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1、佳句是这样炼成的古人云：“意则期多，字则期少。”写句子时应力求做到以简练简约的文字，表达丰富深刻的思想。如：I stood in the wind.I felt hopeless and depressed分析：这个句子本身没任何毛病，将它稍稍改一下，句意没改变，但简洁多了.为了使句子简洁，我们通常可以采取以下几种方法I stood in the wind,hopeless and depressed.（一）.合并用连接词。在写作时，我们可以用neithernor,not onlybut also,eitheror,bothand,as well as,or,notuntil等连接词连接几个简
2、单句。比较：A.I went to the cinema yesterday.He went to the cinema,too.B.Both he and I went to the cinema yesterday或I,as well as he,went to the cinema yesterday.【练一练】用连接词合并下列句子a.I dont want this apple.He doesnt want it,either.b.We go to school on weekdays.We go to school at weekends,too.Neither I nor he w
3、ants this apple.We go to school not only on weekdays but also at weekends.2.用定语从句根据句子的具体情况，我们可以用限制性或非限制性定语从句合并句子。比较：A.He told me the news yesterday.I will tell you the news.B.I will tell you the news that he told me yesterday.【练一练】用定语从句合并下列句子。c.The girl is singing an English song in the next room is
4、.The girl is Toms sister.The girl who is singing an English song in the next room is Toms sisterHe failed in the examination,which made his father very angryd.He failed in the examination It made his father very angry（二）简化 我们可以用下面几种方法来简化句子。用分词短语比较：A.After we had been shown around the Water Cube,we w
5、ere then taken to see the Birds Nest for the 2008 Olympic Games.B.Having been shown around the Water Cube,we were then taken to see the Birds Nest-for the 2008 Olympic Games.A.Unless you are invited to speak,you should remain silent at the conference.B.Unless invited to speak,you should remain silen
6、t at the conference.【练一练】用分词短语简化下列句子e.He was busy writing a story.He only stopped once in a while to smoke a cigarette f.The Olympic Games,which was first played in 776 B.C.,did not include women players until 1912.He was busy writing a story,only stopping once in a while to smoke a cigarette The Ol
7、ympic Games,first played in 776 B.C.,did not include women players until 19122.用不定式短语比较:I hope that I will be invited to the party.I hope to be invited to the party.【练一练】用不定式短语简化下列句子。The doctor told the child that he should eat less and exercise more._.I am sorry that I have given you so much troubl
8、e _ The doctor told the child to eat less and exercise more.I am sorry to have given you so much trouble3.用介词短语（或独立主格）独立主格结构是指：with+名词+分词，名词+分词，with+名词+介词短语。比较：A.The murderer was brought in and his hands were tied behind his back.B.The murderer was brought in，with his hands tied behind his back.【练一练
9、】If all factors are considered，we think this program may excel all the others in achieving the goal _.I called early as I hoped that I could catch her before she went to work._With all factors considered，we think this program may excel all the others in achieving the goalI called early as in the hop
10、e of catching her before she went to work.4.用形容词或形容词短语。比较：Crusoe stared at the footprint and was full of fear.Crusoe stared at the footprint,full of fear.【练一练】用形容词或形容词短语简化下列句子。As Mr.Smith was tired of the boring speech,he began to read a novel._ Well do it again if it is necessary._ Mr.Smith,tired o
11、f the boring speech,began to read a novel.Well do it again if necessary.二.句子结构多样句式单一、句子长短相等的文章读起来乏味；所以我们写作时要注意句子的多样性。如：My brother is nine years old.His name is Dongdong.分析：这两个句子使用的都是简单句，句式单一，无可 读性。我们可以这样写：Dongdong,my brother,is nine years old.或 My brother,Dongdong,is nine years old.我们可以通过以下几种方法来使句子生
12、动，增加句子的可读性。改变句子的开头1.用同位语比较：A.Li Ming is my friend.He will come to see me yesterday.B.Li Ming,my friend,will come to see me tomorrow.【即时练习】用同位语改变下列句子的开头.Guangzhou is my birthplace.It is far away from Beijing._.China is the third largest country.It lies in the east of the world _ Guangzhou,my birthpla
13、ce,is far away from Beijing.China,the third largest country in the world,lies in the east of the world.用形容词、副词、分词或不定式开头。比较：A.As she is young and ambitious,she works hard to be promoted.B.Young and ambitious,she works hard to be promotedA.The students are working hard to pass the exam.B.To pass the e
14、xam,the students are working hard.A.He was confused about the problem,so he turned to his teacher.B.Confused about the problem,he turned to his teacher.【练一练】用形容词、副词、分词或不定式开头。We were tired and hungry when we finally reached the top of the mountain._.As I didnt know what to do,I went for fathers help.
15、_ Tired and hungry,we finally reached the top of the mountain.Not knowing what to do,I went for fathers help.使用不同的句型用倒装句 比较：A.He had hardly got into the room when the telephone rang.B.Hardly had he got he got into the room when the telephone rang.A If you had asked me,I would have given you his addr
16、ess.B.Had you asked me,I would have given you his address.The boys didnt realize it was too late to return home until it was dark._.We can do it well only in this way._ Not until it was dark did the boys realize it was too late to return homeOnly in this way can we do it well.用强调句当我们要刻意强调某个成分时，我们可以用
17、强调句型。比较：A.I saw John in the street in the classroom this morning.B.It was John that I saw in the classroom this morning.或It was this morning that I saw John in the classroom.或It was in the classroom that I saw John this morning.【练一练】将下面的句子改为强调句。We had to stay at home because it was raining hard._ Th
18、e first clock with a face and an hour hand was made about 600 years ago._It was because it was raining hard that we had to stay at home.It was about 600 years ago that the first clock with a face and an hour hand was made3.用平行结构句所谓平行结构就是将两个或两个以上结构相同、意义并重、语气一致的词、短语或句子排列成一个整体，起到强调的作用。比较：AWe can gain k
19、nowledge by reading and we can gain knowledge by observation or by practice.B.We can gain knowledge by reading,by observation or by practice.【练一练】用平行结构句改下面的句子。I have a dream that my children will some day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin.They will be judged b
20、y the content of their character._.When you are having a meeting,you shouldnt sleep,you shouldnt make a phone call,you shouldnt talk to others._I have a dream that my children will some day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.When you are having a meeting,you shouldnt sleep,or make a phone call,or talk to others.