 to 27%in 1980 and only 15%in 2000.108P5The graph indicates the growing use of cars for commuting to work between 1960-2000,and the continued decline in the popularity of buses from being the most popular mode of transport in 1960 t
38、o the least popular in 2000.109Thechartsbelowshowthemainreasonsforstudyamongstudentsofdifferentagegroupsandtheamountofsupporttheyreceivedfromemployers.110Thetablebelowshowsthefiguresforimprisonmentinfivecountriesbetween1930and1980.111Thegraphaboveshowinformationofemploymentratesacross6countriesin199
39、5and2005.112ThechartbelowshowstheamountspentonsixconsumergoodsinfourEuropeancountries.1133.15 表格图审图技巧有时间因素表格：按照时间顺序，转化为更为明了的线图有地域因素表格：注意横向比较，并根据数值大小对数据进行分类，再抽取较大或较小的典型值进行说明包含其他因素的表格：分别观察各标准在图表中呈现的特征，然后分别说明1143.16 表格图的写作技巧快速浏览题目中的文字信息，重点关注研究对象、数据类型和时间，明确在主体段的写作中要注意数据类型的变化和时态一致问题看题目中的表格图形，看图形时也要先看文字说明
40、，包括标题、标注和单位，弄懂数据所代表的信息，而非数据本身筛选信息，圈定关键数据整理写作顺序1153.17 表格图的重难点1.数据繁多而且凌乱，找不出很明显的特征2.如何用适当的顺序、结构和衔接方式把表格中体现的特征条理清晰地传达出来3.写的时候如何不遗漏信息1163.18 表格图的常用单词1173.19 表格图的常用句型118agesizenumber119P1The table demonstrates the data regarding the subway system in six cities,including date opened,kilometers of route a
41、nd passengers per year(in millions)120P2In terms of date opened,London has the most time-honored(1863)subway system among the six cities while subway system in Los Angeles is the newest one opened in 2001.（最老，最新）Systems in Paris and Tokyo are opened in 1900 and 1927,respectively.时间顺序After that,syste
42、ms in Washington DC and Kyoto are opened in 1976 and 1981 differently.121As for the size of the railway system,London still ranks the first,meaning it has the longest subway system(384 kilometers)among the six cities,which is roughly twice as large as the system in Paris.（最长）By contrast,subway syste
43、m in Kyoto is shorter(11 kilometers)than the others even thought it opened in relatively recent year.（最短）The kilometers of route in Tokyo,Washington DC and Los Angeles are 155,126 and 28 differently.122The third part is passengers per year in millions.More exactly,the top three are Tokyo(1927),Paris
44、(1191)and London(775).Underground railway system in Washington DCs has 144 millions passengers per year.Systems in Los Angeless and Kyotos carry fewer passengers per year(50 and 45,respectively).123Thus,it can be clearly seen from the table that the subway systems in Tokyo and Paris serves for more
45、passengers whereas the systems in Los Angeles and Kyoto carry fewer passengers mainly because of the short route.124The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000.剑6 P52125对于不同时间同一事物的比较先相减/相除，后分组哪些是增加，哪些是减少幅度大的与幅度小的分组126127增加的Car,Longdistancebus,T
46、rain,Taxi幅度大的Car+1607减少的Walking,Bicycle,Localbus幅度大的Localbus-155128P1The table demonstrates how different modes of travel changed in England in 15 years spanning from 1985 to 2000.In general,the modes are classified into two kinds in terms of average miles travelled per person per year:one enjoyed r
47、ising popularity while the other decreasing.129P2The travel modes which gained popularity in the period included cars,long distance buses,trains,taxis and others.Cars remained top among the modes in the 15 years,with its average miles increasing considerably from 3,199 in 1985 to 4,806 in 2000.Long
48、distance buses and taxis seemed to be warmly welcomed by travelers,so average miles travelled in the two modes almost tripled130P3Travels by walking,bicycles and local buses lost travelers favor in the one and a half decade.Average travelling distance by local buses suffered the biggest decrease,dro
49、pping from 429 to 274,while the number of miles by walking and bikes fell mildly from 255 to 237 and from 51 to 41 respectively.131P4Overall,the number of miles travelled by the average per person rose from 4,740 miles in 1985 to 6,475 miles in 2000,with the increase of cars accounting for almost al
50、l of that increase.1324 流程图地图解析4.1 流程图审图技巧 4.2 流程图的写作技巧4.3 流程图的重难点4.4 流程图的常用单词4.5 流程图的常用句型4.6 地图审图技巧4.7 地图的写作技巧 4.8 地图的重难点4.9 地图的常用单词4.10 地图的常用句型1334.1 流程图审图技巧流程图的本质其实就是要求考生将图中出现的文字信息用连贯的语言串起来，不需要过多地发挥。1344.2 流程图的写作技巧1.时态相对单一，主要用一般现在时2.经常使用被动语态，显得比较客观和正式3.找出流程图的始末点，并划分中间的步骤或阶段4.掌握表示“顺序”的连接词(Sequenci