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1、剑桥雅思6第一套写作Task 2真题+範文+譯文+分析:WRITING TASK 2You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.Write about the following topic:Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you agree or disagr
2、ee?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words. 题目规定Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.To what extent do you ag
3、ree or disagree?题解当今流行性消费品高销售额反映是广告力量而不是社会真正需求。你在何等限度上批准或不同样意?考生文章Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This arguments may be true. In my count
4、ry, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite singer advertise, although they do not really need the products.Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality.
5、 As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, the other people may be affected
6、by the trend, even if the product is not of the real needs of the society.On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments. Moreover, it is peoples choice to make a decision to buy goods. Advertising may be not a cause of customers buying habits. Individuals have their own spendi
7、ng habits. If they have got enough disposable income, then the right to make a decision is given to them. No one actually can judge whether the goods sold are the real needs of the society or not.In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are able to spend, peopl
8、e try to allocate their budgets. They cannot be simply swayed by those advertisements.In conclusion, as customers have their own strong opinions and standard of good quality goods, it is better to leave them to make their own decision in buy goods. It is fairly difficult to say everyone is swayed by
9、 advertising and buy good impulsively. However, in sensitive area of businesses such as toy industries, it may be necessary to band advertising to those children as children have not got enough ability to control themselves or to know what they need.参考译文现在电视上和街道边广告越来越多了。部分人认为广告可以促进商品销售并且激励大家购置并不需要产品
10、。这个见解也许是对的。在中国，很多广告公司请著名演员或歌星做广告。大家，特别是年轻人，购置她们爱慕歌星代言产品，即使她们并不真需要。并且，在电视屏幕上，产品也许看上去光鲜而优质。所以，大家经常不假思考地购置产品。消费者也许并不真需要，但她们看了广告后会立即冲动地购置。并且，很多消费者由于广告攻势而购置某个特定产品，其它人也会受此影响，即使这一产品并不是社会真正需要。另一方面，也有很多理由可以辩驳这个论断。并且，决定购置商品是个人选择。广告也许并不是形成消费者购置习惯因素。每个人有自己花钱习惯。假如她们有足够可支配收入，那么决定权就在她们手里。没人能真正鉴定销售商品是否是社会真正需要。除此以外，
11、由于消费者能花费可支配收入有限，大家会试图分派她们预算。她们不会为那些广告动摇。总而言之，用户有她们自己见解和相关高品质商品标准，最佳让她们自己做出购置商品决定。很难说每个人所有受广告影响，冲动地购置商品。但是在部分敏感产业，比如玩具业，有必需严禁向儿童做广告，由于儿童没有足够能力控制或了解自己需求。分析这篇文章为7.5分。考官评语：考生对于题目的回应方法是这篇文章一个亮点。文章论证充足，具体真切地回应了题目的规定。作者引出话题，考察争论双方见解并清楚地表达了立场。论点明确，论据充足。文章结构清楚，段落分明，见解之间关联性强，易于了解。但是在衔接方面错误很多，有连接词并不适宜，所以限制了衔接性
12、方面得分。词汇量丰富，使用对的得体，尽管有一两处蹩脚表达和错误。同样地，句子结构多变，但大量小错误和漏掉(比如介词使用和主谓一致)离得到8分尚有差距。但这些错误没有减弱文章清楚性。总来说语言多变，使用相称纯熟。点评：从 7月开始，雅思写作开始有0.5分。本文就是一篇7.5分考生作文。通过对考官评语分析，可以发现，在Task Response(完毕任务一内容)，Coherence and Cohesion(连贯和衔接)，Lexical Resource(词汇资源)，Grammatical Range and Accuracy(语法范围和对的性)四个方面得分分别为8、6、8、7。平均以后，大作文得
13、分为7.5。衔接性问题：第二段开头Also使用不妥，和第一段并不组成接续关系。第三段第二句话开头用了moreover，错误。Moreover表达补充说明，应当用在第一个分支见解以后，而此处为第一个分支见解，属于使用不妥。语言上小错误：用词：第一段第二句Advertising是不可数名词，意思是广告业或是广告活动，前面不加the。the advertising boosts the sales of goods中the删去。具体一则广告用advertisement。第二段soon after they watch the advertising中advertising应为advertisemen
14、t。名词单复数：第一段This arguments应为This argument。主谓一致：第一段buy goods that their favourite singer advertise其中advertise应为advertises，和单数主语singer相一致。冠词：第二段the other people may be affected by the trend其中the other people应为other people或others，表达泛指。分词：最终一段it is better to leave them to make their own decision in buy goods.其中buy作in宾语，应为buying。拼写：最终一段it may be necessary to band advertising to those children其中band应为ban(严禁)。