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1、英语写作要领及技巧制作人:薛少鹏大学英语(CET4,CET6)作文要求写作时间:30分钟作文字数:100-150字评分标准:A)是否切题 B)是否表达思想清楚 C)是否连贯通顺 D)是否存在或严重存在语言错误Sentence Writing 用词必须明确、具体。多用主动语态省去不必要的词不要滥用并列句正确选择并列连词避免悬垂分词不要改变说话角度避免主次颠倒注意标点符号的使用用词必须明确、具体Ex:A)He was not very often on time.He usually came late.B)He did not think that studying Latin was of m
2、uch use He thought the study of Latin useless.C)He show satisfaction as the took possession of his well earned reward.He grinned as he pocketed.多用主动语态My first visit to Boston will always be remembered by me.My first visit to Boston will always be remembered.I shall always remember my first visit to
3、Boston.省去不必要的词 The question as to whether it is right or wrong depends.The question whether it is right or wrong depends.His story is a strange one.His story is strange.This is a subject that arouses public attention.This subject arouses public attention.省去不必要的词In spite of the fact that she was in a
4、 hurry,she stopped to talk.Although she was in a hurry,she stopped to talk.The fact that you had not succeeded in the examination should not deter you from trying again.Your failure in the examination should not deter you from trying again.不要滥用并列句We are going to the countryside this summer,and we ar
5、e going to visit my grandmother.We are going to the countryside this summer to visit my grandmother.My friend told me that I had won the scholarship,and I was overjoyed.When my friend told me that I had won the scholarship,I was overjoyed.正确选择并列连词It is time for the curtain to rise;and only a few of
6、the audience have yet come.It is time for the curtain to rise,but only a few of the audience have yet come.避免悬垂分词Flying at 12,000 feet,the countryside looks like a green check tablecloth.When you fly at 12,000 feet,the countryside looks like a green check tablecloth.Walking through the fields,the wi
7、ld flowers flowers are an interesting subject to study.As one walks through the fields,the wild flowers provide an interesting subject to study.不要改变说话角度The entire class attended the picnic,and an enjoyable day was spent by all.The entire class attended the picnic,and all spent an enjoyable day.When
8、you have selected a satisfactory pattern,the material may then be bought.When you have selected a satisfactory pattern,you may then buy the material避免主次颠倒(1)The development of the suburbs has created problem,while it has also provided substantial modern housing for millions of people.While the devel
9、opment of the suburbs has created problem,it has also provided substantial modern housing for millions of people.避免主次颠倒(2)Joe walked out of the room,finding the boy still there.Walking out of the room,Joe found the boy still there.分词表示次要动作注意标点符号的使用Mary says Amy is the greatest actress in London.Mary
10、,says Amy,is the greatest actress in London.He is fortunately married.He is,fortunately married.Paragraph WritingThe structure of a paragraphTopic sentenceDevelopment sentenceConclusion The structure of a paragraphTopic sentenceWhat is topic sentenceThe position of topic sentenceHow to write a topic
11、 sentenceTOPIC SENTENCERadar is very important in aviation today.Radar is greatly used in our life today.Radar plays an important role in supporting my family.Development sentenceWhat is development sentenceHow to wrote a development sentence.Skill A:Enumeration Skill B:Comparison and contrast Skill
12、 C:Cause and effect写作的基本步骤审题构思列出提纲动笔复合写作的基本要求完整性 文章是有机的整体要表达完整的信息,初此文章还应保持结构的完整。唯一性 主题唯一、中心鲜明连贯性 对中心思想(论点)的阐述要合乎逻辑,前后连贯。练习:Adult Education in China 1)China needs to develop her adult education.2)Adult education is now playing an important part in Chinas realization of the four modernizations.3)Howev
13、er,adult education in China faces some problems.习作评析 China needs to develop her education.In china,the number of high education is limited because of its economics and population.So her adult education is an important content.Adult education is important on increasing the whole education.Adult educa
14、tion is now playing an important part in the realization of her four modernizations.The four modernizations-national defense,agriculture,science and technology,industry-are Chinas aim of development.Realizing the four modernizations needs more educated workers,so in China adult education is very urg
15、ent.However,adult education in China faces some problems.first,the number of adult education is too large to satisfy in funds.second,the quality of education cant be guaranteed.词不达意The number of the youth who can get higher education.Its backward economy and large population.Is a very urgent task.Th
16、e number of people receiving adult education is too large to be satisfied at onceHOME WORKMy suggestions on Education Chinas educational cause has developed very fast during the decade,but it still leaves much to be desired._英语写作的三要和三忌要尽量用学过的词句表达法,忌用Chinese English。要紧扣要求,忌自由发挥。要内容连贯,忌东拼西凑。议论文写作确定主题论
17、据充分逻辑严密结构清晰态度忠诚,友好转承词 I表示时间:first,second,next,before during after,now,then,last 举例:in addition,also,anther,further,more,similarly,for example/instance对比:although,but however,instead,nevertheless,on the other hand,in contrast,on the contrary转承词 II表示因果:since,therefore,as a result,consequently,because,thus加强语气:again,beside moreover,in particular,in fact,indeed,to this end总结结论:as has been noted,in brief,in short,to conclude,to sum up