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1、初中英语作文讲评初中英语作文讲评吴光新吴光新（一）假如你是HopeMiddleschool的一名学生，请你用英语写一篇80个词的短文，向你介绍一下你们学校的概况。短文包括以下几个要点：1校园（schoolcampus）2.老师和同学。3学习情况IamastudentofHopeMiddleSchool.Mycampusisbigandbeautiful.Therearemanytalltreesandbeautifulflowers.Thereisalsoabigplayground.Ourteachersareallverykindandfriendly.Theyworkhardandtea
2、chusverywell.Theytakegoodcareofus,buttheyarestrictwithus.Thereareforty-fivestudentsinourclass.Weallgetonwellwitheachother.Atschool,welearnmanysubjects,suchasChinese,mathsandEnglish.Wetryourbesttolearnthemwell.Ilovemyschoolbecauseitsjustlikemyhome.（二）根据提示，写一篇短文（100个词左右）。假如你英语学得很好，请你在英语班会上介绍一下学习英语的体会。
3、1.简况：学习英语已有3年多。起初觉得英语难学，发音不好，单词拼不准确，不会语法规则，后来，在老师和同学们的帮助下取得了很大进步。2.体会：要在短时间内获得最佳的学习效果，非下苦功夫不可。课内外要多听、多说、多读和多写。3.建议：对同学提出适当建议，以供他们学习参考。How to learn English wellIhavestudiedEnglishformorethan3yearsAtfirstIfounditquitedifficultIcouldntgetthepronunciationright，spellthewordscorrectlyorremembertherulesofg
4、rammarWiththehelpofmyteachersandclassmates，IhavemadegreatprogressNowIamgettingonwellwithmyEnglishAsweallknow,noonecanlearnEnglishwellwithouthardworkWemustdomorelisteningandspeakingbothinandoutofclassAndwemustdomorereadingandwriting,too.Doremember“Practicemakesperfect”(熟能生巧)So，inmyopinion，weshouldwor
5、khardatEnglishThatsthemostimportantthing.Andweshouldalsopracticeusingitasmuchaspossible（三）根据图画内容和所给词汇完成一篇短文。要求：1、字数80个词左右。2、短文题目和前两句已给出。3、所给词语如下：always,takeexercise,like,sports,suchas,gotobed,getup,takecareof,takeabath（洗澡）,everyday,wash,beforemeals,allkindsof,healthyfood,like,fruit,so,look,healthyHo
6、wLiMingKeepsFitItsimportantforustokeephealthy.LiMinggivesusagoodexample.Healwaystakesexercise.Helikessportssuchasswimming,runningandplayingbasketball.Hegoestobedat10everynightandgetsupat6inthemorning.Hetakesgoodcareofhimself.Hetakesabatheverydayandwasheshishandsbeforemeals.Whenhehasmeals,heeatsallki
7、ndsofhealthyfoodlikefish,eggs,vegetablesandmeat.Healsoeatsalotoffruit.Sohelooksstrongandhealthy.（四）假如你们学校将于下周日下午三点在学校礼堂举办一项捐助孤寡老人的活动，全校师生都将参加。活动期间将会有歌舞表演，募捐的资金将用于帮助附近的孤寡老人。请以通知形式写一篇80字左右的短文，内容包括活动的时间、地点、参加者、内容及目的。NoticeManyoldpeopleinourcitylivealoneandfeelverylonely.Itisnecessaryforustocareforthem.
8、NextSunday,wewillhaveacharityeventtoraisemoneyforthem.Theeventwillbeheldintheschoolhallat3p.m.Theheadmaster,theteachersandallthestudentswilltakepartinit.Therewillbesongsanddances.Atfercollectingthemoney,thevolunteerswillgiveittothepoorandoldpeoplearoundus.Pleasemakesurethatallofuswillbethereontime.T
9、heStudentsUnionMay,6,2010（五）请根据下面所给李玲的个人小档案，以Mygoodfriend为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍李玲的基本情况。要求条理清楚，语句通顺，体现表中的全部内容，不得少于12句话。中文名：李玲英文名：Susan性别：女年龄：15祖籍：青海学校：第八中学年级：三班级：二特长：数学、英语爱好：唱歌、看电视、打排球优点：友好，善良，乐于助人，学习努力My Good FriendIhaveagoodfriend.HerChinesenameisLiLing,andSusanisherEnglishname.SheisfromQinghai.LiLingisfift
10、eenyearsold.ShestudiesinNo.8MiddleSchool.SheisinClassTwo,GradeThree.LiLingisgoodatmathandEnglish.Shelikessingingandplayingvolleyballverymuch.Andshesingsquitewell.ShelikeswatchingTV,too.LiLingisverykindandfriendly.Shestudiesveryhardandalwayslikeshelpingothers.Whatagoodgirlsheis!Ilikeher!(六)假如将来你有了很多钱
11、，这笔钱可以帮助你做三件事情，你会用它来干什么呢？请以“IfIhadalotofmoney”为题写一篇短文，展开合理的想象，80词左右。IfIhadalotofmoneyIfIhadalotofmoney,Idbuyabighouseformyparents,becausetheysendmetoschoolanddoalotofthingsforme.Ihopetheycanliveamorecomfortablelife.IfIhadalotofmoney,Idtravelallovertheworld.Iliketravellinganditcanopenupmyeyestotheout
12、-sideworld.AndIcanlearnmoreabouttheworld.IfIhadalotofmoney,Iwouldplantmoretreesandflowersinourcity.Ontheonehand,itcanmakeourcitymorebeautiful.Ontheotherhand,itcanimproveourenvironment.(IfIhadalotofmoney,Iwouldgivesometocharityandhelpthosepoorchildrenwhocannotgotoschool.IwillbeveryhappywhenIseethemst
13、udyinginthebrightclassrooms.)(七七)假如你是Tom，你昨天（5月20日）感冒，发烧、头痛，感觉很累。去看医生，医生要你休息两天，按时吃药，多喝水。所以你想请假两天，回到学校后，一定补上所缺的功课。请给你的老师MrSmith写一张请假条，60-80词左右。假条的开头、结尾已给出。单词提示：补上makeupDearMrSmith,ImsorrytotelIyouthatIcantgotoschooltoday.Ihadabadcoldyesterday.Ihadahighfeverandaheadache.Icoughedalot.Ifeltverytired.Som
14、ymothertookmetoseethedoctor.Thedoctortoldmetostayinbedfortwodays,takethemedicineontimeanddrinkmorewater.SoIhavetostayathometodayandtomorrow.IwillworkhardtomakeupthelostlessonsafterIgobacktoschool.IhopeIcangetwellsoon.Thankyou.Yours,Tom（八）为了提高你的英语水平，你想寻找一位美国笔友，根据下表提供的信息，写一封电子邮件（开头和结尾已为你写好）。注意：1、文章必须包
15、括中文提示和表格中的主要内容。2、词数：80100。（已给出的开头和结尾不计算在内）Name:ZhangLinSex:boyAge:15Hometown:cityofGuigangSchool:MingYangMiddleSchoolLikes:collectstamps,travel,football,computergames,EnglishsongsDislikes:dance,stayathome,playthepianoDearfriend,MynameisZhangLin.Iamfifteenyearsold.IliveintheCityofGuigang.Iamaboystude
16、ntinMingYangMiddleSchool.Ilikecollectingstamps,playingfootballandcomputergames.IoftensingEnglishsongswithmyclassmates.Ienjoytravelingwithmyparentsorfriends.Idontlikedancing.Ithinkstayingathomealldayisterrible.Imnotinterestedinplayingthepianoatall.ToimprovemyEnglish,IwanttofindapenpalinAmerica.Ifyouw
17、anttobeafriendofmine,pleasesendane-mailtomesoon.YoursZhangLin（九）假如JohnnyBrown是你们的英语老师，请你根据下列表格的内容写一篇英语短文，介绍他的基本情况。词数：80左右。姓名Johnny Brown 性别 男年龄35国籍 加拿大工作情况三年前来到中国，工作勤恳，课上得生动、有趣业余爱好运动、旅游，喜欢在课余时间为学生们演奏小提琴备注待学生好，是学校最受欢迎的教师之一Dearfriend,JohnnyBrownisourEnglishteacher.Heis35yearsold.HecomesfromCanada.Thre
18、eyearsago,hecametoChina.Heworksveryhard.Hecanmakehisclassesverylivelyandinteresting.Inhisfreetime,helikeshavingsportsandtraveling.Afterclass,heenjoysplayingtheviolinforthestudents.Heisfriendlytothestudents.Heisoneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool.Wealllikehimverymuch.假设你是一名导游，请根据下表所提供的信息，用英文向你的游客们
19、介绍一下海口。位置:海南的东北部人口:150万气候:长夏无冬、凉爽宜人环境:蓝天碧海、空气清新、吸引各地游客景点:假日海滩、万绿园等要求：1、语句通顺，语意连贯、要点写全、书写清晰。2、词数6080左右。3、不要逐字翻译，可紧扣主题,适当发挥。Goodmorning,everyone!WelcometoHaikou.HaikouisthecapitalofHainan.ItsinthenortheastofHainananditspopulationisabout1,500,000.Here,youcanenjoythefreshair,thebluesky,thecleanwaterandt
20、helongwhitebeaches.TheweatherinHaikouisneithertoohotnortoocold.Itswarmallyearround.Wecanalsovisitmanyinterestingplaces,suchastheHolidayBeach,theWanluGardenandsoon.lotsofvisitorscometoHaikoueveryyear.Haikouisagoodplacetohavefun.IhopeyouwillhaveawonderfultimeinHaikou.（十一）根据下面表格中所提供的信息，写一篇日记。注意：1、内容须包括
21、所提供的信息，要求日记内容完整、正确、通顺2、词数6080左右。3、日记开头语已为你写好，不算入总词数。活动时间:5月6日，星期六集合地点:学校大门口活动地点:西湖公园交通方式:公共汽车出发时间:7：30am.到达时间:8：30am日程上午：划船、野餐下午：做游戏、拍照片、参观博物馆回程时间:4：00pmSaturday,May6thItwasfinetoday.Iwentforanoutingwithmyclassmates.Wemetatourschoolgate.WegotonthebusatseventhirtyinthemorningandarrivedattheWestLakePa
22、rkateightthirty.Wespentthewholemorningboatingonthelake.Thenwehadourpicniclunch.Afterlunchweplayedgames,tooksomephotosandthenwenttovisitthemuseum.Wehadawonderfultimethere.Wegotbackatabout4oclock.Wewereverytired,butwewereveryhappy.(十二)请根据提示，写一篇题为：“SavingtheEarth”的短文。注意：1、词数80左右2、标题和开头已给出3、内容要点见表格。人类的不
23、明智之举乱伐树木乱扔垃圾不加处理排放废物导致的问题1、土地沙化2、河水变脏3、空气质量差4、全球气温升高建议合理化建议至少三条SavingtheEarthAstimegoesby,manismakingtheearthsick.Peoplecutdowntoomanytreesandleaverubbisheverywhere.Factoriespourtheirwasteintotheairorriverswithoutdoinganythingtoit.Thishascausedsomeseriousproblems.Forexample,thelandissandy;theriveris
24、dirty;theairislessclean;eventhetemperatureoftheearthisrising,andsheisshoutingforhelp.Whatshallwedotosaveher?Mysuggestionsarethatweshouldplantmoretrees,puttherubbishintodustbinsandstopfactoriespouringwasteintotheairorrivers.Wehaveonlyoneearth,weshoulddoeverythingtoprotectit,orwewillregret(后悔).(十三)郎郎是
25、当今世界最杰出的（outstanding）钢琴家之一，被誉为（nameas）“一位改变世界的青年”。请根据下表中的信息并以“LangLang-AWell-knownPianist”为题，写一篇80个词左右的简介。注意：表格中的时间、年龄或地点应根据需要灵活处理。时间 年龄地点 主要事件19820沈阳出生（男）19853沈阳 开始弹钢琴19875沈阳 参加钢琴比赛，均获第一名1991 9中国1993 11德国1995 13日本1996 14美国 继续（continue）深造199918显现非凡的理解音乐的才华（talent）2005 23美国应邀在白宫（theWhiteHouse）专场演奏Lan
26、gLang-AWell-knownPianist_LangLangwasborninShenyangin1982,hebegantoplaythepianowhenhewas3.From1987to1995hetookpartinalotofpianocompetitionsandwonallthefirstprizes.In1996,LangwenttoAmericatocontinuehisstudy.Attheageof18,hebegantoshowhisunusualtalentforunderstanding（tounderstand）music.In2005,hewasinvit
27、edtohaveaconcertattheWhiteHouse.LangLanghasbecomeoneofthemostoutstandingpianistsintheworldnow,andheisnamedas“Ayoungpeoplechangingtheworld”。（十四）老师让同学们讨论网上购物(Internetshopping)的利（advantages）与弊（disadvantages），根据下列信息，请你代表你们组做个发言。好处：方便(convenience)，24小时营业，不用排队（queuewith）；不足：看不见物品，不能享受和朋友一起购物的乐趣要求：1.语言流畅，规
28、范；2.包含提示内容，并作适当发挥；3.80词左右。Internetshoppingisanewwayofshopping.Itoffersalotofadvantages.Themostimportantoneisconvenience.Youcanshopwheneveryoulikeastheon-lineshopsareopen24hoursaday,andyoudonothavetowaitinline.SecondlyitisoftencheapertobuythingsthroughtheInternetanditisalsoeasytofindwhatyouarelooking
29、for.Therearesomedisadvantagestoo.Youcannotseethethingsorchecktheirquality.youcannotenjoywalkingaroundtheshopsandtalkingwithyourfriends（十五）现代化的世界里,广告无处不在。有人喜欢广告,有人讨厌。请你来当评论家，谈谈自己的高见,说说广告的优点与不足。词数为80词左右。提示词:cheat上当,受骗Inthemodernworld,advertisingiseverywhere!Somepeoplelikeadsandothershateads.Ithinkitof
30、ferssomeadvantagesanddisadvantages.Someadsareveryuseful.Theycantellpeoplehowtocomparetwodifferentthingssothatpeoplecanbuythebetterone.Theycanalsohelpyousavemoney.However,therearealsosomedisadvantages.Someadsmaybeconfusingormisleading.Sometimesthewordssoundgoodbutdonttellyouanythingreal.Soyouhavetobecareful nottobecheated.Weshouldntbelieveeverything.