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1、作文高分技巧作文高分技巧 n1、卷面整洁，书写清楚n2、构思简单，少犯错误n3、中心突出，层次分明n4、固定经典，名言注目n5、重在变化，宁简勿滥 熟悉老师的评分习惯熟悉老师的评分习惯n n评分重点评分重点评分重点评分重点:文章的结构和语言水平文章的结构和语言水平文章的结构和语言水平文章的结构和语言水平n n两个基本点两个基本点两个基本点两个基本点:闪光点和语法点闪光点和语法点闪光点和语法点闪光点和语法点 n n应对策略应对策略:提问法、衔接词语、从句、提问法、衔接词语、从句、并列句、谚语总结法、灵活的词汇和并列句、谚语总结法、灵活的词汇和句型、以及被动语态等闪光点句型、以及被动语态等闪光点.

2、n n“It is“It is not whatnot what you say/write,you say/write,but but howhow you say/write it you say/write it thatthat counts for counts for much more.much more.n n“Give the teacher exactly what“Give the teacher exactly what he/she wants to see.”he/she wants to see.”给阅卷老师最想要看到的。给阅卷老师最想要看到的。最常用的写作模式n

3、 n综观近几年的四级考试作文综观近几年的四级考试作文,尽管实用性提尽管实用性提高了，但行文大多可以套用高了，但行文大多可以套用:n n “中心句中心句中心句中心句1 1、2 2、3 3展开句展开句展开句展开句”模式。模式。模式。模式。n n每段第一句是每段第一句是topic sentencetopic sentence，改编自该段改编自该段改编自该段改编自该段相对应的中文提纲相对应的中文提纲相对应的中文提纲相对应的中文提纲，后面的，后面的1 1、2 2、3 3句是衔句是衔接词，每句后接分支观点接词，每句后接分支观点,尽量多用衔接词。尽量多用衔接词。尽量多用衔接词。尽量多用衔接词。n n利利:中

4、心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考中心突出，层次分明，同时也节省了考生构思结构的时间。生构思结构的时间。生构思结构的时间。生构思结构的时间。n n弊弊弊弊:忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型忌讳雷同的或相似的写作模式或句型,n n对策对策对策对策:多掌握常用词句多掌握常用词句多掌握常用词句多掌握常用词句,多运用不同的句型多运用不同的句型多运用不同的句型多运用不同的句型,多使用不同的衔接词多使用不同的衔接词多使用不同的衔接词多使用不同的衔接词 时间分配时间分配n n写作

5、写作:时间共时间共30分钟，分值共分钟，分值共142分分n n9:00发答题卡，发答题卡，9：10分分9：40作文作文n n正确涂卡后可以构思作文，约有正确涂卡后可以构思作文，约有5分钟左右分钟左右n n先用铅笔写，再用钢笔定稿先用铅笔写，再用钢笔定稿n n审题构思审题构思-3分钟分钟n n拟定提纲拟定提纲-5分钟分钟n n正文写作正文写作-20分钟分钟n n检查修改检查修改-2分钟分钟 n n考试作文的考试作文的润色和修改润色和修改只需要达只需要达到三个目的：到三个目的：n n1.拼写正确，看文章中是否有汉字、拼写正确，看文章中是否有汉字、多余符号、糊乱涂改、划线、和错多余符号、糊乱涂改、划

6、线、和错别字；别字；n n2.搭配正确搭配正确,动宾动宾,动词短语动词短语,形容词形容词与副词与副词,非谓语动词等；非谓语动词等；n n3.语法正确，特别是人称、时态、语法正确，特别是人称、时态、和单复数的和单复数的不一致不一致。衔接词衔接词衔接词衔接词是文章逻辑关系的体现，可用于各段是文章逻辑关系的体现，可用于各段,且各段尽量用不同的衔接词且各段尽量用不同的衔接词,多用为妙多用为妙.n n“起起”的过渡词：的过渡词：nowadays,in the first nowadays,in the first place,for one thing,on the one hand,place,for

7、 one thing,on the one hand,n n“承承承承”的过渡词：的过渡词：in the second place,for in the second place,for another,(besides,moreover,furthermore,another,(besides,moreover,furthermore,obviously,in addition,in other words,)what obviously,in addition,in other words,)what is moreis more；n n“转转转转”的过渡词：的过渡词：however,on

8、 the other however,on the other hand,but,instead,converselyhand,but,instead,conversely；n n“合合合合”的过渡词：的过渡词：last but not least,It last but not least,It followed that(followed that(由此可见由此可见),therefore,),therefore,as a result,in short,in brief,in a word,in as a result,in short,in brief,in a word,in conc

9、lusionconclusion。Key Sentences for CET-4 Writing 一)开篇 n nWhen it comes to,peoples opinions differ from each other.n nRecently the problem of X has been brought into focus.has become a heated topic.has aroused great concern.n nNowadays there is a growing concern over.n nThere is a public discussion t

10、oday about n nIt is said/reported/estimated/believed/suggested+thatn nWith the rapid development of.,n nAccording to a recent survey,.二)结尾n nAs far as I am concerned,+主句n nAs is mentioned above,we may safely come to the conclusion that n nFrom what has been discussed/mentioned above,we can draw the

11、conclusion that.n nJudging from all evidence offered,we may safely come to the conclusion that n nIn summary/conclusion,if we continue In summary/conclusion,if we continue to ignore the above-mentioned issue,to ignore the above-mentioned issue,more problems will crop up.more problems will crop up.n

12、nTo solve the above-mentioned To solve the above-mentioned problem,we must.problem,we must.n nIt is high time that strict/efficient It is high time that strict/efficient measures measures werewere taken to stop V-ing.taken to stop V-ing.n nIt is necessary/essential that steps/It is necessary/essenti

13、al that steps/measures should be taken to V.measures should be taken to V.n nIt is high time that we should take It is high time that we should take measures to measures to n nIt is essential that effective measures It is essential that effective measures should be taken to should be taken to n nWha

14、t really mattersWhat really matters is is that+that+从句从句 not not thatthat从句从句 重要的是重要的是 而不是而不是三）比较n n1）利大于弊利大于弊 The advantages of A far outweigh its disadvantages.The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.n n2)利弊并存利弊并存Just as every coin has two sides,everything has its advantages and disad

15、vantages.Evidently,it has both negative and positive effects.3)求异求异/同同 A and B differ in several ways.A and B has several points in common.The same is true of B.n n4)It is reasonable to maintain that.but it would be foolish to claim that.People used to think.,but things are different now.四)原因原因 n n1

16、）A number of factors might contribute to/lead to/account for the phenomenon.n n2）The phenomenon mainly stems from the fact that.n n3）The change in.largely results from the fact that.n n4）Another contributing factor(cause)is.n n5)Some reasons are responsible for this.6)There are lots of reasons respo

17、nsible for the dramatic growth/decrease.n n7)The reason why is thatn n8)It is because五)后果 n n1）It may give rise to/result in a lot of problems.n n2）The immediate result it produces is.n n3）It will exercise a profound influence upon.n n4）Its consequence can be so great that+从句.n n5）A good case in poi

18、nt is.表示典型的例子六)证明 n n1)No one can deny the fact that.n n2)Recent studies indicate that.n n3)There is sufficient evidence to show that+从句.That 引导的名词从句n n功能：它相当于一个名词，可以充当主功能：它相当于一个名词，可以充当主功能：它相当于一个名词，可以充当主功能：它相当于一个名词，可以充当主语、宾语、表语、同位语、介宾语、宾语、表语、同位语、介宾语、宾语、表语、同位语、介宾语、宾语、表语、同位语、介宾.that.that 无具体含义，只有语法功能无

19、具体含义，只有语法功能无具体含义，只有语法功能无具体含义，只有语法功能,有时可省有时可省有时可省有时可省,有时不可省有时不可省有时不可省有时不可省.n n 句型：句型：句型：句型：It+be+adj./N./NP/V/V-ed+It+be+adj./N./NP/V/V-ed+that that Eg.Eg.It is obvious that money does not grow It is obvious that money does not grow on trees.on trees.It is common knowledge(that)the earth It is common

20、 knowledge(that)the earth goes round the sun.goes round the sun.It seems/happens/occurs to me that It seems/happens/occurs to me that It is believed that It is believed that That引导的主语从句句型引导的主语从句句型 n nIt+be+N.that eg.It is a fact that=事实是It is common knowledge that=是常识是常识It is a question that=是个问题It

21、is a pity that=可惜的是It is an honor that=非常荣幸It is a shame that=真是可耻It is a wonder that.=真是奇迹 It+be+adj.+thatIt is certain that=It is certain that=诚然诚然It is strange that=It is strange that=很奇怪很奇怪,奇怪的是奇怪的是It is clear/evident/obvious that=It is clear/evident/obvious that=很清楚很清楚,很显然很显然It is(un)likely/pro

22、bable that=It is(un)likely/probable that=很可能很可能It is better that=It is better that=最好最好It is natural that=It is natural that=很自然很自然It is essential that=It is essential that=很必要很必要It+be+V-ed that It is said/reported/estimated/believed/suggested+thatIt has been proved that=已经证明It must be pointed that=

23、必须指出It is demanded that=按要求n n以上句型在表示建议、要求、命令等意思时，从句要用虚拟，即(should+)VIt+Vi+that n neg.It seems that=好象是It happened/happens that=碰巧It followed that=由此可见It matters that=要紧的是(=What matters is that not that)It occurred to me that=我想到It struck me that=我突然想到1.对比论述型作文模版Is Money All Powerful?Is Money All Pow

24、erful?1.1.一些人认为一些人认为一些人认为一些人认为2.2.另一些人认为另一些人认为另一些人认为另一些人认为3.3.我的看法我的看法我的看法我的看法 The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life The Pros and Cons of Dormitory Life 1.1.很多人认为学校应该要求大学生住在宿舍内，理由是很多人认为学校应该要求大学生住在宿舍内，理由是很多人认为学校应该要求大学生住在宿舍内，理由是很多人认为学校应该要求大学生住在宿舍内，理由是2.2.很多人认为学校不应该强制大学生住在宿舍，理由是很多人认为学校不应该强制大学生住在宿舍，理由是很多人

25、认为学校不应该强制大学生住在宿舍，理由是很多人认为学校不应该强制大学生住在宿舍，理由是3.3.在我看来，在我看来，在我看来，在我看来，.结构模式：结构模式：n n第一段：导言第一段：导言第一段：导言第一段：导言+观点观点观点观点A A。提出问题，阐明甲方观点及理由。提出问题，阐明甲方观点及理由。提出问题，阐明甲方观点及理由。提出问题，阐明甲方观点及理由。n n第二段：观点第二段：观点第二段：观点第二段：观点B B。阐明乙方观点及理由。阐明乙方观点及理由。阐明乙方观点及理由。阐明乙方观点及理由。n n第三段：我的观点。第三段：我的观点。第三段：我的观点。第三段：我的观点。n n写作重点在以对比的

26、方式展开两种对立观点写作重点在以对比的方式展开两种对立观点写作重点在以对比的方式展开两种对立观点写作重点在以对比的方式展开两种对立观点 n n 1)1)When it comes to _,peoples When it comes to _,peoples opinions differ.opinions differ.2)2)Many people believe that Many people believe that _._.3)3)For one thing,_.For one thing,_.4)4)For another,_.For another,_.n n 5)5)Some

27、 people,however,take a different Some people,however,take a different attitude.attitude.6)6)They regard_.They regard_.7)7)In In their views,_.their views,_.8)8)Furthermore,Furthermore,_._.n n 9)9)As far as I am concerned,_.As far as I am concerned,_.10)10)On the one hand,_.On the one hand,_.11)11)On

28、 On the other hand,_.the other hand,_.12)12)So So _._.n n填充内容填充内容填充内容填充内容n n第一段第一段第一段第一段 1 1）文章主题）文章主题）文章主题）文章主题 2 2）一些人的观点）一些人的观点）一些人的观点）一些人的观点 3 3）理由一）理由一）理由一）理由一 4 4）理由二）理由二）理由二）理由二 n n第二段第二段第二段第二段 5 5）另一些人反对）另一些人反对）另一些人反对）另一些人反对 6 6）另一些人的观点）另一些人的观点）另一些人的观点）另一些人的观点 7 7）理由一）理由一）理由一）理由一 8 8）理由二）理由二

29、）理由二）理由二n n第三段第三段第三段第三段 9 9）作者自己的观点，看法）作者自己的观点，看法）作者自己的观点，看法）作者自己的观点，看法 10 10）论点一）论点一）论点一）论点一 11 11）论点二）论点二）论点二）论点二 12 12）总结上文）总结上文）总结上文）总结上文范文n n1)1)When it comes to When it comes to whether university whether university authorities should require students toauthorities should require students to l

30、ive in live in dormitory,dormitory,peoples opinions differ peoples opinions differ.2)2)Many people believe that Many people believe that there are there are great advantages of dormitory life.3)great advantages of dormitory life.3)For For one thingone thing,students have the chance of students have

31、the chance of enjoying the friendship of their roommates.enjoying the friendship of their roommates.This can be the most precious memory This can be the most precious memory they have later in life.they have later in life.4)4)For anotherFor another,university dormitories do not cost much,university

32、dormitories do not cost much,whilewhile leaving off campus can be very leaving off campus can be very expensive.Let alone the issue of securityexpensive.Let alone the issue of security.5)5)Some people,however,take a Some people,however,take a different attitude.different attitude.6)6)They They regar

33、dregard dormitory dormitory asas an undesirable place an undesirable place.7)7)In their views,In their views,since 4 to 8 people since 4 to 8 people live in one dormitory,there is not live in one dormitory,there is not enough privacyenough privacy.8)8)Furthermore,Furthermore,dormitory is troublesome

34、 because it dormitory is troublesome because it is very likely that one could have is very likely that one could have clashes with his dorm matesclashes with his dorm mates.9)9)As far as I am concerned,As far as I am concerned,students students benefit greatly from dormitory lifebenefit greatly from

35、 dormitory life.10)10)On On the one hand,the one hand,dormitory life provides dormitory life provides precious lessons on how to communicate precious lessons on how to communicate with others.with others.11)11)On the other hand,On the other hand,students do not feel lonely.There are students do not

36、feel lonely.There are always people of the same age around.always people of the same age around.And when they have trouble,there are And when they have trouble,there are always helping hands in the dormitory.always helping hands in the dormitory.12)12)So So why live off campus why live off campus wh

37、ilewhile there is there is good life right here?good life right here?Come and enjoy Come and enjoy dormitory lifedormitory life .The Pros and Cons of The Pros and Cons of May 1st Golden Week May 1st Golden Weekn n1、一些人认为保留五一黄金周，、一些人认为保留五一黄金周，赞成理由是赞成理由是n n2、另一些人认为取消五一黄金、另一些人认为取消五一黄金周，理由是周，理由是n n3、我的看

38、法是、我的看法是n n1)1)When it comes to When it comes to _,peoples opinions _,peoples opinions differ.differ.2)2)Many people believe that Many people believe that _._.3)3)For one thing,For one thing,_._.4)4)For another,For another,_._.n n5)5)Some people,however,take a Some people,however,take a different at

39、titude.different attitude.6)6)They regard They regard.as_.as_.7)7)In their In their views,_.views,_.8)8)Furthermore,_.Furthermore,_.n n9)9)As far as I am As far as I am concerned,_.concerned,_.10)10)On On the one hand,_.the one hand,_.11)11)On the other On the other hand,_.hand,_.12)12)So So _._.2.问

40、题解决型模版n n该类的作文通常首先提出一个有该类的作文通常首先提出一个有待解决的问题，然后要求考生就待解决的问题，然后要求考生就该问题提出解决方法、途径，有该问题提出解决方法、途径，有时还要求考生最后谈论适合自己时还要求考生最后谈论适合自己的方法。的方法。n nHow to Eliminate Fake DiplomasHow to Eliminate Fake Diplomas结构模式：结构模式：n n第一段：导言。描述现状、形势、困第一段：导言。描述现状、形势、困第一段：导言。描述现状、形势、困第一段：导言。描述现状、形势、困难，提出问题。难，提出问题。难，提出问题。难，提出问题。n n

41、第二段：方法。列举说明处理某事的第二段：方法。列举说明处理某事的第二段：方法。列举说明处理某事的第二段：方法。列举说明处理某事的方式或者解决某个问题的途径。方式或者解决某个问题的途径。方式或者解决某个问题的途径。方式或者解决某个问题的途径。n n第三段：评价、建议或个人选择。第三段：评价、建议或个人选择。第三段：评价、建议或个人选择。第三段：评价、建议或个人选择。针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的针对第二段所阐述的方法给予简要的评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并评论，也可提出个人建议或选择，并评论，也可

42、提出个人建议或选择，并简述理由。简述理由。简述理由。简述理由。n n本题型的写作重点在本题型的写作重点在本题型的写作重点在本题型的写作重点在“how”,“how”,即解决即解决即解决即解决办法。办法。办法。办法。How to Succeed in a Job Interview How to Succeed in a Job Interviewn n1、面试在求职过程中的作用、面试在求职过程中的作用.n n2、取得面试成功的因素：仪表、取得面试成功的因素：仪表,举止举止,谈吐谈吐,能力能力,专业知识专业知识,自信自信,实事求是实事求是 How to Succeed in a Job Inter

43、view How to Succeed in a Job Interviewn n 1)1)With the development of _,_.With the development of _,_.2)2)So it is of great importance for us to_.So it is of great importance for us to_.3)3)On the one hand,_.On the one hand,_.4)4)On the other On the other hand_.hand_.n n5)5)To _,we have figured out

44、many ways to To _,we have figured out many ways to _._.6)6)First,_.First,_.7)7)Second,Second,_._.8)8)Finally,_.Finally,_.9)9)In a word,In a word,_._.n n10)10)To sum up,_.To sum up,_.11)11)It is high time for us to It is high time for us to _._.12)12)Therefore_.Therefore_.n n填充内容填充内容填充内容填充内容n n1 1）问题

45、出现的背景）问题出现的背景）问题出现的背景）问题出现的背景2 2）提出问题）提出问题）提出问题）提出问题3 3）必要性或后果一）必要性或后果一）必要性或后果一）必要性或后果一 4 4）必）必）必）必要性或后果二要性或后果二要性或后果二要性或后果二n n5 5）提出解决问题的方法）提出解决问题的方法）提出解决问题的方法）提出解决问题的方法 6 6）方法一）方法一）方法一）方法一 7 7）方法二）方法二）方法二）方法二8 8）方法三）方法三）方法三）方法三 9 9）总结上文）总结上文）总结上文）总结上文n n1010）重申主题）重申主题）重申主题）重申主题 11 11）进一步强调主题）进一步强调主

46、题）进一步强调主题）进一步强调主题 12 12）总结上文）总结上文）总结上文）总结上文范文 1)1)With the development of With the development of our modern our modern society,the interview is becoming more society,the interview is becoming more and more important in job-hunting.2)and more important in job-hunting.2)So it So it is of great import

47、ance for us to is of great importance for us to master master skillsskills on interviewon interview.3)3)On the one hand,On the one hand,if a if a job seeker can leave a good impression on job seeker can leave a good impression on the mind of the interviewer,he may be the mind of the interviewer,he m

48、ay be lucky enough to get the job competed for lucky enough to get the job competed for by many applicantsby many applicants.4)4)On the other hand,On the other hand,if the job hunter gives a poor performance if the job hunter gives a poor performance during the interview,he is unlikely to stand duri

49、ng the interview,he is unlikely to stand a chancea chance.5)5)To To be successful in a job interviewbe successful in a job interview,we,we have figured out many ways to have figured out many ways to make an make an excellent performance in an interviewexcellent performance in an interview.6)6)First,

50、First,the applicant ought to pay attention the applicant ought to pay attention to his appearance and manner of to his appearance and manner of speakingspeaking.7)7)Second,Second,he is supposed to he is supposed to display his abilitydisplay his ability.8)8)Finally,Finally,a really a really impressi