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1、高考书面表达专练高考书面表达专练人物介绍人物介绍（IntroducingSomebody）美文欣赏（美文欣赏（EnjoyReading）AlthoughPrinceton,NewJersey,hasaworld-famousuniversity,itisstillasmallquiettown.Itisnotaplacewhereanyonewouldexpecttoseestrangecharactersonthestreet.Thatiswhyonewomanwillneverforgetthedayin1940when,asachild,shesuddenlysawafunny-look
2、ingmancomingtowardsher.“Iremember,”shetellsherchildrennow,“howwildhiswhitehairlooked-asifithadbeenelectrified.Hewasshort.Hisclothesseemedtobejustpulledontokeephimcovered,likeablankettokeeponewarm.Hehadabignose,ashort,thickmoustache,anddeep-seteyes.Hewasstaring,thinking.幻灯幻灯片片4这一段的确写这一段的确写得很精彩，以得很精彩，
3、以至于每每看到至于每每看到爱因斯坦的画爱因斯坦的画像时总想起这像时总想起这段描写，而背段描写，而背读起这段文字读起这段文字时眼前又总是时眼前又总是浮现出爱因斯浮现出爱因斯坦的形象。坦的形象。Healmostknockedmedownbeforehesawme.Hegavemeafriendlysmile,thenhewalkedonandwentonthinking.Inoticedhehadonbedroomslippers.Hehadforgottentoputonhisshoes.Helookedasifhehadjuststeppedoutofmybookoffairytalesand
4、hadpassedmelikeaspirit.幻灯片幻灯片5这或许就是我们常常这或许就是我们常常说到的说到的“形象生动形象生动”、“栩栩如生栩栩如生”吧。吧。文段边忆边叙，为我们文段边忆边叙，为我们刻画了一位大鼻深眼、刻画了一位大鼻深眼、短须乱发、衣着随意、短须乱发、衣着随意、不修边幅的人物形象，不修边幅的人物形象，而他竟然是大名鼎鼎的而他竟然是大名鼎鼎的爱因斯坦，也难怪爱因斯坦，也难怪Hewasstaring,thinking。ThatnightatdinnerwhenItoldmyfamilyaboutthestrange,funnymanIhad seen,my father put d
5、own hisknife and fork,looked at me andsaid,Mychild,rememberthis.Todayyou saw the greatest man in theworld!”ThatmanwasElbertEinstein.HowandwhyhehadcometoPrinceton,NewJerseyisastoryofstruggle,success,andsadness.幻灯片2推推荐荐背背诵诵文文段段常用表达法常用表达法1.性别与婚姻（性别与婚姻（Sex&Marriage）Imamanoffortyandhavea9-year-olddaughte
6、r.Shegotmarriedin1980andnowshehasbeenmarriedformorethan20years.Im35,maleandunmarried.IgotmarriedfiveyearsagobutnowImsingle.2.年龄（年龄（Age）Hewasbornin1995andiseightyearsoldnow.Born in 1985,he is now an 18-year-oldstudent,studyinginauniversity.Hebegantomakealivingattheageof14/atanearlyage.Inhisfifties,he
7、begantofeelhisage.Bytheageof14,hehadsetupachemistrylabofhisown.3.外貌特征外貌特征（Appearance）Sheisalovelygirl,witharoundface,bigeyes,whiteteethandlongwavinghair.He is thin,tall and wearing a pair of thickglasses.Heisagood-looking/funny-lookingman,withathickmoustachebutnohairleft.He is a tall man,with blue e
8、yes and blondhair.deep-set eyes,big bright eyes,long straight nose,brown curling hair,broad shoulders4.身高（身高（Height）Heis1.76meterstall.Heis176centimeterstall.Heis176centimetersinheight.Theboyisnottallenoughtoreachtheappleoverhead.Heisreallyatallman,about1.98metersinheight.Myheightis1.76metres.(不合英语习
9、惯不合英语习惯)Im1.76metershigh.（身高不宜用身高不宜用high）5.健康状况（健康状况（Health）Welllookedafter,thechildrenlookhealthy.Im not so strong,but(Im)in goodhealth.Havingbeeninhospitalforsixmonths,nowshelooksveryweak.6.教育状况（教育状况（Education）Istartedschoolin1984andleftschool12yearslater.I went to study in Beijing University in 1
10、984and 4 years later I graduated(from thatuniversity).Welearnedmanycourses,includingIvebeenstudyinginTianshanPrimarySchool(No.1 High School,Fudan University)for morethantwoyearsandwillgraduatenextyear.Igotmybachelors(masters,doctors)degreeinmathematicsinApril1998.7.特长爱好（特长爱好（Specialty&Hobbies）Imgood
11、atspokenEnglishandevenbetteratusingcomputers.IwonthefirstprizeintheEnglishspeechcontestatschoollastyear.Hegotthefirstplaceinthehomepagedesigningcontest.Myfavoritesportisswimmingandplayingtable-tennis.Inmysparetime,Ilikereadingandenjoyingtraveling.8.详细特色（详细特色（Somethingindetail）举例法（举例法（Givingexamples）
12、:Hewasstrictwitheverybodyandineverythinghedid.Oneday,wewerehavingclasseswhenHewasveryforgetful.Oncehecameacrossanoldfriendofhisinthestreetand.Hehadastrangewayofmakinghisclasseslivelyandinteresting.Istillremembermyfirstdayasachemistrystudent.写作练习写作练习李涛是我校年轻的老教师。他被看作是老教李涛是我校年轻的老教师。他被看作是老教师，是因为他教化学课已经有
13、师，是因为他教化学课已经有2020年了。说他年了。说他年轻，因为他今年还不过年轻，因为他今年还不过3838岁。岁。他长得较他长得较瘦。头上头发不多，灰白了。他戴着深度眼瘦。头上头发不多，灰白了。他戴着深度眼镜，牙齿又缺了镜，牙齿又缺了2 2颗。所以他看上去比他实颗。所以他看上去比他实际年龄要大。他说，在公共汽车上常常有人际年龄要大。他说，在公共汽车上常常有人给他让座。事实上。我曾看见他不止一次地给他让座。事实上。我曾看见他不止一次地给怀抱婴儿的妇女让过座。只要听一听他的给怀抱婴儿的妇女让过座。只要听一听他的化学课化学课那课又生动又有趣，你就会发现那课又生动又有趣，你就会发现他真正的年龄。他真正
14、的年龄。习作点评习作点评Li Tao is a young but“old”teacher in our school.He is often regarded as an old teacher because he has taught chemistry for over 20 years.He is a thin man with thick glasses.The little grey hair and lacking of two teeth make him look older than his real age.He often says that there are ma
15、ny people giving their seats to him in buses.But in fact,I saw him giving his seat to the woman who takes her baby in her arms more than once.If you have his lively and interesting chemistry lessons,you will find that he is no more than 38 years old.本文叙议结合，对原本文叙议结合，对原材料调控有度，取舍材料调控有度，取舍得当，是一篇很好的得当，是一
16、篇很好的习作。习作。修改建议：修改建议：1.第第 二二 段段 第第 一一 句句 有有chinglish之之嫌嫌，可可改改为为:saysthatmanypeoplegivetheirseatstohim.2.whotakes改改为为whotook。3.最后一句应改为最后一句应改为Ifyouhaveeverhad参考范文参考范文AteacherLiTaoisayoungandoldteacherinourschool.Heisregardedasbeingoldforhehasbeenteachingherefor20years.Heisseen,atthesametime,asbeingyoun
17、gasheisnowbut38yearsold.Hedoesnthavemuchhaironthehead.Anditisnearlyallwhite.Missingtwoteethandwearingthickglasses,helooksolder than he really is.He says people often offertheirseatstohimforhisoldlooks.Onthecontrary,Imyselfsawhimgiveuphisseattoawomanwithababyinherarms.Atleasttwicehedidso.Whenyouattendhisinterestingandlivelyclasses,youwillbesureofhisrealage-stillyoung.