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1、认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目读后后续写写专项训练Continuation WritingContinuation Writing思路学思路学习+实战演演练认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目What is continuation writing?什么是读后续写?提供一篇约350词左右的文章，一般为记叙文，以事件发生的时间为序，短文中可能会出现10个左右关键词，也可能不出现。根据该材料的内容情节，将其发展为一篇150词左右的
2、逻辑合理、情节完整的短文。需要续写两个段落，有提示词的文章要求至少使用5个关键词，每段均给出第一个提示句。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目【高考导入】2018浙江卷It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the s
3、tate of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul,my dads friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm
4、house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.The day starts at dawn on my farm,he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens.while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze
5、(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on
6、 our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.Dont be late for supper,Uncle Paul cried,and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!OK!my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green
7、 pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.注意：（1）所续写短文的词数应为l50左右；（2）至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：（3）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；（4）续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in f
8、ront of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目读后续写考查什么？语言能力：阅读和写作思维能力：想象力和创造力具体来说，需要同学们 1.把握文章主旨大意和关键信息 2.注意使用语言的准确性和丰富性 3.把控语篇结构 4.具有创造性思维认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目评分原则1、本
9、题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。2、与文章及段落开头的衔接程度 内容的丰富性以及对划线词语的覆盖情况 语法结构以及词语的丰富性和准确性3、评分时，先根据内容和语言定档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4、扣分情况：（1）词数少于130的，至少扣2分。（2）单词拼写与标点符号使用不当，酌情扣分（3）如书写较差以至影响交际，可降档。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目高考读后续写档次标准第五第五档（档（21-25分）分）与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理；内容丰富，应用了5个以上短
10、文中标出的关键词语；所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。第四档（第四档（16-20分）分）与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理；内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语；所使用语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达；比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。第三档（第三档（11-15分）分）与所给短文关系较为密切，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接；写出了若干有关内容，应用了4个以上短文中标出的关键词语；应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求
11、，虽有一些错误，但不影响意义的表达；第二档（第二档（6-10分）分）与所给短文有一定的关系，与所提供各段落开头语有一定程度的衔接；写出了一些有关内容，应用了3个以上短文中标出的关键词语；语法结构单调、词汇项目有限，有些语法结构和词汇方面的错误，影响了意义的表达；较少使用语句间的连接成分，全文内容缺少连贯性。第一档（第一档（1-5分）分）与所给短文和开头语的衔接较差；产出内容太少，很少使用短文中标出的关键词语；语法结构单调、词汇项目很有限，有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误，严重影响了意义的表达；缺乏语句间的连接成分，全文内容不连贯。0分分白卷、内容太少无法判断或所写内容与所提供内容无关。认识到了贫
12、困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目剖析原文，理清大意结合段首提示句，推理剧情走向融入关键词，想象细节，初拟草稿丰富细节，润色定稿解题思路认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Step 1 精读文章，剖析原文，理清大意（抓关键词、句）It was summer,and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before.He decided to take me on a trip
13、 to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of New Mexico.We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon.Uncle Paul,my dads friend,picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan
14、 and Kyle.My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby.Very early in the morning,Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast.The day starts at dawn on my farm,he said.After breakfast,I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chick
15、ens.while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草).I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses.They looked really cool.暑假，我爸爸带我去叔叔的农场度假。我们在农场听着蛙鸣和流水声入睡。早上,我帮忙喂鸡，我的叔叔和爸爸骑着马领着羊出去吃草，我很羡慕。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Step 1 精读文章，剖析原文，理清大
16、意 In the afternoon,I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride,and he said yes,as long as my dad went with me.I wasnt going to take a horse ride by myself anyway.So,my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats,got on our horses,and headed slowly towards the mountains.Dont be late for supper,Uncle Pau
17、l cried,and keep to the track so that you dont get lost!OK!my dad cried back.After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight.It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks,the deep green pine trees,and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene.It looked like a
18、 beautiful woven(编织的）blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.我很羡慕，于是和爸爸一起去骑马。叔叔叮嘱我们晚餐别迟到，沿着小路走别迷路。风景很美，我们骑马走远了。认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Step 2结合提示句，推理走向Paragraph 1:Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.Paragraph 2:We had no idea where we we
19、re and it was getting dark.剧情要前后照应，否则很难用上关键词。可遵循时间、地点、逻辑的顺序设计剧情。合理剧情：第一段：追兔子迷路的经过。第二段：经过努力回忆路径，最终找到了回去的路，安全返回。不建议剧情：追兔子迷路，进入迷宫发现宝藏（扯太远，回不来）追兔子迷路，在森林里乱跑，碰到了家人或救援队（强行结尾，无逻辑）追兔子迷路，在林中过夜。（悲剧结尾）认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Step 3 结合关键词，进行细节描写，拟初稿怎样让记叙文生动起来？已给提示词：人物：dad;Uncle
20、 Paul 地点景物：farm house;sheep;river;track;sight 动作：feed;be late;get lost辅助话题激活类词汇：情感：panic;nervous;worried;relief 动作：run;cry;think to oneself 环境：forest;sunset;scenery;valley;mountain;lake;wind动作描写2-5个环境描写1-2个对话1-2个表情或心理描写1-2个认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Paragraph 1（5个句子）S
21、uddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.（已给出）Dad and I found it was so cute that we decided to chase it.（动作1）After a while,we were completely lost in the forest.（动作2）There was nothing left in our sight but the trees.（环境）“We may not be able to make it back to the farm house in time fo
22、r supper.”I thought to myself.（对话+内心独白）After a series of fruitless attempts to find a way out,we felt hungry and tired.（动作+心情）认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Paragraph 2 (5个句子)We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.(已给出)We got stuck in the forest.（动作1）And an
23、unexpected shower added to the difficulty of us in finding a way home,for all the tracks we had made disappeared because of the rain.（环境）I was almost on the edge of breaking down when my father said,“Dont worry,my son.I remember there is a river near the farm house.Find the river and we will be back
24、 home.”（内心独白+对话+转折）Finally,we found the river and got back to the house along it.Needless to say,we ate a late dinner.（动作（结局）认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Step 4 润色文章，如有需要，标出关键词润色：1.连接词的使用2.词汇、短语、句型的升级3.检查动词的时态、单词的拼写、名词的单复数、标点符号、大小写等。标出关键词：下划线，根据题目要求来1.动词可以根据时态语态的需要改变动词的
25、形式2.名词可以改变单复数但不可改变词性和词义认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目课堂小结认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目语法填词单词及短语背诵（整理笔记）Treat sb.to sth 款待某人某物Get to know 逐渐了解Frog n.青蛙At dawn 在黎明Impressed a.印象深刻的Anyway ad.无论如何；总之Cowboy n.牛仔Hat n.帽子Track n.小路；小径；踪迹；轨道Out of sight 看不见Pine trees 松树Mix 混合Weave v.编织Blanket n.毛毯Magic a.魔力的；魔法的认识到了贫困户贫困的根本原因，才能开始对症下药，然后药到病除。近年来国家对扶贫工作高度重视，已经展开了“精准扶贫”项目Homework for today