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1、公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司读后续写：救人型读后续写：救人型.读后续写很多时候会涉及自然灾害与防范、安全常识与自我保护的话题，会经常涉及到危难之际，挺身而出救助他人的故事。在这个话题中有时会写到危难之际，利用所学急救知识，成功救人脱离生命危险的故事；有时会写到楼内突发火灾，警察/群众舍己救人的故事；有时会写到群众/路人遇到有人不幸溺水，鼓足勇气跳入水中施救的的故事。读后续写很多时候会涉及自然灾害与防范、安全常识与自我保护的话题，会经常涉及到危难之际，挺身而出救助他人的故事。在这个话题中有时会写到危难之际，利用所学急救知识，成功救人脱离生命危险的故事；有时会写到楼内突发火灾，警察
2、/群众舍己救人的故事；有时会写到群众/路人遇到有人不幸溺水，鼓足勇气跳入水中施救的的故事。Part1：经典例文（铁轨救婴儿）Part1：经典例文（铁轨救婴儿）It was 7 a.m.on 12 May 1998.Mohr had already scanned several packages listingdangerous materials aboard the train.The presence of gas would mean taking extraprecaution when braking the 6,200-ton train.With explosive gas o
3、n board,it would bedisastrous if the train came off the track.After a final inspection,Mohr jumped aboard.He was heading east,into a sun that promised a beautiful day for their 276-km run toPeru,Indiana.At around noon that day,Marshall prepared to tackle some yardwork.It was abeautiful day for it,sh
4、e thought,gazing past the houses across the street.Some 45meters away,railroad tracks shone in the sun.读后续写：救人型（故事构造“三部曲”）-2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司Marshall began working in a patch(地块）of soil.Sitting next to her,cheerfullyrunning her hands through dirt,was her 19-month-old daughter,E
5、mily.For a while,she kept turning to check on Emily,who played close at hand.Eventually,though,Marshalls absorption in her work became total.Mohr approached the town where Marshall lived at about 1:45 p.m.and slowedthe train to the 40-kmph speed limit.He activated the flashing lights and warning bel
6、l.Mohr had been through the town hundreds of times,but he grew extra cautiousrounding the first curve.As the train came out of the curve,Mohr noticed a small dot on the track about200 meters ahead.He thought it might be a dog.Although it was against the rules todo so in the town,he began lightly tap
7、ping his horn.Come on,puppy,move,heurged.The toots(嘟嘟响）of a train whistle startled(使受惊吓）Marshall from her yardwork.Thatsodd,she thought.They dont usually blow thewhistle through town.She glanced over to checkher daughter,and her heart skipped.Emily wasnowhere in sight.Now,as the train approached wit
8、hin 100 meters of the object on the rail,Mohrnarrowed his eyes,trying to make out what exactly was lying ahead.Then shock ranthrough him like electric current.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para 1My God!he yelled as a tiny face turned
9、towards him.“Its a baby!_公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司Para 2The child was now just 36 meters ahead._【参考答案】Para 1My God!he yelled as a tiny face turned towards him.“Its a baby!Mohr had aninstant decision to make,applying full emergency brakes with half the train stillwrapped around a curve.He had to risk an
10、 emergency stop.Hard as he try,the trainkept moving just as a cat saw a fish,whose enticing smell attracted the cat toapproach the baby.Meanwhile,Marshall rushed towards her daughter,nervous butdesperate,fearing the train would run into her beloved.“我的上帝啊！”他像一张小脸转向他时大声喊道。“这是个婴儿！”莫尔立即做出了决定，实施了紧急刹车，一半
11、的火车仍然绕在弯道上。他不得不冒着紧急停车的危险。在他的努力中，火车继续移动，就像一只猫看到了一条鱼，它诱人的气味吸引了猫接近婴儿。与此同时，马歇尔冲向紧张但绝望的女儿，担心火车会撞到她的爱人。Para 2The child was now just 36 meters ahead.Mohr pulled the brake with his wholeefforts.The sound of wheels grinding against the rails rang through the sky.Thesituation was quite dangerous.As the train
12、was almost stopped,he immediatelyopened the left door of the engine cab quickly and swiftly jumped from the movingtrain and ran back to the child.She lay crying by the tracks.A great relief sweepingover Mohr,he lifted her from the dirt hurriedly.It was only then that Mohr noticed thetrain had stoppe
13、d and Marshall was just coming to her baby.With the baby in hisarms,Mohr began to walk towards the mother.这个孩子现在只有前面 36 米远。莫尔竭尽全力地拉下了刹车。车轮撞击铁轨的声音响彻天空。情况很危险。当火车快停下来时，他立即打开驾驶室的左门，迅公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司速从行驶的火车上跳下来，跑回孩子身边。她躺在铁轨边哭泣。他使莫尔松了一口气，急忙把她从泥土里抬了起来。直到那时，莫尔才注意到火车已经停了下来，马歇尔正要来接她的孩子。莫尔抱着孩子，开始向母亲走去。【分
14、析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了火车司机 Mohr，在一次驾驶火车全速前进时，他注意到远处的铁轨上有个黑点，他以为是一条狗，后来证实这个黑点是一个婴儿。他要在保证火车安全的情况下，救下这个婴儿。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我的上帝!”当一张小脸转向他时，他大叫起来。“是个婴儿！”，可知，第一段可描写火车司机 Mohr 的心理感受及其采取的措施，同时可以描写婴儿妈妈 Mashall 的现场反应。由第二段首句内容“这时火车距离婴儿只有 36 米了。”可知，第二段可描写火车司机 Mohr 努力减速火车直至火车停下，然后救婴儿，最终婴儿平安得救。2.续写线索：看见婴儿决定刹车跳车救孩子孩子
15、得救3.词汇激活行为类.做决定：make a decision/make up his mind/keep in mind that.刹车：pull the brake/stop the train with effort.救孩子：save the child/rescue the child/save the babys life情绪类焦急：anxious/have ones heart in ones mouth【点睛】高分句型1.Mohr had an instant decision to make,applying full emergencybrakes with half the
16、 train still wrapped around a curve.（applying.为现在分词作状语）高分句型 2.Hard as he try,the train kept moving just as a cat saw a fish,whoseenticing smell attracted the cat to approach the baby.（as 引导的让步状语从句，whose之后为非限制性定语从句）公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司Part2：救人故事构造三部曲第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负面情绪）Part2：救人故事构造三部曲第一步：救人之前（恶劣环境+负
17、面情绪）1、恶恶劣劣环环境境（1）一到晚夏，池塘就会被绿色的起泡浮渣覆盖。有时候，池塘里冒出一阵强烈的难闻的味 道。In late summer,the pond would becovered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）.Sometimes a strong,unpleasant smell rose from it.（2）在池塘中间，冰面忽然露出了一条裂缝。In the middle of the pond,the ice gave way with a sudden crack.（3）空气里弥漫着浓厚灼热的味道。A thick burning sm
18、ell filled the air.2、负负面面情情绪绪：害害怕怕(1)看着远处的海岸，我感到无能为力，就好像我们是被巨浪摧残的小船。Watching the shore in thedistance,I felt powerless(无 力 的)as if we werebroken tiny boats at the mercy of strong waves.(2)疲惫而寒冷，我们可能会死在这里的想法闪过我的脑海，这使我无法控制地发抖。Exhausted and cold,the thought that we might die here flashed across mymind，
19、which made me quiver with an uncontrollable terror/horror/fright(难以控制地发抖)（3）看着浩瀚的大海，我感到一种恐惧感涌遍全身。Looking at the vast sea,I felta sense of fear surging through my whole body(在身体涌动)公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）第二步：救人之中（努力+救人动作+如释重负）1、.挣挣扎扎努努力力(1)汤姆看起来很体贴。Tom looked thoughtful(若有所思)(2)“我
20、们得想个办法！”我抓着脑袋嘀咕道。“We need to thinkout a way!”I muttered(喃喃自语),scratching my head.(绞尽脑汁)(3).我们拼命游泳.,We swam tooth and nail(全力以赴地).2.救人有关的惊险场面描写救人有关的惊险场面描写(1)我所知道的另一件事是，我挂在一个冰洞的边缘，手臂伸展在冰上。从我的肩膀往下，我悬在冰冷的水中。The next thing Iknew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in theice by arms outstretched on the
21、 ice.From myshoulders down I hung in icy water.(3)我试图爬出洞，但当我的膝盖碰到冰时，它像窗户玻璃一样碎了。I tried toclimb out of the hole,but when I got a knee on the ice,it broke like window glass(像玻璃一样破裂).(4)外套完全湿透了，把我拖垮了，我厌倦了挣扎，双臂伸开躺在冰上休息。As the coat became completely wet,it dragged me down(把我拖下水).I was tired ofthe struggl
22、e and rested with my arms stretchedout on the ice.3 实实施施救救援援的的过过程程(1)“帮我把西蒙斯弄下车！”诺伍德对惊慌失措的朋友们大声喊道。“Help me get Simmons out of the car!”Norwood yelledloudly to her friends,who were left in a panic.（2021 年山东新高考质量测评联盟）公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司(2)尽管紧张而焦虑，诺伍德努力让自己镇静下来，对西蒙斯进行了急救。Nervousand anxious,Norwood st
23、ruggled to calm herself down and carried out first aid toSimmons.4、如释重负、如释重负(1)确保了他们的安全，我感到一阵胜利。Ensuing their safety,I felt a surge oftriumph.(感到一阵胜利的喜悦)(2)听到这个消息，我忍不住激动起来。Hearing the news,Icouldnt help restraining my excitement.(情难自抑)(3)听到这个好消息，我们很激动。It thrilled us to hear thegood news(听到新消息很高兴).(4
24、)听到这个好消息的时候，汤姆和我都松了一口气，彼此开心地笑着。Onhearing the good news,Tom and I sighed in great relief(如释重负地叹了口气),grinning merrily at each other.第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）第三步：救人之后（感激+升华）1、感激、感激(1)如果我没有得到急救，我就会死了。西蒙斯感激地对诺伍德说。（2021 年山东新高考质量测评联盟）“If I had not been given first aid,I would have dead.”Simmons said to Norwood grate
25、fully.Simmons showed her gratitude to Norwood,saying“It was you who came to my aid and saved my life.”西蒙斯对诺伍德表示了感谢，她说：“是你来帮助我，救了我一命。”(2)“谢谢你进入我的世界，我会永远记住你为我所做的。”西蒙斯对诺伍德说。“Thank you for entering my worldand I will always remember what you have done for me.”Simmons whispered to Norwood.公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京
26、）股份有限公司2、升华句(1)花点时间来学习急救和心肺复苏术。拯救了生命，而且很有效。Take sometime to learn the knowledge of first aid.It saves lives,and it works.(2)这个故事表明，良好的急救知识真的可以起作用。The story shows that a goodknowledge of first aid can make a real difference.(3)每个人都应该学点急救知识，因为在紧急情况下每一秒都很重要。Everyoneshould learn something about first ai
27、d,for every second will count in an emergency.(4)了解基础的急救知识有助于你对紧急情况作出迅速的反应。Knowing basicfirst-aid techniques will help you respond quickly to emergencies.Part3：灵活应用例 1：河中救人Part3：灵活应用例 1：河中救人Boys like to be considered to be brave,but what kind of things can be consideredto be brave?It is not a questi
28、on that can be answered by words,but by the actual deed.A boy with the name Henry gave us a good example.Ronny and Henry were twofriends in the same class.They always played together and went home together.Oneday as Ronny and Henry were going home after school,they saw some peoplefighting in the str
29、eet corner.Ronny said excitedly,“Some people are fighting!Lets goand have a look!”But Henry refused,“Its none of our business.Wed better go homeand dont get close to them.Also our parents are expecting to have dinner with ustogether at home and I dont want them to worry about me.”“You are a coward,a
30、nd afraid to go,”said Ronny,and off he ran to the spot with公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司some other boys.Henry had to go home alone and didnt think about it anymore.But Ronny thought Henry was a coward and told all the boys that.They laughedat him a great deal.From then on,they looked down upon Henry and di
31、dnt want toplay with him.Henry was sad but he wasnt angry with Ronny for his rude behavior,because hehad learned that true courage was shown most in bearing misunderstanding when itwas not deserved,and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong.Thus,hejust ignored the other boys laughter
32、and continued to stick to his thought and go toschool and study as well.However,Ronny didnt invite Henry to go home with himanymore.Instead,he had his new friendswho also thought Henry was a coward.Everyday after school,they didnt go home directlybut went to the river or somewhere to playgames and h
33、ad lots of fun.注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为 150 左右；2.应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Afew days later,something terrible happened to Ronny.Paragraph 2:At that moment,Henry happened to pass by.【参考答案】Paragraph 1A few days later,something terrible happened to Ronny
34、.That afternoon after公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司school,Ronny was bathing with some of his new friends in the river happily.Suddenly,he was stuck in the mud and couldnt get out.He struggled hard but he wasstill trapped.He screamed for help,but all in vain.The boys who had called Henry acoward got out of t
35、he water as fast as they could.They were so scared and did noteven try to help him.Paragraph 2:At that moment,Henry happened to pass by.He heard the screams and ran to theriver as soon as possible.Seeing Ronny was almost drowned,Henry took off hisclothes immediately and jumped into the water without
36、 any hesitation.He reachedRonny just as he was sinking the last time.With great effort,and with much danger tohimself,he brought Ronny to the shore in time.Henry was happy to help his friend,though he was extremely tired.第 1 段几天后，罗尼发生了一件可怕的事情。那天下午放学后，罗尼和他的一些新朋友在河里快乐地洗澡。突然，他被困在泥里，无法出来。他努力挣扎，但仍然被困住了。他
37、尖叫着呼救，但都没有成功。那些叫亨利是懦夫的孩子们尽可能快地离开了水面。他们很害怕，甚至没有试图帮助他。第 2 段：就在那一刻，亨利碰巧经过了。他听到了尖叫声，就尽快跑到河里去了。看到罗尼差点被淹死，亨利立即脱下衣服，毫不犹豫地跳进了水里。他上次就在罗尼下沉时，到达了罗尼。他费了巨大的努力，对自己也很危险，及时把罗尼带到了岸边。亨利很乐意帮助他的朋友，尽管他非常累。例 2：海边救人例 2：海边救人阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。On July 8，2017，eight members of a family in tota
38、l，were enjoying an eveningtogether at the beach in Panhandle，FloridaAs the sun sank lower on the horizon，公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司the two boys Noah，11，and Stephen，8swam into the waves without the grown-upsnoticingSoon they realized that the ocean had pulled them into the seaAfter tryingand failing to s
39、wim back，they started waving and screaming for helpBut thelifeguards had been off duty for the eveningThe boys had been struggling for several minutes when Jacky and Tabatha，acouple from Georgia，heard them They dived into the water and soon reached the twobrothersBut after a few minutes，they were al
40、l trapped in a rip current(离岸流)apowerful one that could sweep even the strongest swimmer out to sea!By then，someteenagers had heard the cryOne of the teens rushed into the water，grabbed Jacky，and pulled him back to shoreMeanwhile，Tabatha could feel herself being pulledfarther outShe was already exha
41、usted and beginning to feel desperate as she wastrying to save both boys aloneOnshore，Jacky was terrifiedAman stopped“Whats wrong?”asked Shaun，who was heading back to his car“My wifeisdrowning!”BrittanysaidShaunimmediatelystrode(大 步 跨)intothewaterBut several minutes later，a gaping15 feet still lay b
42、etween him and Tabathaand the boys He knew that if he continued，hed become another victim He turnedaround to seek helpIt was about that time that Roberta，theboysmother，returned from the bathroom andlooked around for her childrenShewas shocked to spot them floating much farther out than they were all
43、owed to go Shefought the waves to get to her screaming sons and the stranger who was trying to savethem，but she quickly discovered it was nearly impossible to make headway in anydirectionLooking around，Roberta sighed with relief to see some more peoplecoming to helpParagraph 1公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司W
44、hen they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha,a risky idea came tothem._By then,more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to join thehuman chain._【参考答案】Paragraph 1When they tried in vain to rescue the brothers and Tabatha，a risky idea came tothemTo keep themselves fr
45、om losing their footing in the rip current，they beganholding on to oneanother to form a human chain extending from the beach all theway out to the struggling and TabathaThey stayed linked tightly and managed toensure they were safe by making their feet firmly planted in the sandHowever，thatrequired
46、more linksprobably dozens of themShaun spotted other swimmers on thebeach and shouted，“Dont just stand there!Come and help”当他们试图营救塔巴塔兄弟和塔巴塔兄弟时，他们想到了一个危险的主意。为了防止自己在激流中站稳脚跟，他们开始互相抓住，形成一条人链，从海滩一直延伸到挣扎中的塔巴塔。它们紧紧地联系在一起，并把脚牢牢地放在沙子里，以确保自己的安全。然而，这需要更多的链接可能有几十个。肖恩发现海滩上还有其他游泳者，他喊道：“不要只是站在那里！”来帮忙吧。”Paragraph 2
47、By then，more swimmers had also noticed the group in trouble and rushed to jointhe human chain One by one，link by link，total strangers walked into the waves andgrasped one another by the wrists，determined that no one would die on that beach Atlast，they made it and Tabatha and the two brothers were sa
48、ved!“Those people on the公众号：高中试卷君学科网（北京）股份有限公司beach are angels on earth，”said Roberta“Whether it is the first person or the lastperson in the chain，they are all our heroes，who helped get our family out of trouble到那时，更多的游泳者也注意到这群人陷入了麻烦，于是冲去加入。一个接一个地，一个接一个地走进海浪，抓住手腕，决定没有人会死在海滩上。最后，他们成功了，塔巴塔和两兄弟得救了！“海滩
49、上的那些人都是地球上的天使，”罗伯塔说，“无论是铁链上的第一人还是最后一个人，他们都是我们的英雄，他们帮助我们的家人摆脱了麻烦。公众号：高中试卷君答案第 1页，共 11页学科网（北京）股份有限公司读后续写（新高考专用）模拟题读后续写（新高考专用）模拟题 081（2022河北邯郸一中模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为 150 左右。The whole class burst out laughing as Mohi rushed into the classroom.He was a strange sight.His half-b
50、uttoned white shirt revealed a red striped pajama top underneath,and instead of whiteschool shoes,he had on a pair of bright green sandals that were two sizes too big.The physicsteachers hand froze in the middle of writing a formula on the blackboard.Mohi mumbled,Sorry,teacher,and scuttled(快步疾走)to h