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1、Topic Sentence Topic Sentence WritingWritingThroughThroughBrainstormingtravelingStep 1:Activate Information Travelingmoney,time,partner,transportation,vocation,gain knowledge,relax,build a strong body,have fun,be cheated,dangerous,learn sth out of book,an unforgettable experience,colorful life,fresh
2、 airtake adventure,make friends,aboard ones sight,a good memory,culture,food,view,positive emotion,people,meet the bad guy,make family worried,different lifestyles,climate,weather,background,religious of belief,custom,geographyStep 2:Classify by Coloring!Travelingmoney,time,partner,transportation,vo
3、cation,gain knowledge,relax,build a strong body,have fun,be cheated,dangerous,waste,learn sth out of book,an unforgettable experience,colorful life,fresh airtake adventure,make friends,aboard ones sight,a good memory,culture,food,view,positive emotion,meet the bad guy,make family worried,custom,diff
4、erent lifestyles,climate,weather,background,religious of belief,geographyStep 3:Cluster!Travelingvocation,learn sth out of book,have fun,relax,build a strong body,an unforgettable experience,take adventure,make friends,fresh air,aboard ones sight,colorful life,different lifestyles,a good memory,posi
5、tive emotion,gain knowledge,meet the bad guy,make family worried,waste,dangerous,be cheated,custom,money,time,partner,transportation,food,culture,view,religious of belief,geography,climate,weather,background,Step 4:Generalize&Write Topic Sentence!Group 1Group 2Group 3Group1vocation,have fun,relax,a
6、good memory,aboard ones sight,build a strong body,gain knowledge,positive emotion,learn sth out of book,an unforgettable experience,make friends,fresh air,take adventure,different lifestyles,colorful life,Further Classify!Further Classify!Prepare for topic sentence writingvocation,have fun,relax,a g
7、ood memory,aboard ones sight,build a strong body,gain knowledge,positive emotion,learn sth out of book,an unforgettable experience,make friends,fresh air,take adventure,different lifestyles,colorful life,A good memory for the vocation.(topic sentence 1)An unforgettable experience to obtain benefits.
8、(topic sentence 2)An opportunity to enjoy a colorful life.(topic sentence 3)Judge&Generalize!Judge&Generalize!Further Generalization!Thesis statementA good memory for the vocation.(TS1)An unforgettable experience to obtain.(TS2)An opportunity to enjoy a colorful life.(TS3)People can be benefit from
9、traveling.Phrase outlineTopic:TravelingThesis:People can be benefit from traveling.Outline:I.a good memory of vocation A.a chance to get rid of boring daily life B.have a good time during traveling II.an unforgettable experience to obtain benefits A.have different experiences B.gain more knowledge o
10、ut of book,do good to health C.leads to a positive emotion III.an opportunity enjoy a colorful life A.make friends with different people B.enjoy different lifestylesSentence outlineTopic:TravelingThesis:People can be benefit from traveling.Outline:I.Traveling can be a good memory for your vocation.A
11、.Its a chance to get rid of boring daily life.B.You can have a good time during traveling.II.You will have an unforgettable experience to obtain benefits.A.Different places will give you different experiences.B.Traveling more can make you gain more knowledge out of book,and do good to your health.C.
12、Traveling leads to a positive emotion.III.Its an opportunity for you to enjoy a colorful life.A.You can make friends with people who comes from different places.B.You can enjoy different lifestyles in you journey.Traveling Nowadays,tourism becomes more and more popular all over the world.People are
13、fond of traveling to different places according to their vocation and money available.In my opinion,I think there are three main reasons to show the benefits from traveling.Firstly,traveling can be a good memory for your vocation.When you feel tired and stressful during your work,study,or life,you c
14、an make yourself a meaningful traveling.You will feel relax,and have a lot of fun in your traveling which can be a good memory in your life.Secondly,you can have an unforgettable experience to obtain benefits.Travel to different places can make you see different views,taste different food and drinks
15、,or even experience different culture.So travel more can aboard your sight,build you a strong body,and gain your knowledge out of book.Besides,all these advantages can give you a positive emotion.Thirdly,its an opportunity for you to enjoy a colorful life.In your boring daily life,you may be fed up with meeting the same people day after day.However,during your travel you can make friends with the strangers.You can breathe the fresh air,take adventures,and enjoy the different lifestyles together.To summarize,traveling is a good way to build a happy life,so people should do more traveling.