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1、书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）IV-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考学校:姓名：班级：考号：一、话题作文1. （2019江苏南通）当前,不少文学作品被改编成电影，有人选择看电影，有人则喜 欢读原著。请你以“Film or book, which do you prefer?”为题,按照下列要求写一篇英语短 文：看电影：省时、有趣、易懂；读原著细节更多、语言优美；我的看法及理由（请自拟内容）注意：1.内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；2 .词数90个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；.参考词汇：original n.原著；detail informatio
2、n 详细信息 Film or book, which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.2.（2019江苏扬州）就要放寒假了，同学们都在制定寒假计划，比如看电视、看 电影，旅游、阅读、 请以“Our plans for the winter holiday”为题，根据下面的表格 内容要点，完成一篇英语短文。要求：1、表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。2、必须包含表格中所有相关信息，并适当发挥。3、词数100字左右（作文开头、结
3、尾已给出，不计入总词数）。4、不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。看电影、电视男生们打算看一些纪录片，动作片和直播的篮球赛。女生们更喜欢看浪漫的爱情片。旅游租一辆自行车在扬州城逛逛。25%的学生表示担忧Nantong Middle school25%的学生表示担忧Nantong Middle school1 .浪费时间和金钱.与家人交流的机会少2 .用时太多以至于（1句话展开合理的想象你的观点要求：1 .表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯。2 .要点必须包括所有信息，可以适当发挥。3 .表格中你的观点需用2-3句话展开合理的想象，做适当发挥.词数100左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）Dear
4、Editorl am writing to tell you about the survey on the activity of Grabbing red packets in our class.Yours sincerelyLihua15.（2020江苏徐州）书面表达以下是你校校刊：TOUT”中yOURVO/CE栏目的征稿内容，请根据提示，用英语写一篇 短文，表达你的想法。Hi,Im David, the editor of YOUTH. We all know the exchange students are going back to theUS soon. We would l
5、ike to give them some traditional Chinese things as gifts, such as Chinese paintings, silk, tea .Today I would like to collect some ideas. In your article, you should: recommend two traditional Chinese thingsshow your reasons why you recommend themLooking forward to hearing from you.David注意事项：1 .对所有
6、要点逐一陈述，适当发挥。2 .要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；.词数在90个左右，感谢信的首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；3 .文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。Dear Sir/Madam,I am glad to share my opinion withyou.参考答案:Film or book, which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it t
7、akes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Others have just the opposite opinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and be
8、autiful.Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reasons for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas.In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on i
9、t.【详解】题干解读：此题要求写一篇议论文，题目已经给出，看电影还是看书，各有优点, 在文章中都要阐述出来。另外，作者还需清楚表达出自己的观点。例文点评：例文采用三段式；第一人称叙述；文中有很多较高级的句型和用法；行文流畅, 结构清晰，态度立场鲜明。高分亮点: 短语：the opposite opinion； detailed information； agree with； stay at home； in a situation of； in a wordo句型：it is better to do sth. than to do sth.； The reason is that+从句；I
10、 have more reasons for it。2 .例文:Our plans for the winter holidayWinter holiday is coming. Many of my classmates are making plans for the holiday.I find that reading is a popular plan among students.Some plan to read detective stories because theyre full of honor and mysteries.Some would like to read
11、 books about great people.Another popular plan is travelling.Most students would like to visit Asia or European countries.They plan to visit places of interest there.Some students will rent a bike to travel around YangZhou.Watching films or TV programmes are also their favourite plans.Boys will watc
12、h documentaries,action films,and live basketball matches while girls prefer watching romantic films.rd like to be a volunteer in our community center.I think it is meaningful to do such a thing.lt can bring me pleasure.I do hope we can enjoy our holiday.【详解】1、题干解读：题目要求以“Our plans for the winter holi
13、day”为题写一篇文章，要求 涵盖下面表格的内容。由于是介绍假期计划，因此在时态的选择上要以一般将来时态为主, 同是在语言的表达上一定要清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。2、例文点评：例文采用五段式；时态主要以一般将来时为主；例文详细具体的写了寒假的 计划；结构清晰；逻辑性强。3、高分亮点：短语：plan to do； be full of； would like to do sth； places of interest； it is meaningful to do sth。 句型： Watching films or TV programmes are also their favourite
14、 plan； I think it is meaningful to do such a thing o【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每 个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如 plan to do； be full of； would like to do sth； places of interest； it is meaningful to do sth等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段 与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过 渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点
15、符号误用等，还要检查语法 结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。3 .例文How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?Here are some suggestions from my classmates. First, we can help our parents do some house
16、work to show our love for them. Next, we can also know more about the world by reading more books. Then, we should get close to the nature and relax ourselves. It is good fbr our study. Whats more, I think it is very important to keep healthy. Wed better play lots of sports in our spare time.In a wo
17、rd, there are many things to do in our life. Lets make full use of our spare time.【详解】1.题干解读：此篇作文在写作时应承接短文开头，主要谈论如何让课余生活更有意 义。根据所给内容，介绍使课余生活有意义的方法及个人感受。2 .例文点评：例文用第一人称进行叙述，时态采用一般现在时为主。在叙述时，避免汉语式 英语，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、句型等，句意叙述完整且条理清晰，语句通 顺，语义连贯。3 .高分亮点：短I吾：do some housework； know more about； whats mor
18、e； keep healthy； play lots of sports； make full use of。句型： Here are some suggestions from my classmates.Next, we can also know more about the world by reading more books.Whats more, I think it is very important to keep healthy.Wed better play lots of sports in our spare time.Lets make full use of ou
19、r spare time.【点睛】写作六步骤：1 .审题：文体，时态，人称。2.抓住要点：要点是否齐全，适当补充。3扩充句子：通过增加状语，定语，连词，使句子意思饱满充实。4.连句成文，合理使用连 词。5,改正错误：拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等。6.誉写作文：注意 书写工整美观整洁。4 . Jackie Chan is one of the greatest Kung Fu superstars in the world. He is also famous as a singer and a director. Jackie Chan was born in Hong Ko
20、ng in 1954. He dreamt of entering the film industry when he was young. The film Drunken Master in 1978 marked the beginning of his successful career. In the film he successfully joined humor and exciting action together. His achievements are far snore than a Kung Fu superstar. He has devoted many ye
21、ars to charity work.I think he is such a great person that he will always be remembered.【详解】题干解读：这篇文章要求写成龙的生平，介绍成龙的一些事，主要用一般现在时态 和一般过去时态，第三人称单数。要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的 衔接和过渡。介绍人物生平的作文要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，慎用较难的句 型，一定不能写错句。例文点评：这篇短文叙述完整准确，内容忠实于材料，在短文最后表达了自己的看法。在写 作中句式变化丰富运用了比较高级的句式，时态准确，符合英语表达习惯。高分亮点：
22、短语： one of the greatest Kung Fu superstars； is famous as； dreamt of； the beginning of。时间状语从句：He dreamt of entering the film industry when he was young.定语从句：I think he is such a great person that he will always be remembered.5 .例文Our school is like a big family. As students, we should protect the env
23、ironment so as not to throw rubbish. We also should love flowers ,plants and save water. It is necessary for us to protect desks and chairs. Students should get along well and love each other. When someone needs help, we should do our best to help them. It is important for us to study hard. We can r
24、ead widely and reading can open our eyes. By studying hard, we can realize our dreams. We are polite and honest to people. We should be grateful to those who help us. If we actively join in after-school activities, we can expand our interests, and constantly improve ourselves.【详解】L题干解读：该题目要求包含表格里的内容
25、，谈谈如何从自我做起，创建文明校园。 写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读 一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。2 .例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，介绍了不少于三项的校园活动， 包括了校园环境、人际关系、自身修养等，例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。3 .高分亮点：词组：protect the environment； throw rubbish； get along well； love each other； do our best to； read widely； open our eyes； realize
26、our dreams； improve ourselves 等； 句型：It is necessary for us to protect desks and chairs. /When someone needs help, we should do our best to help them. /We can read widely and reading can open our eyes./By studying hard, we can realize our dreams. /If we actively join in after-school activities, we ca
27、n expand our interests, and constantly improve ourselves.【点睛】书面表达：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中 可能要用到的表达，例如 protect the environment； throw rubbish； get along well； love each other； do our best to； read widely等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、 段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章 过渡平稳，自然流畅；最
28、后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语 法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。6 .例文In recent years, some parents always send their children to all kinds of training classes during their holiday to make them study better. As a student, I think this may bring some problems.First, parents spend lots of money on t
29、hese classes, but many students feel bored because thafs not what they want to learn. Second, a lot of time is wasted. It is not only bad for childrens study, but also stressful. Also it may not be safe to study in these classes. Third, it probably makes them hate studying. And it may be easy for so
30、me children to get into the bad habit of running away from school.I think we should be given some time to relax and do some things that we want to do, such as playing basketball, football and computer games.Of course, we should finish our homework carefully first.【详解】1.题干解读：文章属于一篇议论型文章，主要是以“假期培训可能带来
31、的问题”为 线索展开讨论，要求阐述假期培训存在的问题和提出自己的一些建议。可以使用阐述观点的 first, second, third 等阐述。2 .例文点评：文章主要分三段描述。第一段总体提出问题，第二段分别对存在的问题进行 阐述，第三段提出自己的观点。整个文章结构严谨完整，语言表达准确清晰，语言层次感强， 用词恰当到位。3 .高分亮点：短语：all kinds of； lots of； not only . but also； such as。句型：because引导的原因状语从句；I think+宾语从句；that引导的定语从句。7 . iPads, coming into the cl
32、assroomsCan you use an iPad in the classroom? The answer is yes! Recently, students and parents are arguing about the new teaching method.The students dont think they have to carry heavy bags any more. Its cool to have lessons over iPads. IVs very interesting to study like that. They believe that th
33、ey will learn more and better. However,parents think using ipads fbr too long will influence childrens eyesight. And some poor families cant afford to buy iPads.I think in some ways iPads are good for us. We can search for information on the Internet at any time. Ifs easy fbr us to chat with our cla
34、ssmates and teachers about our lessons.【详解】根据题目要求，需要书写一篇议论文，探讨iPad进课堂这一现象，以及人们对此 的不同观点和态度。文章需要使用一般现在时态，第三人称。结合观点式议论文的段落格式， 首先在第一段提出问题现象，第二段表达支持这种行为做法的原因和好处，第三段描述反对 人的观点及原因，最后一段表达自己的观点。注意多使用固定短语，固定句型，使文章增色。 点睛：对立观点式第一段：提出现象。第二段：Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X.They point out the fact t
35、hat 支持 X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持 X 的另一个原因。第三段： However, other people stand on a different ground.They consider it harmful to do X.They firmly point out that 反对 X 的第个理由 o An example can give the details of this argument:一个例子。 第四段： There is some truth in both arguments.But I think the advantage
36、s of X overweigh the disadvantages.In addition to the abovementioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个 坏处。8 .例文:My favourite time of yearMy favorite time of the year is winter vacation. Because during the winter holiday, I have time to do what I like. I will practise playing t
37、he piano in the winter holiday. I have loved playing the piano since I was a child. I began to play the piano when I was five years old. I can also accompany my family to chat and travel during the winter vacation. I can also make myself relaxed.However, my favourite thing to do in winter vacation i
38、s to see a movie starring Audrey Hepburn, because I like her achievements in film and charity. I also like to watch all kinds of documentaries, because I can learn a lot about nature. When I am bored, I can also enjoy tan duns music while I was reading a book. His music could make me calm.This is my
39、 favorite winter holiday life, it must be colorful.【详解】1.题干解读：文章是主要是描述最喜欢的寒假生活。通过寒假最想要做的一些具 体的事情的描写以及为什么喜欢寒假生活的原因，描写清楚即可。2 .例文点评：文章分两段描写。第一段主要是描写喜欢寒假的原因自己要做的具体的事情 的描写，第二段做一个总结。整个文章结构完整，语言表述通顺清楚，用词准确。3 .高分亮点：短语：practise doing sth； play the piano； begin to do sth； all kinds of； make sb + adjo句型：when引导
40、的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；while引导的时间状语从 句。9. My hometown is famous for many interest places, such as The Slender West Lake, The Ge Garden, The He Garden and so on. The Slender West Lake is one of the best places that worth a visit. One of the main reason is that the beautiful landscape along the lake
41、 attracts a large number of tourists, including the foreigners. Yangzhou dishes may be one of the reasons why the people of Yangzhou are so infatuated with their city. Dongguang Street is a symbol of Yangzhou dishes. You can have an appealing color, aroma, taste and appearance. You will never forget
42、 the charming taste.Whats more, Zhu Ziqing who is one of the most famous writers studied in Yangzhou Middle School and left Yangzhou to Peking University at 18. His works of art express the beauty and kindness of life. They bring wonderful poems to the readers.【详解】1 .题干解读：该题属于说明文。主要介绍名胜古迹扬州的瘦西湖，东关街和
43、作家朱 自清的基本信息。2 .例文点评：例文采用两段式，从去瘦西湖旅游的主要原因到东关街的主要美食再到作家朱 自清的基本介绍，结构清晰，段落分明。用第三人称来进行描写；时态采用一般现在时为主， 一般过去式为辅。3 .高分亮点：短语：be famous for, such as, a large number of, Whats more, a symbol of。 句型：One of the main reason is that,定语从句。10 .例文My favourite starMy favourite star is Jackson Yee. He was born in Hunan
44、 on November 28,2000. He has short hair and looks cool. He likes dancing and began to learn it at an early age. He is both a singer and a famous actor. He is now studying at the Beijing Film Academy. He played the leading role in Youre a Teenager and won the prize. He also founded the Jackson Yee fo
45、undation, which focuses on stay-at-home children. He has 80 million fans and is beloved by teenagers.【详解】1 .题干解读：本文是一篇给材料作文，要求根据所给出的材料提示，以My favourite star为题。谈谈最喜欢的明星Jackson Yee （易炀千禧）。本文给出的要点比较具体，我们要去亚洲或者欧洲国家。阅读一些同学计划读充满神秘、恐怖的侦探书籍，还有一些打算读伟人的 故事。你自己的计划（并讲述你的理由，至少两点）Our plans for the winter holidayWi
46、nter holiday is coming. Many of my classmates are making plans for the holiday.I do hope we can enjoy our holiday.3.（2019.江苏苏州）在学校生活中，同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何 让课余生活更有意义?”开展了讨论，大家各抒己见。请你根据表格提示，以“HowTo Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful?”为题，用英语写一篇短文。多种途径帮助父母，表达爱心；阅读书籍，了解世界；亲近自然，放松自己；（自拟至少一点）你的感受（自拟至少一点
47、）注意：1 .表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯。2 .词数90左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。3 .表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。How To Make Our Spare Time More Meaningful? Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to makeour spare time more meaningful? 做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，可适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅 读材料，根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到
48、的表达；然后紧扣要点，动 笔写作。2 .例文点评：根据材料内容可知本文时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第三人称。文章紧 扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。3 .高分亮点：短语：be bom, both.and., play the lead role in, left-behind childreno句型：He is both a singer and a famous actor.他既是一名歌手，也是著名演员。both.and. 两者都、既又。He also founded the Jackson Yee foundation, which focuses on left-behind children. 他还成立了 Jackson Yee爱心基金，关注留守儿童。这里是which引导的非限制性定语从句。11. Dear friends.I am glad to know you will come to Taixing. Fil tell you something about our school life.At school, we get along well wi