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1、Paraphrase&SummaryHow do we cite?Same meaningParaphrasea restatement of another persons ideas in ones own words Different expression all main ideas and important details no new idea or fact;no distorted messageLoyalty no more than five words in a row from the original different sentence structure an
2、d vocabularyDifferenceIndirect QuotationWhich one is a good paraphrase?“Many of the doctors taking part in the survey on assisted suicide doubted whether they could decide if a patient had less than six months to live.”From“The Anguish of Doctors”,John Partlow,1996,p.171.According to a survey on ass
3、isted suicide in The Anguish of Doctors(1996),many doctors disagreed with assisted suicide because they cant know when a patient will die.Which one is a good paraphrase?Many of the doctors taking part in the survey on assisted suicide doubted whether they could decide if a patient had less than six
4、months to live.From“The Anguish of Doctors”,John Partlow,1996,p.172.According to a survey on assisted suicide in The Anguish of Doctors(Partlow,1996),many doctors were not sure they could always know whether a patient would die within six month.Which one is a good paraphrase?Many of the doctors taki
5、ng part in the survey on assisted suicide doubted whether they could decide if a patient had less than six months to live.From“The Anguish of Doctors”,John Partlow,1996,p.173.In The Anguish of Doctors(Partlow,1996),many doctors who were surveyed on assisted suicide were doubtful whether they could d
6、etermine if a patient has less than six months to live.Paraphrase Same meaning with different expressions Synonym Word class Word orderParaphrase1a.The growth of the car industry parallels the development of modern capitalism.Paraphrase:Synonym1a.The growth of the car industry parallels the developm
7、ent of modern capitalism.1b.The rise of the automobile industry matches the progress of contemporary capitalism.Paraphrase2a.From the 1970s there was criticism of the industry due to the inefficiency of most vehicles,which used petrol wastefully.Paraphrase:Word Class2a.From the 1970s there was criti
8、cism of the industry due to the inefficiency of most vehicles,which used petrol wastefully.2b.From the 1970s the car industry was criticized for the inefficient use of petrol with most vehicles,causing much petrol waste.Paraphrase3a.Many car makers are currently threatened by increased competition a
9、nd saturated markets.Paraphrase:Word Order3a.Many car makers are currently threatened by increased competition.3b.The more intense competition is threatening many car makers.Paraphrase Same meaning with different expressions Synonym Word class Word orderParaphrase4a.It wont be long before Amazons ab
10、ility to dazzle customers by suggesting just the right book will seem as quaint as our ancestors amazement at horseless carriages.Paraphrase:Back Translation4a.It wont be long before Amazons ability to dazzle customers by suggesting just the right book will seem as quaint as our ancestors amazement
11、at horseless carriages.4b.要不了多久，如果谁还对亚马逊能为顾客准确推荐想读的要不了多久，如果谁还对亚马逊能为顾客准确推荐想读的书的能力感到惊奇，人们就会觉得他很古怪，如同那些见到书的能力感到惊奇，人们就会觉得他很古怪，如同那些见到没有马拉就能跑的车感到震撼的古人。没有马拉就能跑的车感到震撼的古人。Paraphrase:Back Translation4b.要不了多久，如果谁还对亚马逊能为顾客准确推荐想读的要不了多久，如果谁还对亚马逊能为顾客准确推荐想读的书的能力感到惊奇，人们就会觉得他很古怪，如同那些见到没书的能力感到惊奇，人们就会觉得他很古怪，如同那些见到没有马拉就
12、能跑的车感到震撼的古人。有马拉就能跑的车感到震撼的古人。4c.Our forefathers used to be astonished when they saw cars moving without horses.Now we are shocked by Amazons ability to recommend books we want.However,very quickly,we will get used to it,and wont feel surprised about it.Paraphrase:Back Translation4a.It wont be long be
13、fore Amazons ability to dazzle customers by suggesting just the right book will seem as quaint as our ancestors amazement at horseless carriages.4c.Our forefathers used to be astonished when they saw cars moving without horses.Now we are shocked by Amazons ability to recommend books we want.However,
14、very quickly,we will get used to it,and wont feel surprised about it.How do we cite?Indirect Quotation Same meaning Different expressionParaphraseSummarya short version of a longer original source.a restatement of another persons ideas in ones own words Most important messages Concise expressionSumm
15、ary:Holistic Approach5a.Quick and accurate data analytics that can pinpoint outbreaks and predict progression is key to fighting infectious diseases.Historical approaches,like investigator reports and hospital records,are reliable but slow and poor at prediction.There is,however,growing optimism tha
16、t newer approaches,including mobile-phone tracking and data mining of search engines and social media,can help deliver a faster,more refined picture of where diseases are unfolding and might head to next.Summary:Holistic Approach5a.Quick and accurate data analytics that can pinpoint outbreaks and pr
17、edict progression is key to fighting infectious diseases.Historical approaches,like investigator reports and hospital records,are reliable but slow and poor at prediction.There is,however,growing optimism that newer approaches,including mobile-phone tracking and data mining of search engines and soc
18、ial media,can help deliver a faster,more refined picture of where diseases are unfolding and might head to next.Summary:Holistic Approach5a.Quick and accurate data analytics that can pinpoint outbreaks and predict progression is key to fighting infectious diseases.Historical approaches,like investig
19、ator reports and hospital records,are reliable but slow and poor at prediction.There is,however,growing optimism that newer approaches,including mobile-phone tracking and data mining of search engines and social media,can help deliver a faster,more refined picture of where diseases are unfolding and
20、 might head to next.5b.New data tracking and mining approaches can help with the outbreak pinpointing and prediction.Summary:Holistic Approach5b.New data tracking and mining approaches can help with the outbreak pinpointing and prediction.5c.The Economist Intelligence Unit believes that the new data
21、tracking and mining approaches can help with the outbreakpinpointing and prediction.1How do we cite?Indirect Quotation Same meaning Different expressionParaphraseSummarya short version of a longer original source.a restatement of another persons ideas in ones own words Most important messages Concise expression